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[RIDER] H'lare of brown Toth [Approved]

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Eos Galvus

Shadowy Celebrant

PostPosted: Sat Jun 10, 2017 11:45 am


Name: H'lare
Age: 28
Sex: Man
Sexual Orientation: Bisexual
Weyr: High Reaches Weyr
Rider Rank: Wingrider
Previous Rank/Craft: He was actually a Harper before he was a Candidate!
Physical Description: Tall, lean, lightly tanned with a hook nose and bright blue eyes and black hair usually in a short bunnytail-like ponytail. He's a good mix of muscle and bodyfat, tends to wear practical clothing in yellows and browns or greens, and is nearly always smiling.
Personality: H'lare is the good natured favored son of a Shepard. A kind, optimistic man, H'lare tries to see the best in everyone around him and often reaches out to those fearful to offer solace and warmth. He's pretty much a nice guy, if but something of a pervert. He appreciates everything and everyone good in the world, and remains an optimist. He's also... Well... Stupidly Noble, and has hotten himself in trouble for hius brothers, knowing his father would not expend as much ire on him, especially his younger brother. H'lare has a triplet brother and sistrer, an older brotherm, and baby brother, and is thus from a poor family. Still, he's very HAPPY and does what he can to send his family and other poor aid. H'lare also enjoys viusiting Candidates and Searching -- believing a little fear is no match for a big smile and a cup of a comforting hot beverage.
Positive Trait List Loyal, Friendly, Optimistic, Supportive
Negative Trait List Reckless, Over-Enthusiastic, Perverted, Impulsive
History: H'lare was the son of a poor shepard in a cothold, studying as an instrumental Harper,with a large family when he was Searched with his siblings at 18, and as such, didn't quite know what to make of Weyr life - especially having trained as a Harper with the cothold Harper since he was twelve, to his father's delight. This did not deter him, and he was enjoying life as a candidate, encouraging those around him and hoping they'd Impress when he Impressed his companion Toth. While he was sent when Thread returned, once it was safe the young Rider took Toth to check on his father, finding his eldest brother was to bury the man. This redoubled H'lare's determination to prevent Thread from killing others. While he enjoys training... He also kind of likes watching others train.
Other: SPLENDID. (No)

DRAGON
Name: Toth
Age: 8
Color: Brown
Size: 38'
Physical Description: Brown, with a lighter brown tum. Toth is lean and lanky, but agile. His eyebolors are USUALLY green but his H'lare makes then go orange or yellow from his shenannigansd.
Personality: Toth is a rather laid back dragon. He likes being around others, and enjoys flying above all else. While not as enthusiastic as his Ride, Toth shines in his willingness to cooperate with others. He likes to teach, and can be patient!..... But he also is more grounded and often gently, but bodily moves his ride AWAY from situations his exuberance puts them in. Toth is often Exacerbated by this, but loves his rider very much. Now if he'd stop making himn babysit the grumpiness might clear up...
Dragon Art or Proof of Obtainment: Nameday Wish!
PostPosted: Sat Jun 17, 2017 2:23 pm


Hey Nova!

Pretty close to being approved but his history is really short given he's 28 turns old. You mention he was a harper before he was a Candidate, but don't go into much detail there -- when did he begin studying Harper craft? Did he got to one of the Harper Halls or was he simply taught by someone near his Hold or Cothold? Did his family encourage it? What type of harper was he -- a singer, a musician, an instrument maker, an archivist?

Also, what Hold did he come from? Was he from a major Hold or a small cothold on the outskirts?

I think if you just flesh it out little bit more, he'll be good to go!

Masterharper
Vice Captain


Eos Galvus

Shadowy Celebrant

PostPosted: Sat Jun 17, 2017 5:39 pm


Masterharper


I think I coivered it? I just tend to be very concise with things and mentally try to get the important details down and then mentally blank on details a lot. XD
PostPosted: Sat Jun 17, 2017 5:52 pm


I'm tentatively going to approve this because it's for an older rider, but don't be surprised if future profiles (particularly for Candidates) might require more detail. We may seem picky, but it's within those details that problems with characters often are found and those issues can be addressed.

You also still didn't say where on Pern the cothold is from. gaia_star Given he was Searched by High Reaches was it a cothold at High Reaches, Nabol, or Tillek? Those are all the major Holds that High Reaches Weyr covers, and smaller Holds and Cotholds are set up on/nearby that land/territory. This is also something that often comes up via RP so is good to have that figured out.

Masterharper
Vice Captain

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