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Posted: Wed May 17, 2017 7:04 pm
Candidate Application Name: Aliane Age: 17 Sex: Female Sexual Orientation: Heterosexual Craft: Cooking Rank: Apprentice Location: High Reaches Physical Description: Aliane is a thin girl with little muscle definition though it is there and is slightly more tanned than her brother. She stands at a slightly above average height of 5'9”. Freckles spatter her face and frame a pair of green eyes. She keeps her strawberry blonde hair neatly tied back and out of her face. Personality: Aliane's quiet and shy nature sometimes gets in the way of her being heard. She doesn't often raise her voice. However, she doesn't mind being in the background normally as she sometimes spots things others can miss given enough time, such as, playing with ones hair or a piece of jewelry when they are nervous. Since they never knew their parents she usually stays close to her brother whenever she can. Her brother and her Weyr have her complete loyalty. She will do whatever is needed when asked. She knows how trusting her brother can be sometimes and usually tries to be the voice of reason if she notices him being used. Positive Trait List Patient, Loyal, Intuitive, Observant Negative Trait List Self-conscious, Dependent, Demure History: Aliane was raised a weyrbrat with her brother, Adairan. Not knowing their parents Aliane kept close to her brother when she could. She always tailed after him and stayed relatively close to him. When her brother was being teased in their youth she tried to block as much as she could. Luckily it was nothing more than small snide comments or insults. Not wanting to be a burden on the Weyr or Adarian, she eventually found a place in the cooking hall having a place for her ideas to come out in the food, knowing what a certain dish might need or could do without. She does dream of riding dragons with her brother and defending the Weyr, especially now that the thread has returned, but she also knows that there is the possibility of not being chosen. At her core she wants to contribute in some way to High Reaches. Other: Twin to Adariran [DarkHikari]
Candidate Specific Questions Do you want them to have an official Search RP? No Do you understand they will age every passing year regardless if you're there to RP the or not? Yesdd Do you want them to have a possible Stands Impression? No - - - > Please keep in mind that Stands Impressions are very rare. This means that not everybody will get an opportunity to have a surprise Impression, and you lower your chances of being picked by a dragonet. Given the character is not ICly an official Candidate, they will need a reason to be at the Weyr of their choice long-term, or at least for every Hatching.
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Posted: Fri May 19, 2017 7:33 pm
Since she's a Candidate, I'm going to need you to please add little more detail onto her personality and history. You don't need to make it really long, but I feel when I'm reading her personality in particular that those traits that you listed aren't quite fully coming through. A great start!
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Posted: Fri May 19, 2017 8:23 pm
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Posted: Sat May 20, 2017 1:27 pm
Approved. Good job updating her!
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