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tefla

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PostPosted: Mon May 08, 2017 5:00 pm


The Civilian


Name: Izobel Jayne Beckett

Nickname: Izzy, Belle, Jayne

Age: 14

Birthday: May 27

Sign: Gemini

Gemstone: Emerald

Blood Type: A-

Fav. Food: Homemade Mac & Cheese

Hated Food: Pudding, the consistency of it ... no, just no

School: Meadowview

Hobbies:

Beekeeping: Perhaps an odd hobby for a 14 year old but Izobel knows how important bees are to the environment. After reading up on what was needed to start her own hive Izobel practically had to beg her parents for permission to set up a hive in the backyard. It's been a few years and Izzy has kept her hive healthy. She does worry about Colony Collapse Disorder affecting the hive. Being able to sample honey fresh from the hive is a huge perk. There is always a chance of getting stung but Izzy works with due caution. That doesn't mean it doesn't happen though.

Golfing: Izzy feels like she's discovered a new and wondrous sport that she really enjoys. It gets her outside to enjoy the fresh air. She is learning the rules of the game a little at a time and can't help but wonder when she'll be as good as those that grace the LPGA. It takes a lot of patience to learn the sport correctly and Izobel is quickly coming to this discovery. The complexity of different courses, the different rules to learn. It is a challenge that Izobel has set her sight on defeating. Her golf equipment while not pristine by any means, serves her well.

Virtues:

Always There (Dependable/Reliable): Knowing that people are there for you is a big thing in Izobel's life. She likes to know that others can rely on her to be there when she says she will be. Although just a teenager Izobel knows the importance of keeping her word. If she says she will be there ... she will be - unless some crisis keeps her away.

Cheerful (Optimistic): Izobel loves to be able to go into a room and brighten up people's day with a little bit of hope. This girl loves to be able to see the positive side of all things in her life. Take for example someone complains that it is raining outside. Izzy will try to lighten that person's mood by explaining all the good things that rain can bring. Sometimes it works, and sometimes it doesn't. It doesn't stop Izobel from trying though.

I'm a Good Listener: Need to bend someone's ear or need to release a burden that is weighing on you ... seek Izobel out. She'll avail herself to anyone that needs someone to listen to their life problems, or accomplishments. Izobel tries to the best of her ability to be an open mind at all times but sometimes things can get a little hairy and she'll find herself making those snap judgements on people. Overall though Izobel feels that by availing herself to others that need to chatter at her or even with her that she's providing a great service. Izobel will be willing to listen without ever complaining out loud.

Flaws:

Judgemental: Izzy rarely walks away from an encounter with someone without judging them. It's just not possible to not give everyone she knows a label. There are so many types of people out in the world and although it is stereotypical to assign labels Izzy can't help herself. She craves order in her life and this helps to alleviate that need. She'd never share her "judgements" with anyone but once judged there are perhaps certain people she'll try to avoid. In her books these people would make up "the wrong crowd."

Gullible/Over-trusting: Izzy tends to take everything she hears at face value without questioning it. Someone can tell Izzy something and it's more than likely that she will believe it. "There's a monster in the woods."
"Oh, cool. Can I see it?"
Izobel has never been able to tell when someone might be telling her a tall tale or just purposely misleading her in order to gain something in return. It creates some havoc in her mind when Izobel finally realizes that she's been had.

Nosy: Izobel has a hard time keeping her nose out of other people's business. There is just some driving instinct that compels her to find out everything she can about situations that she finds herself in. However that doesn't keep her satisfied for long. Izobel won't hesitate to go around asking questions for things that don't even concern her. This can lead Izzy to answers but more than likely Izzy's actions upset the individuals whose business she's nosing around.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION


Eyes: blueish/purple, see powered for color/shape

Hair: redhead, longer in civilian form than powered. Izzy likes to put her hair into one braid on one side.
Face: freckles across the bridge of the nose. see powered art
Clothes: --
PostPosted: Mon May 08, 2017 5:01 pm


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Senshi: Lacerta, Senshi of Bandages

Challenge: Let's wrap this up!

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Attacks: Note on both Sailor and Super Attacks:
(( For both attacks: Lacerta doesn't have to touch the injury directly but as close as she can to the location the injury is located. Also the magic works through cloth. ))


Sailor Scout Attack: Lacerta's Healing Touch
Lacerta will touch an injury on either herself or an ally and whisper her attack. A soft glowing bandage will appear and wrap the injury in a thin layer of bandage-like material. After ten seconds the bandage will disappear. Once gone the area that had been wrapped in bandage will appear to have been healed to a satisfactory level. (( for clarification: the injuries that are treatable would be bruises and cuts that are on the small scale. IE: a superficial bruise or a small cut. Nothing that goes deeper than the epidermis))

This attack can be used three times per battle. However Lacerta can only use it once on herself.

Super Sailor Scout Attack: Lacerta's Miracle Growth
Lacerta will touch an injury on either herself or an ally and whisper her attack. A soft glowing bandage will appear and wrap the injury in a thin layer of bandage-like material. After twenty seconds the bandage will disappear. At this stage superficial bruises and cuts are healed rapidly (injuries from her sailor attack.) Larger lacerations (ones that go into the dermis), grade 1 sprains, and more significant bruises can be healed satisfactory. (( If a laceration goes further down into the skin than the dermis the magic will just stop the immediate bleeding ))

This attack can be used three times per battle. However Lacerta can only use it once on herself.


Eternal Sailor Attack: Lacerta's Restrictive Bindings
Purely a defensive attack, Lacerta summons opaque bandages that are purely magical. These bandages will wrap around up to two opponents that are in a 10 foot radius to Lacerta. Once bound the opponents find that they cannot easily move their limbs. Think of it as having limbs stuck in quicksand. Very hard to pull free but it is possible. The duration of the attack lasts up to thirty seconds.

Lacerta can use this attack twice per battle.

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PostPosted: Thu May 11, 2017 3:57 pm


I'm looking for crits on Izobel/Lacerta
PostPosted: Sat May 20, 2017 6:48 pm


tefla


HI Tefla, Congrats on Lacerta~!

Before I can stamp her, there's a few minor things that I want to touch on with this sort of sphere! For her basic attack, would you mind clarifying what sort of sprains can be healed/affected? Because most severe sprains can take a couple of weeks to properly heal, her basic attack will probably be best suited to assist in healing minor injuries or improve the rate of healing for more injuries that might ordinarily take longer to heal!

For her super attack, to better be in line with our expectations for healing magic, I would suggest changing ‘healing 50%’ to say that she can heal light sprains, moderate bruises and slightly deeper lacerations. She could also improve healing of major injuries by 25% (which might be enough to stop immediate bleeding or begin to scab over). However, she shouldn't be able to heal broken bones or things like that.

If you have any questions, need some help or just want me to come back to look over any changes drop me a quote and I'll be here!

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PostPosted: Sun May 21, 2017 1:43 am


LP


Thank you for pointing out the healing time of sprains. I wasn't aware how long even a grade 1 sprain took to heal. Now knowing what I know... I can change the attacks (and have done so) to reflect this new knowledge.

Let me know if the changes are okay?
PostPosted: Fri May 26, 2017 8:54 pm


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Thank you so much!

She looks good to me, a gm'll be around shortly!

tefla

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PostPosted: Sat May 27, 2017 9:56 pm


tefla


She looks good, have fun!

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