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Posted: Fri Mar 24, 2006 10:52 pm
Okay. I'm really serious about thi one. you have to o a speech on why you should be captain. In this contest, you have to be serious. I don't want anyone playing around.
Rules: arrow you must use proper grammar arrow be serious, no joking around arrow you have to use complete sentences. Use " . " " ? " " ! " arrow no cursing arrow no flonging arrow no attacking/fighting arrow debate with your competition arrow if i think you're not being serious and you're playing around, I'll delete your post
arrow changing ur font color and size etc is fine arrow post pictures if it goes with your statement
the question is: Why do you think you should be crew captain of the Dragon Nation?
you must have a topic sentence and a conclusion. I'll make it easy and give you a topic sentence. you may use it if you want.
Topic Sentence: I think I should be Crew Captain of the Dragon Nation because (then you fill in the rest).
you have to have 3 reasons and supporting details.
finally, you must have a conclusion.
note: please don't bore me with ur speeches. I'll read every single one and make corrections. Have pazaz in your speech because if your speech isn't persuasive enough, then I will quote "no" or if it's good but boring, I'll just make a quoe on it.
well anyways... good luck! wink
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Posted: Sat Mar 25, 2006 10:40 pm
Why do you think you should be crew captain of the Dragon Nation? Well Ms.Lambo, I have several reasons of wanting to become crew captain of the dragon nation. The first reason, I enjoy being here , being around the gaian people. Even though its a game, I want to work with the people I enjoy being around expectually(I think that's suppose to be especially) working side by side with you Ms.Lambo. The second reason, As you know, I am already crew captain and Im(I'm) willing to keep my job as crew capitain(captain) as well. Its an honor to be working in the dragon nation and its still an honor for me to still be working with the gaian residential area in the dragon nation. Third, last but not least, I can do plenty of stuff for the people in the dragon nation. I think the job is fun and I could be hard working at the same time. I can be funny and I post alot in the guild...PLUS: I can jiggle a ball 5hundred times then a dolphin would. But seriously,I hope my reasons pursuade you to make me into crew captain if not then I think hells angel should be crew captian, she worked twice as hard as I did so if you dont choose me. I can understand that the role for crew captain should belong rightfully to hells angel. In conclusion, I really wish to be crew captian. So I hope you enjoy my reasons for being crew captian. Thank you, for listening to me. -PaNdaH_L0v3R
thank you for your speech. It wasn't boring and i like it. Now I will check hells angel's.
note: you needed 3 reason along with supporting details but you gave me around 6 reasons without supporting details. please post a list of how you can make the dragon nation better
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Posted: Sun Mar 26, 2006 10:20 am
[ Message temporarily off-line ]
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Posted: Sat May 20, 2006 10:08 am
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Posted: Sat May 20, 2006 10:48 am
it's ok *pats mari's back*
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