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anime_girl10

Star Nymph

PostPosted: Tue Feb 28, 2017 3:18 pm


Name: Connie Salvatore

Nickname: Pear Bear [dad]

Age: 13

Birthday: September 14

Sign: Virgo

Gemstone: Sapphire

Blood Type: B+

Fav. Food: Potstickers, Mochi, Rice Candy

Hated Food: Anything messy or sticky; She eats most foods with a fork unless bite-sized.

School: Horizon Institute for Technology and Science [Grade 7]

Hobbies:

Genealogy - Connie has loved Genealogy since a young age, fascinated with history and family lines, even if they weren't her own; finally bugging her parents into letting her do her own, she's been on the journey ever since. After finding out she has ties to family in Destiny City, she convinced her parents to move there [after finding out her dad was having to relocate for work anyway] in order for her to continue her studies.

Skateboarding - Connie has been skateboarding for a few years now. Mostly because as she got older, her parents become more busy with their work, and she still needed a way to get around. They tried talking her into a bike, but she wanted to learn how to skateboard- mostly because this guy she liked in her class had one. Her parents still bought her a bike later on but she hardly uses it.

Virtues:

Helpful -- Despite generally keeping to herself, Connie loves to be able to help people if they ask for it or she notices they need it. She's the type that you ask her for one book and she'll bring it and four more, though she will try not to overstep if not asked.

Understanding -- Connie tries her best to be as understanding as possible with anyone she meets, knowing everyone has something going on in their lives. But she also knows this isn't a reason to be mean or lash out at others, hating with others do it.

Wonder -- Something Connie has developed through her years of history lessons and family research. History amazes her and she's always willing to learn because of it. A virtue that will be a huge step in helping her accept her new role as Senshi.

Organized -- A skill she learned while digging into her family research, to keep herself sane. Keeping herself well planned and giving everything a place, making multitasking a breeze. She even keeps a big wall calendar in her room and a bullet journal on her at all times, leaving things hard for her to forget.

Flaws:

Blunt -- While Connie is generally a kind person, she can be a bit blunt when things are happening that she doesn't like or agree with. Because her generally acting older than her age, this gets her in trouble when confronting those older than her, even if she was right. Though she doesn't every really mean to, this can also be directed towards friends when she's not thinking about it.

Meek -- Connie isn't the type to like cheer for a sports time at school or dance in public, etc. She's not really super shy or embarrassed easy, but is more the type to keep to herself and watch. More comfortable being with friends in private places instead of dealing with open events or crowds, but not in a anxious way.

Pessimist -- Connie hates when she can't fix something negative and can tend to overthink it until she gets down about it. That's about the time she'll go to the skate park to try to clear her thoughts. She knows she can't fix everything and doesn't like seeing friends going through a hard time, but she also knows that most of the time it just needs to run it's course so all parties can move along.

Sore Loser -- A bit of a sore loser at times, like not winning a raffle or coming to a dead end in her research. She never takes it out on others but can tend to pout about it from time to time. This also happens a lot while playing games with her dad, since he's the type to brag about those kinds of things.


PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION
[ Civilian ] | [ Senshi ]


Eyes: Big, round, child-like eyes. The color of polished Precious Coral; hex #eb2222

Hair: A huge, messy, fluff of chocolate moose. Been growing out since birth, Connie never wanted to cut it and even started the use of her growth tips to make it even longer. A deep, rich, brown with the lightest hint of red; hex #521c0d
It wasn't until she knew they where moving to Destiny City that she start doing a fade dye on her tips, to match her eyes.

Face: Oval shape but still young and child-like with big ears and a button nose.

Clothes: Generally lazy outfits; She is almost always wearing a hoodie and shorts, leggings for cold days. A thin baggy shirt or tank top on days it's too hot for her hoodie. Simple vans or converse type shoes, most of the time matching her hoodie. | Pinterest
PostPosted: Tue Feb 28, 2017 3:33 pm


[ COLORS ] | [ FUKU ]

- - -

Senshi: Sailor Chibi Echo, Senshi of Paper

Challenge: "In the Name of Echo, I'll punish You!" - "Don't get a paper cut~" - "What was that?"

Fuku Colour:
Main Color: Lavender
Secondary Color: Navy; hex #000918

Fuku:
Collar -- Lavender | Worn backwards with navy stitching keeping it together in the back, while being pinned in the front by brooch. Has a fringe made of white paper bits.
Bow -- Navy | Front; String tied into a simple two loop bow tie with ends showing under. Back; Bow tied at the bottom of the collar with a long loop hanging down to the back of her knees.
Bodice -- A white swimsuit-type bodice with a second breast-plate like cover. The cover has one metallic silver stripe.
Sleeves -- Sleeveless.
Brooch -- A small lightweight pyramid, made out of Lapis Lazuli walls; it resembles a stone paperweight.
Bottoms -- Lavender | High waisted, just below the beast; 80-90% opacity.
Tiara -- A silver metal head-band style tiara with a smaller stone pyramid in the center to match her brooch.
Choker -- Navy | Criss-crossed string/rope; same as bows; with a silver clasp in the center.
Shoes -- Simple lavender boots with paper wings tied onto the sides with navy strings/rope. Heels are Lapis Lazuli wedges.
Gloves -- None | White | Paper-like cuffs.
Accessories -- Simple, round, silver stud earrings. Silver nail polish.

Attacks:

Sailor Scout Attack: "Tsk!"
A keyword sound used to summon sheets of paper. As they seem to fly off her fuku and around her or towards her enemies. Commanding anywhere from one to fifteen sheets of paper at a time. Echo mostly uses to as a distraction, swirling around her target of choice; it is good for blocking their view and for causing small paper-cuts.
They can fly up to ten feet away from her. The magic lasts for 20 seconds at a time and can be used three times.

Super Sailor Scout Attack: "Mache Crush!"
On a larger scale than her first attack, this can do more than cause paper cuts! Powerful enough to cause it's own wind-flow, it becomes harder for the enemy to avoid or simply push away. By applying itself to the enemy, it can push them back, making them feel trapped and like they just can't move against it.
This attack can be used up to twenty five seconds at a time and can be used four or five times.

Eternal Sailor Attack: "Glossy Origami~!"
This attack forms a large origami bat that is around the same height as Echo. It swoops around the battlefield and pushes targets back/away from Echo, while coming in contact with the origami creature could result in the sensation of static shock.
It can last up to 35 seconds with a set radius of 20 by 20 feet.

Notes/Thoughts; Hopefully these aren't too boring of attacks, was trying to stick to the character guidelines. The biggest reference for her attacks are from the anime, Read or Die. When coming up with these and thinking of a element to tie in, I figured a Static Charge would be strong enough to hurt or surprise people but not damaging. I wanted to use something rather than air, since her powers are over Paper Manipulation itself, not using the air to move the paper; while paper in real life can gather static charge.

anime_girl10

Star Nymph


anime_girl10

Star Nymph

PostPosted: Tue Feb 28, 2017 3:36 pm


.: OTHER :.
So I don't forget this stuff later on. lol


Bio: WIP

Name Meaning: Connie means Strong willed or wise; a Hero. -- Salvatore means Savior;
This name was mostly taken as a joke because of Connie's ties with Lapis Lazuli and red-pink eyes, like the vampires from the book/show The Vampire Dairies. She was always called a vampire by other kids and even her friends would joke that her missing family ties must have actually been vampires.

Lapis Lazuli VS Sapphire -- This is mostly a play on words/history; As often throughout time Lapis Lazuli has been called Sapphire or "Sapphire with gold flecks". | Overall I just like Lapis Lazuli better as it's more applying and interesting than Sapphire [to me]. It also ties into her fuku's Navy color.

Washi Tape; Connie has a huuuuuge collection.

Tsum Tsums and [Mini] Lalaloopsy; Her favorite toy figures, which she collects. Though she doesn't bring it up a lot, thinking it'll make her look too childish. She can't help but use the Tsum Tsums bento box her Grandparents gave her or the Mini Lalaloopsy keychain her friends gave her as a going away gift.

Other: I really hope her Virtues and Flaws are ok. I tried my best to make them seem balanced and make sense. Since she's generally a loner and will be starting a new life in Destiny City, it was hard to think of things that would work since I don't think she would've had many friends before moving anyway and both of her parents are busy most of the time these days.
PostPosted: Tue Feb 28, 2017 4:16 pm


anime_girl10


WHAT A SUPER CUTIE

just as a note, if she's 13, she'd still be a chibi senshi rather than a full blown senshi! : D

kuropeco

Dramatic Marshmallow


anime_girl10

Star Nymph

PostPosted: Tue Feb 28, 2017 7:23 pm


kuropeco
WHAT A SUPER CUTIE

just as a note, if she's 13, she'd still be a chibi senshi rather than a full blown senshi! : D


Thank you Kuro!! >w<

& oops! Forgot to change that back. I had almost made her older instead. XD
PostPosted: Thu Mar 16, 2017 12:06 am


anime_girl10


Hey, anime!

Connie is adorable and I'm really excited to work with you on getting her stamped! For her civilian, everything looks good but I think the 'cleanliness' trait might need a little tweak! The virtues are meant to be personality traits that express themselves through roleplay. I think it might help to rename the trait 'Organized' so that it could tie in to a personality trait that seems to go along with the rest of the profile and could affect not only her cleanliness but also her personality! For example, 'organized' as a personality trait might also mean that she is capable of multitasking and she can plan well and doesn't forget things, so if you added something like that in even on top of the information that is already there, it would be totally fine!

I love her sphere and think she'll be a really cute Senshi, but before I can stamp her magic it will need a few tweaks!

Her basic and super attack look good, but Senshi summon their magic and do not need to utilize parts of their uniform specifically to use it. Magical sheets of paper should magically appear around her, but to give the same effect maybe it appears like the paper peels off of her outfit? I think these are really neat spells but a little additional information could really help them come to life!

For example, for her basic magic it might instead say:
Quote:
Echo casts her magic and ethereal sheets of paper seem to fly off of her uniform and swirl around her. She can command fifteen sheets of paper to do her bidding. They can fly up to ten feet away from her. The papers mostly serve as a distraction and will swirl around the target of her choice; it is good for blocking their view and for causing small papercuts. The magic lasts for 20 seconds at a time and can be used three times.


For her super magic, I would base it off of the above one, but increase the duration to twenty five seconds and say that the paper is now powerful enough to cause a windflow that makes it hard for them to move past/might push them backwards or make them feel trapped or like they couldn't move against it?

Her eternal attack is neat, but I think it might be too much variation and be too powerful for a chibi, however I think it could work with some tweaks! I would say that instead of it being any origami animal, subject to change, it should always be one form--which would allow you to write concrete abilities! Senshi usually do not get the ability to summon creatures and then control them (this is usually restricted to Knight Summons) but instead, she could create a non-sentient origami creature (hypothetically a crane since those are common origami animals!) that could be as large as her. It could swoop around the battlefield in a set radius and push targets back/away from Echo and, coming in contact with the origami creature could result in the sensation of static shock? As a chibi, I think 35 seconds of this and one use would be fair?

I am sorry for the wall of text! I haven't yet learned how to be succinct, and I understand this might look a little intimidating but I want to reassure that I'm really excited to help you get to her a stamp and she doesn't need much change to get there!

If you have any questions, comments or concerns, please feel free to quote me or shoot me a PM and I'll get back to you asap!


Kyuseisha no Hikari

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Dragonslaying Dragon


anime_girl10

Star Nymph

PostPosted: Thu Mar 16, 2017 7:13 am


Kyuseisha no Hikari


I changed her civilian trait you where talking about. <3 Hope that fits, I can reword it again if that doesn't fit well. lol

For her powers- I will update of course but I just wanted to check first!

I wanted to have her go from Chibi to First Stage Senshi- instead of Chibi to Eternal Chibi- I can't remember who I asked now, but they said that was ok- so that was the plan with her powers. But yeah, I can see how that's confusing, etc, and wasn't stated.

So however I need to do that. sweatdrop

Also- since I planned on making small changes to her fuku- I drew that real quick after seeing your comment, since it's different from above. Just small changes and to make her look more Chibi-like; [X]
Though I haven't decided on her back bow yet, since I realized it would have to be at her back with the high skirt. lol
PostPosted: Thu Mar 16, 2017 2:25 pm


anime_girl10


Her civilian side looks perfect, thank you! <3

For her powers, I would recommend getting them stamped as a chibi first and then revising once she completes her chibi growth ritual--just because sometimes life gets in the way or plots change! When you submit her plot for the growth ritual we can also approve new attacks related to the upgrade in power (these are usually just stronger/more advanced attacks of the chibi versions, but with a plot could also be something new!). If you want to, you could have chibi versions and adult versions of the attacks and I could stamp them right now--or you could wait until she undergoes her ritual!

(Her new outfit is really cute!)


Kyuseisha no Hikari

Crew

Dragonslaying Dragon


anime_girl10

Star Nymph

PostPosted: Thu Mar 16, 2017 4:14 pm


Kyuseisha no Hikari


Yay!

And ah ok, that makes sense. Totally right in never knowing! lol

They should all be fixed now. I tried my best to add it in to what was already there/reword it, so I wasn't just flat out copy/paste. Haha.

My only worry is the radius for the Eternal. I originally thought maybe 12/12 as a "double a tall guy's height" but in length that's...actually not really a lot. lmao But then she's just a chibi, so 20/20 might be too much? lol

(& thank you! <3)
PostPosted: Thu Mar 16, 2017 8:51 pm


anime_girl10


She looks excellent to me! I think that radius sounds totally fine! Thank you!!

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Kyuseisha no Hikari

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