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Name: Amity Choire

Nickname: Amii, AmCho, Flower, more to come with rp.

Age: 16

Birthday: September 21

Sign: Virgo.

Gemstone: Carnelian

Blood Type: O+

Fav. Food: Broccoli w/ cheese sauce

Hated Food: Fish - Most Sea Food.

School: Crystal Academy (Females Only, rich girls or scholarships)

Hobbies:

Horse Riding - She can feel the breath of the horse as she rides bareback. The wind blowing her hair as she feels the sky on her person. surrounded by fresh air. Riding helps her feel a sense of calm about her. it takes her into a whole other almost like realm.

Ribbon Dancing - She grips the light poles that connects her ribbons. She slowly moves them and begins to twirl and dance with the rhythm of the music. This is a way for her to feel calm yet happy. It works better than yoga.

Violin Playing - Her main hobby is the one where instead of following the music. She creates it. She makes sounds that can bring people to their happy place. Where can feel what she is trying to say. Be it be yourself or let your troubles disappear and let your wings sore. This is the hobby that got her into the school where she is. And one day she hopes she can reach her heart to as many will open their ears to her.

Virtues:

Calm -- Amity is a calm person by nature. She can't help it. Every since she was a child she just found it easier. So everywhere she goes she tries her best to show people that calm can really help everything. Be it a misunderstanding or all out fight. She feels that if you take a step back and breath. Letting everything sink in you can find the calm and just speak things rationally. And with her friends it normally worked. Since she was the go to person whenever someone needed to calm down for any reason. This always brought a smile to her face.

Understanding -- You could have failed a test or had a recent fall out with your family. No matter what it was she would always understand. She could see both sides. Now wither it was the right thing or not. She knew it wasn't about her. It was about being there for someone and seeing things from their eyes. They just wanted someone to talk to who could understand. And for that she was the perfect person.

Flaws:

Naive -- By keeping herself so peaceful and almost living in her own world. She forgot sometimes that the world was not all peace and honey. She lived a sheltered life which made her very naive. This is a major down fall since when it comes to her walking through the world she would a bit more trusting then sometimes she should.

Absentminded -- She loved to lay in the grass or just sit there playing her violin in the sunlight. Which is a wonderful thing but sometimes she can not feel her peace bringing her closer to slumber. Making her sleep and fall asleep where she sits. this puts her at advantage since she then becomes unaware of her surroundings and heavily unguarded. In her mind its not an issue but in the real. Being absentminded has lead her to miss time and become blind to other things. Worst of all - her health has also taken a toll with it. Causing her to become ill a lot more often.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Shape and color but with purple glow in it. Almost blueish/purple.

Hair: Flowing. flowers. serenity. Styles Just like these.

Face: Small ears, clean face - no blemishes almost glowing. Example of what she would be like playing violin.

Clothes: Sun dresses and anything flowing and free. Just like the music from her violin.

HI Chi! congrats on your girl!

Lets get her ready for a stamp shall we?

So first off her civilian:

For her peaceful slumber flaw - it's a bit too specific, I think this flaw would maybe be better as something like absentminded, and give a little information on how being absentminded effects her. Peaceful slumber as it is now, reads more like things she does.

So now then for her senshi.

4 uses is a lot of uses. Most uses allowed for a basic attack is typically 3. Also how far do/can these crystals travel or is this an opponent close by that she chooses?

For eternal how large is the playing field? Since it's an area of effect attack, it would need a radius in feet that it travels. Also, if you want to keep them stunned by tranquility it needs to only 15 seconds long and no longer for a stunning/paralysis type attack. However, if you wanted the 45 seconds, you could change the wording on the attack to read along the lines of "For a moment they feel more tranquil and less inclined to attack" This leaves it so they aren't completely stunned/paralyzed from the attack and can still act, but they would feel less inclined.

Also, same for your basic and super attacks, if you don't mind clarifying if they're being stunned by this or not. Again though, if you want them stunned by tranquility it needs to be 15 seconds max. Otherwise, they should be less inclined to attack; you could do this so that if they are the same level as her or a lower level than her they're more affected ( a greater chance of it taking hold ) by the attack and those of higher levels are less inclined to be affected. but they still could be.

If you have any questions or need any help feel free to ask! I'm more than happy to come back and assist however I can. Oh and if you just want me to come back in general all you have to do is quote me!

It looks like you addressed all my concerns!

A GM'll be around shortly!