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Name: Derrick Keenan

Nickname: d**k Rick, Dicky Ricky, bed-head

Age: 18

Birthday: September 3rd

Sign: Virgo

Gemstone: Sapphire

Blood Type: AB-

Fav. Food: Baked chicken with vegetables

Hated Food: Liver

School: GED – works at a store a lot like a Hallmark store

Hobbies:
Calligraphy – Practices calligraphy on the side, and is wanting to sell his calligraphy as a service eventually. He feels that by learning this hobby it will help with keeping his fingers fit and precise. Although he won’t admit he does calligraphy out loud, he’s willing to talk to people about it if they catch him doing it such as in the library. He’s quite well known there for checking out a variety of calligraphy books every month.

Archery – Rick has always wanted to be a professional archer, not for a job but just to be good at it, mostly because he has always thought archers look cool. He practices for an hour everyday if possible and if not then tries to make up for it when he can.

Parkour – Rick really likes practicing and getting better coordination and staying fit. Parkour does both while also allowing him to learn more about the ins and outs of the city and all of the little places one might not see if they didn’t run into it. He likes to do it either solo or with a group and usually goes parkouring with a group twice a month.

Virtues:
Adventurous – Going along with his parkour hobby, Rick isn’t afraid to go and explore or try new things. It’s mostly when he is out and about either exploring the city or trying out new places to try parkouring, he’s willing to go somewhere new. He is also willing to take risks if he has to, even if it might hurt him because you only live once, right?

Protective – Isn’t afraid to go to the aid of someone else. He usually tries to avoid fights, but if he sees someone being beat up or bullied he won’t stay silent about it. If one of his friends/family is in trouble he will go and help them however he can (if it’s not illegal).

Flaws:
Stubborn – Going along with his adventurous side, Rick also has a hard time admitting when he’s gone too far or can’t do something, which has gotten him a couple of broken bones so far. Because of his stubborness, he has a hard time admitting when something might be too hard for him and will try to do it anyway.

No small talk – Tends not to talk much to those he is not close to/customers and it often takes several meetings for him to finally say one word to you. He really doesn’t like small talk out in public, such as when he is waiting in line or strangers try to talk to him for no reason. Those who want to ask if he’ll sign a petition or join a cause will often get a quite the glare. He won’t make a face when it’s people trying to talk to him about/in his hobby group, but he may just be more focused on what he wants to get done rather than getting to know someone just yet.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION
Eyes: Gray, almond

Hair: Copper brown, styled upward

Face: Heart-shaped

Clothes: If you are getting student art, your character will be drawn in the school uniform. If you are getting a civilian outfit, this will discuss the general style of your character! The artist reserves the right to not draw complicated outfits, and this will generally be your work clothes if you are older.

Winter/Fall Outfit: sweater, jean (Andi color), boots
Spring/Summer Outfit: Either shirt 1 or shirt 2 as a short-sleeve hoddie, shorts (aluminum color) that go to the knees, tennis shoes, accessories, parkour gloves

Hello, Bros!

Rick's civilian side looks good! Some stuff on the powered side --

In order to prevent confusion with the animal, would you be okay with changing his sphere to "Sealing"? That will keep the issue from occuring!

As for his attacks -- for the first two, are they full-body paralysis or just the limb/area he hits? In his Eternal you mention a change from area to full paralysis, so I wanted to ask!

Also, for his Eternal, for any attack that causes full-body paralysis, the maximum duration is 15 seconds, so that duration will have to be dropped. Additionally, for all of them, once he calls his attack, is there a time limit on how long he has to hit his opponent? For his Eternal, how many people, maximum, could he affect, and what does "vulnerable for a bit" mean if he misses?

Basically, his magic needs some clarifications!

Quote me if you have questions or once you've made changes and I'll be back!

In this case yeah, it's just the verb instead of the noun which keeps it from causing confusion with the animal!

For his Super attack, just to clarify - the effects stack if he hits the same area, but if he hits two different areas, is it just that each area is paralyzed for four seconds?

Also, for all his attacks, what kind of visuals are there? Senshi magic generally includes some kind of visual component, so do his fists glow, perhaps? Does he have to make a particular casting gesture, or just say the name of his attack?

So with the stacking effect, he would be paralyzing both areas hit, but that would burn two uses, then?

Just clarifications -- this is stuff that will likely come up in RP, so it's best to have it all thought out!

Ah, one last thing, I'm sorry I didn't ask earlier -- is the Eternal attack one shot in which he can hit up to four people, or is it four potential uses?

Generally Eternals are one-shot attacks because of how much energy they consume for the Senshi using them, so the preference would be for it to be one use with up to four possible targets, especially since it's a paralysis attack.

I think that should be everything, so just this one last clarification and we're done! I'm sorry this has taken so long and so many rounds of back and forth!

Okay! If you could pop that into the quest (just a note at the end of the attack that he can use it once per battle) that should be everything! Thank you heart

Looks good!



A GM will be by soon!

All right made the changes XD Wasn't sure if he had to have a disadvantage on the last one, but I took it out 3nodding