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 Posted: Fri Oct 14, 2016 9:34 am
Name: Noelle Cringle
Nickname: Holly, More to come from rp.
Age: 11
Birthday: December 24th
Sign: Capricorn
Gemstone: Garnet
Blood Type: Ab+
Fav. Food: Christmas Cookies
Hated Food: Anything soy
School: Knightside Elementary
Hobbies:
Christmas Decorating - While this may seem like a strange task for a child. It is far from true. Her mother is a well designer, and with that she would watch over her shoulder every day. Now her mother's designs are more contemporary to help her clients. Though her's a full of Christmas magic due to her grandmother showing her what that was. She hopes one day she'll be able to share her magical designs with others to spread the cheer. Her mother allows her to put up things as she see's fit, with a little supervision when it comes to other's house. Now her grand parents house she's allowed to go wild and trust me she does.
Holiday Reading that's my style - Christmas tales of any kind. For some reason Christmas is the only holiday she has loved for a long time, and so by reading the books it makes her soul happy. Since her grandfather used to tuck her into bed every night, and for some reason he always read Christmas tales. Her favorite being the Nutcracker and polar express. Since she could almost feel the magic happening on there pages. Now other books interest her to, but she mainly loves Christmas stories. She can read them all year round if her school and mother didn't give her other books. It would probably be Christmas books all year round.
Virtues:
Positive -- Noel never lets others depressing thoughts ever dampen her. She always shes something positive, but it's a little over that. Since when people think positive thoughts, she is in a whole other realm. The realm, one where there is no negative outcome positive. People have always looked up to her for this since they never understood how one person could be that positive. It's always been something everyone who met her said they wished they could be. She is that kid that no matter what's going on she finds the silver-lining. You could be tell her anything and she would always find the bright side to the event no matter how bad it was.
Passionate -- You will never meet a more passionate person when it comes to christmas or her friends. Now the reason this is a virtue is it has helped her grow is because when she was younger people used to bully her. They'd always tell her home stupid christmas was or santa. At the time she couldn't stand up for herself. Her passion for christmas though eventually helped her speak up. Not just for herself but for those without a voice. Since she knew it what it felt like to be that person who needed someone to be passionate for them. That's the person she wants to be.
Flaws:
Nervousness -- Not many people know this about her, but when it comes to her friends sometimes she gets quiet and slightly nervous. Turning her into the person just standing there. She just does it around friends since once she has them she doesn't want them to let her go. She treasures her friends more than anything and sometime's she just becomes so nervous around them and clams up. If it were a stranger it seems to not hit her as much. Since who knows if she'd see them ever again.
This causes problems since it makes it hard for her to sometimes say things like "stop fighting" or "but why can't we all go". instead she just stands there super nervous and sometimes her friends think she is ignoring them. this has caused her to lose a lot of friends over the years.
Overly Peppy -- Not everyone enjoys her positive attitude and it can be very annoying. Since lets face who wants a super happy girl every hour of every day. It can be a lot to handle. This can lead to misunderstands. It can also have ever friends be very harsh with her. Since being overly preppy she doesn't always see things that are right in front of her.
For example if someone is bullying her she might say it was just an accident and get up and say no worries lets be friends. or something silly like that. The only thing with that is it hurts her since she sometimes is to nice to those who would do her harm.
PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION
Hair and eye colors cannot change from civilian to powered form, nor can tattoos or piercings. If your character has a tattoo as a civilian it will appear on the powered art, though will have a glamour to prevent people who have seen both from identifying civilian identities. Hairstyles can change between civilian and powered form; only Corrupted Senshi have vastly different hair between civilian and powered forms (their hair grows extensively in length!) Unnatural hair and eye color are perfectly fine, and there is no need to say they use dye or contacts - your character is free to have been born with blue hair if you want. Genetic heterochromia is not allowed, sorry!
Eyes: CC
Hair: CC
Face: CC
Clothes: ICC
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Posted: Fri Oct 14, 2016 10:06 am
Senshi: Sailor Christabel || Chibi Senshi of Mistletoe Challenge: Let my Mistletoe, blind you with its jolly shine! Fuku Colour: CC Main Color: CC Secondary Color: CC So A little different but I have a color palettes that I will let the colorist decide what to do. Hope that's okay. ^^" [Palette 1][Palette 2][Palette 3]Fuku: Reference pictures may be used in place of descriptions, but please be prepared to give extra detail if your artist requires it! Collar -- CC Bow -- CC. I did find these cute back bow ideas. this and this. Just random ideas though. feel free to have fun with it. Bodice -- CC - thinking maybe a dress though. Sleeves -- CC - I was thinking yes tho but more arm warmers than sleeves. like wool or felt/satin/something like that arm warms that come up most of the way to her shoulders. Brooch -- CC - though maybe something like This or ThisBottoms -- CC Tiara -- Cute Tiara like this or something more traditional like This but maybe a little more fun in it and happiness. Choker -- CC Shoes -- CC Gloves -- CC - put idea in sleeves but maybe arm warmer like sleeves. Accessories -- CC Your MAIN COLOUR should dominate. Your SECOND COLOUR should be used for trimming. Attacks: These are your senshi's abilities, which will be used in battle. These abilities correspond to your senshi's element. Think of it as a "summary" of what your senshi can do in one word. Sailor Scout Attack: Berry Blast. Sailor Christabel blows a kiss, sending an array of mistletoe berries at her opponent. If they burst on impact, they have the potential of leaving a sticky residue that the target will have difficulty removing. If they do not burst, they cause discomfort akin to being pelted with a series of small, hard berries. Impact is determined by player's discretion. Attack lasts 15 seconds. Can hit only 1 person per attack, 3 uses per battle. Super Sailor Scout Attack: Kissing Blast. She blows a kiss, sending an array of mistletoe berries at her opponent. If they burst on impact, they have the potential of leaving a sticky residue that the target will have difficulty removing. If they do not burst, they cause discomfort akin to being pelted with a series of small, hard berries. In addition, the residue or pelt sites have the potential to leave a temporary stinging sensation for the remainder of the attack time. Impact is determined by player's discretion. Attack lasts 20 seconds. Can hit 1-2 people per attack, 2 uses per battle. Eternal Sailor Attack: White Berry Kisses Christabel wills herself to cry and the first tear turns into a white mistletoe berry, which she then has five seconds to toss towards a friendly target. If the berry makes impact, the berry's "kiss" against their skin provides a temporary barrier, protecting the ally against a magical attack for one use, dissolving after the attack makes successful impact. If the ally is not attacked after 30 seconds, the barrier fades on its own. One use per battle
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Posted: Fri Oct 14, 2016 10:09 am
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Posted: Fri Oct 14, 2016 11:52 am
Oh oops. Thank you. I had noticed someone put it as an idea for one. I will change her thank you. ^_^
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Posted: Fri Oct 14, 2016 12:09 pm
Random but do you know mistletoe is taken by chance or serissa? Thanks so much! ^_^
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Posted: Fri Oct 14, 2016 12:41 pm
chi honda Random but do you know mistletoe is taken by chance or serissa? Thanks so much! ^_^ Neither of those are taken -- for future inquiries, please check the Master Character List with CTRL+F for whatever you're looking for!
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Posted: Fri Oct 14, 2016 1:34 pm
Daekie chi honda Random but do you know mistletoe is taken by chance or serissa? Thanks so much! ^_^ Neither of those are taken -- for future inquiries, please check the Master Character List with CTRL+F for whatever you're looking for! Oh awesome thank you!!! ^_^ I will now bookmark that page smile
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Posted: Sat Dec 09, 2017 12:54 pm
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Posted: Thu Feb 15, 2018 2:36 pm
<3 just bumping since I updated something and i think she is done. now to wait.
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Posted: Sat Apr 14, 2018 9:21 am
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Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2018 9:09 pm
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Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2018 7:24 am
Hey Chi!!
I'm here to go over Noel’s profile with you and get her ready for a stamp. I know this is a hefty amount of words but don't be discouraged, we’re going to do this together!!
Let's go over her civilian side first.
Your thread title has her named spelled Noel and your profile says Noelle. Which spelling preference did you want to go with?
It's a minor detail but her blood type requires either a negative or a positive behind it.
Hobbies:
While designing homes is certainly a unique hobby, you should consider converting it into Christmas Decorating in general, since she's a little too young to be going around multiple homes and decorating them as she sees fit. Does she put up holiday things year ‘round? What sort of things does she like to put up? Window clings? Garland? Christmas ornaments? Does her mother let her decorate her room as she pleases or does she give her free reign in certain parts of her house (or her grandmother’s house)?
Likewise for her Reading hobby, it comes across that she doesn't love reading in general as much as she enjoys the magic of Christmas stories specifically. Does she read them all year long? Are there other stories that she enjoys to read or is it only Christmas stories?
She sounds like a real Christmas fanatic!
Virtues:
Positive is a good virtue to work with! I would suggest removing the term “over” from the description, as being overly anything gives a more negative connotation than a positive one. What are some examples of how she doesn't let bad things get her down? It's great that people admire her for being positive, but I need a little more elaboration on how she stays positive. Is she cheerful? Encouraging? Does she find the silver lining to every bad situation?
Her Straightforward virtue reads a little more aggressive than it does positive. It can be both good or bad that she's blunt - maybe elaborate on how she doesn't beat around the bush when it comes to responding and how she's honest about her feelings? How has it helped her grow as a person? While being direct and to the point is a good quality, I'm not sure how it helps her defend either Christmas or those without a voice.
If you feel yourself elaborating more on how she looks out for others or defends her favorite holiday, you may want to consider a virtue like passionate instead.
Flaws:
What makes her nervous? You mention she goes quiet around her friends, does this happen around just them or does it happen with strangers too? Does it happen when things get tense between friends? You go into really good detail as to what she does when she gets nervous but I need a little more explanation as to what causes it.
When you say she's a pushover and can't stand up for herself, how is she able to stand up for those without a voice but not herself? Is she just a pushover when it comes to her friends or does it apply to anyone who may want something from her? You say “for some reason” she just lets it happen but I need a little more information to help understand the motives she has for letting others use her.
One flaw you may want to consider is a negative version of her Positive virtue. This would be a good area to write about how being overly positive could affect the people around her. Does she manage to irritate anyone because she's too peppy or cheerful? Does her positivity blind her from seeing things realistically?
Okay, now let's go over her powered side!
An 11 year old would fall under the age range for a chibi senshi and not an adult senshi. Chibi senshi are awakened between the ages of 7 and 13 while an adult senshi is awakened anywhere between 14 to 20. Depending on what kind of senshi you'd like her to become will affect the potency of her attacks. Chibi senshi attacks are weaker and shorter than those of an adult senshi. I saw in the post you made that you had chibi in parenthesis but I didn't see it listed here, so clarification would be appreciated.
I'm afraid Arnica is already taken as a name, so you'll need to find one that is not already found on the Master Character List. Once you do find one, I'll need you to add in the link for the celestial body so that I can verify it, please.
(Also, your first link for the tiara does not work!)
As far as her attacks go, each stage is going to also require a usage amount. Generally, a Basic stage will have 3 uses, a Super stage will have 2 uses and an Eternal stage will have 1 use per battle. This number can vary depending on the length of time you choose for each attack.
For the attacks themselves, the Basic and Super attack should be essentially the same, with the Super building off of the Basic. The Eternal attack is typically different than the first two and as I read the description of yours, I see the end results for all three being very similar.
With her Basic attack, maybe the berries leave behind a sticky residue if they burst on impact? That way, you're not limited to just their eyes being hit but a sticky mess for them to deal with if it were to hit any other part of the body. I suggest it being able to hit one victim with up to three uses per battle.
Her Super attack should be very close to her Basic attack but from the way it reads, it brings in the “kissing” element while the Basic does not. I suggest either dropping the kiss from Super or adding it to her Basic to start with, such as:
Basic: Sailor [Name] blows a kiss, sending an array of mistletoe berries at her opponent. If they burst on impact, they have the potential of leaving a sticky residue that the target will have difficulty removing. If they do not burst, they cause discomfort akin to being pelted with a series of small, hard berries. Impact is determined by player's discretion. Attack lasts 10-15 seconds. Can hit only 1 person per attack, 3 uses per battle.
Super: Sailor [Name] blows a kiss, sending an array of mistletoe berries at her opponent. If they burst on impact, they have the potential of leaving a sticky residue that the target will have difficulty removing. If they do not burst, they cause discomfort akin to being pelted with a series of small, hard berries. In addition, the residue or pelt sites have the potential to leave a temporary stinging sensation for the remainder of the attack time. Impact is determined by player's discretion. Attack lasts 20-30 seconds. Can hit 1-2 people per attack, 2 uses per battle.
Mind you, you do not have to use these at all, I just wanted to offer an example of what I meant. The Super attack can also have an additional element (in my example I added the stinging sensation) as well as be able to hit additional targets instead of just one.
The Eternal attack should be different than the other two and will be the senshi’s strongest attack. While using a “blast” element would be cool, I don't normally think of explosions when I think of mistletoe. Looking online, mistletoe can cause all sorts of crazy side effects; consider using one of the factoids to create an attack based on what mistletoe can potentially do to a person? Alternatively, you could use the "kissing" aspect of the mistletoe lore to generate a temporary feeling of adoration or love from a target, instead of inflicting pain from the berries?
Here are some helpful sites that I found: [x] [x] [x]
If she's meant to be a chibi and not an adult senshi, you may want to consider scaling back the potential for damage and shorten the time of the Super and Eternal attacks.
I know this is a lot of information to take in all at once but I would be more than happy to clarify or help in any way I can. Just quote me here (or DM/PM me) if you have any questions or when you're ready for me to come back to review her for a stamp.
Thank you! <3
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Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2018 5:52 pm
Hello! thank you for all the wonderful advice. I really appreciate the help on the attacks I'll be honest I fail at creating attacks. I was wondering if you'd be able to check over everything again? See if it looks better. Still working on the last attack. I am thinking I love the idea of the lore and I'm trying to figure out how to make the lore into the idea you came up with. Since I know it has to do with white berries and i feel like it can be an amazing attack. Thank you again! Lots of words but tons of wonderful advice! and ya she's a christmas maniac. lol.
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Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2018 1:44 am
I'm so glad the suggestions worked for you!!!
The only thing on her civilian side that I see is that I think you mean overly peppy and not overly preppy for her character flaw (since preppy has an entirely different definition than peppy).
Christabel is a lovely replacement name for a holiday themed senshi (thank you for the link to verify!) and the only thing I can ask at this point is for you to double check the master list once you obtain a slot for Noelle/Christabel to ensure both Christabel and the last name Cringle haven't been taken by that point.
Could you confirm for me whether or not she's a chibi? I still don't see any clarification in the senshi post of your thread.
That being said, I'm excited to see what you'll come up with for an Eternal attack; mistletoe is such a cute and creative sphere to work with! I thoroughly enjoyed looking up the lore/facts for you when I was perusing the internet.
Please let me know if there's anything else I can do to assist you, otherwise drop me a line when you're ready for another review <3
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Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2018 10:55 pm
Ghouliboo I'm so glad the suggestions worked for you!!!
The only thing on her civilian side that I see is that I think you mean overly peppy and not overly preppy for her character flaw (since preppy has an entirely different definition than peppy).
Christabel is a lovely replacement name for a holiday themed senshi (thank you for the link to verify!) and the only thing I can ask at this point is for you to double check the master list once you obtain a slot for Noelle/Christabel to ensure both Christabel and the last name Cringle haven't been taken by that point.
Could you confirm for me whether or not she's a chibi? I still don't see any clarification in the senshi post of your thread.
That being said, I'm excited to see what you'll come up with for an Eternal attack; mistletoe is such a cute and creative sphere to work with! I thoroughly enjoyed looking up the lore/facts for you when I was perusing the internet.
Please let me know if there's anything else I can do to assist you, otherwise drop me a line when you're ready for another review <3
Yes thank you! oops I didn't notice that thank you. Well thank you I'm glad it works. I saw it and honestly I'm kinda glad the other one was taken. =] Now if I claim a slot for a civilian or powered for her with my crown tokens - do I need to wait to say I claim her till someone takes it on? I wasn't sure how that works. Yes she is a chibi! I knew I forgot something. It won't fit in the title so I put it in the senshi form. So I finally came up with a final attack. Its more on the defensive side, but I feel like after looking at the lores and learning more about mistletoe. it's fitting. It kind shows the sweeter side of it. The love/tears that made it what it has become. My only fear is it might be over powered. Thank you for helping me open my eyes to how fun mistletoe can be. I really didn't even realize how much past was behind it. <3 Its so much fun and super enjoyable just learning about it.
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