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An evil known as The Corruption infects the land. Will the shinobi world overcome the corruption, or be consumed? 

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 11, 2016 7:42 am


═══════════ | Basic Information | ═══════════

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Name Rōzu Kami [ Rose God ]
Character's Full Name Rōzu-shin Kami

Nicknames Rōjī [ Rosie ]

Famous Shinobi Name: Shōmei Sokudo [ Lighting Speed ]

Gender Dansei [ Male ]

Age Twenty-Four [ 24 ]

Height Six feet One inch [ 6'1" ]

Weight One hundred Sixty-Three pounds [ 163lbs ]

Markings None [ 0 ]

Common Clothing None [ 0 ]

Occupation None [ 0 ]

Status Unknown


════════════ | Shinobi Data | ════════════

Clan Name Kami

Kekkei Genkai, Stage Obtained Swift Clan [ Master ]

Known Chakra Elements
Primary: Raiton [ Lighting ]
Secondary: Fuuton [ Wind ]

Land, Village Land of Sand, Village Hidden in the Sand.

Rank, Title Missing Ninja [ A-Rank ]

Special Skills

- Incredible Speed - Due to his natural born speed combined with the Flying Thunder God techniques and the Swift bloodline he is apart of he is hardly ever has his speed matched by anyone that he has fought in his past 24 years of his life. Someone will match it, but it has not come up yet in his life.

- Taijutsu User- A basic form of techniques and refers to any techniques involving the martial arts or the optimisation of natural human abilities. Taijutsu is executed by directly accessing the user's physical and mental energies, relying on the stamina and strength gained through training. It typically does not require chakra, though chakra may be used to enhance its techniques. Taijutsu generally requires no hand seals to perform, occasionally making use of certain stances or poses, and are far quicker to use than ninjutsu or genjutsu. Taijutsu is simply put: hand-to-hand combat. [ No-specific style ]

- Ninja Master - one of the three main jutsu categories. Ninjutsu is the most nebulous of the three and may most simply be described as anything that is not genjutsu or taijutsu. Most ninjutsu require chakra and hand seals, but this is not always the case since the mere usage of weaponry qualifies as ninjutsu. The huge range of ninjutsu's uses is illustrated by its several sub-classifications: medical ninjutsu, reincarnation ninjutsu, space–time ninjutsu, barrier ninjutsu, sealing jutsu, and Cursed Seal jutsu. [ specialized in Raiton ]

- Flying Thunder God Master - To activate this technique, the user places a special seal or "technique formula" (術式, jutsu-shiki) to mark an intended destination. After this is done, they can at will enter a dimensional void that instantaneously transports them to the location of the seal. The mark can be applied to almost any area through brief physical contact, including an opponent or other surrounding feature. Because this technique is able to affect anything that is in contact with the user or somehow connected to their chakra,they can also use this technique to teleport other objects or people, though the size of the object and the distance of the location dictates the amount of chakra required. As Minato also noted, the marking formula never disappears from a marked target.

Known Affiliations Unknown [ None at the moment ]

Organization Membership Unknown [ None at the moment ]

Dominant Jutsu Types
- Raiton [ Lighting Techniques ]
- Fuuton [ Wind Techniques ]
- Taijutsu [ Hand-to-hand ]

Intelligence
Rosie has a higher level of intelligence then the average ninja, because of his higher level of training then most other ninja but he has no real common sense. He rarely thinks things through except when it comes to missions or fighting. Being trained as an Anbu member for so long made him more of a emotionless robot for the most part, but he has been trying to find them again.

Fighting Tendencies Close range




══════════ | Personal Information | ══════════

Personality
Rosie is kind of a different character since he is considered a A-Rank missing ninja but in fact he has that barely killed anyone. Out of the list of missing Ninja he has killed maybe a C-Rank number of other ninja, but they were of higher rank so it does kind of balance out in the long run. It is a weird situation for him because he would rather not kill them because he already saw so many people die by his hand and by others that it does not fancy him anymore. He loves to play with his pray, torture them until they want to die. Then leave them for the other creatures, be it human or not, to finish off the job. Other then the non-killing policy, he is a ruthless fighting that shows little to no mercy to anyone. Neither his family or friends get different treatment when they are fighting because he knows they will get stronger, and normally he really does not care if they die either. His tendencies to have little to no empathy towards most people does help him in fights, but can also hinder him as well because other ninja might try to help, but he wont let them help him. Sometimes even harming them in the process.

While not in a fight he is normally a really calm person, that does not normally become loud unless the situation shows it to be that kind of moment. Letting things happen the way they are suppose to, but he knows sometimes you need to push it where it should go or simply put a wrench in their.

Likes
- Surviving
- Torture
- Milk
- Candy Corn

Dislikes
- Killing
- Certain People
- NInja Government
- Politics

Miscellaneous Skills Unknown [ None ]

Sexuality Demisexual

Physical Conditions Normal

Mental Conditions
Rosie has sociopathic tendencies, which are derived from training and the tragic actions that has happened to him while he was a member of the Sand Villages Anbu squad.



══════════ | Techniques & Jutsu | ══════════

Jutsu Points: 65/68

Ninjutsu

Non-Elemental
- Body Flicker Technique [ E ]
- Kai [ D ]
- Multiple Shadow Clone Technique [ A ]
- Silent Killing [ B ]
- Flying Thunder God [ S ]


Elemental Ninjutsu
Raiton [ Lighting Release ]
- Hell Stab [ SS ]
- Lightning Release: Shadow Clone Technique [ A ]
- Kirin [ S ]


Medical Ninjutsu


Taijutsu

Leaf Strong Whirlwind [ B ]


Genjutsu


Fuuinjutsu


Weapon Techniques


Doujutsu


Juinjutsu


Summonings


Kekkei Genkai
Swift Release: Shadowless Flight [ A ]





═══════════ | Background Data | ═══════════


Relatives
None [ All dead ]

Other Relationships
Mother - Rose Kami [ Deceased ]
Father - Hanabira Kami [ Deceased ]
Brother - Chūrippu Kami [ Deceased ]

History
Rosie was originally from the Village Hidden in the Sand, where he had a normal life until he hit the academy at a young age. Around five or six he was put into the academy because he had extraordinary talents. His speed, and though process were like no other ninja they had ever seen at his age. It did not take him long to become a genin, which was at the age of 8. He was the youngest to become a genin, and his life gotten even crazy since then. Not only his life outside his mind but inside of his mind as well. It started after he became a genin, something did not click with him. To others stuff seemed a little off with Rosie, but they though it was simply because of how young he was so they did not really try to find out what it really was.

When he became a genin he was not simply put into a squad like the rest of his fellow genin. He was put under the supervision of an Anbu squad member, who was training to become the new Anbu Captain because the one before him recently died on a mission and they had no one to take his place at the moment. They choose him out of all the other members because he showed the most promise, which was special because it was a squad of elite ninja. Rosie was considered special at a young age but this was the first time that his ability was getting honed in since his techniques could be used the best as an anbu member.

As a Chunnin he was not in the Anbu squad yet but everyone considered him in the squad because the captain was still training him to not only be in their ranks, but will become the Captain of the squad one day. They did not want what happened before to happen again because it is never good to have an empty slot for as long as they had it before. It was hard training everyday, by all members, but Rosie pushed through it to get to the rank of jounin. Something that was different because as soon as he became a jounin he was drafted into the Anbu ranks. Making him the earliest inductee from a jounin they have ever had, but it was not like a surprise he was already in their. He was basically in their squad for a while but was not at the correct rank to really be in them.

It was suppose to be a simple mission where they had a target they needed to kill, who was not too strong but they brought five people just in case they needed some back up. After finding their target, the captain wanted to finish the target off. Silently the captain moved toward the man, but before he could make his first strike he was stabbed. A sword pierced his lung from the target. Rosie quickly jumped toward his captain as he was now falling toward the ground, and his fellow Anbu members followed. All the members started fighting this one man who was easily fighting them back by himself. Rosie was depressed because he was holding his teacher and captain in his hands as he was dying. They were stupid and did not bring a medical ninja along on this mission, so no one could do anything.

Rosie couldn't do anything as he saw the lights leave his captains eyes, and at that moment something snapped in Rosie. He just went insane, basically killing everyone their including his own teammates. He did not care who he was killing, he just wanted to kill everyone. He wanted to run away from everything, even himself. Does not matter where, he just wanted to go. After murdering everyone in his squad and the target he simply vanished from existence for a while. A bounty was put on his head, and everyone who hunted him down was never seen from again, but none of them were ever killed nor were their bodies ever found. Now he has emerged and is starting to make his name known out their. Make everyone fear him, to the point that they will not even go after him when they are told to because of a mission.

History (Continued)
To be determined


═════════ | Weapons & Equipment | ═════════

Basics
- Kunai
- Shuriken
- Steal Wire
- Smoke Bombs
- Sword [ Katana ]
- Anbu Mask [ Fox ]
- Explosive Tags

Special Objects
- Flying Thunder God Kunai [ A ]
- Flying Thunder God Katana [ A ]
- Flying Thunder God Shuriken [ A ]

Gear None

Miscellaneous
None
PostPosted: Tue Sep 13, 2016 12:31 am


Alright, there are a lot of issues with this profile so I'm going to break it down as simply as I can.

1. Your character, regardless of abilities, cannot be stated as the Fastest Ninja in the World on your profile. Being regarded as the fastest and being the fastest are two different things.

2. You cannot, and I absolutely mean cannot be a ninjutsu specialist AND a taijutsu specialist. It defeats the purpose of being a specialist, someone that dedicates their time to training one aspect of being a ninja.

3. With all of the description that you give your character's abilities, including that of his intelligence are beginning to push into the Mary Sue category. No one likes role playing with a Mary Sue as they are not believable or fun characters.

4. Your jutsu points are way off. Based on what you're got, you're sitting at 92/68 jutsu points. Far too many as an A-Rank shinobi.

5. We use Naruto Wiki for ranking jutsu. If a jutsu is not ranked in there, please put an asterisk * at the end of a jutsu that you ranked yourself so that the crew can review it.

6. Your backstory has plot holes. Chuunin cannot join ANBU, only Jounin can. Regardless of a character's aptitude, this is an absolute...even the genius Kakashi didn't get inducted into ANBU until after his Jounin promotion.

7. This is my own, personal nitpick. Please try to fix the majority of your grammatical errors in this profile. I understand that it's hard to catch them all, but as it is right now, I had trouble reading through all of it and making sense of it all.

8. You do not have a picture in your post, however it is most likely the link in your character's name. We would like it put in your actual skeleton as described.

9. Please remove the Bijuu section from your profile as your character does not have one.




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If you find anything else that needs tweaking and adjusting, please let us know.

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 15, 2016 12:21 am


You still don't have your jutsu ranked properly. Once you do, I'll count the points and make sure they are accurate.

Also, if Rosie was being groomed to be the next captain because the previous one was dead, why did a captain die in his arms?
PostPosted: Thu Sep 15, 2016 8:15 am


Friendly reminder Flying Thunder God is S Ranked so you don't need to spend the extra points for SS. Just thought I'd help, now back to your regularly scheduled Mephis Inferni programming.

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 20, 2016 9:07 pm


You still haven't ranked your jutsu according to http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Special:BrowseData/Jutsu
PostPosted: Thu Sep 22, 2016 9:01 pm


Mephis Inferni
You still haven't ranked your jutsu according to http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Special:BrowseData/Jutsu

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 09, 2016 6:36 am


Ninjutsu

Non-Elemental
Quote:
- Body Flicker Technique [ E ]

needs to be D rank, the canon rank

Quote:
- Kai [ E ]

is C ranked in this guild

Quote:
- Silent Killing [ B ]
B rank is fine, but note that for this technique rank indicates your skill with it. I'd say it ranges from C to A rank.



Elemental Ninjutsu
Raiton [ Lighting Release ]
Quote:
- Lightning Release Chakra Mode [ A ]

This technique (raiton no yoroi) is on the reserved jutsu list, and its spots are full,so you can't have it unless your learn it from someone who does.

Quote:
- Kirin [ SS ]
S rank is good for Kirin

Quote:
Hell Stab

This is SS ranked in this guild.. anything that can pierce Raiton no Yoroi is. Also, you must apply for it in the unique justsu application thread. There are spots available, so I'll go ahead and add you.


Kekkei Genkai


Quote:
Swift Release: Shadowless Flight [ E ]

We decided this was A rank when we approved another swift user.



Special Objects
Quote:
- Flying Thunder God Kunai [ A ]
- Flying Thunder God Katana [ A ]
- Flying Thunder God Shuriken [ A ]
just to be clear, these are part of flying thunder god, and will not cost you extra jutsu points.

Also, about his bio. I feel like its missing something. He goes crazy when his teamates were killed in front of him... but people don't go crazy out of nowhere. To remedy this, you could show earlier in the bio that he always had something in him, always had the potential deep down... and this event brought it crashing out.
PostPosted: Mon Oct 24, 2016 7:01 pm


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