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PostPosted: Fri Sep 09, 2016 7:52 pm


Name: Jeanette Genoise

Nickname: Jenny

Age: 15

Birthday: July 2nd

Sign: Cancer

Gemstone: Rose Quartz - traditional is Ruby, but Rose Quartz is an acceptable gemstone for Cancer signs.

Blood Type: AB

Fav. Food: Macarons. OTher sweets as well, most above all are macarons. They're pretty, they're pastel colors, and they're delicious!

Hated Food: Escargot. Yes, she is french. No, she will not eat snails and how dare you stereotype her like that.

School: Meadowview High School

Hobbies:
Dolls - Specifically, ball-jointed dolls. Jeanette adores them and has a number of the eerie, pretty little things that she greatly enjoys dressing up and taking pictures of. They let her express her taste in fashion in a smaller form, and experiment with different looks and appearences that she could not necessarily pull off on herself. She collects these dolls, and they are her babies - Jeanette does not find them creepy and cannot understand why there are people who do. To her, each doll has its own personality and something about it to adore, and is perfectly happy to spend hours working out the perfect look for each one.

Sewing - Because of her love for her dolls, Jeanette developed a similar love for sewing - she makes clothes for her BJDs as often as she buys them, and is happy to spend time either poring over her work or having a healthy discussion about the merits of taffeta with the other members of her home-ec class. She does not yet try to make clothes for herself or family, but limits her experiments to doll-sized attire, so that there's more material left over if and when she inevitably makes mistakes while learning.

Shopping - Be it a mall, a strip mall, or a quaint boutique, Jeanette adores shopping - especially with other people. Even when she herself doesn't have the money to spend, she enjoys trying things on, inspecting quaint objects, leafing through books in a bookstore, and offering encouragement to anyone who might be thinking about spending their money. Shopping for Jeanette is an experience, not a task to be completed, and it is one that she firmly believes is best done with friends and/or family.

Virtues:
Cheerful - Jenny is a ray of sunshine in human form. While it isn't impossible for somethign to get her down, she bounces back surprisingly well and tends to have an overall happy demeanor. She's not one to listen to sad music or wallow in misery, and her happiness with life can be infectious to those around her; her ability to greet the world with a smile and keep an even emotional keel gives her a sort of strength and endurance. This isn't to say she's optimistic - she's no more that than she is pessimistic; rather, disappointments simply roll off of her if given a little time, and she returns to her baseline nature with speed, and since that baseline nature is happy, it is very rare to find her in a fit of ennui or teenage angst.

Patient - Some things take time - getting an outfit just right for one of her dolls, waiting for the right lighting for photographing one, finding the absolute best pair of shoes in the shop... Jeanette knows how to wait, and how to not go stir crazy while doing so. Results are not always evident for somethign right away, and you have to keep going until they happen - and even if they don't happen. She does not get in a rush and tends to eye the pace that some of her schoolmates move through life with a confused and awed expression - why rush? Why get angry at something taking a while? Patient, consistent work pays off far more than hasty and sloppy work, after all!

Neat - A place for everything and everything in its place. Jeanette is careful to keep everything she possesses in a specific location and to always return it to its proper place when she is done with it. Her room is always clean, and she never lets dust or disorder build up in a space she has claimed as her own. Jenny does not like when things are messy, and will go out of her way to clean up after both herself and others. Fortunately, she does not take this to levels of obnoxiousness, but she can be found ensuring that there won't be loose crumbs left after a snack day, and does her best not to make a mess in her day-to-day life. After all, a neat appearance and living environment is important - and really, who wants to be messy?


Flaws:
Forgetful - Things simply don't 'stick' easily in Jeanette's mind. It isn't that she's stupid, or that she's not paying attention - things simply slip through while she's thinking of other matters. As a result, she tries to keep a list of important things she needs to do on her person, marking them off as she does them, but this doesn't always work, nor does her backup method of tying colored strings around her fingers as reminders. The latter most often leaves her with colorfully-decorated fingers and no recollection of what the ties were supposed to represent. A major result of this forgetfulness is that her grades are not stellar - she works hard and is a smart girl, but the fact that her work often ends up turned in a day or two late, or done at the last minute because she forgot the due date until it was nearly upon her has left her with a spottier GPA than she'd really liked. This is particularly noticeable in math, because she often forgets to show her work, which costs her more points now that she's getting into higher-level math.

Slow to Catch on -There's always that one person in a group who understands what's being discussed just a second or two later than everyone else. The person who needs just a bit longer to process a problem before being able to a) register that there IS a problem and b) begin implementing a solution. In short, the opposite of a quick thinker. Jeanette is that person. Between this, her forgetfulness, and her clumsiness, she's earned a bit of a reputation as a ditz, and it frustrates her that she's usually the last to get a joke, and still working on step one of a problem while everyone else is already moving on to step three or four. This isn't particularly a problem in terms of schoolwork, but rather in social situations - she's just a little out of step with conversational flow, just a little bit delayed in catching on to hidden meanings and agendas, and as a result she's forever just a bit out of place among her peers.

Clumsy - It's a good thing Jenny has a lot of patience, because with the number of times she's dropped, bumped into, or knocked over things would bring many people to despair of ever being graceful. She simply isn't that aware of where she is in space, and as a result she's often found sporting mild bruises or sprained ankles, and has been called a butterfingers by classmates since she was small. (One particularly spectacular incident resulted from her tripping with an unlatched pencil case and sending writing utensils flying everywhere). She's stabbed her own fingers often enough while sewing that she's begun to become numb to pinpricks, and does not trust herself with anything breakable. To some extent, she can overcome this, but it takes a lot of focus and energy, and as such she generally exercises such a level of caution only when working with her dolls, so that she doesn't damage them. Everything else... well.... accidents happen!


PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION


Eyes: Her large, wide eyes, although similar in shape and size to her older sister Pierette, are not grey - rather, they are a vivid blue, somewhere between sky and sapphire.

Hair: Jenny's hair is a bright orange, reminiscent of dreamsicles or orange sherbert, and despite her best efforts to tame it, it falls into ringlets that cannot and will not be straightened.

Face: Jeanette has an open, oval face with a scattering of freckles across her nose and cheeks. Her complexion underneath them is a bit on the pale side, and she has a bit of an overbite that tends to be most noticeable when she smiles.

Clothes: Jeanette will rarely be found with a consistent style. Some days, she feels like wearing hime-lolita. Others, she'll dress in pastel goth. Generally, however, she prefers dresses to jeans, and the more ruffles, the better. She also has a soft spot for oversized hair ribbons and hats, and you'll rarely find her wearing the same pair of shoes two days in a row.
PostPosted: Fri Sep 09, 2016 7:54 pm


Senshi: Gamma Piscium of Wheat.

Challenge: "I'm why you eat your Wheaties!"
Main Color: Gold
Secondary Color: Light Brown

Fuku:

Semi CC with wheat as the theme! Maybe wheat earrings and broach?

Collar -- Plain sailor collar? Does it have a white stripe at the end? All senshi must have a collar!
Bow -- You need some form of frontal decoration and all senshi must have some kind of back bow (female) or sash (male).
Bodice -- A swimsuit-type bodice? White will be the dominant color for your bodice, unless corrupt, when it will be black. Maybe like a crop top -- maybe a dress? A bikini top? You can have any top you like, pretty much.
Sleeves -- Got sleeves?
Brooch -- Round? Shaped like anything? Keep this plain for the first incarnation.
Bottoms -- Shorts? Capris? Miniskirt? Tea-length cocktail skirt? Your typical school girl skirt?
Tiara -- Every Order senshi is required to have some form of tiara. Beaded? Traditional? Woven fabric across your forehead? Corrupted Senshi do not need a tiara; instead they have a black star in their forehead.
Choker -- Choker is a classic, or a necklace? Or a scarf?
Shoes -- Go crazy?
Gloves -- Any gloves?
Accessories -- Any accessories? Earrings? Jewellry?


Attacks:

Sailor Scout Attack:
Cereal Shower!
Sailor Gamma Piscium spins in place, then steps forward and throws her arms up over her head, speaking her attack's name as she does. This causes a shower of sharp - and itchy - rain of cereal grains over a single target. While at this stage the cereal can't do a lot of damage, they are itchy, scratchy, and distracting. This rain lasts for about thirty seconds but can be ignored if the target isn't easily fazed by small objects hitting them about the head and shoulders.
Use: twice per battle

Super Sailor Scout Attack:
Cereal Storm!
Sailor Gamma Piscium spins in place, then steps forward and throws her arms up over her head, speaking her attack's name as she does. This causes a shower of sharp - and itchy - rain of cereal grains over up to two targets. At this stage, the grains are sharper, and can cause a number of cuts along with skin irritation. It lasts for thirty seconds and can still be ignored by someone with strong enough willpower, but as it is more painful and irritating than its basic incarnation, it is more difficult to shrug off.
Use: Twice per battle

Eternal Sailor Attack:
Cereal Whirlwind
For this attack, Sailor Gamma Piscium spins in place, but instead of stopping after just one turn, she keeps spinning as she says her attack name. After several rapid rotations, she bows at the waist and throws her arms forward. This conjures up a whirlwind made of up spinning cereal grains, which speeds toward a target in front of her and begins to whirl about in a five foot radius, causing damage and impairing vision for what is beyond the twisting wind of grains. As the grains are being spun around rapidly, this attack is a damaging one and can potentially leave cuts and bruises upon its target. It lasts for around 20 seconds from launch to dissolution, counting the time it takes to reach its initial target, and anyone standing within the whirlwind's radius will take damage until dissolution.
Use: Once per battle.

Note: all damage is of course optional to the target player.

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PostPosted: Tue Dec 13, 2016 8:55 pm


Hey Redbud! First off congrats on your Civilian win!

While the civilian half looks good to me, I noticed you also have your senshi quest up so I want to go ahead and touch bases on that and get her ready to go for when you win her!

First off for her Star name, we'd like for her official name to be the english - Gamma Piscium. However, she can ICly call herself Pi Li.

Now then for her sphere, the cereal grains is a bit too broad as a sphere. Since, you have multiple types of grains that are listed under this (rice, oats, millet, etc). If you don't mind picking one of these types of grain, the attacks can stay virtually the same just the visual would change to that type of grain.

Also, for her attacks I noticed that they are all single target attacks. Honestly, for super and eternal these are a bit on the nerfed/under powered side. For super you could do up to two targets if you wanted. And Eternal you could do a small radius like an area of effect attack that affected people with in the boundaries. Since these look like really fun attacks, I wanted to make sure you could make the most of them, and offer the maximum potential.

If you need me to look at her again, need help or have any questions feel free to quote me and I'll be back here!

Redbud-Tree
PostPosted: Tue Jan 03, 2017 3:00 pm


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Hey Redbud! First off congrats on your Civilian win!

While the civilian half looks good to me, I noticed you also have your senshi quest up so I want to go ahead and touch bases on that and get her ready to go for when you win her!

First off for her Star name, we'd like for her official name to be the english - Gamma Piscium. However, she can ICly call herself Pi Li.

Now then for her sphere, the cereal grains is a bit too broad as a sphere. Since, you have multiple types of grains that are listed under this (rice, oats, millet, etc). If you don't mind picking one of these types of grain, the attacks can stay virtually the same just the visual would change to that type of grain.

Also, for her attacks I noticed that they are all single target attacks. Honestly, for super and eternal these are a bit on the nerfed/under powered side. For super you could do up to two targets if you wanted. And Eternal you could do a small radius like an area of effect attack that affected people with in the boundaries. Since these look like really fun attacks, I wanted to make sure you could make the most of them, and offer the maximum potential.

If you need me to look at her again, need help or have any questions feel free to quote me and I'll be back here!


I tried to implement all of your recommendations, including name cleanup and attack strength + sphere tightening. Lemme know if it needs more tweaking!

... On a side note, sorry it took so long to address this!

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 05, 2017 6:57 pm


It's my turn to apologize for the slight delay!

Where it says " . . . can leave cuts" could add a note that the damage is at the players' discretion? We've been trying to make sure players are aware that damage is optional.

Redbud-Tree
PostPosted: Thu Jan 05, 2017 7:00 pm


LP
It's my turn to apologize for the slight delay!

Where it says " . . . can leave cuts" could add a note that the damage is at the players' discretion? We've been trying to make sure players are aware that damage is optional.

Redbud-Tree


I kind of thought 'could' was already making it optional, since it's implying it's not a guaranteed damage but okay. Added the note.

Edit: Sorry if that came across curtly. I probably shouldn't have looked at this while fighting feeling sick. My bad!

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 05, 2017 8:09 pm


Your fine, I understand feeling sick! I hope you feel better soon! The reason I asked for that was more for clarification, in case anyone wasn't aware that can/could meant optional.

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 05, 2017 10:14 pm


Redbud-Tree


This looks good to me, especially with the note about lasting damage being optional!

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