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PostPosted: Sat Aug 20, 2016 12:36 pm


Name: Simone Jacobes

Nickname:

Age: 18

Birthday: March 12th

Sign: Pisces

Gemstone: Aquamarine

Blood Type: B

Fav. Food: Parfaits

Hated Food: Sweet pickles

School: Meadowview High School

Hobbies:
Charcoal art: In the wee early mornings, or when the parties die down, Simone can be found on her living room floor drawing on paper with charcoal sticks. Black smudges are usually everywhere on her, but she's determined and focused. It's something she loves to do.

Trading Cards: Yu-gi-oh? Pokemon? Magic: The Gathering? She collects tons of cards. She got started when her best friend showed her the Pokemon card game. She didn't want to play it, though. She finds her joy in collecting them, getting more and more rare cards. It's almost less of a hobby and more of an obsession.

Virtues:
Adaptable: Simone rarely finds herself feeling like a fish out of water. She can adapt to almost any mood or situation with very little thought. She can read a situation and fall into place. If she walks up to her friends feeling like her usual hyper self and something serious has happened, she'll tone it down. If she has plans and something changes them, usually she says, "That's life!" and gets over it. She'll make up a new plan.

Accepting: She really doesn't judge. She's accepting of how people are. She knows some people are assholes, or just not good, and she accepts it. She doesn't try to change them. If she thinks of you as a friend, she's your friend because of the good and the bad.

Flaws:
Oversensitive: Since she doesn't tend to judge people, she doesn't like it when people judge her. It might take a little while to see some other reaction than a smile dropping, or sarcastic remarks. Sometimes she'll call you out on it and get hostile. Sometimes she'll avoid someone until she feels like she's calmed down enough to talk to them about it.

Obsessed: She gets obsessed with things very easily. It's always one thing at a time. She'll dedicate all her time and energy into whatever she's feeling at the moment. Sometimes it's anime, sometimes it's finding that one last card to finish off a certain style of deck she's going for. It's all or nothing for her. Her closet is filled with things she used to be obsessed with. This does mean she tends to skip school, sneak out of her house, and things like that.


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This is CC. Aesthetic thing for the artist!
PostPosted: Sat Aug 20, 2016 12:53 pm


User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.Senshi: Antlia of alligators

Challenge: "I'm on a roll~"

Fuku Colour: Look at the ref

Attacks:

Sailor Scout Attack:
Wetland wallop
Antlia’s magic gives her a boost to her strength for twenty five seconds. This magic gives her the ability to send super powered punches for the duration of her magic. These punches can push enemies back about ten feet per blow and has the ability to bruise (at player discretion). She can use this magic three times in battle.

Super Sailor Scout Attack:
Swampland slam
Power surges trough Antlia, boosting her upper body strength specifically. Her punches are super powered, but this increased strength gives her the ability to send her enemy sprawling. If she jumps in the air and hits her target downwards, she now has enough strength to force them to hit the ground. Any physical blow from her while she is channeling will cause magical dizziness, disorientation, or vision/balance issues. These hits can be strong enough to bruise if the player chooses. This magic lasts for thirty five seconds and can be used twice.

Eternal Sailor Attack:
Death Roll
A physical boost floods through Antlia’s full body; she can use any part of body to deal powerful damage. Any basic blow from her is enough to send an enemy flying backwards ten feet or knock them to the ground. Any physical blow from her while she is channeling will cause magical dizziness, disorientation, or vision/balance issues. These hits can be strong enough to bruise if the player chooses. At this stage, she can spin to build up energy and lash out at her opponents to deal additional damage; in addition to being physically stronger and sending a target back up to fifteen feet, if she contacts anyone while spinning they will feel the sensation of ethereal teeth biting down on them wherever she made contact until the magic ends. This kick is powerful enough to cause up to deep bruising and cracked bones if the player wants long term damage. This magic can be used once for 45 seconds.

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 05, 2017 6:51 pm


Hi Fee!

First off congrats on Antlia~!

Now then before I can stamp there's a few things I'd like to touch on with you and get a few clarifications as well as some minor tweaks. For her Civilian I've noticed her last name is Jacobs, unfortunately this is a taken surname by a fairly large and well known family in Destiny City. I have to ask that you double check with Kaori_luv about using Jacobs as her last name before I can approve her civi side. Sorry!

Now on to her Sailor! I have a question here, is she the Senshi of Alligators or Crocs? I ask because her visuals say croc but her sphere says Alligators; so I just wanted to make sure this wasn't conflicting information!

In all of her attacks, having to physically attack the targets negates the magical aspect of senshi. To help this, maybe have the gator/croc image carry throughout as more as less literal and more of a reference? Such she could throw a punch from a distance and a croc/gator head forms attacking the target?

Overall, these attacks read more as if she is doing wrestling moves than using a magic attack. If you wish that she does more physical moves, the magic could be used to boost her abilities then. Such as she hits harder or is able to hold onto her target longer. Such as for eternal, she could grab the person and have to do a full 360 spin with them as etheral teeth chomp into the target where they are being hold.

Also, because we've been asking for this from all of our players; make sure to clarify in her attacks that the damage is all optional. The effects of the attack should end when the attack itself ends. However, you could make it optional for players to take and sustain damage that lasts longer if they wanted - and as long as this is clarified so that players understand that they have the option you'll be good here.

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 17, 2017 1:55 pm


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I changed it to Jacobes.

She's Alligator, and I think I fixed that part.

Over all the magic that surrounds her boosts her strength and just tends to look like an alligator surrounding her when she does it! I want her attacks to be very physical. She's going to get a lot of injuries this way, I realize, but all attack.

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 26, 2017 6:06 pm


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So sorry some how I missed this/didn't get the quote and I just found the thread with your reply sweatdrop

Mmm it's not that she can't be a physical senshi who prefers fisticuffs. It's that they're suppose to magic, so the clarification helps a lot that it's a boost in her strength!

There's one more thing I need, which I thought I'd read in the attacks previously but her Super and Eternal don't have timers for how long the attack lasts. If you wouldn't mind fixing that I think she'd be good to go.
PostPosted: Tue Mar 28, 2017 12:58 pm


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So sorry some how I missed this/didn't get the quote and I just found the thread with your reply sweatdrop

Mmm it's not that she can't be a physical senshi who prefers fisticuffs. It's that they're suppose to magic, so the clarification helps a lot that it's a boost in her strength!

There's one more thing I need, which I thought I'd read in the attacks previously but her Super and Eternal don't have timers for how long the attack lasts. If you wouldn't mind fixing that I think she'd be good to go.
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 28, 2017 6:22 pm


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PostPosted: Tue Apr 18, 2017 10:26 am


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