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Kallysto

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 10, 2016 12:21 pm


User ImageName: Adelinde Elise Monroe

Nickname: Addy

Age: 17

Birthday: March 28th

Sign: Aries

Gemstone: Garnet

Blood Type: B -

Fav. Food: Hot Wings

Hated Food: Asparagus

School: Romano's Constitutional Haven

Hobbies:

Combative Knife Training: Especially street combative techniques. Inspired by her father and the knife training he received in the Marines, Adelinde aspires to continue her training in the future in the military but in the mean time, she is satisfied with competing with her classmates. Her dedication makes her excel and she is one of the best in her class. She attends classes 3 times a week. She takes this training very seriously as it is the sort of training that, when applied to its full potential, could lead to the death of whoever she is fighting. She has vowed never to use this training in anger, and only in defense.

Hair and Makeup: Addy enjoys all things makeup and hair. While she has had a LOT of hair mishaps hidden by beanies and carefully pinned updos in the past, she has improved a lot over the years. She practices makeup, hairstyles, and dye jobs on her friends whenever they are willing and on herself when they are not. She is rather proud of her orange fading to purple. She calls it Destiny Sunset.

Virtues:

Independent: Adelinde is the kind of girl who likes to do things by herself and for herself. After her mother passed while her Marine father was away on duty, she grew up be very independent. Her aunt took care of her for a time and maintains guardianship of her while her father is away but before she went to Romano's, she learned how to do things for herself and in fact came to enjoy it. As such she cooks for herself, cleans for herself, has learned how to help do things such a pay bills, and continues to become more and more self-sufficient all the time she attends Romano's. She gets herself to her knife training and carefully manages the allowance her aunt has provided for her in order to pay for it.

The downside to this is that she has a hard time accepting help or letting other people do things for her. Even when she is sick she insists on taking care of herself and good luck arguing the point otherwise.

Diligent/Detail-Oriented: Adelinde is a very detail oriented person. She will work hard, diligently, and without slowing until something is done. She puts effort into everything she does because, as her father would say, if you aren’t going to do something right, don’t do it at all. Because of this trait, she does very well in school and is aiming for the advanced diploma. While she might not be the best as far as natural talent goes, she makes up for it with her diligence and her drive to succeed. She is always on the lookout for the smaller details that mean so much.

Unfortunately because of this, Adelinde can get so caught up in the details she misses the big picture and will often times continue to miss it until someone pulls her aside and helps her.

Fun-loving: Adelinde is a fun girl to be around. She likes to play pranks, joke around, and just in general have fun. Her pranks are never meant to be hurtful or dangerous, nor are her jokes. It’s all in the name of having a good time and if she does hurt someone she won’t hesitate to apologize. She enjoys going and hanging out with her friends just to unwind and especially enjoys parties (so long as all of her school work is done, of course). She often times tries to gather all of her friends up so that they can hang out and wander around town or relax at someone’s home.

She is always on the lookout for new fun things to do or a new restaurant to try and can be rather spontaneous in the way she does things.

Flaws:

Spiteful: Adelinde is the queen of holding grudges. If someone has wronged her, it will be a while before she forgets it. As long as she remembers their slight, she will remind them, regardless of whether or not they have apologized. She will say mean spirited things out of spite just to get under their skin and smile while she watches them react however they may. Their anger is her glee and she has no problems hitting all the right buttons in order to hurt someone in payback for however they hurt her.

Small offenses will not garner this severe of a reaction, but if someone annoys her, she will also go out of her way to annoy them. In short, she pays people back in kind.

In regards to her knife training, she keeps to her personal code. Never in anger. This also means never in spite. This was a lesson she learned from her father that she cherishes. She limits her aggression to verbal.

Headstrong: Adelinde is right. No, it doesn’t matter that you have facts. No, it doesn’t matter that you have proof. Adelinde is right and you telling her otherwise is a surefire way to piss her off. The girl has a real problem with admitting that she is wrong about anything from arguments with friends to disagreeing with teachers in school about what they have to say about her work. She will not hesitate to tell you why you are wrong and try to convince you to see things her way. After all, her way is the right way.

If she were to be provided with something utterly undeniable, Adelinde would storm off, enraged at the thought that she could be wrong. After some time she might come to see things in a new way and adopt them into the way she does things but don’t expect her to ever admit that she was wrong or acknowledge her changes.

Envious: Addy tries to keep herself busy with school, her training, and working towards an Advanced Diploma, but at the end of the day, there is a hole in her heart. Addy misses her mother Mona every day and wears her old promise ring under her uniform gloves. She misses her father Adrian and can't wait for the next time he can call home, but it isn't often. She has her aunt Trina when she really needs somebody but she has her own life and has loosened the reigns since Addy got accepted into Romano's.

Addy is envious of other students and kids who get to see their parents on a daily basis. Addy is envious of people who have siblings they can lean on. She is envious of people with big families and, though the words would never come out of her mouth, despite her independence (which is a learned survival trait and coping mechanism), what she wants most is a big family to love and understand her. She wants not to feel so alone. All of this manifests in envy, which can bring out her spite when family is mentioned or discussed in detail.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Addy has wide, doe eyes that are purplish pink and framed with long lashes that are almost always mascara enhanced.

Hair: Addy's hair is actually a raven black but it has not been her natural color for the past five years. At present it is orange, fading into pink and then light purple into dark purple. It is just above waist length when not braided, thick, full, and she tucks her long sideswept bangs under her uniform had because she hates the lines it creates.

Face: Addy has a heart shaped face, a small, sharp nose, lightly defined cheekbones and pouty lips.

Clothes: When not in her school uniform or ROTC uniform, Addy likes to wear chucks, tank tops, and zip up sweat shirts. Otherwise she likes layers, a mixture of punk rock with some scene accessories.

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 15, 2016 10:29 pm


Negaverse Alias: Lieutenant Amesite ; :3

Challenge: Let's get to the point.

Uniform: See references and notes.

Reference Polyvore


Top Jacket: Cropped at waist. See ref. Black with purple stripe. silver buttons. Jacket buttoned, bottom half of purple shirt is visible.
Bottoms See reference.
Gloves See ref. Purple buttons. Black finger nails.
Belt See ref. Loose around her hips instead of her waistline.
Shoes See ref. Straps are purple.
Shoulders NA
Accessories 2 sets of earrings. See ref. 2 chokers. Black and gold choker in the reference should be black/purple/silver. Purple lipstick, smokey eyes, mascara'd lashes.

Weapon

Lieutenant Weapon: Toy dagger.
Captain Weapon: A single kris.
General Weapon: Two jewel encrusted kris. Purple chunks of amesite and amethyst.

Visual: When the daggers break flesh, the gems on the daggers glow a bright purple for a flash, releasing a purple mist that disappears into the inflicted wound.

Effect: When cut with General Amesite's weapons, the victim will experience blurred vision/dizziness/lack of lucidity or drugged feeling (at the discretion of victim's player) for 10 seconds.

-The same person can only be affected by this ability up to 3 times in a battle.
-Concurrent slices do not mean concurrent duration. Because Amesite has two weapons, being cut by both blades in one attack or twice in rapid succession would count as one 10 second period and NOT two 10 second periods. However, if cut twice in one attack/multiple times in rapid succession, the side effects (blurred vision/dizziness/lack of lucidity or drugged feeling) will be stronger.

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 22, 2016 11:08 pm


Kallysto


Hey Kally!

Grats on Addy!

Before I can give her a stamp I would like to know how long her General's magic effect can last on the affected person, and how many uses would this magic have?

If you need help or have any questions feel free to ask, just quote me whenever you need me to come back!
PostPosted: Wed Jun 22, 2016 11:53 pm


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Kallysto


Hey Kally!

Grats on Addy!

Before I can give her a stamp I would like to know how long her General's magic effect can last on the affected person, and how many uses would this magic have?

If you need help or have any questions feel free to ask, just quote me whenever you need me to come back!


Hey, thanks!

I left it vague because I was hoping you would be willing to help me with that! I am super new to the shop so I don't quite know where the line of balance is.

I would like it to make their vision blur and to make them feel drugged and hazy temporarily but I don't know how long or how to balance that.

Could you help me work that out please? : 3

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 24, 2016 9:04 pm


Kallysto

My Apologies for the belated response dear!

So for the weapon's magical effect, know that these effects are typically weaker than senshi magic or knight magic.

That said I think for the effect you're working with, the effect itself could last for 20 seconds and be used 2 times in a battle. I would give the player the information as well, that your effect could blur their character's vision up to making them feel drugged and hazy, it would give players options for them to work with and plot with you on how the magical effect would actually affect them!
PostPosted: Fri Jun 24, 2016 10:12 pm


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Kallysto

My Apologies for the belated response dear!

So for the weapon's magical effect, know that these effects are typically weaker than senshi magic or knight magic.

That said I think for the effect you're working with, the effect itself could last for 20 seconds and be used 2 times in a battle. I would give the player the information as well, that your effect could blur their character's vision up to making them feel drugged and hazy, it would give players options for them to work with and plot with you on how the magical effect would actually affect them!


No worries. We all have lives outside of Gaia. : ]

Thank you for your input. I have edited it in. Any other necessary changes?

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 24, 2016 10:19 pm


Kallysto


Actually, before I stamp her could you add back the flavor text? crying I'm sorry, I wasn't clear that you just had to add the extra information, that I was needing, into the weapon and magical effect and not replace the whole of the magical effect information.
PostPosted: Fri Jun 24, 2016 10:31 pm


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Actually, before I stamp her could you add back the flavor text? crying I'm sorry, I wasn't clear that you just had to add the extra information, that I was needing, into the weapon and magical effect and not replace the whole of the magical effect information.


I actually updated the visual/flavor text at the end after I quoted you because I realized I accidentally deleted it. Sorry. o3o;

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 24, 2016 11:16 pm


Thank you~!

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 24, 2016 11:44 pm


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Thank you~!

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Thank you! <3

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PostPosted: Sun Jun 26, 2016 4:11 pm


Hey, Kallysto! Congratulations on Addy! Her civilian side looks great, so I am going to drop a stamp for that side—which means you can set up her journal and start playing her!

The powered side of the Negaverse can be a little confusing, so I'd like to try and explain weapons and magic for the Negaverse a little better! (And then once we get a few tweaks in, that side will be ready, too!)

Negaverse Magic works a little different than Senshi or Knight Magic—Senshi have specific usage and durations, and can't turn their magic on and off. Knights have a pool of magic that they can turn on and off at will and use until the energy runs out. Negas, though, don't always have magic—and when they do, it comes in the form of enchanted weapons!

I just want to clarify what sort of magical effect you had in mind, and I think we can work it out so that you get a weapon that has some magical properties and is still in line with the Negaverse guidelines. For example, if you want the weapons to have the ability to cause some side effects (such as slightly blurry vision and ranging up to feeling drugged/hazy) when the blade cuts skin, you could! However, instead of it having a limited number of uses and lasting for a long period of time, it would have to be written to say that if cut, the target might feel the specified side effects (strength to be determined by player) for up to ten seconds after each slice. It might also help to have a cap for how many times in a single battle the magical toxins can affect someone—for example, after three slices, the person would no longer be affected by the toxins (to ensure that they do not suffer more than thirty seconds). It would also help to say that concurrent slices do not mean concurrent durations (for example, if you got sliced twice in rapid succession, it wouldn't guarantee twenty seconds of affect—it might just mean the player should plan to have the side effects present more strongly for the ten seconds they are affected).

I realize this might be confusing (and I am sorry for the wall of text!) If you have any questions, please feel free to quote me and I will be back to answer any questions as soon as possible!

The long story short is, the magic will need to be rewritten to represent a magically enhanced weapon rather than individual magic that can be used with it; a duration of ten seconds after being sliced and an effect of blurred vision/dizziness/lack of lucidity are a good range of effects--especially when left to the player to decide!

Kallysto
PostPosted: Sun Jun 26, 2016 6:15 pm


Kyuseisha no Hikari
Hey, Kallysto! Congratulations on Addy! Her civilian side looks great, so I am going to drop a stamp for that side—which means you can set up her journal and start playing her!

The powered side of the Negaverse can be a little confusing, so I'd like to try and explain weapons and magic for the Negaverse a little better! (And then once we get a few tweaks in, that side will be ready, too!)

Negaverse Magic works a little different than Senshi or Knight Magic—Senshi have specific usage and durations, and can't turn their magic on and off. Knights have a pool of magic that they can turn on and off at will and use until the energy runs out. Negas, though, don't always have magic—and when they do, it comes in the form of enchanted weapons!

I just want to clarify what sort of magical effect you had in mind, and I think we can work it out so that you get a weapon that has some magical properties and is still in line with the Negaverse guidelines. For example, if you want the weapons to have the ability to cause some side effects (such as slightly blurry vision and ranging up to feeling drugged/hazy) when the blade cuts skin, you could! However, instead of it having a limited number of uses and lasting for a long period of time, it would have to be written to say that if cut, the target might feel the specified side effects (strength to be determined by player) for up to ten seconds after each slice. It might also help to have a cap for how many times in a single battle the magical toxins can affect someone—for example, after three slices, the person would no longer be affected by the toxins (to ensure that they do not suffer more than thirty seconds). It would also help to say that concurrent slices do not mean concurrent durations (for example, if you got sliced twice in rapid succession, it wouldn't guarantee twenty seconds of affect—it might just mean the player should plan to have the side effects present more strongly for the ten seconds they are affected).

I realize this might be confusing (and I am sorry for the wall of text!) If you have any questions, please feel free to quote me and I will be back to answer any questions as soon as possible!

The long story short is, the magic will need to be rewritten to represent a magically enhanced weapon rather than individual magic that can be used with it; a duration of ten seconds after being sliced and an effect of blurred vision/dizziness/lack of lucidity are a good range of effects--especially when left to the player to decide!

Kallysto


Thank you for explaining! Like I said, I am super new so I am still learning how magic works in this shop.

Does that look better?

Kallysto

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 27, 2016 7:41 am


Kallysto


It looks fabulous, thank you so much! Good luck winning her powered side! If you have any questions ever, please feel free to let me know! <3

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