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Ellanoire

Sugary Nymph

PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2016 8:57 am


Name: Siaorse Nolwenn

Nickname: Seer/Seery

Age: 18

Birthday: March 19

Sign: Pisces

Gemstone: Aquamarine

Blood Type: A

Fav. Food: Any sort of steamed fish. Especially with lemon.

Hated Food: Beef. Ugh.

School: Destiny City University

Hobbies:

Makeup Pro - Siaorse is a makeup fanatic. She's spent countless hours perfecting the art of applying it to both herself and others. Her bathroom overflows with products, and she especially prides herself on seeking out the latest and greatest. She even intends to launch a monthly subscription box featuring all of her favourite products ... once she has enough subscribers.

All About YouTube - Not only has she invested countless hours watching beauty bloggers on YouTube, she's starting to grow a following of her own. She strives to have a new beauty vlog up every Friday. She focuses on highlighting awesome new product finds and new techniques.

Virtues:

Ambitious - Siarose knows what she wants, and she has a plan to get it. It doesn't matter to her how much work she needs to put in, or how challenging it might become. She's set her goals sky-high, and she's on her way to them. She also isn't particularly concerned about what she needs to do to accomplish said goals ...

Self-Reliant - She's a whiz at figuring things out all on her own. Siarose knows just the questions to ask, whether on Google or in person, to get the results that she wants. She's excellent at researching, as well as comprehending what the information means. She rarely needs the help of others, and is happy to work harder to get it done on her own.

Flaws:

Vain - Siaorse wouldn't dream of leaving home without a full face of
makeup and every hair in place. It doesn't matter if there's someone waiting for her, or if it's just a trip to the grocery store, she has to look perfect. She'll turn down participating in some events if she thinks she'll get to dirty, or might ruin her hair.

Her Way, Or The Highway - Once her mind's made up, there's really no changing it. It doesn't matter if your idea is more logical, or you're more experienced, she's going to do it her way, and you are too if you intend to continue on in her company. She can be quite acid-tongued with people she perceives as standing in her way.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION


Eyes: Emerald green, almond shaped

Hair: A rich dark brown colour, thick and straight, around elbow length. Worn like this.

Face: Very fair skin, and oval face with petite ears.

Clothes: Something like this
PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2016 9:38 am


Senshi: Sailor Thalassa, Senshi of the Tide

Challenge: I'll turn the tide on you!

Fuku Colour:
Main Color: 206E72
Secondary Color: 84715C

Fuku:


Collar -- A seal-fur capelet in 84715C.
Bow -- A satin-y bow in 206E72, that looks like it holds her capelette together. Back bow is same material, medium size with long trailing ribbons.
Bodice -- Very fitted, with a sweetheart neckline, white
Sleeves -- Sleeveless.
Brooch -- Shaped like a tear drop.
Bottoms -- Floor length in 206E72, with a slit up one side to the upper thigh. Something like this.
Tiara -- Silver, filigree/celtic knotwork
Choker -- Delicate and filigree/celtic knotwork like, choker worn high on neck, silver
Shoes -- 84715C, Something like this
Gloves -- No gloves
Accessories -- Her capelet has a hood

Attacks:

Sailor Scout Attack: Tidal Pull!
Sailor Thalassa selects a target within ten feet of her and calls out her attack. The target feels as if whatever surface they are on is pulling them in, making them unable to move. This effect last for fifteen seconds, and can be used three times per battle. One target per attack.

Super Sailor Scout Attack: Tidal Undertow!
Sailor Thalassa selects a target within ten feet of her and calls out her attack. An illusion of a wave appears and pulls the target into it, which can result in the target losing their footing. The target feels as if they are trapped underwater and unable to move. This effect last for fifteen seconds, and can be used three times per battle. One target per attack.

Eternal Sailor Attack: Thalassa's Tidal Wave
Sailor Thalassa summons a wave and directs it towards a target, within fifteen feet of her. The wave is about six feet across, and six to ten feet high. The wave moves directly away from her at great speed. The wave will pick up anything in its path, including debris, youma or even allies, causing it to all crash into her target. The target is knocked down and pummeled by the wave, and anything it has picked up. The more things the wave has managed to collect, the more damage the target will sustain. Anything that was swept up in the wave also receives a pummeling, though to a lesser extent than her target. The wave lasts for twenty seconds. Can be used once per battle.

Ellanoire

Sugary Nymph



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PostPosted: Tue Nov 01, 2016 9:27 pm


Ellanoire


Hi Ellanoire,

Sorry about the delay in your cirt! Lets get you ready for a stamp~

Her Civilian side looks good to me, so lets focus on your powered side.

I feel like the first attack is a little small on her time limit and could buff her up just a little on that particular time limit, I'd suggest more along the lines of 15 seconds, but just because the attack causes something similar to paralysis.

For her second attack, I'd like to suggest a slight change, instead of the surface they're standing on pulling them in; what if the illusion of a wave pulled them in? If you'd rather leave it as a surface pulling them in; what happens to them and the surface at the end of the time? Does it just magically spit them back out? Also for this one, again the attack causes something similar to paralysis, so that time limit should also be 15 seconds.

For her eternal attack I have a few questions; how far away from her can the attack move? Does it move on all sides, or just in front of her? What's the time limit on this attack? For the fact that the attack picks up youma, could it also pick up others like her allies and other enemies? Something for thought here, remember youma are also often targets, and need to be fought/dusted by senshi. If her attack picks them up and moves them, does it also hurt them?
PostPosted: Tue Nov 01, 2016 9:43 pm


LP


Thanks very much for the crit!

I've clarified and adjusted her attacks as per your suggestions. With her eternal attack, I'm hoping it now conveys that whatever is in the way of the wave gets picked up with it and tossed around, be it friend or foe. smile

Ellanoire

Sugary Nymph



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PostPosted: Thu Nov 03, 2016 8:04 pm


Ellanoire


Sorry about the delay!

Everything looks good to me~ A GM will be by shortly~

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 05, 2016 1:15 pm


Ellanoire


Everything looks good to me too!

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