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PostPosted: Tue May 10, 2016 5:56 pm


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Name: Firo Krez

Nickname: Fifi (if you want to die, call him that)

Age: 17

Birthday: July 25th

Sign: Leo

Gemstone: Ruby

Blood Type: Type A

Fav. Food: Eastern Sweets

Hated Food: ginger & wasabi

School: Romano's Constitutional Haven / AP classes for Engineering Major

Occupation: Karaoke Server (night) / Engineering Intern (day)

Hobbies:

  • Physical Activities - Despite looking like a really skinny muscle-less guy (which he was,) he is an avid swimmer, hiker and work out kind of guy. Having previously been bullied for those qualities above, he hides a well fit body under his skinny clothes, despite being a bit self conscious about it.

  • Collecting Silver Accessories/Lock Wall - He has rings, locks, key rings, key necklaces.. Did he mention he also has a collection of locks on his wall, frequently changing the organization from manufacturing date, to place of manufacture and other factors. Despite not having the key to every lock (hey, some are vintage!) he has a wide array of knowledge to unlock most of them through his amazon-purchased lock picking set.




Virtues:

  • Love yourself, for who else will? - He has high specs, half decent looks, realistic point of view, he likes all of himself, despite any flaws he has. He doesn't force himself to be anything that he doesn't want to be, therefore, he is perfectly happy as the person he is. Sure, he's got his own flaws but what's there not to like? In that sense, he encourages everyone to be themselves.

  • Honesty's the best policy - It's better for people to dislike you for what you are, than to be loved for what you are not. So every action he takes is impulsively honest and straight-forward. He isn't afraid of the impression he leaves behind since he's simply being himself. The worst you could be, is to regret not being yourself.

  • Observant - He likes to figure out how things work and what are the possible ways to fix or deal with it. That includes people, he is often in the habit of poking, prodding, or simply observing to find out what makes them tick with the tock. What he observes, he accepts it, despite questioning motives behind their actions. Details rarely escape him, often writing notes down in his phone or notebook. Mundane details rarely escape his notice, as he chooses to "pretend he didn't notice," by not drawing attention to it, but he definitely noticed.



Flaws:

  • Hates to stand out - You want him to take charge of what? No. Firo doesn't like being in the spotlight, part of it linked to his ostracized history in school. He goes out of his way and avoids anything linked to the concept of a main role. He prefers his own pace, taking care not to move up the ranks not too quickly, and hang back to let others take the credit and the heat.

  • Hits sore points - When fed up, frustrated, or simply being petty, he can be downright blunt, if not a nasty type to deal with. Hand-in-hand with his observant and straightforward nature, he doesn't hesitate to call you out or provoke you with sensitive topics easily. He isn't above using what he knows to call you out and raise his pedestal.

  • Directs events for own amusement - Despite strictly labeling himself as an observer and keeping to the sidelines, Firo isn't against manipulating events for his own vengeful amusement. He doesnt think of himself as good or evil, just acknowledging he is on the broad line that isn't in the right. So you'll often find him purposely not speaking up or standing back. No he isn't going to help or call a teacher, because that's his bully in high school that is in trouble, no skin off his back. Niceness is not in his resume, thank you.



PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION


Eyes: Emerald Green

Hair: brown

Face: round

Clothes: prefers collared shirts, slacks and accessories

PostPosted: Tue May 10, 2016 6:03 pm


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Negaverse Alias: Lieutenant Zykaite

Challenge: "We're in a deadlock" / "Lock sharp, I'm coming for you" / "Locking good there" / LOCK SHOCK AND BARREL" (courtesy of kuro)

Weapon:

  • Lt - Lock to throw at people

  • Captain - A hook attached to a chain. It has a lock function that clamps onto the opponent.

  • General - A steel grappling hook attached to a chain. When shot, it locks onto opponents.


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PostPosted: Thu May 12, 2016 7:59 am


Akio likes Fifi as his karaoke waiter, what a good kid biggrin
PostPosted: Sun May 15, 2016 9:27 pm


Hey RA! Congrats on Firo~

Before I can give him a stamp there's a few tweaks that are needed.

Unfortunately, because Zeolite is a group of minerals, with a ton of minerals listed underneath it. This not an allowable name for a negaverse agent.

Also, for his General weapon, the magical effect, cannot turn the weapon into a magical weapon, which is what appears to be happening. The magical effect has to be something like - causes a burning sensation when touched; gives off an electrical shock; etc.

If you wanted him to be able to hook into and reel in his opponents and/or 'zip' around the battlefield though I feel like you could actually make this into either a grappling hook or a hook with an actual chain; because he's a nega you don't have to have an energy chain, you can have a real chain and hook! So that leaves your effect open to do something different if you really wanted one.

Quote me if you have any questions, need help or just want me to come back and look at him again!

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revenant aria

PostPosted: Thu May 19, 2016 6:34 pm


I changed his mineral to Zykaite!

I've also changed his weapon but I would prefer to keep the energy chain as his own unique artistic quirk, to keep him different from previous negaverse agents with similar weapons!

I'm quoting you to take a second look! ouo


LP
PostPosted: Thu May 19, 2016 8:59 pm


The Mineral looks good.

However, I still cannot approve the weapon with a magical chain. That, unfortunately makes this weapon a magical one - which I might have failed to explain properly in my last critique? Regrettably, the Negaverse doesn't have the ability to have weapons with magical chains like what you're wanting.

The only magic their weapon can have is a magical effect added to their weapon like I stated above - it can give off a shock of electricity when it comes in contact, can feel hot or cold to the touch, give off a posion etc. If you're unsure the updated questing handbook has information on what can be used for a negaverse's weapon! Or I am more than happy answer any questions if you have any!

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revenant aria

PostPosted: Fri May 20, 2016 3:31 pm


I've taken out the energy chain, so it should be fine now!

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PostPosted: Sat May 21, 2016 6:56 pm


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Thank you RA~! A GM'll be by shortly with a full stamp!

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PostPosted: Sun May 22, 2016 12:27 pm


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Looks good to me! Have fun!

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