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iStoleYurVamps
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Posted: Tue May 10, 2016 5:41 pm
0 ******** left for today
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Posted: Tue May 10, 2016 5:49 pm
Previously Approved profile Name: Louis Miles Nicknames: Lou, Miles, PUNK Age: 24 Birthday: February 25th Sign: Pisces Blood Type: AB- Fav. Food: Salmon (Any dish) Hated Food: Venison School: None Hobbies:Fishing: This guy has a love for fishing. He pretty much would live out on a boat if he could, and loves nothing more then spending his weekends trying to catch 'the big one'. DIY: Louis is 100% positive he can fix things on his own. And no, he will not accept your help. Not until he's a least set himself on fire. Cooking/fruit-vegi carving: He have a love for experimenting with dishes. Mainly with vegetable and fruit carving. He's entered a few competition, but hasn't won anything yet, (but he has gotten quite a few cuts on his hand). SHOOTERS: He likes video games...but LOVES shooters. Halo, Call of Duty; if it has guns, he will probably love it. Even if the plot sucks. Gemstone: Aquamarine Virtues:Empathetic: He understands you man. You got a problem, he'll listen and try to comfort you best he can. He won't tell you to buck up either. Just nod his head and smile. He's also kind of a loser in this sense as he can't stand sappy moves. He always gets teary eyed. Heck, a lot of things make him teary eyed. Like a crying puppy. Patient: The guy is willing to sit in a cramped boat and wait for hours on end for fish that may not even be nearby. What do you expect? He can wait hours for anything. Including waiting a week outside of the local electronic store so he can be the first to get that shooter all the guys were talking about. Flaws:Poor Focus: Patient doesn't always equal paying attention. He pretty much tends to go off into la-la land while he's bored or just doing a job. Someone could be on fire and this guy, in his little world, wouldn't even notice until he caught on fire as well. You think that head nod means he's listening, nope. he's just thinking about...well, I don't know if he's thinking at all. For things he enjoys however, this doesn't apply. But school, shopping, chores, ect....yeah, he's in la-la land. Unmotivated: He's with out any sort of drive. If he doesn't like it, he just won't care. He doesn't have any real life goals. In fact, he's pretty much seeing a councilor every week to see if he can find one goal to have by the end of the year. And each week, he responds the same: 'I just don't care.' The one thing that does motivate him is fishing season. Or a new game release. Other then those things, he's about as motivated as a dead log.
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iStoleYurVamps
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iStoleYurVamps
iStoleYurVamps
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Posted: Tue May 10, 2016 5:58 pm
Negaverse Alias: Lieutenant LimePL Bordeaux of Venus Challenge: None Lt. its a doll he picked up but wont open Cap: The doll can now open and inside is new weapon- a whip. Gen: The whip is now on fire.
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Posted: Thu May 12, 2016 7:07 am
Hey Vamps! Congratulations on your win in the raffle! A couple of things before we can get him stamped!
Unfortunately, though the civil side of this quest was approved in 2009, since then shop standards and rules for play have been updated and modified. We still have to review the character side of your quest before final approval. Some things will have to be updated to fit withing present day shop guidelines.
Please feel free to update anything you like though! You are not required to stick with the profile as is just because it had been read before!
In your flaws, Addict is not so much of a flaw as it is an aspect of his character. He's has to smoke. The flaw would be more why does he needs the smokes in the first place. What in his personality made him start this in the first place and got him hooked? He's twitchy? Snappy? Can't focus? The smoking appears to be a vice to help with something.
Depressed/Self Loathing Complex or any type of illness (be it mental or physical) is considered also an aspect of the character and not a flaw. This is part of him and you are welcome to leave it but it will be considered as extra information about him.
If you wish to have four flaws listed, then to balance him out a bit, could you please add a 4th Virtue. We look for an equal number of Virtues and Flaws to make sure the character well balanced.
For his powered side, if you would please fill out the parts of the form found here then we can give him a look over. Since this was a pre-made, no need to fill out the uniform design information but everything else is needed.
I will also let you know now that Flint is considered a Rock and thus will not be approved as a powered name. The shop considered minerals as substances that have a unique chemical make up/formula. All things we have also been able to find classify Flint as a rock. For your Reference as well.
If you need help with a new name, please let us know and we will be happy to help!
If you have any questions, feel free to contact me and I'll be happy to help! Once you have had a chance to go over him, quote me and I'll take another look!
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iStoleYurVamps
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Posted: Fri May 13, 2016 11:23 pm
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Posted: Tue May 17, 2016 11:02 am
Hey Vamps, The changes to the general profile look good!
However, Agate has already been claimed as a name for another agent. Apologies for the double look. If I may be of assistant in looking for a new one, would be happy to help.
Any questions, let me know!
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iStoleYurVamps
iStoleYurVamps
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Posted: Sat May 21, 2016 7:04 pm
Sirene Naiads
Hey Vamps, The changes to the general profile look good!
However, Agate has already been claimed as a name for another agent. Apologies for the double look. If I may be of assistant in looking for a new one, would be happy to help.
Any questions, let me know!
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Posted: Sat May 21, 2016 9:18 pm
 A GM will be by soon! Thanks for all the patience with finding a name! I love Lime!
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Posted: Sun May 22, 2016 12:10 pm
Hey, Vamps! The profile looks good but I just wanted to clarify for his weapon real quick--the whip is on fire, but how hot is the flame/how much damage can it do? The flames should not be hot enough or active enough that it can catch things on fire; it could be a magical flame capable of causing discomfort to enemies. If a player wanted, it could cause burns according to whatever severity they liked, but it might help to have this information included!
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Posted: Sun May 22, 2016 12:59 pm
Kyuseisha no Hikari Hey, Vamps! The profile looks good but I just wanted to clarify for his weapon real quick--the whip is on fire, but how hot is the flame/how much damage can it do? The flames should not be hot enough or active enough that it can catch things on fire; it could be a magical flame capable of causing discomfort to enemies. If a player wanted, it could cause burns according to whatever severity they liked, but it might help to have this information included! Its fire fire. It will burn and scorch things but only catch fire to that which is magical. IE- it can burn and singe the carpet, but it's only going to set senshi snooty snoot on fire b/c they're covered in magic. If magic- can catch fire If not- burn/singe Unless the whip is in prolonged contact, the typical attack would do more laceration and a singe, (roughly at 130 F base), and if prolonged, we're looking at the setting things on fire, tissue burning.
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iStoleYurVamps
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Posted: Sun May 22, 2016 1:12 pm
The limitations on the weapon regarding what physical damage it can do, but the magic should not be strong enough to catch other things on fire; whips can do a lot of damage already, so the fire enchantment can aid in doing physical damage—I just want to clarify that it can't be used to set things like the scenery or objects on fire. In combat, it works as an enchantment that can cause burns, but if it has the ability to set things/the environment/other objects on fire with prolonged exposure it is too powerful as a weapon, sorry! If you keep that in mind though, I can drop a stamp!
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Posted: Sun May 22, 2016 5:24 pm
Kyuseisha no Hikari The limitations on the weapon regarding what physical damage it can do, but the magic should not be strong enough to catch other things on fire; whips can do a lot of damage already, so the fire enchantment can aid in doing physical damage—I just want to clarify that it can't be used to set things like the scenery or objects on fire. In combat, it works as an enchantment that can cause burns, but if it has the ability to set things/the environment/other objects on fire with prolonged exposure it is too powerful as a weapon, sorry! If you keep that in mind though, I can drop a stamp! thats fine
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iStoleYurVamps
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Posted: Mon May 23, 2016 1:31 pm
Okay! Thank you, have fun!
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