Hello, and welcome to the guild! Before you do anything else, please read and sign the guild rules. Selina's profile will need some edits before she can be accepted. First, her picture should only be linked, not displayed in the profile, unless you use your own profile format. Next, her face claim has unfortunately already been taken, so she'll need a different one. This is the list of taken faceclaims. As for Selina's blood status, only members of three months (one in-guild year) or longer are permitted to make MTA (More Than Average) characters. Half-veelas are included under this, so unfortunately everything in her profile pertaining to her being a half-veela will have to be edited. Please include a bit more detail in her personality, as it's what is used to sort students; try to flesh her character traits out as much as possible. In terms of her bio, since I've gone over the problem with her being a half-veela, please just also be aware that to attend Hogwarts a student must be born in the United Kingdom, and that dragons in the world of Harry Potter are never kept as pets, being far too dangerous. It would be strictly illegal for anyone to keep one as a pet, and since they grow to massive sizes, not really possible. In terms of her likes and dislikes, she needs to like and dislike at least five things each. The strengths and weaknesses limit is two each. Additionally, Selina should have no ability to understand or communicate with magical creatures anymore than any other young witch. Finally, wands normally do not exceed 16 inches at the longest; 20 inches is very long. Once you've edited Selina's profile, just mark the title as ~ Edited, and I will recheck her for you. Thanks! - Weasley
((4/29/16, Selina Castello, username Dreamatic))

Hi! Before Olivia can be marked Pending, she needs to undergo some edits. First, 'magical', should not be one of her personality traits- by definition all Hogwarts students are magical, and it doesn't really describe Olivia's character in any way beyond the fact that she's a witch. Once again 'natural at magic' isn't really a strength, because Olivia is a witch to begin with. Additionally, the limit for strengths and weaknesses is two each; they should not exceed that number. As for her wand being passed down, please be aware that since the wand did not originally choose Olivia, it will not work as effectively for her as a wand of her own that chose her specifically would. Finally, there is some wording in this profile that worries me. Be careful about indicating that your character is smarter, more talented, or easily able to manipulate everyone around them, as these are all potential signs of a Mary Sue, aka a 'perfect' character with no real flaws who gets away with everything and anything. The guild has a strict no Mary Sue policy, so keep that in mind when editing this profile. Once you've made the edits, just change the title to ~ Edited, and I'll recheck her for you. Thank you! - Weasley
((5/5/16, Olivia Rosestar, username Qoda))

Hi, and welcome to the guild! Unfortunately, since the Sorting closed May 7th, Mira will not be able to attend as a first year until the next in-guild school year, which is the August-September year (the current in-guild school year runs from May to June, and July is the summer). However, you are welcome to join Ministry of Magic & the Wizarding World, our sister guild, where you can make and post Mira pre-Hogwarts. To be marked Pending in Hogwarts for the next school year Mira will need some edits. First, in regards to her blood status 'muggleborn' is the term for someone with magical ability from a muggle family, not 'muggleblood'. Next, if you could expand a little bit more on her personality traits. This is what will be used to sort Mira, so please go into as much detail as possible. There are also some contradictions in her backstory- Mira's father is described as in denial about his daughter being a witch, until the 'strange man' visits (in this case, the stranger should be a Hogwarts school governor, who are sent to muggleborn children's homes to explain the existence of magic and the wizarding worlds to them and their families, and to take them shopping for their school things). However, it then appears to say that Mira's parents accept the truth, but 'Mira's parents never looked at her the same way' seems to contradict this. Did you mean to say that they looked at her no differently than they had before? Finally, looking at her image, the main picture looks older than eleven, but the other images look more age appropriate. I would recommend switching the images, as any pictures you use for Mira need to look her age. Once you've made these edits, change the title to ~ Edited, and I'll recheck her for you. Thanks! - Weasley
((5/14/16, Mira Haunn, username Vinedoe))

Hi, and welcome to the guild! Before the Staggs can be accepted some edits will have to be made.

Atticus - first and foremost, I'm not sure I understand what exactly the 'magical protection firm' is. They seem to be operating as quasi-Aurors who work outside the law, and there is no mention of whether or not the Ministry is aware of this firm; I'm assuming not, since they seem to be involved in a lot of illegal activities. Before any of that can be accepted it has to be properly explained; I need to know how Atticus can possibly get away with this, why he has not been caught, what his wife thinks he does, etc. As an aside note, a pureblood would most likely be clueless with muggle tech, a 'brewmaster' would be referred to as a 'potioneer' in the world of Harry Potter, and his dislike of Slytherins seems extremely odd given the house's reputation for working around the rules. The personality cannot just be traits listed; feel free to list out traits but there should be at least a few sentences after each one. As for his wand, 'runespoor fang' is not a listed core option. 'Runespoor scale' is, but it is Red, meaning it is Rare and will require a request. As for the pets, here is the list of Accepted Pets. You'd have to request both the knarls and the thestral and explain how Atticus has them without it being brought to the Ministry's attention. If Atticus attended Durmstrang you're going to need to read this and follow what that says in your profile. As wand woods don't actually indicate skill in dueling, at least not arbitrarily, (ie. someone with a willow wand could be a talented duelist if they put the work in) I highly doubt Durmstrang would have such an elitist dueling team. He would have learned Wandless Magic in Durmstrang, not self-taught it as an adult. Atticus cannot be an occlumens/legilimens. Check under requests to see our More Than Average guidelines. You need to be a member for a guild year (three months) before having an MTA character. In general, he should have no more than two strengths (I am counting far more), and no more than two weaknesses.

Clayton - Clayton cannot be a werewolf, as that falls under MTA, no more than his father can be an occlumens/legilimens. If you want him to be a werewolf after year of being an active rper in the guild, he will have to be turned by a pre-existing werewolf played by someone else, and you'll have to plot and plot request that with them. Just for future reference, being a werewolf is not illegal, although they must register with the Ministry. You cannot tell someone is a werewolf just by looking at them, so the whole charmed necklace would be completely unnecessary. The potion that keeps a werewolf in control during the full moon is known as 'wolfsbane' and was developed long before this rp even takes place; it is referenced in the actual books. 'Basilisk skin' is not a core in this guild. 'Basilisk fang' and 'basilisk tongue' are, but they are Red/Rare and will have to be requested like the runespoor scale. I'm not sure what you mean by 'model dragon'; Clayton can't have a dragon as a pet, and the picture seems to be of a rare flying lizard, which, again, would have to be requested as a pet. Again, his personality traits need to be expanded on. Strengths and limits are two each, and he cannot be an occlumens, as I've explained previously. If you want other rpers to someday play the wife and sister, they will be posting their own profiles, so the placeholder posts are unnecessary. Once these edits have been made, change the title to ~ Edited and I will recheck the family for you. Thanks! - Weasley

- Quick addon: FCs must be requested, you can find the link under requests.

Atticus will still need some edits before he can be accepted. His Durmstrang team should be listed somewhere in his profile. He needs at least five dislikes; right now he only has four. As for his bio- a twelve year old would not be permitted to join a dueling team to begin with, as dueling is extremely dangerous and professional duelers are always trained adult wizards, so his uncles using dueling as a ploy to manipulate their way into his life wouldn't really be an option. There also seems to be some misunderstanding of wizarding governments. The Ministry of Magic only governs the British wizarding community. Durmstrang as a school typically accepts students from Scandinavia, Russia, Germany, and Bulgaria. Where the Staggs are originally from is not stated, but it would be very unusual for someone born and raised in Britain to attend Durmstrang unless it was a family tradition of some sort, and given Durmstrang's reputation (it teaches the Dark Arts, for starters), I'm not sure why Atticus's parents would send their son there, if they were already concerned about him getting involved in illegal and dark business. No wizarding government is capable of tracking when dark magic is cast, or dark wizards wouldn't be much of a problem. Governing bodies like the Ministry only know when a minor casts magic. There is no way, point blank, that pureblood wizards would be working with guns, or with cars. Necklaces that transmit thoughts would also probably not be possible to create, nor would items to suppress outbursts of accidental magic. In general, it is hard to believe that the Ministry (or any other magical governing bodies) would not be aware of KRATOS, since they seem to be a private security force that would rival the Aurors and other magical law enforcement. There still isn't any explanation of how Atticus met his wife and had his children, and what his family thinks he really does. Thanks! - Weasley
((7/17/16, 7/18/16, Stagg Family, username Lycra))

A few things in Billos's profile will need editing before he can be accepted. Firstly, in-guild there isn't really any such thing as a 'wizard bounty hunter'. The closest thing the guild has to bounty hunters are hit wizards, who work for the Ministry to take down the worst of the worst criminals. Dangerous werewolves, for example, and dangerous magical creatures that pose a threat to wizards or muggles, are dealt with by the Department for the Control and Regulation of Magical Creatures. If Billos's father's family had done any unofficial bounty hunting, as in killing people/things for money, they would all likely be wanted criminals by the Ministry. It also seems extremely unusual that Billos, who is essentially a Valentine through and through, has been allowed to keep his father's surname. (And just a note, that in the profile it is very confusing as to whether the Hunter family or the Valentine family is being talked about, as I originally thought Daisuke was being referenced when it was instead Billos Hunter Sr.) There is also some heavy contradiction in the profile; Billos is described as "To Billos, that was naught but a mistake that fueled his anger. Was this really all there was for him? To be a shadow of a House whom he didn't chose to belong to?" but also "Soon, he became satisfied with what he was, a member of the House Valentine." It's not clear if he likes his family or not, and if he was named after his grandfather and then indoctrinated from age four onward, I doubt he would be feeling much anger over his name. His complete allegiance to his maternal side of the family is also contradicted by his father referring to him as a Hunter and giving him a 'mission'; additionally, Varvara has two separate last names, Hawkthorne and Valentine, one of which is used in the bio, the other in the family section. Finally, "Knows more about controlling magic then he lets on" is a statement that leans towards overpowered and Gary Stu-ish, which is a character that capable of far more than they should be able to. I'm not saying that Billos is a Gary Stu, but you really shouldn't hint at things like him being unusually good at controlling his magic already in his profile, at that's extremely, extremely rare for an eleven year old wizard and comes off as overpowered. Since the Valentines are a joint family, I would suggest you encourage the other rpers in the family to look at this edit request and adjust their profiles accordingly, as it will make things go a lot smoother when I or another crew member checks them over as well. Once you've made the edits, change the title to ~ Edited, and I'll recheck the profile for you. Thanks! - Weasley
((8/9/16, Billos Hunter, username -X Duo Yiro X-))

Hi, and welcome to the guild! Please read and sign the guild rules before you do anything else. Before Thaddeus can be marked Pending, her profile will need some edits. First, she must be 11 in her profile. If her birthday is in September, and we are in the current guild school year of Fall 2034, then she just turned 11 now, and will not turn 12 until a few weeks into her first year next year. In terms of her FC, her picture must look eleven years old, so please find a younger looking picture, although you are welcome to use that one when she is older. In terms of her bio, in order to attend Hogwarts she had to have been born in Britain. Hogwarts only accepts students born in the UK. Thaddeus is welcome to believe she can see the future, but please keep in mind that she can't be an actual Seer. (A Seer is a More-Than-Average character, which can only be requested by people who have been actively rping in the guild for a year, or 3 months irl time). There's also no explanation in her bio as to why her mother decided to take the family to live in the wilderness, and it's very, very hard to believe an adult would honestly tell an eleven year old child about their sex life, without it coming off as extremely neglectful. Additionally, just because Thaddeus displayed accidental magic doesn't mean she can control it, and she certainly wouldn't have been able to use it to take care of herself. If her parents were really leaving her to her own devices for hours at a time it's hard to believe either magical or muggle authorities wouldn't have gotten involved. Once you've made these edits, just change the title to ~ Edited and I'll recheck the profile for you. Thanks! - Weasley

Skye's profile needs some edits before he can be marked Pending for the next school year. First and foremost, his FC must look eleven, so you need to find a much younger looking picture. Secondly, Skye will attend in the fall of 2035, making his birth year 2024. His profile, which is for the next school year, should say he is 11. His personality also reads much, much older. An eleven year old boy really wouldn't be 'throwing parties' or 'trying to bring women to their knees'. Please adjust it accordingly for his actual age. 'Hufflepuff dorms' is also a very odd like to have, since he doesn't sound like he'll be sorted into Hufflepuff, and thus will probably never see their dorms. Him 'practicing' his magic would also not be possible. Children do not get their wands until they get their Hogwarts letters at age eleven, and cannot control their accidental magic. His parents not attending any magical school would also be unlikely, especially since they are a pureblood family. They could have been homeschooled, but without some sort of training they would not be able to control their magic at all. Once you've made these edits, change the title to ~ Edited and I'll recheck the profile for you. Thanks! - Weasley
((8/9/16, Thaddeus and Skye Valentine, username Genji Goncosu))

Hi, and welcome to the guild! Before Zane can be marked Pending for the next school year, he will need some edits. First, there is no explanation as to why he goes by 'Scarre' or where the nickname comes from, so that should be provided. In terms of his faceclaim, beyond the picture you provided for first year, neither of the other two look even close to teenage, never mind resembling a thirteen or fourteen year old. Zane's pictures must resemble his actual age. I am sincerely hoping his dream job is not completely serious, as anything involving plots of school-wide domination are not acceptable, unfortunately. His personality goes back and forth from third to first person; please keep it to one or the other to avoid any confusion. 'The preps' does not make sense as a dislike. What does he mean by that? Pride cannot be listed as both a strength and a weakness. In terms of his backstory, please keep in mind that Zane was born in modern day Britain. While you can find racism and prejudice anywhere in the world, the UK is a very diverse place and flagrant and openly violent displays of racism like this would be extremely out of the ordinary. A lynching in this setting would be completely unheard of, and it not something that can realistically be included in his back story. Once you've made these edits, change the title to ~ Edited and I will recheck the profile for you. Thanks! - Weasley

Several things still need to be edited before I can mark Zane Pending. His FC pictures past third year are still not appropriate for the RP. Even disregarding the claws and tail very prominent in the second picture, it still looks far older than 14/15. You can't use those pictures in this rp because the non-human qualities can't be edited or cropped out, and as for the sharpened teeth, I'm not sure what would cause human teeth to end up like that, but I would suggest PMing Utsuha Moon regarding it, as she is in charge of plots, and that would definitely require a plot request in the future. Additionally the sixth year onward pic still looks like a man in his late twenties, not a teenager, and cannot be used when Zane is so young. His personality still switches randomly into first person at one point. If Zane was only three when his mother was murdered, he wouldn't be old enough to understand racism, regardless of whether or not he was exposed to it. He could only form that opinion about her death at a much older age, and you'll need to explain how he came to that conclusion with nothing suggesting it was racially motivated in the first place. Thanks! - Weasley

Alright here is the official word of our guild captain on the pictures, since I discussed them with crew. You are not allowed to use any pictures depicting human forms of any Lion King characters, because they don't fit the rp. I cannot mark you Pending until your FC is appropriate for the character and the setting. The first image is fine, and I would suggest you find others that look like that. And finally, you need to make it clear whether or not Zane's plans for school/world domination are serious or not. If they aren't, tell me. If they are, I would suggest you PM the captain, Diamond Wales, regarding it, since that could very well end with Zane getting expelled. - Weasley
((8/9/16, Zane Valentine, username Negative J3T))

Hi, and welcome to the guild! Before Abigale can be marked Pending for the November-December school year, she will need some edits. First, in order to link the picture, you just need to go to it on your photobucket, click the share link, copy it, and paste into a url in the profile. In terms of her birthday, the current guild year is 2035 (right now it's around New Years/late winter in guild). Abigale will attend Hogwarts in the fall of 2035, in real time this November. Therefore her birth year should be 2024, not 2005. When it comes to 'dream job', I just want to clarify that an animagus is not an actual job, it's simply an ability a wizard can develop through intense training and focus. If you, the rper, intends to have Abigale become an animagus in the future, I strongly suggest you consult our information on More Than Average (MTA) characters. As far as her personality goes, that will also require some edits. Please be mindful of sudden pronoun switching; Abigale is described as 'they' when it should be 'she' several times. The definition of 'bland' is as follows: lacking strong features or characteristics and therefore uninteresting (or) showing no strong emotion; dull and unremarkable. My question is whether Abigale is really 'bland' or if she's just very average. After all, the majority of people wouldn't say they had any special talents or stood out in a crowd. To me her personality reads more as severely lacking in self-esteem, shy, and self-conscious than anything else. While those might not be desirable traits, I wouldn't call them 'bland'. To be self-conscious is to be so extremely aware of yourself (and all of your perceived negative traits) that any attention at all makes you incredibly uncomfortable and insecure. There's a difference between that and desperately wanting to be noticed. I would say that most self-conscious people just want to fit in and slip under the radar more than anything else. Her trait of 'quiet' should have more of an explanation than a simple restatement of her being quiet. How is she quiet? Does she hesitate to speak up for fear of being judged, or does she just prefer to keep to herself? Is she nervously quiet, or confidently quiet? 'Predictable' also needs a better explanation; her personality traits should describe her character as a person, not her abilities as a witch. A predictable person might be someone who is very easy to read, reliable, and who prefers to stick to a routine and their comfort zone. The same goes for 'simple'; simple can be used in a variety of ways as an adjective. If Abigale is 'simple' she might be straightforward and to the point, or she might be a very plain, unsophisticated person. She might be honest and sincere or humble and unassuming. 'Simple-minded' usually refers to someone with rather low intelligence, which I'm not sure you meant. For 'realistic', the definition doesn't quite match the trait either. 'Realistic' usually means sensible, down to earth, or practical, not necessarily easygoing. If she is more realistic than others her age tend to be, she might just be more practical when it comes to expectations for the future (aka knowing it will take time to reach her goals and so on). The only real issue with her back story is that she is described as a halfblood, which means that she has both muggle and magical blood in her. Therefore her parents being 'amazed' when they received her Hogwarts letter doesn't make much sense, since at least one of them is probably a witch or wizard themselves, and would expect their child to be magical as well. She would also likely grow up knowing (or assuming) that she was special in at least one way: being a witch, as most halfbloods would likely know that they have a good chance of showing magical ability themselves before their eleventh birthday. Finally, the last thing that needs to be fixed is the 'Pended By', 'Accepted By', 'Recent Updates Accepted By' section; please just align that part over to the right side, so profile checkers can easily see it. Once you've edited Abigale, just change the title to ~ Edited and I'll recheck her. Thanks! - Weasley
((9/7/16, Abigale Redgrave, username FoxyandHound))


Hi, and welcome to the guild! Before Dingledroob can be accepted he will need some edits. First of all, I was wondering if there was some specific explanation for Dingledroob's name, as it's obviously not Norwegian in origin (the Dingledroob is more eyebrow-raising than the Zattleson, which sounds more plausible). Usually I wouldn't ask an rper about the name unless it was a rip-off of an HP character, but 'Dingledroob' is very, very outlandish, and honestly makes the character come off as a troll or parody by looking at the name alone, which I don't think you want. Next, his birth year should be 2024, not 2023, as the current guild time is the summer of 2035. The personality should be at least a good paragraph, as it will be used to sort Dingledroob when the time comes; try to describe his character in as much detail as possible. In terms of his biography, to attend Hogwarts he must have been born in the UK (so England, Scotland, Wales, or Ireland), and the same goes for any of his siblings. He also cannot be a Parselmouth; that's a MTA (More Than Average) trait only applicable to rpers who have rped in the guild for a complete year (so three months in real time). Dingledroob can also not be a descendant of Salazar Slytherin; Slytherin is on the list of names we do not allow rpers to claim their characters are related to, even distantly. His Norwegian grandfather would have most likely attended Durmstrang, and would not have been allowed to attend Hogwarts due to not being born in the UK. The last wizarding war was primarily fought between Voldemort's forces (which included the Ministry after he killed the Minister and instituted one he could control instead), and resisting British wizards. The Ministry was simply not there to call for aid from other magical governments by the end of the war, and there is no mention of any other magical governments from other parts of Europe lending aid in the books either, as they were likely all too intimidated by Voldemort's swift rise to power, especially after coming back from the dead. So that being a reasoning for the grandfather's death/the relocation to Canada is not plausible, and neither is them living in Canada to begin with if Dingledroob is attending Hogwarts. He needs at least five dislikes; as of right now he only has three. In terms of the character image, we do not allow sprites for images, and furthermore the sprite does not look like how you have described Dingledroob. If you are going to use an image for him, it needs to match the description. Finally, he needs a wand listed, and if he has no pet, just put n/a next to the last section of the profile. Once you have made these edits, just change the title to ~ Edited and I'll recheck the profile for you. Thanks! - Weasley
((10/6/16, Dingledroob Zattleson, username DimpleLoamsdown))

Hi, and welcome to the guild! First things first, Elly's birth year should be 2025, as she will be attending in the 2036-2037 term. (It is currently the winter of 2035 in guild time). One note about her personality: I think you mean 'penchant' instead of 'pension'. Her bio cites her birth year, and that should also be listed as 2025. There are also a few issues with her biography: a wand that did not choose Elly will not be as effective as a wand that specifically chose her as its master, regardless of how powerful the heirloom wand might be- it simply won't work as well for her, because it's not really her wand, it's someone else's, regardless of their death. There is no mention of what happened to her mother's first marriage or Elly's older half siblings, and as a pureblood wizard with no muggle schooling or training, he would not be able to take a job as a muggle schoolteacher. When it comes to her actual wand, acromantula silk is considered a rare core. Since you're new in the guild, the chances of this request being accepted is pretty slim, since rare cores are usually allowed for dedicated, experienced members. Rougarou hair is also not likely to be added to the wand core list anytime soon, given its obscurity and the fact that it is native to the US and this rp takes place in Britain. Since Elly is your first character, I'd advise you to pick a a common, moderate, or uncommon core, which don't require any requests. Finally, face claims are sent in for actors, models, or other celebrities, not the characters they play, so when you send in a face claim request, be aware that you are requesting that actress, not any character of theirs. If you want to use Christina Ricci for Elly's fifth year and Megan Dodds for her sixth, you'll need to find images of them that look the age Elly will be, as the current pictures do not look fifteen or sixteen. (Face Claim requests can be made by going to Student Basics and Information and clicking on Requests). Once you've made these edits, change the title to ~ Edited and I'll recheck Elly for you. Thanks! - Weasley
((11/28/16, Elide Lyzorion, username river rocker))

Hi, and welcome to the guild! Cheo will need some edits before they can be marked Pending for the 2037-2038 school year. First, the surname Jacobs is already taken in guild, by the rper oyehh. You can PM them to ask to join their family, but the Jacobs family in-guild currently is a pureblood family, so if you want a muggleborn character you are probably best off just changing the last name. Cheo's personality should be at least a sentence longer, and the line about being good with animals should be removed, as that technically isn't really a personality trait that would help them be sorted. For example you could say Cheo is compassionate instead, and that is what makes them so good with animals. As for Cheo's bio, in order for Cheo to receive a Hogwarts letter, they would have to be living in the UK. If they were just born in the UK and living in America, they would have gotten a letter from the American magical school. A Hogwarts school governor would hand-deliver the letter (but they have to be living in the UK for this to happen), and take them to get their things in Diagon Alley. As for Cheo's wand, because you are brand new to the guild, your request for a rare wand wood isn't likely to be granted, so I would recommend changing the wood to something else. Finally, Cheo's fear of loud noises seems a little out of the blue to be so extreme, so some explanation as to why loud noises scare them to the point of panic attacks is needed. Once you've made the edits, just change the title to ~ Edited, and I'll recheck Cheo for you. Thanks! - Weasley
((2/9/17, Cheo Jacobs, username Galaxy4314))

Hi, and welcome to the guild! Before you do anything else, please read and sign the guild rules. First, just a minor detail about the wand- it should be 14 and 3/4 inches, as the 14/3/4 is a bit confusing.

As for his personality, the definition of wise is 'having or showing experience, knowledge, and good judgement'. Tanner can be wise beyond his years in that he is very mature and sensible for his age, but your current explanation, that he is wise because of hearing stories from older people, doesn't really make much sense. The explanation for him being intelligent also doesn't really line up. One can have a very wide vocabulary but still not be very smart, and since he is actually described as using words to mean different things, then even that also doesn't make sense. (For example, many children say words to mean things that the words do not actually mean, but that doesn't make them highly intelligent, just confused). The explanation for empathetic also doesn't make sense. I think you may be looking for the word cunning, or shrewd? Those would usually indicate looking at something from all angles, or thinking before you speak. To be empathetic is to understand the feelings of others, to be compassionate. And as for his weakness, being misunderstood isn't really a personal weakness. Giving off the wrong impression, or putting your foot in your mouth are things a person can do that are character flaws, but other people not seeing them the way they'd like to be seen isn't really something they're responsible for.

When it comes to Tanner's backstory, there should be some explanation of how he ended up in foster care. His profile states that he is halfblood, not muggleborn, so was one of his parents magical? Are his parents dead, or did they abandon him? Was he removed from their care due to neglect or abuse? I'm also a little confused about the timeline of the adults around Tanner realizing that he is transgender. It says in the bio that his file indicated that he was transgender ahead of time, but then it says that he wasn't actually diagnosed with gender dysphoria until the age of seven, after being adopted. How did those in charge of his care know he was transgender before any diagnosis, at such a young age, and without a diagnosis, how could it have been included in his official records?

Finally, in regards to his puberty-blocking drugs, as muggle technology does not work around magic, the arm implant would likely malfunction or not work at all, especially when he goes to Hogwarts. The whole muggle drugs versus potions aspect of the magical world is pretty vague, but Tanner would likely just have to be given his puberty inhibitor injections by one of the school nurses every 3, 4, or however many months required to keep him from beginning puberty.

And one last thing, which would be that I cannot pend Tanner until he has some sort of FC, be they a real life celebrity, anime, or a drawing or illustration. If you can't find one that you like, then just give a written description of what he looks like.

Once you've made these edits, just change the title to ~ Edited and I'll recheck Tanner for you. Thanks! - Weasley
((2/25/17, Tanner Oland-Zaidi, username Genim Stilinski))