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Name: Ava Fairchild Wingates

Nickname: Eevee (as per her mother)

Age: 16

Birthday: March 15

Sign: Pisces

Gemstone: Amethyst

Blood Type: B

Fav. Food: Meat as close to raw as possible

Hated Food: Anything that grows from the ground

School: Romano's Constitutional Haven

Hobbies:

Let Me Tell You Your Fortune - Ava likes trying to predict the future. She prefers tarot cards, but any method will do. Dice, stones, counting crows - she has tried it all. She knows most of it is rubbish, but she likes believing in magic, if only for a little while. Ava will always offer her services to the willing and unwilling.

Oh, Shiny! - Ava loves shiny objects. In this regard, she is a bit like a magpie. She gathers all sorts of gemstones, metals and jewelry. She stores everything in a locked music box. She is often on the look-out for new treasures wherever she can find them. Ava has a good eye for the finer things.

Virtues:

Sophisticated Lady - Ava comes from a privileged background. While her father left for another woman, her mother liked to keep up appearances and that has extended to her daughter. She is always polite and well-polished. She acts the part of a fine young lady. She is also very charismatic. Ava does more than just keep up a well-to-do mask, she strives to be upright and proper at all times.

In the Name of Love - Ava is romantic. She can find beauty in almost anything. She believes in following your heart. This causes her to encourage others she encounters to follow their hearts as well. This allows her to find the good in just about any situation. Love always finds a way in the end, after all. Ava is a dreamer at heart.

Flaws:

Writings on the Wall - Ava is very superstitious. She places her trust in horoscopes. If a black cat crosses her path, that day will certainly be unlucky. Sometimes this can be exploited and her gullible side taken advantage of by others. Ava will fall victim to false claims if they are phrased to appeal to her superstition.

Vainity Comes before a Fall - Ava is vain. She cares very much for her appearance. She is selfish. If there is a mirror around, she will be gazing into it. It is easy to insult her with the smallest slight. She can be spiteful and vicious if provoked. Doubting her own abilities or opinions or those of someone she likes or trusts can incite her rage. Ava won't outright insult you as that wouldn't be lady-like, but she will be very passive-aggressive and will find a way to let you know she isn't pleased. Perhaps a favorite object of yours goes missing or a friend suddenly won't talk to you and you don't know what but someone's told her that you lied to them. Ava values her pride.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Teal green, intense

Hair: Lavender, in two long odango

Face: Well made-up, haughty

Clothes: School uniform, a golden key on a chain

Plot for future youmafication ~

Yes. I plan to transform her into a full youma.

I searched for stellar wind instead of the common term solar wind which is how I missed this!

Perhaps a related concept would work as the attacks on that older senshi relate more to the sun.

Magnetic midnight or auroral zone are two other possibilities since stellar wind also includes the phenomena of solar wind, but these could also have an overlap into spheres that are actually in play.

Not in particular.

I just wanted a sphere that was not a simple Earth-based concept. Something that feels like a classic element or phenomena. Something that seems like it could go with the original senshi in Sailor Moon.

I have quests for both animal and plant senshi so I want something different in this character.

I had heliopause, interstellar medium and stellar death on my short list as well, but these could be too powerful of concepts to be allowed to use.

Hey Meighei!

First off I want to say good luck on getting Ava!

Secondly would you mind please linking her Mineral and her star for her Senshi side's names?

Now then on to her sphere. I'm sorry however, False Dawn/Zodiacal Light is not acceptable as a sphere. As you brought up it does conflict with the Zodiac senshi and we have a senshi of Dawn.

As far as suggestions go, you could use some sort of Comsic dust? While we already have a senshi of Stardust in play, there's still a lost of Cosmic dust types, including intergalactic dust, interstellar dust, interplanetary dust (such as in the zodiacal cloud) and circumplanetary dust (such as in a planetary ring). Also sources of Solar System dust include comet dust, asteroidal dust, dust from the Kuiper belt, and interstellar dust passing through the Solar System. You can find all the Cosmic dust types here for further information.

Also with Youma, please keep in mind that these are very heavily based on approved plots. You -must- send in a plot and have it approved before she can youmify, also please note that it would be difficult for any sort of senshi to become a youma as youma do not trust senshi at all, their alignment to order or chaos is moot, though no impossible so do make sure to send us plot information when you're ready for that.

If you have any questions, need further clarification or help or just want me to come back and have a look just quote me!

Honestly, we don't require a plot sent in with a quest that's under-review unless it's a side-swap styled quest where you planned on doing the side-swap within two weeks of getting the character. That said when you are ready to start the plot for your youma, you do need to send in a plot at that time.

Her links also actually need to be in the profile as well. So if you could add those links with her name and sphere that would be great!

Now then along with the senshi, I'd like to take a look at her attacks since you've fixed the sphere.

Honestly these would be very easy for any disposable to toe-step on; and actually we already have a Disposable with very similar attakcs. So, I'd like to help you avoid that. They're really great starts and fairly weak for a corrupt senshi.

So with that information in mind, important information in an attack is, since it's dust can it be blown away? Also, honestly this would just be illusion, not a buff because the illusion makes her harder to target. A buff would be a boost in speed, giving someone enough energy to preform another attack, and things like that. I'd say if it's just an illusion you want you could make the illusion grander and bump the time up to 30 seconds, if you wanted an actual buff, maybe she can move faster and as she moves the light follows her, she could still be hard to hit because it'd be difficult to tell where she was in the blinding light of the dust particles.

In the second stage she could do this for herself and someone else, with speed boosted to 35 seconds.

The Eternal attack, can be an Area of Effect. However, I highly advise stay away from Aurora's since we have both The Northern and Southern lights as senshi already, so lets not toe-step on them using Auroras. Stick to Comet Dust and the light it creates, since Comet Dust is different from what creates the Auroras.


- Also now that the senshi's part is out of the way.

Can you expand on her 'In the name of Love' virtue and her 'Vanity Comes before a Fall' flaw?

What makes her being a Romantic a virtue? How does it help her? The only information that I honestly find here is that she likes to watch Cherry Blossoms, which makes this a Hobby not a trait. A trait details a positive thing about a character, and how it positively impacts her life.

Where as a flaw, will actually negatively impact her life. Thusly I the only thing I gather from her Vanity trait is that she's spiteful if someone insults her. However, it doesn't tell us what makes her spiteful and vicious, what provokes her. What lengths can she go to when she's spiteful?

Those things commented on I really like how you did take her being superstitious and turned it into something that would be, a flaw since she's gullible to things that relate to her superstitions.