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PostPosted: Tue Mar 08, 2016 1:37 pm


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Name: Alexandra Argead

Nickname:

Age: 7

Birthday: August 8th

Sign: Leo

Gemstone: Periodot

Blood Type: O

Fav. Food: ice cream and filet mignon

Hated Food: spinach

School: Knightside Elementary

Hobbies:
Mythology/Arthurian lore -- Because her mother is a mythology professor Alexandra has had a fascination with mythology since she was little. She has a special love Arthurian lore since her mother used to read her the stories at bed time. She loves the princesses and knights in the stories but more than anything she loves all the magic in the stories namely Excalibur. She doesn't fully understand all of the dark parts of the stories but she does know that it doesn't have a happy ending.

Gymnastics -- Alexandra was inspired to do gymnastic when she was six by her big (half) sister Kailey. She like to practice in her back yard whenever she can. Her big sister sometimes helps her practice. She loves the exercise and her dream is to one day compete in the Olympics. She loves all parts of gymnastics but her favorite is the balance beam. She is best at doing flips and balancing.

Magical Girls -- Alexandra loves magical girl animes. She's got a ton of magical girl animes and mangas such as Pretty Cure or Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha. She loves pretending to be a magical girl with her friends.

Virtues:
A wave of sunshine -- Alexandra is almost always positive, there's very little she can't find a bright side to. Even if something does manage to get her spirits down she will usually bounce back very quickly. She is always happy to flash someone a sunny smile to try and brighten their day.

Never say never -- Alexandra doesn't believe in quitting just because something is hard. She doesn't believe anything is impossible and will work to prove it. She thinks that with a bit of effort anything can be accomplished.

Has no fear at heart -- Alexandra is very courageous. She'll gladly charge into danger even knowing she could get hurt or worse. She fears very little and even if she is afraid she won't let it show.

Flaws:
Naive -- Alexandra believes there is good in everyone and unfortunately that means she can be quiet bad at recognizing when someone is using her. She wants to believe that everyone is good and kind, and because of that she is bad at recognizing when someone has ill intentions.

Pretentious --Alexandra tends to be a bit of a drama queen. She likes to make things seem alot more important than they really are. Because of that she has a precocious speech pattern that can make her seem kind of annoying or like a know it all. She sometimes can't connect with other kids her age because of it.

No boundaries -- Alexandra tends to be rather nosy when it comes to people. She doesn't really understand that some people don't like to talk about all their feelings and thoughts. She can be rather pushy trying to get someone to open up to her.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Gold, Round.

Hair: Black, Something like this.

Face: Round Shape w/ soft features, tan almost golden skin.

Clothes: Knightside uniform with a white scarf holding a lion stuffed animal
PostPosted: Tue Mar 08, 2016 2:04 pm


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Senshi: Chibi-Sailor Arthuradel, Senshi of Honor

Challenge:

Fuku Colour: White
Main Color: White
Secondary Color: Gold
Accent Color: Red

Fuku: Something like this

Collar -- I'd like the red cape to be bright white and to be cut off shortly below her shoulder, like it was torn.
Bow --
Bodice -- I'd like the yellow tabard to be white with the white border being gold
Sleeves --
Brooch -- I'd like the brooch on her cape to have this on it.
Bottoms -- I'd like the pink underdress to be off white
Tiara -- Something like this only in gold
Choker --
Shoes -- Like this only white with red laces and gold at the bottom
Gloves -- The gloves in the picture however instead of steal white leather and with gold on the border
Accessories -- Earrings like this but with the gold square in the shape of a crown. I'd like the brown leather pauldron and belt to be washed gold. CC

Attacks:

Sailor Scout Attack: Arthuradel Honorable Pistol
Arthuradel holds her hand up in the shape of a pistol, her honor manifests in the form of light and force that coalesce at the tip of her finger and fires a single beam of compressed energy straight at her opponent. (If she uses this attack with out facing her opponent head on [honorably] then its power is severely weakened and if her opponent is dishonorable then the attack is stronger, both at the player's discretion) (As a chibi the attack just pushes her opponents back)
uses: 3
range: up to 5 ft (chibi)

Super Sailor Scout Attack: Arthuradel Honorable Cannon
Arthuradel holds her hand up with her palm up, her honor manifests in the form of light and force that coalesces in her palm and fires a single large beam of heated compressed energy straight at her opponent. (If she uses this attack with out facing her opponent head on [honorably] then its power is severely weakened and if her opponent is dishonorable then the attack is stronger, both at the player's discretion). (As a chibi it can cause some bruising and knock an opponent back)
uses: 2
range: up to 6 feet (chibi)

Eternal Sailor Attack: Arthuradel Honorable Spear
Arthuradel leans back and mimics holding a spear that she's about to throw. Her honor manifests in the form of light and force that coalesces in her open hand as a crackling bolt of light (similar to Zeus' thunderbolts) and she throws it at her target and it explodes after hitting the target in an explosion of burning compressed energy. (If she uses this attack with out facing her opponent head on [honorably] then its power is severely weakened and if her opponent is dishonorable then the attack is stronger, both at the player's discretion). (Attack may cause burns at other player's discretion [only capable of sun burns as a chibi] ) (As a chibi it can cause some bruising and knock an opponent back).
uses: 2
range: up to 10 feet (chibi)

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 08, 2016 5:22 pm


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Hey Aurelius! Thank you so much for your patience! Let's get Arthuradel stamped!

For her civi side, just a little thing but under Never Say Never, you have 'quieting' instead of 'quitting'. <3 Outside of that, Alexandra looks good!

For her senshi side, a couple of questions just to clarify smile

For all of her attacks, what determines if someone is 'dishonorable'? Having killed someone? Having lied? Or do they need to have done something 'dishonorable' to her? Having a bit of an idea will help other plays when they are playing against her.

For her Base, is this just a single beam that goes straight at the target?

For her Super attack, the number of uses she has should come down to at least two. This is a stronger form of the basic so as the distance increases, the amount she can use it should drop. And again, like the base, just a single beam going straight out?

For her eternal, does this bolt of light explode when it hits a target or just before? Also, for your bad burns, I would recommend capping it at first degree since she is a chibi. But of course, keeping it as an option for the player.

Hope this helps and give me a quote when she is ready for another look <3
PostPosted: Fri Jul 08, 2016 7:20 pm


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Hi ^.^

So for her attacks, mostly I want to leave what is dishonorable up to the other player I'm RPing with but basically yeah killing and lying or trying to use unfair tactics like teleportation or starseed pulling rather than straight up fighting could all be considered dishonorable. It could be that they are a dishonorable person, someone who uses underhanded means alot or has ignoble motives, or it could be that in the fight itself her opponent is doing something dishonorable to her, either one would work.

Other than that I made all the changes you suggested, thanks for catching the typo btw xd heart

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 08, 2016 9:17 pm


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That's cool if you want to leave it up to the players! The wording you did for that in the attacks looks good.

With the changes, she looks good to go!
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 12, 2016 1:27 pm


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Hey, Aure!

Arthuradel is super cute! Everything about her looks good, but her attacks might need to be tweaked some to fit chibi standards! Chibis are technically senshi in training, so her first and second attack should be okay as long as they aren't actually causing concussions or real damage. For a chibi, it would be more likely that her magic would be more akin to a shove backwards, possibly pushing them off balance or sending them back a few feet. It might bruise some at super stage, but it shouldn't be doing much damage, sorry! (Though, when she grows to a full senshi it would be fine for her magic to be stronger!) The range and number of uses are fine, though!

For her eternal magic, it could be more impactful but as a chibi she wouldn't be able to do first degree burns, sorry! This would be fine if she were an adult senshi, but a chibi's magic isn't strong enough to cause much harm. It might work better if, for her duration as a chibi, she can instead just propel people away in a radius rather than a concentrated attack. It could be strong enough to propel them backwards—or keep dishonorable people pushed out of a bubbled radius for thirty or more seconds at a time.

There are a lot of options, so if you have questions or want clarification, please feel free to let me know and I'll be back as soon as possible! If you have other ideas for attacks or make any changes, I'll look over them!


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PostPosted: Thu Jul 14, 2016 11:20 am


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Hey Kyu,

I changed her base and super magic to what you suggested but I do want to mostly keep the eternal the same. I changed the burns from first degree to just sun burns, let me know if that is still too powerful for a chibi.
PostPosted: Sat Jul 16, 2016 8:25 am


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We can work with it! The biggest thing right now is the 'concussive force' she delivers in all of her attacks; I was wondering what significance that wording has? When I think of concussive force, I think of an attack that is strong enough to cause a concussion, in which case it would be too powerful for a chibi—and even an adult senshi, so we'd have to be careful with that! I know you clarify that it pushes them back and can bruise at super, but there isn't a clarification for eternal. I think the attacks might read best if, instead of 'concussive force' it says 'compressed energy'?

The eternal attack can probably keep the optional sunburn effect but would need the same clarification on what the force can do, like the first two attacks have! Pushing a target back and being capable of causing some bruising (probably no more than what she could do herself if punching someone) would work! Chibi magic sometimes backfires and doesn't have a 100% cast rate, so it could still give some fun encounters!


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PostPosted: Sat Jul 16, 2016 9:02 am


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Ah ok I was going off of the definition as "violent and jarring" so like it would knock someone around not necessarily give them an actual concussion, but I'm fine with changing the wording to avoid confusion. I also gave eternal the same explanation of the force as super.
PostPosted: Wed Jul 20, 2016 1:00 pm


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Those changes looks great to me! Thank you so much; have fun playing!

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