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 Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2016 5:36 pm
Name:Kiley Thompson
Nickname: Kyle
Age: 21
Birthday: December 1
Sign: Sagittarius
Gemstone: Turquoise
Blood Type: O
Fav. Food: Pie!
Hated Food: Diet Drinks
School: Destiny City University - Majoring in Literature and a Minor in Creative Writing
Hobbies:
Baking: One of Kyle’s favorite ways to spend free time is whipping up a pie or a cake or even cookies. She started wanting to make brownies for her class back in grade school and when she gave them to her mother to try, the smile on her face became Kyle’s true reward.
Writing: With a creative passion and a love for the world of imagination, Kyle finds writing to be one of the greatest joys in her life. It is a way to leave this land behind and transport yourself to faraway places that might not even exist! You can be whoever you want to be! In this age of technology, she fears people have forgotten how to wonder.
Baton Twirling: What started as just twirling a pencil in her fingers at a young age quickly evolved into a full on extra curricular activity. While Kyle never went for the Cheerleading team she loved to learn how to dance with an item even when it had flames on it. Whether she has a baton, a twig, or even a pencil in her hand, she loves to spin, twirl, and smack things when they annoy her.
Virtues:
Little Miss Sunshine: Always wearing a smile and glowing with energy, Kyle is upbeat and happy. She’s the person who walks into a room and everyone knows is there. Not because of how she dresses but because of how she holds herself. Kyle just wants to see the good in the world and pass that along to people. Even on the worst days, there is always something to smile about.
Optimistic: In every piece of darkness, there is always something bright. Kyle sees the good in all and lives her life with the glass half full! She walks life hopeful of the good things and even when all seems lost, she wants to find the hope in it. Many people can find this a bit annoying but she believes that if she can make one person realize that there is a silver lining, her day isn’t wasted.
Flaws:
Low Self Esteem: For as much as Kyle smiles and does her best to see others happy, she does not see herself as anything special. She doesn’t find herself beautiful, smart, or unique in anyway. Looking in the mirror is difficult for her and when someone happens to say something negative about her, it will haunt Kyle’s thoughts for days.
Talkative: Kyle isn’t afraid to talk to anyone...about anything...at anytime. She has been known to walk up to a complete stranger and strike up a conversation. While this has made her many friends, it has also put many people off. Seems many either like her or find her crazy.
PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION
Eyes: Maroon - Think Sailor Pluto’s eyes;
Large, bright and happy. Give a look of a hidden twinkle.
Hair: Style - bottom right in a white blonde hair
Face: A thin face with what many say is a classic, simple beauty. She wears a smile more than any expression
Clothes: Simple reference
She goes for bright colors. Not so much in pattern.
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Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2016 5:40 pm
Knight Title: Shambhala, Page of PlutoI have asked Kaori_luv for her blessing using this name with her use of Shangri-la
Challenge: Time’s Up!
Uniform:
General Concept
Weapon -- Brass Clock Pendulum -> Base Elongates to about size of a majorette baton. The round area seems to split in two (part on top, part on bottom). Becomes more decorated with engravings -> Is now as tall as her. The ends each become half an hour glass and you can see the ‘sands of time’ fall through the rod. Decorated in brass.
Magic
Page : None
Squire: Striking someone with her weapon and holding it against them,everything to the person who is hit appears to freeze in place as it was when she struck them. They are still able to move around but for as long as she is channeling her magic, everything else appears frozen. (about 10 seconds). If the staff is removed from them, they can move again.
Knight: Striking someone with her weapon and then flipping it over so the sand inside her staff travel through it, everything to the person who is hit appears to freeze in place as it was when she struck them. They are still able to move around but for as long as she is channeling her magic, everything else appears frozen. She can tap into her pool for about 15 seconds at this time. Should she flip the staff back or sideways, the magic stops sooner.
Summon
TBD
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Posted: Tue Mar 01, 2016 10:49 am
Hey Sirene! For the most part, Shambhala looks great! Just one thing -- right now, her magic is written more like a Senshi's cast-and-go than a Knight channeling from their pool, so if you could tweak the phrasing just a little to make it clear the effects last as long as she is channeling and she has up to 30/45 seconds to channel? Also, her magic seems to downgrade between Squire and Knight rather than upgrade? I would recommend swapping the channeling times! Third, just to be clear, even with her Knight attack, the affected person can still defend themself from attacks, yes? Their defenses might just be slowed or sluggish?
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Posted: Sat Mar 19, 2016 11:37 pm
Hey Song! Thank you! Knight Magic is still something I'm not strong in so appreciate the comments! I took another stab at it so let me know!
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Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2016 1:17 pm
So! Right now, Shambhala has two different spells -- Knights have one spell that gets stronger when they upgrade, not two different ones! I recommend going with the one that makes the world freeze around her target, because one that freezes her target in place is going to be capped at 15 seconds of use based on our rules about paralyzing magic, so you'll get more use out of the other one. Also, again, I have to ask -- while the world appears frozen around them, since it isn't, people could still attack the target of Shambhala's magic; can they react to defend themself? If not, the channeling time will have to be cut drastically since it again leaves the target helpless. It might be better to just have the world slowed, so they can react but with slightly lesser reflexes, as a suggestion!
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Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2016 7:17 pm
I told you Knight magic was iffy >.< Sorry about that. And I don't mind cutting the channeling time down at all so let me know.
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Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2016 7:25 pm
Looks good!  A Gm will be by soon to review!
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Posted: Tue Mar 22, 2016 5:19 pm
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