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1. Age is a problem reduce it too 1000 this would mean also he would eventually age progress too a older looking man with grey hair eventually i think even yamamotto only lived to be 2000 maybe less or more and he was the longest living shinigami.

2. Zanjutsu and Haku-- please change these to Basic captain level captain are elite warriors even Retsue knew how too fight though she refused, she was actaully considered the most highly skilled in all basias of physical condition. This will work better sense he swore off violence sense a set point in time this would fall better in line with your character as they they knew how to fight but have sense lost all erge or need in a sense too you cant become a captain with out fighting your way there diplomacy doesn't work. Also shunpo needs to be specified of level.

3. Zanpoktou spirit 1 is awesome!! 2 I think the size can be passed on but there is a limit to your character when he activates shikai and bankai he can not move position his self unless picked up and moved your weapon could be considered god mod but i do understand what your aiming for... in return your character will be allowed a 600ft bankai, sense mother should always be able to see what is going on. 3 also add in a connection when in bankai possible where what mother spirit feels sees and hears you do as well but her being larger then a average human would give her above average skill.

You need a post limit or atleast a cool down for all your attacks.
Attack--
1. The defensive hands is okay but you need to add a limit possible 5 enemy attacks with a cool down of 1 post with it, but after every use rather all used or not cool down doubles and limit of attacks blocked looses one. Also add in size for example it can only protect Makato- otherwise this move is a god like move sense there is no stated limit.
2. Add a cool down of at least 2 post and give it a peremeter of power it can block and size/volume of the wave that is produced.
3. This is fine, but with what i just said above i would add in must be struck in the same place twice to draw blood and add in possible what the effect of striking him is such as maybe landing the first strike takes the aura from that area second strike draws the blood but if they miss twice a shockwave like the 2nd power is delievered knocking them back.

Bankai-- I would add in the veil surrounding Makato should now surround the spirit mother and add in that Makato and the spirit mother are now completley conneceted in a symbionic bond like Sajin's bankai what ever is reflected upon the bankai is reflected at the user unless your using your attacks only time mother spirit takes the damage if she is attacked though while just standing there mother spirit also if you move in shikai or bankai mimics everything you do but the amount of power required is too great and is what hold you in place rather then basic hand and body positions your feet are were ever you activated bankai. Also your passive skill carry over from shikai.
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1. 1hand movement per 1 post and if the hand has any effect the hand has a cool down of 2 post it is your limit and she must alternate hands
2. This is iffy so we are going to change it 1 use every lets say 5 post (unless give special permission) you are limited to 2 times use of concecrating ground with her divine spirit mother power of 500 feet protecting attacks up to grandray cero level or using arm to protect either or.
3. Lets change this to, in order to keep him going he can be given the kiss once but looses his bankai all together but it restores 100% of his spirit energy but will not allow him to enter bankai the rest of battle and has a weak half power shikai after 6 post all healing kido is increased x2 after this attack tho.


Fix them things post your bio and them little unfilled things and we will be good to go, for private discussion on your topic please pm me. :]

Vc --- tenkie sama

I'm sorry you felt that way, but there are limits that have been given to follow in the guild that have been given to me, as it stood them where all things that had to change and suggestions of how to change them you at anytime could of told me you wanted to change them in different ways and we could of worked together to make the profile better in a way that suited you but if you cant take suggestions and change or comunicate propuraly with a supperior in the guild then it was right for you too leave i am sorry our guild was not a fit for you. We thank you for your time and service.




Tenkie-Sama