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Kesmi

Shapeshifter

PostPosted: Mon Jan 11, 2016 1:25 pm


Name: Draven
Stage: Prentice
Race: Wind/Ice
Gender: Male
3 Base Traits: Sheltered, Inquisitive, Educated and Brash
Personality:
Sheltered - For the better part of Draven's life, he had been hidden away in fear that his grandmother would come and take him away. While Draven never knew the real reason he was never allowed out of his father's sight for too long, he was kept away from the most of the world and doesn't know how to exactly interact with others. This is not to say he is anti-social, more shy then anything else and has yet to get his feet wet and make friends.

Inquisitive - After he was let out of the darkness of his father's protectiveness, much of it for his own sake, Draven has started poking about at many things. He wants to learn things, more then the few subjects his father has shown him.

Educated - being sheltered has some perks and frustrating times. While he was 'in hiding' his father taught him the basics of reading and writing. With also the ways of battering and selling of wares. This is, to Draven, a waste of time as he wants to do something more with his life then travel and selling things. But it can be said that he does have a 'good' head on his shoulders.

Brash - Draven at times can come out as a jerk to others who have pushed his buttons the wrong way. Having only his father to argue with for the better part of his childhood. Draven can be seen as a jerk at these times, but when he realizes what he has done, he becomes ashamed not knowing how to fix his actions.

Description:
Skin tone: About mid range of the Wind skin tones.
Hair: The darker, near black Ice coloration, blue tinted; He wears in long pulled back with a piece of leather strapping.
Eyes: A darker variant of the Wind blue eye color.
Ears: Long and pointed like the Ice Tribe.
Crystals: Light range purple-ish blue; positioned around his shoulders/shoulder blades.

Clothing:

Tan colored pants and a darker blue(maybe) shirt.
Cloak(For later stages): [x] An idea of one anyways. xD

Accessories: A silver colored locket with images of his parents inside.  
PostPosted: Tue Jan 12, 2016 5:00 pm


History
Beginnings and endings


Draven was born into an interesting family, his father Remman, was a merchant by trade. He traveled the lands within the bounds of a caravan. He enjoyed the traveling, the selling and bartering of items. He had a head for figures, picked up from his father and his father before him. There was also the sight seeing while traveling with the caravan. It was on one such trip to the an Ice tribe town where Remman met the woman that would give birth to his son.

Dahlia; one of her town's slow rising artisans. Kept mostly to herself and didn't venture too far from home. But Market was the one day she would venture out to see what the caravan would bring in. It would be one of these days that she met Remman. (Most this will come out in solo RP when Draven asks his father about his mother)


Over the seasons and trips through the town, Remman bumped into Dahlia more then once before he was watching the caravan leave without him. Smitten he was with the woman and wanting to settle down. While his love was still for the traveling caravan, he felt it was time to try do something else with his life. Perhaps even start a family. If was five years before Dahlia made it known to Remman that she was with child. Joy flooded Remman, here he was feeling down about the choices he had made. But this joy was soon to be replaced with sadness and guilt.

The day of Draven's birth had started out a joyous occasion. Dahlia's mother arrived to help through the child birthing, and support her daughter. While Remman waiting outside the room, not to his approval, but the sternness of his mother-in-law was enough to make even the rowdiest of kids cower in fear. So he paced outside, listening to the cries within. Soon Dahlia's voice was accompanied by the wail of a child's. His child had arrived, his heart filled with relief and joy. But the worst was yet to come, the door flew open and Dahlia's mother stood scowling at him, he didn't much like the woman when she was like this.

"You best come in." wall all he was told before striding into the room. Wrapped in a blanket beside Dahlia was his son. Walking over he didn't know it, but his wife was slipping away.

"Beautiful, isn't he?" Dahlia asked as she held the sobbing infant close, her eyes closing.

"Of course he is," Remman said reaching out to touch his wife. Only thing is, she didn't respond to him.

It wasn't until an hour later after he was taken out of the room that he was told Dahlia passed on. It was said that she died from hemorrhaging after his son was born and was gone before anybody noticed. So it was from joy to sadness to a heated battle over it was his fault Dahlia died giving birth to his son.

The grandmother laid most, if not all, the blame on Remman for the death of her daughter. Even with Remman trying to defend himself against the old croon, there was little he could do. I lost the one he loved, had loved since the first time they bumped into each other that one market day. Soon it all came down to what was best for the infant, the grandmother was willing to take him and raise him in her house, but inherit nothing from her side of the family. Remman wasn't about to allow his only son to be raised by someone who would hate him everyday. No, the merchant was going to sneak his son out of the town the next market day, less then a week away.

That time passed quickly as the caravan once more came to sell and barter their goods to the locals and take on other goods to trade elsewhere. Remman, being an old friend to the caravan master was accepted back into the fold as if this had only been a vacation. He needed something to take his mind off Dahlia. Two nights later the caravan left the town with Remman and his son along with it.  

Kesmi

Shapeshifter


Kesmi

Shapeshifter

PostPosted: Wed Jan 13, 2016 10:11 am


History Part 2


Looking back now, Draven didn't know how he survived caravan life. His father had been pretty much all thumbs when it came to raising the boy. Often times getting help from the women that rode with the caravan. There weren't many other kids to play with and while in towns, Draven had to stay out of sight and play with the toys his father got him. But those blue eyes were always peeking out of his hiding place to stare in wonder at the world.

When Market day was done and the area was just the merchants and their own children, Draven was let loose to help close up shop and pack certain items for his father and other merchants needed help with. These were the times he enjoyed the most, being free from the stuffy back part of his father's stall.

"why must I stay hidden during the day?" Draven asked one evening when his father was cooking supper. "Why can't I play with the other kids?"

It wasn't cause he was born with some aspects of his mother, it was more he didn't want to be found by Draven's grandmother. By now, at the age of eight, Remman was sure the old croon had given up looking for them or had passed on. He hoped for the latter of the two, he didn't know how much longer he could keep the boy from everything he should be exposed to in this life.

"I just want you to be safe, that is all." Remman said as he ladled out soup from the cooking pot and handed one to Draven. "The streets can be dangerous."

That is what he always said and he was always met with a scowl from Draven. Remman sighed and ran a hand through his hair, he was growing older, reaching his mid fifties. He needed someone to take up his mantel and with only one son... He hoping the boy would have a head for figures like himself.

"I'm not a baby anymore dad. Its because I am different, isn't it?" Draven continued watching his father.

"Alright, alright.' Remman said in defeat, years of lying weighing upon him and he had no other reasons for the boy to stay hiding. "Alright, tomorrow you don't have to stay hidden."

There was joy in Draven's face as the boy finished off the soup. Then came the teachings of reading, writing and math. These lessons made Draven groan inwardly, but he endured the hours of learning. He hated these times, while it was good for him, he just wanted to play like he had seen other kids do.

Next morning the doors opened to Draven and he was let loose on the world, only... Stepping out those doors weren't as easy as it first looked. Hidden away so long, Draven was suddenly unsure if he actually wanted to go outside. Peering out past his lodging door, the flaps of the pale tent he shared with his father, Draven watched as people milled about in the early morning. Other vendors started setting out their wares, the early risers headed off for their own jobs. Even the occasional guard or arms-man would wander through the market square.

The world was an open door, he just had to step out into and start living.  
PostPosted: Tue Jan 26, 2016 8:57 am


His history does cut off, but parts of it will be revealed in Solos. ^^ Hopefully I did everything alright. xD

Kesmi

Shapeshifter


robot kitten

Tipsy Pirate

PostPosted: Tue Jan 26, 2016 9:15 am


Personality: I'd like to see a bit more negative traits (robo likes em well rounded) XD Does he have an anger at being held inside for so long, is he super shy due to his sheltered life, does he say things that come off as inappropriate due to not associating with anyone for a long time? Socially awkward sorta deal?


History: nice and long XD Why must he stay hidden and why worry about the grandmother? What is the caravans reaction to the dad always hiding his son?

His history sounds like his first solo is him stepping out into the world? Am I correct in this?
If so is he psychically weak from being inside never doing much for 10-15 years? (prentices are young teens after all)

Why didn't he try sneaking out at all? Or did he? If so what happened?

Btw: we prefer solos to happen during the time of them being IC, not past memories or history. Like first solo is fine being history since its first and can set up the character, but after that please keep it to events and actions happening during the time of him being an apprentice. So saying the rest will be revealed during solos later is.. not quite acceptable? It works to a degree but honestly we'd like his whole history now (no you don't have to write it in solo style XD Most of us have a synopsis of what happened in general terms with some blurbs filling in the main events of note.)

Kesmi
PostPosted: Tue Jan 26, 2016 9:45 am


xD Lists, where to start! *Rolls over*

personality wise, He's more socially awkward as he can open his mouth sometimes and just stuff his own foot within it. xD Not sure how to word it any better.

Dealing with the grandmother; When he was born, she wanted to take him and educate him to be a scholar, but always look down at him as the murderer of her daughter. He would be forever a thorn in her side because he survived and she didn't. This is why he was taken by his father, he didn't want this type of future for his son. One of guilt that was given to him in healthy doses by his grandmother.

With the Caravan, the women that helped his father raise him, they all adored him. Swooning as they did, the men and fathers of other caravan kids accepted him as one of their own.

I wouldn't say he was physically weak, when market was closed or they were traveling, he was allowed out of the tent, but during business he was hidden away. He was just not close to too many others other then his father. Sure he would help other caravan merchants if they needed it, but he would remain mostly with his father. There was a time that he did have the thought of sneaking out to see things he wasn't other wise able to. But he chickened out thinking that if he did he would hurt his father. He thought of his father first, even if the other Caravan kids wanted him to join them in their excursions into the towns.

Yes this was left out, cause sometimes my mind goes one way and not another without a little help. xD he'd still be awkward outside his own 'bubble' of safety in the caravan and his father. Anyone new he wouldn't know how to interact with them and make a fool of himself, or unintentionally drive them away.

When Draven is finally allowed out of hiding on market days, he runs with the other caravan kids, but always at the first signs of trouble he runs back to where he feels safest and that is with his father. Never straying too far from the Caravan or his father's market stall where he sells various wares to the towns people and other travelers.

With the the 'revealed' would be Draven talking to his father about his mother and why he was hidden away from the world on market days. I had planned on taking it to where it starts IC, but was told I had more then enough to go on. =/ Guess I was told wrongly? I had not meant for it to be a solo. Its just how my mind works.

Kesmi

Shapeshifter


robot kitten

Tipsy Pirate

PostPosted: Tue Jan 26, 2016 9:52 am


Kesmi
I read it as he was never let outside XD whoops! Might want to edit in something tht he was only kept inside during visits into town (unless you already did and I over read it. It does happen!)


Personality: just saying what you did just then works!


History is all of what happens before you get your character; solos should be what happens afterwards. Its why I mentioned filing in the history bits unless he finds them out later in his plot line through conversation than go ahead and leave it out~ that is perfectly acceptable! I just wanted to know more myself right now :p greedy robo~

I personally do not mind the solo style history you wrote (love it XD Means I can read more into it) It just takes a while to write is all XD Figured I'd let you know you can do like more generalized sorta deal thingy? Its not required, so long as you can convey information tis accepted really! If your mind works best that way than stick to it!

Everything else answers my questions! I'd still like something a bit more negative but brash and socially awkward works <3
PostPosted: Tue Jan 26, 2016 2:11 pm


*Tweaks her history a bit to match somewhat the crit.* ^^

Kesmi

Shapeshifter


Suhuba
Captain

PostPosted: Tue Jan 26, 2016 3:28 pm


Kesmi


Robo got to all of it before I could. He looks good to me <3

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