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[REVISION] Corrupt Sailor Makemake :: Elyon Meridian

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OP-Yuna

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 07, 2016 11:09 am


Name: Elyon Meridian
Formerly known as Caterina Heart

Hobbies

Collecting Dolls - Elyon has a porcelain doll collection, or had a collection, back before her corruption. Now she aims to rebuild that collection, looking for dolls that remind her of people she knows - friend or victim. She talks to them, takes care of them, as if they were able to understand. As if they were not simply dolls.

Mischeif plotting, or Stirring the Pot - Elyon is smart, imaginitive, and downright mean. She spends a lot of time scheming - plotting ways to trick people, lure them in, or to simply cause them aggrivation. Their unhappiness is her amusement - their greif is her joy! Suffering simply makes her giddy. As I said before, she is a smart and imaginitive girl, and her pranks can be quite elaborate. The longer she can toy with you, the better, after all.

Reading - Elyon loves a good mystery novel. Supernatural murder mysteries are her favorite. She learned to read from a very young age, and it has fueled much of who she is...and not always in a good way.



Virtues

** TWEAKED ** Mystery Machine - Elyon is very analytical, and questions everything until she can come up with a proper and feasible conclusion. She asks a lot of questions, and wants to make sure she really, really understands something before she'll move on to something else. She has lent most of her time learning how to analyze and draw conclusions. She isn't afraid to ask the hard or taboo questions. This makes her an excellent student. However, she can be a bit nosy and make herself a nuisance at times.

**NOT CHANGED** Imaginative - Elyon has a very healthy imagination, even if it does edge a little on the creepy side at times. Now, we're not talking unicorns and elves imagination - we're talking the REAL reason why she stole the cookie from the cookie jar. Because just 'cause bubba said no and I wanted it anyway so I got it' isn't good enough. No. 'I haven't had anything to eat since dinner last night and a giant 800lbs bully named Rock-o who has a rainbow mohawk and one eye stole my lunch money and THEN I got home and bubba told me no' sounds so much better. Not that she would actually steal from the cookie jar and then lie about it! But man could her English teacher tell you a thing or two about her 'imagination.' This imagination helps her come up with unique ways to handle situations.

**NOT CHANGED** Gonna see it through till the end! - Elyon is persistent, resilient, and determined. When there is a task at hand, she isn't one to get distracted and drop it for something else. Once she starts something she makes sure to finish it. Even school projects that she isn't necessarily fond of, but knows she has to do anyway. And once she's done something, she stands by it with her head held high. Even if her papermache project looks like crap.



Flaws

**NOT CHANGED** Driven to succeed. No matter the cost - Now for the dark side of 'going to see it through until the end!' Once Elyon starts something, how dare you try and stop her! When this girl is on a mission, she is like a bulldozer, and thinks she is ten feet tall! Figuratively speaking, of course. So while she can be counted on to get something done, you have to watch out that you don't get in her way, or you're likely to be trampled. She's not above throwing friends under the bus to get what she wants, and she probably won't feel a bit bad about it! After all, you shouldn't have been in her way!

**NOT CHANGED** I'm Right and You're Wrong! - And there's nothing you can do about it! Elyon can be rather full of herself. After all, she's so smart, nothing she says could possibly be wrong! Right? If you try and correct her when she is absolutely positive she is right, you're going to have one angry young lady on your hands. She'll pout, and probably hate you for the rest of the day. Now what does this say if you are a teacher or mentor? Well, it depends on if she knows anything about the subject or not. She's not past putting up an argument with the teacher. This has gotten her sent to the principal's office many times.

**NOT CHANGED** Vindictive - If you mess with her, she will get back at you. In some way or form. Even if it is three years later. And she will do it in the meanest way she can think of. She is a smart cookie - she can think of a lot of ways. And it will only get worse as she gets older... She has a payback list a mile long.


NEW/ALTERED ATTACKS

Sailor Scout Attack: MakeMake Porcelain Touch!
After calling out her attack, MakeMake then touches something and depending on if it is organic or non-organic, it will either become rather fragile, and you have to be careful not to break it until the attack wears off(non organic) or develop a thin layer of porcelain, which if cracked, causes pain as if you were just cut(organic.)
Has a five inch diameter spread from her touch. Lasts for under a 30 seconds. Two uses per battle.

Super Scout Attack: MakeMake Porcelain Grip!
Same basic premise as the first attack. Has a ten inch diameter from her hand. Lasts for 45 seconds. Two uses per battler.

Eternal Scout Attack: MakeMake Porcelain Doll!
Makemake clasps her hands together in front of her, calls out her attack and becomes covered in a porcelain armor. MakeMake is unable to move for the duration of the attack (One minute.) As attacks are made against the armor, it will begin to crack Another stage 3 character's attack can typically break the shield in a single blow, where as a second stage would take a few more blows, and a first stage even more.
Two uses per battle. Very taxing on her own energy.
PostPosted: Thu Jan 07, 2016 12:55 pm


Tonberry Queen X


Hey, Fayth! I am excited to see Corrupted Makemake in play 8D

The civilian side of this looks great. I have a few questions about powered side, but they should be quick!

Her basic attack looks fine, but how many uses does she get out of this? (I would think two or three would be fine if it only lasts for thirty seconds!)

For her super attack, one minute is usually longer than most attacks at eternal stage, so I think dropping it down to forty five seconds and giving it two uses would make each individual attack shorter and more appropriate for battle, but still give you more time to use it in the long run!

For her eternal attack, how long does the duration last if she isn't hit? I think it would be all right to last for a minute in this instance, but because it is more of a defense/buff, it would be all right if you wanted to have her get two uses out of it? That is up to you! If you want her to be exhausted after one use, please just let me know and that will work also!

Please quote me if you have any questions, comments or make any changes and I'll be back as soon as possible!


Kyuseisha no Hikari

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OP-Yuna

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 07, 2016 1:14 pm


Kyuseisha no Hikari
Tonberry Queen X


Hey, Fayth! I am excited to see Corrupted Makemake in play 8D

The civilian side of this looks great. I have a few questions about powered side, but they should be quick!

Her basic attack looks fine, but how many uses does she get out of this? (I would think two or three would be fine if it only lasts for thirty seconds!)

For her super attack, one minute is usually longer than most attacks at eternal stage, so I think dropping it down to forty five seconds and giving it two uses would make each individual attack shorter and more appropriate for battle, but still give you more time to use it in the long run!

For her eternal attack, how long does the duration last if she isn't hit? I think it would be all right to last for a minute in this instance, but because it is more of a defense/buff, it would be all right if you wanted to have her get two uses out of it? That is up to you! If you want her to be exhausted after one use, please just let me know and that will work also!

Please quote me if you have any questions, comments or make any changes and I'll be back as soon as possible!


Thank you for the help on the attacks! =D Those are usually pretty tricky for me. Anywho, I fixed 'em!
PostPosted: Thu Jan 07, 2016 1:50 pm


Tonberry Queen X


My pleasure! Have fun playing!

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