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PostPosted: Mon Dec 28, 2015 10:30 pm


gotta an idea for a senshi omg. hope it's doable
PostPosted: Mon Dec 28, 2015 10:38 pm


Name: Raja Namira Sarraf

Nickname: Raj, Nami, Mira

Age: 20

Birthday: September, 8th

Sign: Virgo

Gemstone: Chrysolite

Blood Type: O+

Fav. Food: Sashimi (though she refuses to touch the blowfish, ocotpus and squid variations), baked goods of any kind.

Hated Food: Squid, Ocotopus and mushrooms... EW.

School: Currently not in school as she's working full time in a dance club, 101 Nights, as a dancer to save up money to try and get into school.

Hobbies:

Dancing – Raja loves to dance, it's something she's done since she was little and is, currently, her chosen career path while she works on putting herself into school. Taught to her by her aunt, it was like opening the doors to the rest of the world. From ballet in her younger years, to tap and then later belly dancing, she's got several years of several types under her belt and wishes to some day learn more. More often then not she dances her way to any where more then she walks.

Fashion Design – The thing that fascinates Raja more then dancing is the costumes she's worn through several recitals, as well as other dancers have worn. This lead to a love of attempting to design fashion to learning how to sew and actually make decent costumes and clothing. She'd like to go to college for fashion design, to better herself in this field, and is the biggest goal in her life.

Fabric Shopping – With a love of designing costumes and clothes comes a love of fabric, and boy does Raja have plenty of that. Problem is she wants more. As such she tends to go shopping for fabric and any left over money from bills and food goes towards this endeavor. She can (and does) easily get up early in the morning to go looking for fabric sales on days off, adding more to her rapidly growing horde. She's beginning to run out of places to store it in her apartment.

Graveyard Picnics - A slightly more morbid hobby, Raja has a love for graveyards and spends a lot of quiet time there. It started with a monthly visit to the graves of her grandparents and quickly formed to spending hours sitting under trees reading or sketching new designs. Her favourite thing to do, however, is have a lovely picnic under the trees of the graveyard, and has made it a constant to have at least one a week. Sure it tends to bring in double-takes and odd stares, but what does she care as long as she's enjoying herself?

Virtues:
Energetic – Raja is a bundle of energy that always seems to be on the go. She never seemed to run out of it. Whether it's dancing at 101 Nights or running around the town trying to get things needed for her latest design project, she does it with such enthusiasm she tends to either blow people over or drive them nuts.
She doesn't let people's bad attitudes towards her energy get her down, she just keeps a smile plastered on her face and keeps on moving to her next destination or continuing with what she had been. She's got enough going on that she doesn't need other people trying to drag her down.
Laugh and the world laughs with you... – Raja doesn't frown. She doesn't cry, she doesn't get angry, she doesn't even loose her cool. In the face of those around her, even strangers, she'll keep on smiling as if the world will never end. After all that one smile could make a person's day and there's no better feeling then that.
Bubbly, happy and affectionate, being an eternal ray of sun is simply who she is and all the world will ever get to see if she has her way. She doesn't hesitate to make friends or go up and hug a stranger, smiles make the world go round and she's bound to prove it.

Flaws:

Easily Distracted -- Despite being energetic and always on the go, Raja can very easily stop in her tracks if something else catches her attention. Fabric when she's not shopping at all, shiny trinkets when she's simply just walking down the street, even a person who's looks are eye catching can stop this girl in her track and derail a good portion of her day.

She's often been late due to being so easily distracted, be it to work or even meeting with a friend. And if something has really caught her eye she's gone and spent money she shouldn't have just to get it and take it home. Luckily this has yet to affect bill/rent or food money, but she's praying such a day never comes.

Weep and you weep alone – No one needs to know that Raja is anything but happy, it's none of their business after all. As such she's learned how to keep other emotions to herself, locked away in a little box in the back of her mind. Few have seen her anger, even less have seen her tears.

She knows this is a dangerous thing to do, after all one can only be so happy and cheerful before they lose control. Of which Raja has done once before and it's something she'd rather not repeat, though she does very little to prevent it. If she wants help in dealing with her negative emotions she'll ask for it, but until then the world should just butt out and leave her to it.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Tilted at the corners, giving her an almost almond shape to her eyes. Are large and expressive. Magenta in color.

Hair: Short and uneven, it's longer in the front and shorter in the back (think the Major from Ghost in the Shell). Indigo in color, though she's bleached the bottom part of her hair (and her bangs) white, a sort of self done ombre. Has a little attachable hair clip of thread with silver stars on it. Thread is silver and black.

Face: Narrow face, full lips, narrow nose bridge and tip. Light olive but tanned. She's 5'9”.

Clothes: Baggy pants, oh how she loves baggy pants, usually wearing them so they sit just on her waist and leave the rest to cover her feet. Most often they're black (or dark blue, purple, or red), adorned with snow white straps. Her top is always a midriff, sleeveless shirt, black (or dark blue, purple or red) to match her pants. Underneath is a gold mesh shirt with a hood and sleeves that go down to hook over her thumbs. On her arms and wrists are gold bands she never goes with out, and she wears gold rings on her hands: three on her right, five on her left. Which pseudo-matches her ears, which are pierced (with star studs) three on her left (with a clip at the top) and five on her right. Shoes are black and white skater shoes and she wears around her neck a tarnished gold chain with a solid gold star pendant hanging from it.

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 28, 2015 11:13 pm


Senshi: Sailor Frigga, Senshi of Vanity

Challenge: Beauty is in the eye of the beholder~

Fuku Colour:
Main Color: Gold
Secondary Color: White

Fuku: ELEMENTS TO THINK ABOUT FOR SENSHI, FEMALE AND MALE -- YOU DON'T HAVE TO HAVE THESE, JUST THINK ABOUT THEM

Collar -- Kind of a collar? More like fabric that wraps around her shoulders in a sort of over coat sort of thing (ref images at the end). no stripe. (super: one stripe. eternal: two stripes and ending in points. star danglies at the end of the points) length is cc
Bow -- Big brilliant back bow, please. (super: star danglies at the ends maybe? eternal: cc?)
Bodice -- White, of course. A dress, short and flow-y. Ends a little bit before her knees. (super, bikini top with thin straps and a bit of extra fabric that comes down around her ribcage to look like ribbons. eternal: body suit.)
Sleeves -- CC
Brooch -- Two pearls, one bigger one with a smaller one dangling from the bigger one. (super, a gold star in the middle of the bigger pearl. eternal, an extra pearl is added, gold star is there as well)
Bottoms -- N/A (super, bikini bottoms that have a bit of extra fabric that comes up a bit to almost look like ribbons.)
Tiara -- Like this but with a pearl colored star dangling from the center instead. (super: add a small, round pearl dangling from the star maybe? eternal: aphrodite flower for her forehead symbol if you please~)
Choker -- Similar to her tiara, but thinner pls
Shoes -- Heels with stars on the side? (super: thigh highs, in a similar fashion to this. maybe have a star at the top and the points of one of the star come up over the "edge" of the top of the boot? maybe with stars decorating down them? eternal: heeled boots that are pretty much a part of her body suit. would love to have it look a lot like the boots from super stage are a part of the body suit. a large star on the top of the "foot" of the boots.)
Gloves -- Fingerless, comes down to the end of her thumb. (super, same length, with a star design on the back. eternal: smaller in width. fingerless but the top part comes down lower then her fingers)
Accessories -- Star shaped studs in all of her piercings. Gold bangles around her wrists in all stages.

ideas/inspiration for fukus: sailor senshi, super senshi, eternal senshi (I just really love the looks of these outfits, okay? *sobs* i just want fukus based around these if i can)

Attacks: These are your senshi's abilities, which will be used in battle. These abilities correspond to your senshi's element. Think of it as a "summary" of what your senshi can do in one word.

Sailor Scout Attack: Wrinkle Recovery
Unlike what wrinkle cream actually does, this attack causes the target to feel the effect of "growing old". Pulling the small pearl from her broach, Frigga crushes it in her hands then blows the powder at the target. The powder, upon landing on the target "saps" the target's energy making it hard for them to dodge attacks.

Frigga must be in range of the target, 5 ft. A gentle breeze can cause the attack to be rendered void, or end up affecting someone else! Allies are not immune. Effects last 10-20 seconds. Can be used once per battle.

Super Sailor Scout Attack: Beauty Blender
A lot like the first attack, this time Frigga pulls off her entire broach. Opening like a compact, she can grind the smaller pearl up into a powder. From the inside of the compact she blows the powder toward the target, where upon landing, it "saps" the target's energy, making it hard for them to dodge attacks.

Frigga must be in range of the target, 7 ft max, A breeze can cause the attack to be rendered void or end up affecting someone else! Allies are not immune. Effects last 30-40 seconds. Can be used once per battle.

Eternal Sailor Attack: Rosy Cheeks~
Taking her broach off, Frigga grinds both of the smaller pearls into a powder in the compact. Blowing the powder into a 15ft area that envelopes everyone within that area. The powder makes the target feel as if their energy is being sapped/lightheaded/weak. Allies, meanwhile, feel moderately rejuvenated and they seem to have a healthy, rosier sort of look to them; giving the appearance of beauty/looking younger.

A.O.E attack of 15 ft. Because the powder is a little thicker, a heavy breeze will render the attack void. Effects last 45 seconds, once per battle.
PostPosted: Mon Dec 28, 2015 11:16 pm


inspiration from a monster in a game called youkai watch. idk how serious i even am about this lol. just it hit me and i had to try and work with it.

also am not completely sold on the name. so if i have to change it, it's whatevs name changed to frigga lol

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PostPosted: Tue Dec 29, 2015 6:43 pm


Aaaaand all put together! well gotta actually write up my attack. oops.
PostPosted: Wed Dec 30, 2015 10:57 am


Use of pearls is because pearls are used in make up and beauty treatments. Needed to make note of that.

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 16, 2016 7:19 pm


White Trickster Rabbit


Hey there, Bunni~ (Do you prefer Bunni? If not, please let me know!)

I apologize for the wait on critiquing Frigga; I wanted to address a concern I had regarding her sphere with other members of staff before I critted you!

Unfortunately, Beauty is not going to be an allowable sphere, as it canonically belongs to Sailor Venus! However, your attacks are very well-suited to a Senshi of Vanity, if you would like that as an alternate possibility, since they deal with physical appearance.

If you'd like other ideas, I can bounce some your way, of course! Otherwise she looks good to me, though!
PostPosted: Wed Mar 16, 2016 9:18 pm


Noir Songbird


Bunni is my go to nickname, so feel free to call me that! (thank you for asking though <3)

I can totally change it to vanity! Beauty was just the word that came to mind as I was putting the attacks together? lol Vanity definitely works~

I wouldn't need to change her challenge though, would I? I'm rather attached to it

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 16, 2016 10:00 pm


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No need to change her challenge~

With the revised sphere, she looks good to me, so please have a trial stamp! A GM will be by soon to give her another look~

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 17, 2016 2:51 pm


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Hey, Bunni!

Cute profile! She is almost entirely ready for a stamp, but I have just one concern with her eternal attack! We try not to approve magic that both harms the enemy and benefits an ally, but there is an easy fix to allow you to have the effects that you want as well as be a boost to allies! If the sensation of having energy drained/being lightheaded or feeling weak only lasts for the 45 seconds of the magic, then it would work—and the allies could feel moderately rejuvenated and still have the healthy glow about them! If you are all right with that and can make that little tweak, then I can stamp her—or, if you want to explore other options, please give me a quote and I'll be back as soon as possible!


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PostPosted: Sat Mar 19, 2016 12:23 pm


Kyuseisha no Hikari


Made the change, hope the wording is good! <3
PostPosted: Sat Mar 19, 2016 12:46 pm


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Looks good to me! Thanks so much! 8D

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