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Name: Jane Amelia Johnson

Nickname: None

Age: 14*- Jane will awaken exactly 1 hour before her birthday, rendering her a chibi senshi. She will hate this and will throw a fit at being seen as a child she is 14 now that's nearly ADULT!!!!!111! TAKE HER SERIOUSLY!!!1!

Birthday: (Determined the day she is approved, see above)

Sign: (See above)

Gemstone: (see above)

Blood Type: AB-

Fav. Food: Corn bread and Chili

Hated Food: Mighty Kids Meals

School: Meadowview High School

Hobbies:

-Biking: Jane has a love of moving on her own and being independent and so from a young age, has always been traveling to the store and her friend's homes via her bike. It's just how she gets around, and as she's gotten older and more into being able to get out and spend time on her own, she's needed to invest in her bike, leading her to do bike racing as both a hobby and as her sport of choice. ROAD RACERS NYOOM. (Hime Hime from Yowapedal plays in the distance ala 4th wall)

- Postcard Collecting/Sending: Not from the states, but from her Mom and Dad's international travels, Jane loves seeing the highly doctored images and often sometimes quirky things people will send each other by mail. Plus- getting mail is the bomb. She will send postcards to you over the dumbest events. Just because postcards are fun to get in the mail don't lie to her you like them. She has joined a few social sites for postcard enthusiasts with her mom and dad's permission, and gets some that way as well. Her favorite postcards to send from Destiny City are the satirical ones about the costumed terrorists. Her humor can get pretty dark sometimes. But she stands by that is makes for a catching postcard!

- Reading/Writing Really Bad Fanfictions: She 'breaks the law' and reads illicit fiction of her favorite characters and is '2 edgy'. OH SNAP SHE WROTE ******** IN HER FIC TO MATURE FOR U. She has no idea how actual biology works and thinks herself an expert on romance and writing. She is the typical 14 year old who discovered the M section of AO3. She's just discovered Kill la Kill and One Piece is her jam.

Virtues:

Independent -- Jane has lived with the idea and upbringing that if you want something you best do it yourself. She's dedicated to researching new things, taking charge of her own future and working on her own or attempting to lead other should no one take charge. She wants to get things done, and is very much the 'go-getter' in seeking whatever it is she wants.
Passionate -- Her passions vary time to time, but whatever they are, Jane throws and invests her time and effort into them. Hobbies, friendships, projects, research- She likes involvement and knowledge, and truly holds her thinking to heart. When faced with adversity she shows resilience and tenacity, though even she knows that sometimes, it's better to bend than break. Compromise is better than crumbling under pressure after all.
Open Minded -- While she certainly seeks to set herself apart and create her own path, Jane isn't above being given new options or hearing alternative ways. In fact, she rather enjoys contrasts and counterpoints, and wants to be challenged. She's not a know it all, and the only way to learn is by experience and broadening her horizons after all.

Flaws:


Independent -- While Jane is self reliant and does do her best to not require the help of others, this can lead her to think that she shouldn't seek help at times, or, that she should be able to do things on her own. Pride is her sin, and she can become wrapped up in proving to herself that she is who she wants to be- strong and self sufficient, even if she is unable to live up to her own self imposed expectation.
Childish -- She's locked into a mindset of needing to be mature, to imposing her own self sustaining image for her own benefit that often when it breaks down, she breaks down, becoming hostile, stubborn, and resorting to less than mature responses and antics. With time she might get herself under control, but ironically, she is still very much a child when confronted with hard truths and realities she might not wish to accept.
Anxious -- For all the attitude and air she puts on, Jane is extremely self conscious, and is terrified of not living up to what she thinks are standard expectations of her. It can cause her to not try new things or back out of others. Her nervousness feeds this aspect of her very deeply, and while she can often muster enough willpower to at least try, if she's shot down hard enough, it's all the more difficult for her to try something again, or try something completely outside of her normal comfort zone.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION
See top post :U

YO LUBE UP YOUR a**, VAMPS, BECAUSE I'M HERE TO CRIT YOU SO HARD YOU'LL BE WALKING FUNNY FOR DAYS.

Too much?

ANYWAY.

LOOK AT THIS CUTIE SHE'S SO STINKING CUTE I WANT TO PINCH HER ANGRY TEENAGED CHEEKS.

Hobbies -
Biking - You might wanna clarify road bike vs mountain bike/trail bike, otherwise looks good.

Postcard Collecting - Does Jane seek out pen pals from all over the world, or rely solely on her parents to send her stuff?

Fanfic - what fandoms is she in??? PS ff.net doesn't host smut anymore and has gotten like super family-friendly, she'd be on AO3.

Virtues

"Not above" has negative connotations, so it's weird to use it in a virtue writeup. Consider "She's dedicated to researching..."

Passionate - Looks good.

Open Minded - Looks good.

Flaws

Independent - Looks good.

Childish - Looks good.

Hesitant - I'm not sure that "Hesitant" is the right word for this trait - "Anxious" might be a bit more on the money. I do like that you've gone out of your way to make this fit with her virtues that it seems like it would contradict. Looks good.

Powered bullshit

Comet Flash - for something so disorienting, this seems a bit long. 15-20 seconds might be more appropriate.

Comet Crash - Yeah I think this looks good?

Impact Event - Yeah this also looks p. cool.

Hey Vamps! Congrats on Spacewatch~ she's such a sweetie.

You're almost ready to go as her Civilian side is very solid, but I need a little clarification and we need to cover a few points, if you don't mind really fast before I give her a stamp.

Since Spacewatch is a chibi senshi she has to be awaken as a chibi senshi for one full day before she can graduate to a full-fledged senshi, and because of this all of her attacks will have to be written as Chibi senshi attacks and later be revised to Adult senshi attacks. With that in mind her Basic to Super attacks are two different attacks, if you don't mind picking which attack you prefer either defensive or offensive and making both the basic and super attack the same (with the obvious slight difference between them) and then tweaking the times for me to 20 seconds for basic and 25 for super we should be good to go!

Also, with all of that in mind when Spacewatch is ready to graduate to full fledged senshi we just need a plot proposal from you on how she gains her full senshi status.

If you have any questions or need any help please feel free to quote me back I'll be more than happy to help you any way I can!

Works for me! ^-^ A GM'll drop by soon!