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Genji Gincosu

Divine Phantom

PostPosted: Sat Dec 26, 2015 12:10 pm


Roleplayed in Shanghai.
719 lines between Me and NPC (initiation)

Changes to be made
Core description
Slypner's visor has become spiked on the outer rim, large fang like items pop up and down, also turning from green to a tan of orange.

Core changed to
User Image
Quote:
Scraptor

B.A.I.T.R Standing: 14
Health: 140/140

Skill: 5
Strength: 13
Defense: 10

Tactical Advantage:Deleter: You have studied hard in the art of combat, and you have become exceedingly proficient at the destruction of your foes, both human and A.I. alike. Your final damage (after defense reductions) is increased by 5%.


+1 str for as the 20% of the energy transfer from core to Slyp.

719/20=35
(Don't know how many lines banked :c)

Health: 125
Skill: 18
Strength: 17
Defence: 17
PostPosted: Mon Dec 28, 2015 9:35 am


Genji Gincosu


Okay! So you need to remember, please, to link your profile when you do an update. ALSO you need to link the place where you did the RP. So, it would have been the shanghai base, where your last post is, that you would link to so that we can check the RP was done and line count is proper. Makes it easier for us so we don't have to scavenge the forums for your profile and RP you did. =]

But I am doing this one right now. =]

Edit!!

Okay, so I updated your A.I. Core into your profile, but your stat update made no sense at all.

You were right that you have 35 stat points to spend. Absolutely. But then you put:

Health: 125
Skill: 18
Strength: 17
Defence: 17

This makes no sense at all.
If you were saying thats how much you wanted to add, that is WAY over your 35 points you have to spend.
If you are trying to say thats how your stats should be totalled after you have spent your points, then you only spent 7 points on skill strength and defence, and you can't gain 125 health, because you gain health in 20 point increments. So if you spend 1 stat point, you gain 20 health. 10 stat points, you gain 200 health. So on so forth.

So I will need you to format it like this:

719 lines / 20 = 35 Stat points
19 lines banked

Spending:

Strength: +5
Skill +10
Defence: +10
Health: +200 (10 points)
(Obviously, this is just an example, you don't need to spend them this way, I am just saying how it should look when you are updating)

That way I see how you are spending your points, and I will deal with the rest. =]

Please quote me when you have changed this so that I can update you properly.

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Genji Gincosu

Divine Phantom

PostPosted: Tue Dec 29, 2015 6:57 am


Raven62

Is the update above possible? Because I can live with those stats.
PostPosted: Tue Dec 29, 2015 8:27 am


Genji Gincosu
Raven62

Is the update above possible? Because I can live with those stats.


I promise you, you CAN'T live with those stats. Hahaha. You will need all the stats that you can get, or you will die horribly when you do your first mission. ;P

Also, 125 health is not possible. Health comes in increments of 20, as I was explaining to you. 1 stat point = 20 Health.

I laid everything out for you in my above post, so what is it that you have an issue with right now? I will help you through it, but you need to learn how to properly update your character if you plan to stick around. =]

Unless you meant the example update that I laid out saying that you could do:

Skill: +10
Strength: +5
Defence: +10
Health: +10 (+200 Health)

Bank remaining 19 lines

That's what you want to do? Remember, you can customize it however you want. You just put your 35 stat points into whatever stats you want to focus on. =]

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Genji Gincosu

Divine Phantom

PostPosted: Wed Dec 30, 2015 8:44 pm


Raven62

I am good with

Skill: +10
Strength: +5
Defence: +10
Health: +10 (+200 Health)
PostPosted: Fri Jan 01, 2016 6:37 am


Genji Gincosu
Raven62

I am good with

Skill: +10
Strength: +5
Defence: +10
Health: +10 (+200 Health)


Okay. It's been done. Just remember next time to format it something like that, and to link us to your profile / the page your last post was on. ^__^

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Genji Gincosu

Divine Phantom

PostPosted: Mon Jan 04, 2016 9:57 am


Raven62
Genji Gincosu
Raven62

I am good with

Skill: +10
Strength: +5
Defence: +10
Health: +10 (+200 Health)


Okay. It's been done. Just remember next time to format it something like that, and to link us to your profile / the page your last post was on. ^__^

Thank you very much. I don't see it in my profile thread, only the updated core though.
Wouldn't my stats now read
Health: 300/300
Control Limit: 180

Skill: 25 [26]
Strength: 20
Defence: 25

I just want to make sure before I post.
PostPosted: Mon Jan 04, 2016 4:48 pm


Genji Gincosu
Raven62
Genji Gincosu
Raven62

I am good with

Skill: +10
Strength: +5
Defence: +10
Health: +10 (+200 Health)


Okay. It's been done. Just remember next time to format it something like that, and to link us to your profile / the page your last post was on. ^__^

Thank you very much. I don't see it in my profile thread, only the updated core though.
Wouldn't my stats now read
Health: 300/300
Control Limit: 180

Skill: 25 [26]
Strength: 20
Defence: 25

I just want to make sure before I post.


You stats have been updated. Sorry, I must have slipped on it because I didn't have a profile link and got distracted before I went looking through the profile thread for it. Hahaha.
It's done now. If you want it done faster, just remember to do that. ^__^;

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