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ElvishSorceress

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 25, 2015 10:18 am


Name: Lucian Al Noir

Nickname: Lulu

Age: 20

Birthday: June 13

Sign: Gemini

Gemstone: Alexandrite

Blood Type: O+

Fav. Food: Medium Rare Steak

Hated Food: Sourdough Bread

School: Sovereign Heights Prep School (Ages 18-22 only)

Hobbies:

Sewing - Lucian found a passion for sewing at the age of 12 years old. When his younger sister, Amelie, came to him to fix a beloved teddy bear that suffered from an arm tearing off after years of drool and rough handling. This left Lucian having to deal with the Amelie's endless streams of tears. In order to subdue her tears, he decided to go to a local arts and craft store with the intent of buying a basic sewing kit. After a couple of finger pricks here and there, he presented Amelie with the fixed up version of her bear. While it wasn't a perfect patch up job, the look of utmost joy in his sister's eyes and words of appreciation changed him that day.

Ever since, Lucian has found himself doing whatever it takes to use his sewing skills on another level. In his spare time, he loves to utilize this hobby as a way to help other students. This help may come in the form of making their cosplay endeavors for conventions come true, or volunteer to alter outfits for school theatre productions.

One day, Lucian hopes to expand his skills into plush toy designs. Apparently, being a toy designer at a manufacturing company is his dream job.

Virtues:

Accountability - Lucian considers the promises he makes to people a commitment that must be taken seriously like a job. As a result, he tends to meticulously calculate the way he manages his spare time to meet these obligations.

Charitible - Lucian believes in the action of skills-based charity. He believes if a person has the skills and time to make a change in the lives of others by using their talents, then he or she must do so. By combining his hobby with his work ethic, Lucian is extremely charitable with his time and has often done work for little or no pay for non-profit organizations.

Flaws:

Eccentric - Although Lucian likes to be helpful, his personality has a few eccentric tendencies. Often, Lucian likes to have a good time by joking around with his pals. However, these jokes that range from commentary to actual pranks does not always jive well with other people as they can be conceived as not making any sense, being annoying, and even mean spirited in nature.

Blunt - Lucian is the person to go to if you ever need a real pep talk. Unfortunately, Lucian's pep talk does not have any sense of filter for emotional empathy. He will be straight forward and does not seek to sugar coat the situation. The person could be his best friend, and Lucian will still call them out for being a complete and utter neanderthal. With these direct comments, people may actually leave feeling even more sad and confused after these pep talks.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Red color - Narrowed eyes

Hair: Layered black hair with bangs that are side swept in the front.

Face: Thin with a strong but narrow jawline.

Clothes: Black blazer and pants with a white collared shirt. A unique detail that he likes to add on is a plaid piece of cloth on one side of his Blazer.

[Civilian Clothes Reference] | | [Reference for Hair, Eyes, and Boots]
PostPosted: Fri Dec 25, 2015 1:17 pm


Knight Title: Angkor Wat Page of Pluto

Challenge: "Don't underestimate the power of a spider's web!”

Uniform:
Top -- Grey, thigh length, steampunk coat with no sleeves. Trimmings and details may be a mixture black and other pluto gradient colors.
Bottoms -- Grey pants with a boot cut flare. Further details can be found in the reference.
Gloves -- One elbow length glove, although it looks like it was part of the original coat, just cut off and slightly altered to show off his biceps.
Belt -- Black belt with the pluto emblem themed buckle.
Shoes -- Black boots
Shoulders -- None
Accessories -- A shawl wrap with a pluto emblem design in the middle.
Weapon --

Page - A black, resin material key with black widow influences. The item looks more like a collectible funko pop than a weapon for a knight! How strange... The size is about 1 foot long and is subjected to expand slowly to a magical staff length as Angkor progresses to his future stages.

Squire - The black widow key is expanding in length to 2 feet long and the material is becoming much more sturdier. Traces of metal start to embellish the center of the key, strengthening the core of the design.

The magical property of the key allows strings of web to dispense out and slow down a single enemy from a short range distance when Angkor is reaches a state of panic. Due to the lack of power, the web seems shoot out in a sporadic manner, similar to that of silly string. While quite a bit of web strings can be released at an opponent, it does not have the power to physically stop them.

The web is primarily aimed at limbs in order to serve as a distraction. The delay in an opponents actions may include the opponent's shoes having a sticky sensation against the floor, causing slight friction while walking or running. If the web is used to towards the eyes, mouth, or hands, the opponents may have a delay in motion due to taking the time to remove bits of string from these areas.

Knight - The key has elongated to a length in which it seems like a long magical staff. The material is now much durable, and there is now some weight to it, making it a horrible short range offensive weapon, but a decent shield.

As the weapon has evolved physically, the magical properties have also enhanced from Angkor's squire days. The spider web is now thin in nature and can be near invisible if his opponents do not realize he is weaving it around them. Angkor now has a mid to long range reach with this attack and can target multiple enemies at once. When Angkor sets his trap, opponents may find it momentarily harder to move as they are stuck in the confines of his masterpiece.

The web acts as a wonderful defense mechanism as opponents appear to be momentarily entangled to the ground or against a wall. Although the webs can be broken within 10-15 seconds within a multi-use attack, the mental state and fear of an opponent could cause the effects of entanglement to prolong.

The strength of the web often depends on how much energy Angkor has left in him. If he is dealing with one opponent, the web suspension can last longer as Angkor will have time to make the web sturdier. If he can entangle his opponent with multiple layers of webbing, it is near the equivalent of being tied up with rope, that is until the opponent figures out how to loosen the holding through constant movement.

In situations of a multi-enemy attack, the web simply serves as a mechanism to give his allies a few seconds more to counter their opponents. The attack tends to weaken dramatically after 5-7 uses as it is quite draining to Angkor's pool of energy.

References:

Much of the description is derived off of this character artwork in terms of color palette and inspiration:

The artist is allowed to put their own spin to this conceptual design, especially during the page stage in which the outfits are fairly simple in design.

In regards to the key, I would like the sharp edges in the reference to be blunt.

[Original Character Art]

A way to blunt his black window key can be similar to [Oblivion].

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 11, 2016 6:16 pm


Hi Elvish! I think you have a very good start with a character here, but I think she needs a bit more fleshing out for us to understand fully what she is capable of!

For hobbies, We recommenced at least two as it gives them a little more flavor for rp purposes and they can connect with more characters! Plus, no one just has one hobby and does things they don't even think about! I'd like to see one more added, just to give me a good idea of how he spends time when not sewing!

For his traits, I think they are pretty solid.

For his powered side.

His weapons are fine as far as progression.

His magic though is written in a very confusing way. In short, Knight magic has a time allotted to them what they can do. Because they have a pool to drain from, you don't have to give me a number of uses, but I do need a time amount for how long each attack last.

For his knight magic, you'll need a specific amount of users he can target. When writing attacks, you really want to nail down those definitive traits of them because when you post them in a battle, a rper needs to know specifically what they are getting!

So I think with some edits, I can come back around and give another look, and see if I can stamp you!

Quote me when you are ready hun and I'll be back around!


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