Username: One Little Jay Starting Stage: Senior Race: Hybrid ( Chimera & Fallen) Base: Chimera I Horns 3 Fallen Wings Chimera Ears Face 26 or 22 (CC)
Description:
Body: Pale Tan, freckles everywhere. Eyes: One Green One Blue Hair: Red (Ginger), Messy Man bun. Also a beard. Ref: Like so Clothes:Outfit Bow in front of his bun. (Like it would be attached to the band holding the bun together. Feel free to change bow however you would like, I just wanted him to have a bow in his hair.
Horns: - CC Wings: -CC Tail: - CC Claws: -CC
References (if applicable): Just the ones above. (I may make a paper doll not sure yet) Quest Approval: - Cost:1mil (Verify before posting)
[b]Username:[/b] One Little Jay [b]Starting Stage:[/b] Senior [b]Race:[/b] Hybrid ( Chimera & Fallen) [b]Base:[/b] Chimera I Horns 3 Fallen Wings Face 26 or 22
[b]Description:[/b] [list][*][i]Body:[/i] Pale Tan, freckles everywhere. [*][i]Eyes:[/i] One Green One Blue [*][i]Hair:[/i] Red (Ginger), Messy Man bun. Also a beard. Ref: [url=http://www.jutefashionmagazine.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/09/messy-bun.jpg]Like so[/url] [*][i]Clothes:[/i] [url=http://www.polyvore.com/mangirl/set?id=185216829]Outfit[/url]
[*][i]Horns:[/i] - CC [*][i]Wings:[/i] -CC [*][i]Tail:[/i] - CC [*][i]Claws:[/i] -CC [/list]
[b]References (if applicable):[/b] Just the ones above. (I may make a paper doll not sure yet) [b]Quest Approval:[/b] - [b]Cost:[/b]1mil (Verify before posting)
Posted: Tue Dec 29, 2015 3:07 pm
My Story...
Early Childhood...
Carin was an orphan, though not a stone from the cache. He was born to two lovely mothers, as you may have guessed a Fallen and a Chimera. He was only a baby, when his mother Gimela fell ill from an unknown sickness. It quickly destroyed her and in as little as a week she was gone. The next year was extremely hard on his other mother Serena. When she passed Carin was told she died of a "broken heart". Being older now he realizes that that probably wasn't true, but it was probably easier to believe than the truth. Since the death of both of his mothers happened at such an early age in his life he has nearly no memories of them, he keeps a picture of his mothers but mostly grew up in an orphanage.
Loosing his mothers hasn't affected him as far as it would any other orphan since he didn't really know them. However, it does make him face his own mortality with the realization that anything could happen. He tends to live each day like it's his last because of this. He also tends to baby anyone who he feels attached to for their own safety. "Oh no let me see those scissors, I'll cut it for you." He keeps the picture of him as a reminder of where he has come from. To always remind himself he is loved.
School...
Carin was a loud child, he was rambunctious and a bit of a nut. He made many "friends". To be fair everyone in his eyes was a friend, and most of the freshlings he played with grew up to be quite distant from him. One day when his very best friend in the world confessed her love to the boy Carin had crushed on since the day he laid eyes on him, it really shook him to the core. He began to become more and more withdrawn and less likely to want to be friends with someone. He is still friendly but is much more of a wont speak until spoken to kind of guy.He has always been secluded from others due to his lack of actually being part of a solidified race. There are others like him, hybrids but he secretly wished he was part of a "pure" race.
He doesn't hate any particular race, nor does he really prefer any of them. He tends to feel more at home with other hybrids and races that don't fly. He thinks it's embarrassing to explain to flying races that he is scared of flying. He had a hard time learning how to fly and once he did her would often fall. He also believes (falsely) that his wings are too frail to actually support him and that if he tried to fly any distance they would break and he would die.
The Future...
Carin is a proud member of the Enoch house, he focuses mostly on his love of math and engineering hoping to one day to attend Leviathan University Majoring in Engineering. He is a hopeless romantic, but is a strong believer in monogamous relationships. He doesn't look down on Triads, he just prefers something a little more "his". He would like to have a large family one day.
He probably feels this way partly because of his mothers and their love story. Also because he can be kind of selfish and doesn't believe in sharing affections.
Carin is not the first person to speak, nor is he one to engage in a conversation. He is however a supper accepting fella. He rarely holds grudges very long and while he may not trust you the same you will still be treated with the same amount of respect and kindness.
Contemplative...
Carin often takes time in decisions, he will weigh every side of a situation before confirming one way or another. Sometimes this can be seen as a wise thing and keeps him out of trouble. While other times it is seen as an annoying trait, that can cause others to see him as picky or slow.
Protective...
Carin is no longer quick to consider someone a friend, but once he has established that he will be loyal to a fault. This can be good, when sticking up for a friend however sometimes this protectiveness can come off as jealousy. Since he has few friends he often can be a bit clingy and needy when it comes to attention.
Lazy
Carin is a master procrastinator. He doesn't do anything that could be done another day. This can often result in sloppy or not fully put together projects. It also can be attributed to his messiness since he never wants to have to clean.
Forgetful
Carin seems to have a hard time remembering things. Whether it be something he was supposed to do, an important date, something he was supposed to bring. You name it he has probably forgotten about it once in his life. This doesn't mean he doesn't care or it is unimportant, he just tends to zone out and loose track of his responsibilities.
Other Personalities traits that need less explaining: Let me know If you'd like me to expand on any of these.
Something has just reminded your Nightmare of a poignant memory. What was it, and what was the memory?
Standing in the courtyard he slipped his crossword puzzle back into his book bag and began to look around for a familiar face to talk to, it seemed odd to him that he really didn't recognize anyone. Perhaps the sun was just getting in his eyes, he held one hand over his glasses to block the glare and continued to look around for someone familiar and that's when he saw them. There they were right there out in the open for all to see, holding hands and cuddling. It was enough to make him want to gag. He couldn't help but remember...
It was a day most like any other day and the Junior got ready for class, it was his favorite class because he had his two favorite people in the class with him. his best friend Crissy, and the love of his life Darek (or so he thought at the time.) Now ofcourse he hadn't actually told anyone other than Crissy about his plan to woo Darek into falling in love and living happily ever after but it was still a solid plan in his head.
Today was the day, he was finally going to ask Darek out on a date, he was going to make his feelings for him clear and official. Crissy had helped him pick out the perfect outfit, she had given him about a hundred pep talks, finally Carin was ready. Walking into his class he saw what he never would forget.
It was Crissy kissing Darek, it was almost enough to make Carin faint, infact he did feel a bit dizzy and had to sit down. Later that day when Carin went to confront Crissy she told him that her and Darek had been seeing each other for a while, and that she hadn't known how to tell Carin. It was all to much for Carin who spent the rest of the day in bed crying.
Now they were all seniors, Carin hadn't spoken to either of them since that day, and he had no intention to now. He turned away from the two and started to walk in the other direction, maybe there was someone worth talking to over here.
Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2016 2:49 pm
One Little Jay
Critique incoming!
Appearance: Something minor, but maybe say where the bow should go on the outfit reference? Everything else seems pretty straight forward. Just for clarity, you want Chimera ears? You might want to specify. And are you leaving the face choice up to the colorist?
Backstory: You've discussed what he thought of his own race, but what of others? There seems to be some jealousy towards pure races. How has losing his mothers/being an orphan affected him? Does this also play into him thinking before taking action and being protective of his loved ones? This might be something to develop more with his keeping their picture so he's thought of them. Would you say that their relationship kind of set the ideals for what he wants in a relationship? If not, what has? And does the other mother have a name? C8
Personality: Since you expanded upon three of the positives, maybe you could expand upon three of the negative/neutral traits just so we get a clearer picture of who he is. He's afraid of heights and of flying, so with him being a mix of two races that can fly, is there any drawbacks of not flying? For example, bullying? That might be something that could add to his backstory, especially because it's something he wants to overcome. And was there something that caused this fear? This isn't mandatory to have, but just something to add considering the Daydreams coming to the Below, what are his feelings on this? Is there any prejudice towards the Daydreams?
Added: 2 negative traits and expanded on them Expanded on loosing his mothers. What implications their death has on his life. Explained how their death affects current relationships. Named other mother. (I need to verify if Nightmares can die from falling from high places, like flying and suddenly falling before I write in how she died.) Edited in how he feels about other races (including daydreams.) Hinted to his previous experiences with flying and expanded more on his irrational fear. Explained why he feels the way he does about monogamous relationships.
Edited in some things for his appearance.
mewmew kittykat94
Posted: Thu Jan 07, 2016 7:49 pm
One Little Jay
I think you elaborated pretty well! And I can answer that for you. That can be a cause of death -nods- they're just like humans in that sense and that level of trauma can result in death.
