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Name: Aurora Imogen St. Grey

Nickname: Imagi

Age: 14

Birthday: May 31

Sign: Gemini

Gemstone: Pearl

Blood Type: AB

Fav. Food: Any rice candy, such as mochi

Hated Food: Picky eater, but especially dislikes sour things

School: Crystal Academy, on academic scholarship

Hobbies:

Bio-alchemy - Imagi has taken a liking to plants and herbs. She knows the properties of herbs and can recognize various scents. She grows her own herbs for use in herbal remedies and is always ready to share some of her concoctions, whether they work or not. Imagi has a great sense of smell and taste and will often pick up the scent of a plant while foraging or keep a few tea leaves or mint on her for making snacks.

Fact Finder - Imagi enjoys learning new things. She can often be found doing research in the library. She will try and learn everything she can about one subject. Sometimes her interests bounce from one thing to another. She often re-reads books she finds interesting. Imagi often spouts facts she finds.

A Suprise in Every Capsule - Imagi loves gashapon machines. She got used to collecting the capsules while at the arcade since she has too poor of eye-sight to play the video games. She organizes the trinkets she wins in her room and keeps almost everything, but she will give some to friends on occasion as good luck charms. Imagi also collects cards. She especially likes the kind with the magic monsters in the pocket-sized balls. She treasures her special holo-foil cards and offering her one is a sure way to get on her good side. Imagi can often be found placing cards in their special clear protectors, battling against herself or just admiring them.

Virtues:

Forever in My Memory - Imagi has an eidetic memory. She remembers most things she hears or sees. She does not have perfect recall and things can be hazy, however. This mostly just results in random knowledge being recalled and added to a conversation when it's not needed, but at times this can be a great asset, especially when you just can't remember that one thing you just have to know. Imagi is very detail-oriented and her unique memory allows her to be resourceful.

Heart of the Matter - Imagi is level-headed. She thinks things through before acting and has a calm mind. She is not emotional which allows her to be objective when others can't. She is extremely observant. Imagi sees the bigger picture and will forgo her own plans to see another's through.

Blind Insight - Imagi is rather wise. She may be near-sighted physically, but the girl is insightful when it comes to difficult situations that amass in life. She is very introspective and uses that insight to help others in need of sound advice. Imagi may not always have the social skills, but she does have wisdom that belies her often awkward persona.

Flaws:

Expressions Not Included - Imagi is notoriously hard to read. She has never taken much note of other people's expressions and can fail to notice when someone is emotional. She also doesn't show much emotion herself. But if you can get even the smallest smile or smirk from her, you know she is very happy.

In Another World - Imagi can get lost in thought. She often interrupts people or loses people in a conversation if it takes too long. She doesn't mean to, but she can drift off into her own imagination on a whim. She often does not make eye contact and this can make others think she is rude or disinterested.

Just Like Animals - Imagi doesn't understand social cues. She behaves oddly and moves awkwardly, sometimes perching on an object and just staring. This gets in the way of Imagi making friends as she can seem odd to others. Sometimes this trait makes her seem younger than she is.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Blue like sister's, clouded and wears glasses for seeing close objects

Hair: Dark grey, long and loose with a loop on either side with two star clips on either side

Face: Pale and expressionless

Clothes: School uniform, but can usually also be found with a light grey v-neck sweater

Hey, Meighei! Second verse, same as the first. smile

As a general note, you may want to scale back her vision problems, as completely or nearly-blind characters are typically inadvisable.

Hobbies

Bio-Alchemy - I would love to know more about what Imagi does with herbs and plants. Does she grow her own, or does she visit specialty shops? What does she do with them? Does she cook, make extracts, soaps, etc? How long has she been interested in this?

Solitaire - Solitaire is a specific card game. I think you might want to call this something more appropriately descriptive like "Collectible Card Games". Also, just say Pokemon. wink Does Imagi just collect cards, or does she also like to play the associated game? Does she collect the characters she thinks look pretty, or the strongest cards, or does she want to have the complete set?

A Surprise in Every Capsule - How long has she been collecting? What does she do with her winnings? Does she keep them? If yes, how does she display them?

Virtues

Forever in my Memory - What does Imagi's eidetic memory enable her to do? Does she impress people by remembering minute details about their lives? Is she particularly thoughtful in her gift-giving? Does she never, ever miss a birthday? Basically, how does this trait impact her every-day life and become something that affects her interactions with others?

Luck favors the blind - Having good luck is not a virtue, but Imagi's ability to have others do things for her is intriguing. You might want to consider changing this to something that Imagi is more active in doing, like being considerate towards others and good at asking for things politely and skilled at sincere thank-yous and apologies? Polite, maybe?

You Didn't Know you Needed to Know That - What form does Imagi's resourcefulness take? Does she go out of her way to be prepared for all situations, always carry around a first aid kit, study survival techniques, etc, or is it more of a passive thing where she has just picked up knowledge over time?

Flaws

Expressions Not Included - Please consider the following article about blindness and facial expressions and reconsider this trait. smile Imagi could still be a fairly reserved person, but a lack of expression based on blindness is scientifically inaccurate.

In Another World - How long does it take for Imagi to get bored with a conversation? Does she interrupt them because she wants to change the subject, or because she wants to get straight to the point, or because her thoughts have gone elsewhere?

Just Like Animals - How does this impact Imagi's interactions with others? Does she find it difficult to pick up on subtext and body language? Does she have issues with personal space and understanding when she is making people uncomfortable? In general, considering both how the trait makes the character act and how this impacts their life helps make for a well-rounded write-up. smile

Senshi Stuff

Sailor Scout Attack So it absorbs attacks. Cool. What would happen if a Negaverser's weapon were to go through it? Would it be restored eventually?

Super Sailor Scout Attack How long is the target teleported to the other dimension for? What is this other dimension like?

Eternal Sailor Attack I don't understand what this has to do with her sphere. sad The effects of this attack read more like a knight's summons than like a senshi attack. You may want to go back to the drawing board on this one.

Anyway, like with your other profile, you've got some great basics here! But I do think that you would benefit a lot from some fleshing out and also from rethinking some problem areas. smile

Should I change her sphere to something like teleportation? Asking for some advice on this as I don't know exactly how powerful these characters should be.

my understanding of the locked spheres list is it's to be taken literally, rather than in the spirit of the listed power - so while dimensions relates to space, it may be acceptable as it's not literally space.

teleportation might also be good! if you'd like to brainstorm ideas, i would be happy to assist over pm or aim.

You asked in the thread if your senshi's fuku was too dark, and I think (in general) so long as the predominant color is white for the bodice, and the darker colors do not overpower the core aspects and theme of the standard uniform, than it's fine. You have a very mild grey and pink and a dark green, which reminds me of pluto! I think it's fine.

That said, I do think that perhaps you ought to chose a different sphere. Dimensions, as well as Summons, the partnered quest you have, are both aspects of play in the shop and game mechanics. It becomes difficult to give them a premise as a playable sphere when they embody meta level elements and mechanics. (Dimensions in AUs, in actual worlds, settings etc, Summons in how youma, weapons, and knight summons work), Unfortunately, that would be the same line that I don't think teleportation would really be a workable quest. Teleportation and such mechanics are very centrally a negaverse and knight-centric ability, so i am hesitant in how much of her powers or what kind would be permissible.

That being said, something more possible might be Reflection rather than Dimension. Reflections can become distorted, they can alter the way we see things, and such. An alternative for Summons might be Companions- as then its more about something that exists in a bond rather than creating one or calling to an existing bond. They're simple alternatives that would be I think, much less complex and possibly much less difficult to 'work around' in the setting while giving you what seems to be your thematic goals!

I also looked at your other senshi's fiuku and really do love the design. They've very old school in terms of being in line with the original show, yet also are very unique. A+

I am glad to know this newbling has at least done something right around here.

Sphere changed to banishment.

I rather know now than later on these things! I will change the radius.