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PostPosted: Sun Dec 06, 2015 10:05 am


>__< <3

I won her from the Thanksgiving Raffle... Finally ready for some crits/feedback XD
PostPosted: Sun Dec 06, 2015 10:05 am


User ImageName: Venetia Allaway (Note; Img links to big <3)

Nickname: Idk to come with RP?

Age: 15

Birthday: July 14th, 2001

Sign: Leo, Bunny~

Gemstone: Ruby

Blood Type: B+

Fav. Food: Noodles (Pho, Pad Thai, Chow Mien...)

Hated Food: Dishes with only veggies. She needs her meat =K

School: St-Magsdalena's Seminary (Females only, dispriviledged backgrounds or bad behavior) - Not exactly bad behavior with her parents... But enough issues to need some help.

Hobbies:
- Muay Thai: Her parents thought it would be a good idea for her to 'release' her anger in some way. She picked muay thai and spends afternoons after school kicking butt. Venetia definitely isn't the best and gets her own butt kicked, but she's getting better... Slowly. If you ask her to spar, she won't say no.

- Anime/Manga: This is something she shares with people outside her school circle. She feels that this side of her shows weakness and she doesn't particularly like that. Time at home is spent mainly reading manga and watching anime. She does try and doodle comics, but let's face it... She's not all that great.

- Animal Shelter: At first, this started as something mandated by the school, but Venetia grew to enjoy spending her time helping the animals. Her inner desire would really like to take all the animals home, but she knows she'd be in deep sh*t with her parents. Well, and the fact that she hoards so much that she really doesn't have room for even one.

Virtues:
[+] Hand in Need: Venetia isn't the type to volunteer her services, but when she sees someone in need, she can't help but ask if they need assistance. Usually it's the super young or elderly (people whom she feels deserve help - anyone else can fend for themselves). If someone outside those age groups need help, they'd have to ask nicely and convince her. Eventually, she'll help, but loathe doing it.

[+] Creative: When faced with an issue, Venetia is good at thinking on her feet and resolving whatever may be the issue. She does enjoy toughing it out with people and may have had run in with the cops... But she thinks of ways (and usually) gets out of them. This is also a more handy trait, as she's good with a needle, but pretty horrible with a pen (she can sew but not draw/write XD).

[+] Driven/Passionate: Venetia is young, but she knows that she wants to do something great for the world. She doesn't know what it is specifically, so she continues doing basically anything to find out what it is. She uses both her mental and physical strength to get her to where she needs to be. There are times where she gets frustrated and angry, but she always picks herself up again and keeps going.

Flaws:
[-] Anger Management: Her anger is the reason why her parents sent her to St. Mags. She can't control herself when she gets mad and physically needs to let it out. For the most part, she can hold it in at school (there are some stray/hidden holes in the wall due to her). If she's mad at home, she lashes in her room (there are holes there hidden by her... stuff XD).

[-] Hoarder: One of the ways that Venetia tries to pass her anger is, well, shop. She wouldn't tell a stranger, but she likes all things cute and fluffy. The feel of the fur and satisfaction of spending distracts her. Her room is filled with stuffed animals, books/manga, DVDs... and pockets are almost void of cash. There may or may not have been a time she got in trouble for hoarding critters in need of help...

[-] Liar/Manipulator: With her creativity sometimes leads to her going over the top, Venetia can be seen as a good liar. She's not a CONSTANT lair (pathological), she just doesn't like being in trouble. Others usually see her as a 'good' girl at her school despite usually pushing the blame to someone else. She's enough of a bully that people won't disagree with her.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Brown

Hair: Brown w/ red highlights. Braided and pinned. Would drop down to her chest-ish when let down.

Face: Heart, thin lips, grinning. Dork.

Clothes: Fitted tops, jeans, heels.

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 06, 2015 10:06 am


Senshi: Cressida, Senshi of Gratitude

Challenge: Be grateful for what you have.

Fuku Colour: N/A
Main Color: Brown
Secondary Color: Black/Red

Fuku: N/A - See Art
--> Symbol: Gratitude

Attacks:
Sailor Scout Attack: Cressida, Echoed Obligation!
Cressida would stand with her legs apart, put one hand (she favors left) in extended in front of her (the right hand is at her elbow supporting the extended left arm) and call out her attack. It would summon a small energy shield. It's only useful if she's being attacked either with magic or physically. The shield lets her take part of the damage and the other part is absorbed. The energy absorbed is used to heal minor wounds. It is immediate use and disappears after enemy attacks. If she's attacked from behind, she basically loses concentration and the shield goes away. (The shield has to he HIT in order to be healed.) Can be used twice in battle and only takes head on attacks. If the shield is not hit immediately, she would be able to have it for 30 seconds before it disappears.

Super Sailor Scout Attack: Cressida, Mirrored Appreciation!
Cressida would stand with her legs apart, put both hands extended in front of her and call out her attack. It would summon a small energy shield. It's only useful if she's being attacked either with magic or physically. The shield lets her take part of the damage and absorb the rest. The energy absorbed is used to heal minor wounds of herself and one other ally nearby (5ft-ish). It is immediate use and disappears after enemy attacks. If she's attacked from behind, she basically loses concentration and the shield goes away. (The shield has to he HIT in order to be healed.) Can be used twice in battle and only takes head on attacks. If the shield is not hit immediately, she would be able to have it for 35 seconds before it disappears.

Eternal Sailor Attack: Cressida, Light of Gratitude!
Cressida stands with her legs apart (again) and calls out her attack while raising one hand upwards towards the sky. White light shoots down on her hand like a lightning rod and causes her to glow a bit. The glow is a protection she can use to protect herself and one other person (if needed). Person would need to be in range of 5 feet around her. It's a bubble-like effect and can:
- Fully protect from a tier 1 attack (doesn't bother her)
- Mostly protect from a tier 2 attack (mostly undamaged, MAYBE some minor scratches)
- Somewhat protect from a tier 3 attack (lessens the attack, stronger the attack, more visible on her)
- Can't be attacked from behind (full bubble-y shield)
- Can withstand any attacks for the duration of the attack
The other person (if any) takes no damage and is basically Cressida 'repaying/showing her gratitude to' whomever it is. Effect lasts for ~45 seconds. Can be used once in battle. Length is shorter if she's used previous attacks.
PostPosted: Fri Jul 22, 2016 11:26 am


Finally have some body to this if people want to give crits and ideas.

Open to changing her sphere for... easier ideas for attacks. XD;

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 22, 2016 1:50 pm


ATh e a r t
Finally have some body to this if people want to give crits and ideas.

Open to changing her sphere for... easier ideas for attacks. XD;


Hey!

I really like her sphere! O DO And how she looks dayum <3

And the attack, from what I'm reading I think it sounds good, and I think that the length and the amount is good. I am curious about physical attacks, but I like it! I think the other thought was that I really like the repaying/showing gratitude to whomever it is. Does this limit it to one person attacking or can she protect from a group?
PostPosted: Fri Jul 22, 2016 1:58 pm


Never Crazy
ATh e a r t
Finally have some body to this if people want to give crits and ideas.

Open to changing her sphere for... easier ideas for attacks. XD;


Hey!

I really like her sphere! O DO And how she looks dayum <3

And the attack, from what I'm reading I think it sounds good, and I think that the length and the amount is good. I am curious about physical attacks, but I like it! I think the other thought was that I really like the repaying/showing gratitude to whomever it is. Does this limit it to one person attacking or can she protect from a group?


Yeah I kind of want to give her physical attacks for the first 2, but I can't figure out how something physical could relate to gratitude ;__;''

Would it be OP if she could withstand a group? I can't see it taking more than 1-2 people tho xD

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Never Crazy

Sugary Strawberry

PostPosted: Fri Jul 22, 2016 2:19 pm


ATh e a r t


It might be a little if it's too many, probably has a threshold for that then.

Well I was thinking maybe for the other two it could be something like "Humble Gratitude" and "Endless Gratitude" for the power up? Not necessarily those names, but a "giving back" sort of attack. I know in some cultures if you want to show gratitude for like a gift you're supposed to give back at least half of the value of that gift back. So that might be an angle.
PostPosted: Fri Jul 22, 2016 2:23 pm


Never Crazy


Thanks for the ideas 8D I'll keep pondering and see what else I can think of XDD

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 27, 2016 10:05 pm


Hi ATheart~

First off I wanna say congrats on Cressida~ before I can stamp her I'd like to discuss somethings regrading her attacks.

I noticed that Cressida's basic and super attacks as they stand right now are very close to Amytis' attacks.

The hardest part about making the attacks have physical repercussions is making sure that there's not any toe step or players are comfortable with the differences, as I was going to suggestion something but then stopped and thought about another person it could toe-step which was Corvus. Which knocked my suggestion of 'paying it forward' / 'giving back'.

Gratitude unfortunately feels a little more on the defensive side, but I'm sure there's a way to go offensive/rebound without toe-stepping, I just don't have a solid good suggestion at the moment to try and help with this as I've been picking my brain.

That said you could offer a buff from gratitude, extra energy, healing or perhaps confusion? (I've literally been digging up websites to try and help me figure out where to go and if I could figure a suggestion that wouldn't toe-step that would include a physical aspect.) Confusion would perhaps do more with sarcastic gratitude or unexpected gratitude which would be what basically happens on a battlefield - largely because who expects someone to thank them when they've hit that person?

Or maybe you could try something more compulsion based? She could heal a target and in return they feel compelled to show gratitude by protecting her?

That said her Eternal attack though seems fine, if not a little on the weak side to me. I think if you wanted you could drop the part about the shield breaking, since she can still take damage and you'd be okay there until the effect ends.

If you want any help, need suggestions or someone to bounce things off I'm here and more than happy to help any way that I can or if you just need me to come back quote me and I'll be here.

ATh e a r t
omg I'm so sorry about the double quote my laptop cut off the bottom
PostPosted: Wed Jul 27, 2016 10:28 pm


LP


Thanks for the help XD Haha no worries about the double quote.

Easy stuff first. I removed her eternal shield breaking so now it'll just be up for the duration of the attack (~45 seconds)

For the basic and super... What if instead of reflecting it was absorbed? Like... The basic one would absorb part of the attack and give her an energy boost (Idk it could heal her minor wounds?) Then the super attack absorbs as well... buffs (or heals) her and one other teammate?

/random idea xD

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 27, 2016 10:43 pm


ATh e a r t


No problem, I'm more than happy to help!

That would work for basic and super!

Oh also, since you're going that way, one the shield I did have a couple of questions. IF she's not attacked directly on the shield for basic and super does the shield stay up until hit, or does it disappear when she's hit at any angle? (I'm curious because if it's not hit it would need a duration time to disappear in.)

Quote me back and I'll be here, but it might be tomorrow before I reply it's late. sweatdrop
PostPosted: Wed Jul 27, 2016 10:53 pm


LP


Okay edited the basic and super attacks 8D Also added that the energy shield needs to be hit. If she's attack from behind she loses it~

Also, is it possible for me to PM me you asking about something else (not related to Cressida)?

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 28, 2016 7:13 pm


ATh e a r t


I don't mind, if it's something I can help with I will. 3nodding

Also, before I can stamp the super and basic, the two do need a time limit just in case she isn't hit at all; I know that's not something commonly plotted, but it could happen and she shouldn't be able to hold the shield all day if she's not hit. So just to have a time limit as a fall back is nice.
PostPosted: Thu Jul 28, 2016 10:19 pm


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ATh e a r t


I don't mind, if it's something I can help with I will. 3nodding

Also, before I can stamp the super and basic, the two do need a time limit just in case she isn't hit at all; I know that's not something commonly plotted, but it could happen and she shouldn't be able to hold the shield all day if she's not hit. So just to have a time limit as a fall back is nice.


Okay! Added 20 seconds for basic and 30 for super <3

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 29, 2016 7:13 pm


ATh e a r t


I actually think you can boost the Basic up to 30 and the Super to 35~
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