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Name: Eden. Just Eden.
Age: Appears to be 22
Race/Species: Hala
Sex/Gender: Male
Sexual Preference: Heterosexual
Grade Level: 4th Year College
Dorm: Ashwood
Abilities: Most hali are incredibly powerful, but Eden's power are limited. He has control over the weather, but he can only do so much. Nature just takes over the rest. Being a hala, he can turn into a storm cloud, a raven, and a thick black mist. Eden is capable of causing great mental and physical harm to you just by being in his presence, but he can also grant riches and fortune to those who stay on his good side.
School of Learning: School of Trade
Club: Video Game Club, Cooking Club
History:Not much is known about Eden, but he is one of the only male hala to ever exist. Nobody knows how old he is, other than the fact that he is older than he looks, by a lot. At one point in his life, his powers were nullified, though he will not speak of it. A large cross-shaped scar on his back tells of some great trauma that he endured, however, and may give people a clue as to why he is the way he is. He barely ever reveals anything about his past, you more or less have to pry it out of him if you want answers, including answers about what species he is. Because Eden's main food source is children, he goes on mad rampages when he gets hungry, often raiding schools or playgrounds, leaving no witnesses alive. Because he has found that chewing gum helps to ward off his hunger, there is almost always a piece in his mouth. He has decided to come to this school because he wants to find a few people like him that won't hurt or abandon him, like plenty of others have in the past. Plus, there are children attending this academy. Maybe he'll grab a few free meals while he's here.
Personality: Eden is very territorial, and will literally plan to kill you if you damage or steal something of his. It's a natural instinct that he has, it's just part of being a hala. He doesn't care who he hurts or kills, but will sacrifice his own life to save a close friend. Once he has found those worthy of his friendship and trust, he stays loyal to them, always helping them out when they are in need.

YOOOOOO so overall Eden looks pretty good, but I have just a few concerns, so if you could please bear with me. And uh....I'm super wordy, so if this ends up being really long, please don't take it the wrong way.

You say that Eden "is capable of causing great mental and physical harm to you just by being in his presence". This is somewhat concerning, as I can see it being extremely over-powered. If you could please elaborate more and/or tone it down, that'd be great. Also, how was he not arrested for killing people? Seems like a capital offense to me, but maybe that's just me. HAHAHA. As for why he's attending college at whatever mysterious older age, is it purely to meet people like him? In that case, did he attend college previously and is just returning, or did he attend primary/secondary school in his youth and put off college until later? Or maybe he just lived his years in ignorance until he decided, "hey, it's time to make friends and smarten up this old noggin' while I'm there"? HAHA It's just something I think would be good to know.

Uh other than that, he looks good to me. The only major thing was that one power. The others are just details, I guess. Quote one of us when you're ready for another look. ^^
Oh, and YOU'RE SO GOOD AT CHOOSING PICTURES. LIKE WOW.