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Name: Lunesce Alnexus

Age: 18

Birthday: December

Sign: Ophiuchus

Gemstone: White topaz

Blood Type: O-

Fav. Food: Pastries, tea

Hated Food: Spicy foods

School: Destiny City University dropout; she wanted to skip gen ed and go straight to the things she's interested in!

Hobbies:

• Programming - Yeah, I developed a tic tac toe game when I was six. Soldering and building computers from scratch, totally done as a kid. Now I make programs for, like, public media apps and security companies to help them track and monitor their routes. I can do websites too, I guess. Kind of boring. Microcontrollers though, those are fun.
  
• Tinkering - Ooh, how does this work? Let me just grab my screwdriver and.. --what do you mean I can’t put it back together again! Just watch me! Gosh I have so many gadgets now.. Have I shown you my drone yet?

Virtues:

• Hope - I can fix this! We can fix this! Failed again? TRY AGAIN!
  
• Wonder - Humans and science and everything are simply amazing! Looking at the cells and how everything is all balanced and interconnected is beautiful. There’s always something new to learn!
  
• Determined - I will search every database 'til I find what I'm looking for. I'll.. I'll even go outside to get to the library to hunt through the books!

Flaws:

• Ego - It’s not egotistical if it’s true! I’m just that great.
  
• Focused - Huh? What? I don’t know, I probably ate yesterday. Or day before. Sorry I forgot we were gonna hang out today. Let me finish this project in juusstt a minute..
  
• Snoop - I promise not to look! Oh, wouldja look at that..

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Rectangle glasses. Wide eyes. Ice blue.

Hair: Rich dark maroon-brown, down to her knees. Bangs frame the face down to jaw line. Or.. something? Just a mass of hair all over in some fancy design or other?!

Face: Extremely pale skin, narrow face.

Clothes:

• Harness: Brown leather. She wears this to help prevent shoulder slump from working at the computer all the time. Worn over her shirt to prevent chafing.
  
• Bolero: Long sleeve.
  
• Shirt: Long shirt/skirt or vest.
  
• Pants: Black skinny jeans
  
• Spats: Knit
  
• Shoes: Victorian-inspired heels
  
• Messenger bag: Black with silver embroidery.
  

Artist's note: Flexible on her design, really. You can make it look more like the text desc, the avatar, or make up your own from scratch. No finalized color scheme. Have fun with it! I enjoy tiny details like seam lines and layers : >

Hi Mist! I'm here to give your official read over.

I think you have a very strong skeleton of a character right now! You have the right amount of virtues to flaws, with a balanced amount of hobbies, but her profile has to little of details to really flesh out her character. Mostly it feels like, while I can have an idea, it's mostly assumptions on my part and you know what they say about assumptions!

I think if you expand on both her virtues and flaws to showcase how they are labelled as such, would really help us give a clearer picture of who she is as a character!

For example: For the trait Hope: How is this benefical to her? How is this a good trait for her? Does she find hope in the most dismal of places, does it carry her through the night sometimes?

Or for flaws the trait Focused: Does she tend to lose track of time? Does being too focused means that she tunes out other important things? Dos she forget to eat?

I think with just a couple more sentences for them, It would really help understand the character a bit more!

Thanks so much hun, Quote me when you are done editing and I'll drop down to read over again <3