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tefla

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 04, 2015 11:27 pm


Name: Rayna Farrell

Nickname: No nicknames please. Rayna dislikes them.

Age: 15

Birthday: April 1

Sign: Aries

Gemstone: Diamond

Blood Type: B+

Fav. Food: Dairy products. Ice cream and cheese top the list.

Hated Food: Anything spicy. A little bit of kick is okay but things like peppers or things like that .. nope.

School: Meadowview High School

Hobbies:
Treasure Hunting:
Whether it be scanning shelves in an antique shop or using her aging metal detector in parks and at the beach Rayna fancies herself a collector of ancient treasures. Every Sunday she can be seen around Destiny City with her metal detector. It takes patience to work a grid pattern in a large field but Rayna's stubbornness does not allow quitting until she deems a place thoroughly searched. She has amassed quite a collection of foreign coins and other material at home. All the coins are cleaned off and placed carefully in sleeves. In antique shops Rayna looks for the unusual finds. The more unusual the item is the more interest she has in it. There is always the risk of being suckered by a shop keeper but Rayna's gained confidence in her ability to pick out authentic items.

Paranormal Activity:
Rayna loves anything to do with the paranormal. Be it possible haunted buildings or strange sightings Rayna gobbles it all up. She has a cork board at home with various clippings of strange events in the city. She reads all the information books and has dug into the history of Destiny City to figure out what sites around town might be considered haunted. Certainly with the violence in the city and the mysterious deaths there are a lot of potential places to explore. Sneaking out late at night has not endeared her parents to this hobby. She's been grounded numerous times but she just can't stop herself from getting answers.

Virtues:
Determined:
When Rayna sets her mind to doing something she gives it her all. Be it a project at school, searching for buried treasure (lol) or just trying to prove she is right Rayna puts all of her effort into the task at hand. In school she works with a quiet determination to finish projects and homework assignments. If there is something that she has found in an antique shop and wants to bring home she will doggedly look up research on what she's found. Rayna's determined approach helps her maintain an aura of order. She focuses on what needs to be done and does it.

Approachable (Friendly):
Although it may be hidden at times Rayna's extremely friendly. She gives out smiles just as easily as they come. The teen feels that she could befriend just about anyone. Sometimes it just takes a little longer for her to "worm" her way into forging a friendship. Once it is there though Rayna makes sure to cultivate it slowly as pushing too fast and too hard can be detrimental. She is by no means in the popular crowd but she is not a loner either. Being in the middle is a happy medium for her.

Curious (Questions, all the questions):
Rayna's sense of curiosity is never quiet. She likes asking questions in order to get answers. It helps her dig up answers about the strange objects that she might find. She is a little more quiet with her curious nature around others but just by sitting around those that are talking she can find out a lot about what is going on in Destiny City or just in the lives of her friends. There is just something always going on and Rayna loves to know what it is. Her curiosity extends into the classroom. She'll ask any question that will help her understand things more clearly.


Flaws:
Gossip Queen: If there is one thing Rayna cannot do it is control how much she will talk about others. Most of the time Rayna is only passing on what she hears or observes about others. She is a sucker for juicy stories and will eagerly lap up everything and then regurgitate it back out to anyone who cares to listen. Although it is really hard for Rayna to not share salacious details about her friends she does her best to guard her tongue when talking about them or hanging out with them. She knows that gossiping is an hurtful action but she cannot help herself. There is the occasional time when her controls slips and then it is time for damage control.

Stubborn:
Perhaps mule-headed would be a better descriptor for Rayna. It might be harsh to think of a fifteen year old as such but it fits her to a tee. Rayna will sit and argue with anyone over a topic in which she feels she is right. She does not even care once the other "party" has dropped the conversation. She'll keep nitpicking at it until she's rested her case. This stubbornness also extends to someone telling Rayna she cannot do something when she clearly believes she can. Her stubborn streak will kick in and she will set off to prove the challenger wrong. Usually this ends in Rayna learning the hard way that she isn't always right. On the rare occasion though Rayna will succeed and it further motivates her to not change her stubborn nature.

Fussy:
Rayna's very particular about things in her environment. Be it her room at home or her locker at school everything needs to be in its assigned place. It's not Obsessive-Compulsive Disorder though. Rayna just cannot abide looking at disorder. Everything has to be organized. There is something abhorrent about entering a room that is not up to her standards of neatness. In extreme cases of being with friends (like at there home) Rayna might start moving things around in order to bring some sort of semblance to the area.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Color: mix of purple/blue. (See powered art for shape)

Hair: Purplish in color. Falls past her shoulders when in civilian form. (( See powered art ))

Face: Looks oval on powered art. Ears a bit on the large size and pierced. (( see powered art ))

Clothes: Meadowview Outfit.
PostPosted: Wed Nov 04, 2015 11:29 pm


Senshi: Myrrha, Senshi of Scents

Challenge: Time to wake up and smell the roses!

Fuku Colour: --- see below
Main Color: --- see below
Secondary Color: --- see below

Fuku: --- see below

Collar -- see below
Bow -- see below
Bodice -- see below
Sleeves -- see below
Brooch -- see below
Bottoms -- see below
Tiara -- see below
Choker -- see below
Shoes -- see below
Gloves -- see below
Accessories -- see below

Attacks: (( all support based. Her Sailor Scout Attack and Super Sailor Attack can enable Myrrha and her allies to flee if need be. These two attacks are based on hyperosmia. A condition in which an individual has a highly acute sense of smell.

Her Eternal attack can give her allies the extra little push to take down an enemy ))

Sailor Scout Attack: Myrrha's Revolting Odor
Myrrha concentrates her energy and calls out her attack. She points to a single enemy and sends the energy in their direction. If the energy hits the target they will find that their sense of smell has been dramatically increased. They could be overwhelmed by scents found around them, be it good or bad. This attack duration would last 20 seconds. Generally the target has to be within a six-foot radius to Myrrha when she calls her attack. Any target outside this radius will either escape the attack entirely or only be partially affected.

This attack can be used twice per battle.

Super Sailor Scout Attack: Myrrha's Repugnant Stench
Myrrha concentrates her energy and calls out her attack. She can select up to two enemies close together and sends the energy in their direction. If the energy hits the targets they will find that their sense of smell has been dramatically increased. They could be overwhelmed by scents found around them, be it good or bad. This attack duration would last 45 seconds. Generally the targets have to be within a ten-foot radius to Myrrha when she calls her attack. The targets must also be standing within two feet of each other. Any targets outside this radius will either escape the attack entirely or only be partially affected.

This attack can be used twice per battle.

Eternal Sailor Attack: Myrrha's Appealing Invigoration
Myrrha inhales deeply and calls her attack forth. She'll send out a wave of energy towards her allies. Once it connects her allies could experience an odor that is appealing to them. The odor would differ from ally to ally. But the effect it has would be that it could rejuvenate enough energy for her allies to push on in battle. Generally the radius doesn't extend more than 30 feet from where Myrrha is standing. The duration of the attack lasts for 60 seconds. The downside to this attack is that the energy wave cannot differentiate who is an ally and who is not so Myrrha has to be extra cautious when using this attack.

This attack can be used once per battle.

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 07, 2015 8:23 pm


I am looking for some helpful crits on Rayna/Myrrha. smile
PostPosted: Sun Nov 08, 2015 10:12 pm


tefla


Hey, Tefla! I don't think Myrrha needs much crit at all! She is just about ready for a trial stamp and I only have one thing to say before I drop it! For the attacks it is always best to have a concrete duration, so rather than 15-20 seconds or 30-45, you could go with 20 and 45 respectively!

The Eternal attack has a very large radius and a fairly long duration, but given that it seems to affect everyone in the area rather than just allies, I think that makes up for any concerns I would have with it!

Please quote me if you have any questions or make any changes and I'll be back as soon as possible!


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tefla

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 08, 2015 10:22 pm


Kyuseisha no Hikari
tefla


Hey, Tefla! I don't think Myrrha needs much crit at all! She is just about ready for a trial stamp and I only have one thing to say before I drop it! For the attacks it is always best to have a concrete duration, so rather than 15-20 seconds or 30-45, you could go with 20 and 45 respectively!

The Eternal attack has a very large radius and a fairly long duration, but given that it seems to affect everyone in the area rather than just allies, I think that makes up for any concerns I would have with it!

Please quote me if you have any questions or make any changes and I'll be back as soon as possible!

Thanks. I edited the duration times for her Sailor Attack and Super Attack. (Made them concrete as suggested)
PostPosted: Sun Nov 08, 2015 10:36 pm


tefla


Fabulous! Thanks so much; have fun playing her!

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