13th King
Makako-ma
What
3nodding we want?
We want active role players that would like to put there own little story in what they would be doing if, the world was seemingly coming to a end, and what side would you be on.
This is that I'm bored your bored lets throw down with Infinite NPC's or Intense extended battle kind of guilds.
The find love in the darkest of times kind of guild. Something in that manner.
We don't have set plot characters. Not exactly.
We would need leaders from both sides or possible three side. I created a place for Demons and gods just for extended rp and possibly help with some bad guys.
There is also a place for request. If you would like to have a character made that would help in your plot, throw it out there and maybe someone will be it.
We can all have part in the major plot because from character creation you can go any place in the world you want and do whatever try not to die. If you read the front page. Read the setting which is more of what really needs help... And then read the top of wherever you go. Add a little Imagination and you should be good to go.
You mean the home page?
"A world filling with Shadow, shaping a new world. A world for the strong, and SuperNatural."
Shadow is overtaking the world. If I join I may have to fight or join this, in any case if I bring my friends with me we have to get divided by this or unite on the same side. Basically we will have to work around this. Gonna have to look more into this.
It says this is "A world for the strong" but im new... will I have fun with a weak character? Can I really make a strong character or do I have to develop my character?
"They called it Armageddon, and it possibly will be, or was. Demons, and beasts of Shadow pick off man kind. Something deep hidden behind the portal of the shadow realm. "
Ok so theres a shadow realm. Keep in mind theres going to be a lot of those types who say "I manipulate all the shadows and im a half angel demon" and there will be a lot of ppl in a weird spot and it will get weirder if the history of the groups and your versions of demons and angels and all that aren't known.
You'll want to have that info ready.
" Ashworth was founded soon after deep in Aspen."
1. I don't understand this sentence
2. Tell me about aspen. This is on the homepage, I want to lather myself in your immersive story and let camels lick it off me like sweet marmalade, don't you dare judge me!
"Will earth become one with Shadow? Could the heavens help them or would they even want to?"
What happens if the world turns to shadow. This doesn't need to be on the front page but this is something else you will want to make clear especially if you want players joining both sides.
"Ashworth Safe haven.
50 years after the original Ashworth Academy closed it's gates to students, Three organizations reopen the gates as a safe haven for supernatural beings of all sorts and kinds to come live and train their abilities and hide from the vicious slayers that hunt them."
This could use more detail. As a new person I'm wondering what the original ashworth was and how the planet was overtaken in 50 years. Apparently Ashworth could only protect itself or we go helping a few safehavens somewhere?
After reading this I try to think of what kind of character I would want to make. I am not really getting any good ideas which is worse than getting bad ideas. I guess I'd be some sort of soldier? Or maybe im a student? Is it even really a school anymore? If I make a student and everyone else is action heroes I waste my time making a character and I'm unhappy.
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