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PostPosted: Sun Nov 01, 2015 7:51 am




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Name: Ninfia Lutino
(Ninfia from Ninfa, spanish word for nymph, which is part of the spanish word for cockatiel - cacatúa ninfa.
Lutino from lutino cockatiel!

Blood colour: A proud redblood - #ac312c

Gender: Agender (male-bodied), she/they pronouns (prefers they pronouns unless with close friends).

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Personality: Ninfia, taking after their lusus, is a very flashy and showy child, full of theatrics and boastful claims. They love to sing, and can often be found making up songs about things around the swamp when they're bored. They're a proud redblood, and even go so far as to paint their cheeks extra red to show off their blood color prominently. They can be fairly arrogant about it, which outside of the rebel camp would be nearly unheard of for a redblood, boasting about their talents and how great they are! They might even try to challenge other musically inclined trolls to a battle of sound.

Their lusus gives them plenty of attention, but like any good showtroll, Ninfia always craves more. They have a real "look at me! pay attention to me!" sort of attitude most of the time, with their bright colors and loud noises. They will bother others and interrupt them to keep the attention on themself. Ninfia is quite self-centered and careless to the needs of other trolls, when they still need to satisfy their own needs. They wouldn't do it on purpose to hurt someone, but they... might not be too sorry about it if someone brought it up. However, they are an affectionate child to those they're close to. They're always hugging and giving friendly kisses to their friends. They often get very touchy when they like someone. They've picked up a few flirtatious habits from their lusus, although it tends toward the side of conciliatory relationship flirting, since they're a bit young to be interested in other kinds.

Ninfia can be pretty stubborn at times, like any child. They don't like being told what to do so much, and while a loyal rebel, they tend to march to the beat of their own whistle. Authority might have a difficult time with them, although given proper incentive (attention or the promise of adventure usually does the trick), they can be convinced to participate. They are a bright and bubbly young troll, with a great love of adventure and daring exploration, eager to get a headstart on life.

Being born in the swamp and raised around rebels, they've grown accustomed to a certain level of equality, and find it almost shocking when they learn that trolls outside of their group don't often think the same way. Tieldad taught them to be proud of the blood color they were born with and being the vocal child they are, they freely tell their compatriots all about it. Tieldad, supporting Ninfia and making sure they stay safe (knowing he could always fly them away if things got bad), supports their stay with the rebels, knowing there is much more freedom for their child there than mainstream Alternia.

For hobbies, they've taken up what they could in the swamp, and in addition to their singing hobby, they're very invested in cute little instruments like bells and triangles, and sometimes uses them when they sing. As well, they're into making beads out of the mud and clay from the swamp and beading them together into simple jewelry. Since their lusus gifted them with their bracelet, they've come to see jewelry as a sign of affection. They like brightly colored objects and think the swamp is sorely in need of more brightness, color and shiny things! They decorate their hive, their weapon and everything they can with strings of beads. Right now all they do is clay and mud-based beads, but they would like to be able to make metal ones in the future.

Strengths:

Adventurous: Ninfia is very adventurous and loves exploring their home and finding every nook and cranny in the swamp! Although right now Tieldad doesn't let them venture far out of the swamp often for their own safety, they do have plans to explore all of Alternia someday! They have a good mental map from flying with their dad, and being able to think of things from a bird's eye view gives them an advantage when it comes to exploring the dense swamp they call home. As well, Ninfia is the kind of troll who likes to try new and exciting things, and will try unconventional paths to solve their problems when they can.
Cheerful: They always try their best to be a ray of moonlight for their friends, cheering them up with songs and platonic friend bracelets. They try to keep a positive outlook, even when things seem a bit grim. Although the swamp is better than Alternia at large for a proud redblood like Ninfia, it's still a lot of tough work, hiding and being paranoid about the next betrayal, the next attack. Rather than become consumed with those crushing negative feelings, they keep their upbeat attitude, knowing hope is always around the corner. The good future they're all working so hard on is close, and they'll all be free to live equally! They love the phoenix that rises from the ashes as the ultimate symbol of hope.
Nimble: Ninfia's a very small, light child known to climb trees and their giant lusus. Their slight frame makes it easy for their lusus to fly with them and move quickly and quietly among the trees they perch in. This also makes it easy for Ninfia to flee quickly when adventures go sour, and maneuver their way out of tight situations they get caught in.

Flaws:

Intrusive: They don't quite have a proper grasp on "personal space" or "privacy", and are known to interrupt others and bother them at inopportune times, and can take a bit of prodding to get them to leave someone alone. They do it somewhat out of personal desire to grab attention, and partly because they can't be bothered to wait until someone's done with their business to get their own done.
Stubborn: And even then, sometimes if Ninfia really really wants something, it's almost impossible to get them to back down! They can be stubborn as a mud brick if they think that's the best thing to be, and their headstrong nature can be dangerous and foolhardy at times.
Self-Centered: Ninfia has been raised to feel a lot of pride, and their pride... can sometimes become selfish and self-centered, causing them to ignore others needs in favor of their own. They enjoy doing things that please themselves even if it can be inconvenient to others, such as taking breaks when they are needed because they wanted one. Their boastful and boisterous personality makes them come across as rather arrogant, since they think so highly of themself and their skills.


Weapon: Staff with lots of feathers and beads with a bird claw carved out of wood on the top.

Appearance: Ninfia prides themself in looking like Tieldad's child. They always have a natural red flush to their cheeks which they enhance with makeup. They sport cute mohawk hair with a yellow stripe that resembles a cockatiel's crest and short double horns on each side of their head. They wear a robe-like top with feathered edges and a piece of cloth that trails behind them like a tail and a scarf, in bright yellows to grab attention. They like wearing various jewelry their favorite being a bracelet that Tieldad gave them when they was younger. They wear leggings and leg wraps around their legs. They complete the ensemble by painting their nails their blood color.

Home: The swamp! They both reside in a hollowed tree which leads to a treehouse up top

Lusus: Tieldad, a giant 16 foot tall cockatiel lusus. He is completely white except for his red cheeks which are actually pouches of blood. He whistles a lot and flirts with every other bird lusus he comes across (and sometimes some particularly bird-like trolls) due to his very strong bird instincts. He calls his child "Mijo" and the two are an inseparable pair. Tieldad taught them how to sing and just about everything they know. They love going for their early evening fly together. It's a bit of a ritual the two share when starting out their night. Ninfia rides in a handy child-carrying pouch that Tieldad wears around his chest. Tieldad loves Ninfia and shows them off at every opportunity, and Ninfia loves their lusus, and gives him kisses on his big beak. As a note, they sometimes have a "thick accent" (read: speaks Spanish sometimes), picked up from Tieldad.


Lovely art by purplerosesbeauty.
PostPosted: Sun Nov 01, 2015 7:52 am


Reserved! File this under HOLY s**t Yuno is making another troll????

Also putting alt art of her here!

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SCREAMING MELSSSSS ART! THEY LOOKS SO AMAZING! ;u;

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 20, 2015 9:33 am


So me. Im critting you unofficially. Hope you don't mind!

I don't get a clear sense of her personality. Hobbies, yes. Hemospectrum thoughts, yes. But who she is...

I get that shes energetic, adventurous, and a little selfish but other than that I'm not getting a clear sense of her. I think you should put her nosy/annoying/invasive trait in there as a flaw, since it sounds like something major about her personality, and maybe expand a little on what you have.

Other than that... I have no comments other than I like her so far, haha.
PostPosted: Sat Nov 21, 2015 2:34 pm



  • Updated flaws.
  • Added a little information to the strengths.
  • Elaborated her reasons about hemospectrum and her personality in general.
  • Moved a couple things around.


A BIG thank you to my wonderful crit faeries Magi and Drac! You guys are total sweethearts for helping me get my thoughts flowing again! emotion_bigheart

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 18, 2015 2:53 pm


Hey Yuno! Ninfia is precious and coming along very nicely, my main concerns are with their strengths, so let's jump right into it~

Okay actually, first I just want to mention that I'd love to see a little more about their jewelry hobby. It doesn't have to be much, but I enjoyed the mention of friendship bracelets in their cheerful strength and I feel like giving more insight about what they do with the jewelry/why they make it would add that littlest bit of extra spice to their character.

Now let's talk about strengths!

Adventurous has a lot of potential to be a wonderful strength, but as is it reads more like a hobby than anything. How can this trait benefit them? Are they the type who likes to find new avenues for broaching problems or difficult subjects thanks in part to their willingness to explore? Are they good at keeping mental maps for quick travel around previously visited areas? Considering things like this—and many other things, too, please don't feel limited by my questions as this is a very flexible strength and I only ask them to help stimulate ideas—will give more weight to this being of real value to them and not just a neutral trait.

Cheerful reads decently, but I feel like we're right on the edge and need just a tiny bit more to make it a strength for sure. Maybe mention how their positive, optimistic outlook affects particular parts of their life. Show me a couple situations in which this might be helpful to them/others as more than just trying to brighten someone's night.

Affectionate can be a double-edged sword, as not everyone is going to respond well to physical interaction and flirting and that's something you just can't predict. You balance this out in some ways with their intrusive flaw and the whole "personal space" thing, but I'd like to see affectionate pushed and given more use in multiple situations. This would also hopefully separate it a little further from cheerful.

What other sorts of affectionate, but possibly less touchy/invasive types of responses do you think they might display? Some synonyms of affectionate are devoted, caring, and doting, so maybe you could spin them as someone who would come to someone's defense or show care in other ways.

If you're unable to spin affectionate as more of a strength than it is right now, I'd honestly recommend moving that information to their profile and thinking up a new, more applicable strength.

I'm thinking their flaws are reading well as is, so please just touch up on the strength issues I mentioned.
PostPosted: Mon Dec 21, 2015 1:58 pm



  • Removed affectionate from their strengths and added it to her personality paragraph.
  • Elaborated on her beading hobby.
  • Elaborated on all her strengths.
  • Added nimble to her strengths.


Thank you, thank you, thannnnk you Sae dear for the crit! It was very very helpful! It was so much fun expanding on their personality!
/Smooches

On a note for future crits everything new has been colored red so, hopefully that helps you guys out! emotion_bigheart

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 19, 2016 8:30 pm


I'm glad you had fun! Thanks for your work. <3

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