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 Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2015 7:06 am
Name: Danielle Kimberly Erin Bones
Nickname: Dani, Kim, Kimmie, Cleo
Age: 9
Birthday: August 31st
Sign: Virgo
Gemstone: Peridot
Blood Type: AB-
Fav. Food: Lasagna
Hated Food: Sardines
School: Knightside Elementary
Hobbies:
Class Leadership: Dani just adores the story of Cleopatra- a Queen that ruled a country ruled by boys. Dani thinks that is just cool. Cleopatra has inspired Dani to run for class offices in the past, and to work for her classmates who in return, have nicknamed her Cleo.
Going to the Zoo: Dani begs Aunt Claudia to go to the Zoo every weekend. She loves seeing the baby animals. Especially the Cheetah cubs, for as they let out their first roars, so does her spirit.
Virtues:
Passion: Dani has a passion of fire that ignites when anyone is wronged. She will fight until the wrong is righted, and until justice is served, even if she feels she has to do it herself, in her own way. The fire burns away any fear.
Loyalty: Bonds may be hard to create for Dani, but once created, they are pretty darn hard to break. Her family, her friends -none of them can escape her loyalty, as she will go the ends of the Earth and beyond for them.
Flaws:
Anger: Dani has a passion that ignites, but has trouble putting out the flames, before trouble arises. The fire burns away any conscious thought, and at times she hurts the ones she loves and/or is trying to protect. She is really mad right now at her older brother and sister Drew and Dria. Three years ago Dria pulled some kind of stunt (Dani never understood what) and Drew flipped out and had been doing so for the last three years. Whatever happened, caused Mom and Dad to leave 6 year old Dani with Aunt Claudia, and nice as she was, Dani has lost the last three years with her parents, and blames her older siblings for it. She is now returning to her family, who now live in Destiny City, and plans to give her siblings a piece of her mind.
Jumps to Conclusions: Dani usually doesn't wait for an explanation, she makes one up, and usually embarrasses herself. She sometimes hurts those closest to her in the process.
PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION
Eyes: Jade, Almond
Hair: Pony-tail that reaches middle of back. Parted in middle of head, bangs to both sides, Black. Two hair rings - gold colored - several together, one at head, one near end of hair. Leather Headband.
Face: Heart-Shaped, Olive Skin Colored
Clothes: School Uniform
A little stronger than most kids. Tall.
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Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2015 7:07 am
Senshi: Sailor Leaena ( Leo Minor), Senshi of Cheetahs Challenge: Fuku Colour: Main Color: Goldish Brown Secondary Color: Black (cheetah design) Fuku: Collar -- CC Bow --Front Decor.: Golden Brown Bow Almost Completely Shredded. Back Decoration: Simple sash Bodice -- There is a jacket that has a hood. The shirt underneath is white. The Jacket is Golden Brown with Black Spots. It comes down to her waist and is fur-trimmed (fur is dark- cream colored. Jacket also has fur-trimmed hood with cheetah ears. Sleeves -- Sleeves of Jacket come down to wrist and are fur-trimmed Brooch -- Brown Scarab Bottoms -- Capri's fur-trimmed Tiara -- A vertically set oval Onyx set in Gold in a leather headband Choker -- An elegant gold collar with Matching Onyx set in Shoes -- Paw boots up to knees Gloves -- Wrist-Length Paw Gloves Accessories -- None Attacks: Chibi Sailor Scout Attack: Cheetah Cub She slaps the ground and rises into the Cheetah stance. At the same time, she calls out "Cheetah Cub". An energy 'Cub' flies out and attacks. Range: 5-6 ft. Minimum Damage from scratches. Lasts a maximum of 10 seconds if doesn't reach target. 3 Uses. Super Chibi Sailor Scout Attack: Cheetah Friends She does the same as 'Cheetah Cub' except she calls out "Cheetah Friends". Energy Cheetah Cubs fly out to attack. Range: 6-7 ft. Minor Damage from scratches. Lasts maximum of 15 seconds if doesn't target. 2 uses. Eternal Chibi Sailor Attack: Cheetah Pack She summons in the way of 'Cheetah Cub' and 'Cheetah Friends'. This time she calls out "Cheetah Pack". An entire family (5) of Energy Cheetahs attacks . Minor damage from scratching. Range: 7-8 ft. Lasts maximum of 20 seconds if doesn't strike target. 1 use.
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Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2015 7:08 am
History: Kimmy is the younger sister of Drew and Dria by 5 years. When Dria vanished and Drew flipped, Kimmy was sent to live with Aunt Claudia, so that their parents could focus on helping Drew and Dria. Now that their mother has given up on ever finding Dria, and their parents' confidence is restored in Drew, they are calling home their youngest daughter that they sent away 3 years ago.
Pre-Planned Team: The Minor League (with Chibi Sailor Canis Minor, Chibi Sailor Ursa Minor, and Chibi Sailor Equuleus)
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Posted: Fri Oct 23, 2015 6:02 pm
Hi Hawk! I'm here to take a look at your profile and see what's up. (Sorry for the double quote, forgot something.) The civ portion looks mostly fine, but I do have a nitpick. "Cleopatra" doesn't really seem like a solid hobby; if anything, it seems more like the hobby focuses on leadership positions and helping her classmates. You could call this Class Leadership, possibly. For your powered portion... There are instructions not to edit the quest forms, so please remove the "senshi team" addition from your quest. Also, please provide a link to the celestial body you have chosen for your senshi so that I may confirm it. A quick note regarding the fuku- I'm fairly sure that all senshi need to have some sort of collar, but that's more in the artists' jurisdiction. Your attacks seem okay, but I think you could be more specific about what the damage entails. Does it feel like blunt force? Scratches? Chibis shouldn't be able to do much lasting damage at all. Quote me if you have questions or have made adjustments!
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Posted: Sat Oct 24, 2015 11:47 am
Changes made, and CC for Collar up.
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Posted: Sat Oct 24, 2015 11:59 am
Quoting you again to confirm your changes. Also, some other things I just noticed: your Super and Eternal attacks "draw on the energy of friendship" or family love. If that's not literal, could you please make it clear that it's a turn of phrase? If she is actually drawing on the energy of friendship... well, she can't do that, I'm afraid. It's unrelated to the sphere and has potentially overpowered applications. Also, just a side note that you may want to take into account: though Leo Minor will represent a whole constellation, she is not automatically in any position of power over senshi who represent stars in your constellation unless you pre-plan this. Please quote me if you have made changes or have any questions!
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Posted: Sat Oct 24, 2015 12:19 pm
I never meant for her to be over anyone. The group she's with are other constellations, as far as I know we haven't chosen a leader yet. As far as the Friendship - I did my research - Pharaoh's once kept tamed Cheetahs as pets- that is a type of friendship. My idea was that when Leo Minor's team was together the energy from how they felt towards each other (much like the feelings of Sailor Moon and Tuxedo Mask) gives the power for the attack, if they are not there, she can't make the attack. As for the eternal attack - the family would include her team and her older brother and sister and their team. I am willing to listen to suggestions, since I considered all kinds of things, and this was the best I could come up with.
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Posted: Sat Oct 24, 2015 1:05 pm
I understand your first point; I was just making sure you knew is all. Now, regarding your second point... I'm sorry, but regardless of their significance, the friendship aspects do not reflect your sphere. You should really only be able to draw on the power of friendship if your sphere is friendship. Furthermore, having a power that banks on the presence of other characters, controlled by you or otherwise, is a sort of dangerous handicap. Realistically, those other characters will not always be able to be around. Your attacks will be fine when you take out the references to friendship, but if you would like some other suggestions for attacks in particular, let me know and I'll see what I can do for you. There is one final thing I'd like to mention! Because there is already a Sailor Leo in play we are worried it might be confusing or be an unfair overlap of names (even though they have different celestial bodies, appearing in roleplay it might make them difficult to distinguish). Because Sailor Leo Minor has the unofficial, alternate name 'Leaena', I was wondering if you might be interested in calling her Sailor Leaena? It would be the same Consteallation (Leo Minor) but She would be officially known in the shop as Sailor Leaena ("the lioness", which had been suggested as a means to make the name easier to handle on star charts). Would that be something you are interested in?
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Posted: Sat Oct 24, 2015 4:52 pm
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Posted: Wed Nov 04, 2015 5:48 pm
Sorry for the delay! I think you should be good to go now. A GM will be by eventually for either more crit or a full stamp. 
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Posted: Thu Nov 05, 2015 9:46 am
Hey, Hawk!
You are super close to a stamp, I just have one question to ask! For her eternal attack, about how many cheetahs are you thinking? And do they still scratch or just barrel people over with blunt force? Please quote me and I will be back as soon as possible! <3
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Posted: Thu Nov 05, 2015 12:33 pm
Corrections are made. 5 Cheetahs. (I'm thinking that there could 3 Cubs and 2 Adults but that really doesn't matter). Scratching.
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Posted: Thu Nov 05, 2015 1:12 pm
Awesome, thanks for the clarification! <3
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