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PostPosted: Sun Sep 13, 2015 9:02 pm


Name: Shiloh Samuel Jacob Jacobs

Nickname: Shy, JJ

Age: 19

Birthday: June 28th

Sign: Cancer

Gemstone: Moonstone

Blood Type: B+

Fav. Food: A hot bowl of chicken broth with slices of green onion and a sprinkle of mint

Hated Food: overcooked noodles of any kind. When they get to that point of falling apart and nastiness.

School: Generic Community College - Works as a Night Time Janitor in Several DC Downtown Office Buildings.

Hobbies:

Exercising - Despite having a huge lack of motivation to do anything different in his life, Shiloh enjoys making sure he's healthy and fit. Whether it's a run around the block, or doing a few reps at the local Gym, he enjoys the feeling of sweating and feeling tired from a good workout. He wouldn't call it a lifestyle. It's merely something he does to relax. Nothing beats listening to his music and running around the block a few times!

Sewing Stuffed Toys - After a fall from a tree when he was 7, Shiloh was in the hospital with a cast for a few days. During that time, he saw grannies coming through and giving all the kids toys they sewed. He thought that was so nice and warm so he asked those little nice grannies could they show him. It's become a hobby he picked up now, and hand sews everything from mini octopi to HUGE ELEPHANTS. He goes out and about weekly on a shopping trip to thrift stores for cool fabrics that he can make the toys out of. Once he's filled up a laundry basket full of them, he donates them to the hospitals in the DMV area.

Taking CC Classes - Shiloh has no declared major, no motivation to better himself or find a career. Instead he's a 'career student' and uses some of his money he earns each month to take one class at the local Community College. One month it's a math class, another it's a history. An art class and a music class here and there. He's learned a little of everything with no real single goal in mind. Each semester a new class will be taken, just so he can tell himself he's learning something, and not just sitting at home each day.

Wandering - With no Confidence to proceed in doing anything productive, much of Shiloh's time is spent wandering around, just looking at the world around him. This ties in with his love for exercising, as he will take a jog down to places where he's unfamiliar until he's exhausted and take a cab home. This leads him all over the city and informs him of events that go on in the community. Luckily, he has not gotten lost yet.

Virtues:

Obedient -- 'Orders are Orders." His father always had a strong opinion on what person should and shouldn't do. But ultimately, in his opinion, if a person is above you in rank or position, you should do what they say, up until a certain moral point. Shiloh's way of following orders applies to many aspects of his life including school, where he's done fairly well by solely doing all work, to his work place, where he never refuses an order to clean even the most nasty of restrooms. His obedience has him pegged as the 'perfect' worker by his bosses and teachers, and others are more than ready to let him help them with his their work, since they know he'll obediently follow their directions.

Grateful -- There are so many things in this world that could go wrong and Shiloh's seen them happen. Despite all this there is STILL so much in the world he's thankful for. He's thankful for the breaths he's allowed every day, he's thankful for the family that loves him and for the days when the sun still rises. Every action a person does for him lasts, and he's grateful for every little thing a person does. If you are a kind person that exists, he will sing you praises for being who you are and for not stopping and giving up. He wants to make sure everyone who he deals with knows just how appreciative he is of them, and often is told by people that he's a sweet young man because of it.

Receptive - The world is not a stagnant entity. Everything swirls and changes and from that, new talents and ideas and wonders are discovered all the time. And people should PROUD of what they do. Shiloh is very open to new ideas and suggestions people have for anything, and enjoys that enthusiasm that people show when they are excited about what they do.

Flaws:

Stagnant - The world is not a stagnant entity. Everything swirls and changes and from that, new talents and ideas and wonders are discovered all the time. Not so much for Shiloh on a personal level. He reached adulthood and found that nothing needed to change. Not for him. He's had the same job since he was sixteen, the same clothes, the same small apartment. He's not worried about change when there's no reason to. His father is almost to the point of being ashamed by him as he does nothing to find himself in a different position in life.

Sensitive - A kind word to Shiloh will last forever, just as a cruel one will. He's very receptive to any interaction with him. Even a comment such a 'that's a stupid idea' will cause him to feel upset, and he'll dwell on it for an unhealthy amount of time, regretting having ever spoken up. He does not take being yelled at, or being the target of any aggression very well, and may tear up at it.

Low Self-esteem - Once his mother passed away, his father became his main source of parental guidance. Though a dutiful father who encouraged Shiloh to grow, he did not accept failure at all. His father never told him outright that he was a 'disappointment' or he was ashamed of him, but he always pointed out how well his cousins were doing. Lily was a beautiful young woman with the voice of an angel.. Xander was a handsome young man with the brains to save many, many lives! What was Shiloh? A man with no goals or aspirations in life. Hearing this growing up caused Shiloh to simply decide that was the case. He would never be good at anything to the point of earning said praise. When a person does manage to find a reason to praise him, he will do whatever he can to keep earning that praise, up until it negatively affects him in a moral sense.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

He's a first cousin of Liliana and Xander Jacobs, and has their curls and a skin tone a bit darker than theirs.

Eyes: His eyes are narrow, and are a bright glacier blue (they should pop!), he wears a pair of circular glasses. It's a pair of old frames he got from his grandpa (he still thinks their hecka cool) and they have updated prescriptions in them.

Hair: Short and curly. Like hella curly! and bright red like his cousins.

Skin About the same as Liliy's and Xanders, though a bit darker. He has freckles all up and down his arms, and a plethora across the top of his cheeks that go from right below his eyes to right where the corner of his mouth starts. If being darker hides his freckles too much, then he can be lighter.

Face: His face is kinda.. Oval shaped. Freckles up the wazoo!

Clothes: A pretty standard wardrobe of cargo shorts and T-Shirts from where he's been before (summer camps, theme parks, events, that kind of thing)
PostPosted: Sun Sep 13, 2015 9:04 pm


Knight Title: Susquehanna Page of Jupiter

Challenge: A storm like you've never seen!

Uniform: ELEMENTS TO THINK ABOUT FOR UNIFORM

PLEASE THINK OF YOUR PLANET THEME(S) BEFORE GOING INSANE~!

CC until further Notice! Mainly.. Think Viking River Fisher man?

#1 thing about Susquehanna is that he's majorly autumn colored! Draw inspiration from.. This lovely picture of the river! That means mainly using... All of the colors in the swatch except for grey? Grey is too wintery, unless you can incorporate just fine! then it works! ALL THE COLORS!

Weapon

Page: A short oar, made of oak that's been water-treated

Squire: A longer, proper oar, with designs up and down it. It's handle is now a darker piece of wood with the Jupiter Symbol carved up and down it.
Magic: AOE Attack - Susquehanna dips his hand oar into the ground and it ripples around like water. In a swift motion he 'splashes' 'magic water' up into the air. A Second later, a rain cloud appears above his target, and it rains down small energy tadpoles and fish. The cloud is stationary and lasts for 30 seconds. It has a diameter of 6 feet and effects everyone under it.

Knight: A Fancy Oar with fancy things and is fancy. We'll figure it out.
Magic: AOE Attack - Susquehanna dips his hand oar into the ground and it ripples around like water. In a swift motion he 'splashes' 'magic water' up into the air. A Second later, a rain cloud appears above his target, and it rains down energy oysters in their shell, about 3 inches big. Their shells are heavy with rocky edges, with the potential to cause bruises, scrapes, and general pain. The rain falls in a down pour, so one would be rapidly hit with the falling oysters (Imagine a bucket of oysters being dumped on you. Yup.).

The rain cloud is now 10 feet in diameter, with a 50 second limit, and can be tethered to an opponent, as long as that opponent stays within 30 feet of Susquehanna (Susquehanna does not need to stay stationary so if he follows an opponent, the cloud will do so as well even beyond that scope). It cannot follow an opponent that has teleported further away than that, and will instead remain stationary until reassigned by Susquehanna.

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PostPosted: Fri Sep 18, 2015 11:31 am


Kapoodles


HI Pood! Nova here with a crit to help you get moved on to a stamp!

I love the base for him, he looks super fun! I do want to say, his civvie side looks very good; the only thing I'd do is maybe establish a bit more of his sensitivity; instances where he may be extremely sensitive, bperhaps how other people view it, just so it seems more established.

That's about my biggest note, there!

His Knight side looks super neat - I'm genuinely looking forwards to seeing him enter play I do have a bit more to note here, that you might want to adjust before I can drop a stamp.

I just want to note it's awesome to see a CC Jupiter Knight design! You might want to specify the colours from the Jupiter swatch or gradient that you'd like, since 'Autumn' colours is a bit vague and can be misinterpreted. That's mostly for ease of communication with your artist when you win him!

I love his weapon. It's super fun.

I'm a little wary of his magic - generally, Knight magic does not evolve as senshi magic will - common ways to work in knight magic is that their magic is usually consistent from Squire to Knight, but their magic pool of time grows.

His squire magic looks pretty good. I'd only cut the size down about a foot. As his weapon is not offensive, it's fine to keep the tadpoles and fish, however the oysters from his knight phase are a bit too dangerous as dropping hard objects in the manner described can cut - not something the knights would generally do!

The Knight magic would be closer to squire in effect, but a split to sacrifice the casting time would be fine, since the size would drop along with if I'm looking correctly and I apologize if I'm misreading! You might want to pare his squire time to 30, but upping his Knight to 30, as knights recieve a larger pool of magic than squires, is totally fine and with split casting might make halving the time for note easier on you!

Otherwise, he looks fine. Just drop me a quote when you're ready for me to make another check so we can work on stamping! c:
PostPosted: Fri Sep 18, 2015 7:19 pm


NovaCracker


I'm a little wary of his magic - generally, Knight magic does not evolve as senshi magic will - common ways to work in knight magic is that their magic is usually consistent from Squire to Knight, but their magic pool of time grows.

His squire magic looks pretty good. I'd only cut the size down about a foot. As his weapon is not offensive, it's fine to keep the tadpoles and fish, however the oysters from his knight phase are a bit too dangerous as dropping hard objects in the manner described can cut - not something the knights would generally do!

The Knight magic would be closer to squire in effect, but a split to sacrifice the casting time would be fine, since the size would drop along with if I'm looking correctly and I apologize if I'm misreading! You might want to pare his squire time to 30, but upping his Knight to 30, as knights recieve a larger pool of magic than squires, is totally fine and with split casting might make halving the time for note easier on you!

Otherwise, he looks fine. Just drop me a quote when you're ready for me to make another check so we can work on stamping! c:


I'm sorry, but all of this.. I'm having a hard time understanding this. Can you re explain please?

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PostPosted: Fri Sep 18, 2015 7:44 pm


Kapoodles
NovaCracker


I'm a little wary of his magic - generally, Knight magic does not evolve as senshi magic will - common ways to work in knight magic is that their magic is usually consistent from Squire to Knight, but their magic pool of time grows.

His squire magic looks pretty good. I'd only cut the size down about a foot. As his weapon is not offensive, it's fine to keep the tadpoles and fish, however the oysters from his knight phase are a bit too dangerous as dropping hard objects in the manner described can cut - not something the knights would generally do!

The Knight magic would be closer to squire in effect, but a split to sacrifice the casting time would be fine, since the size would drop along with if I'm looking correctly and I apologize if I'm misreading! You might want to pare his squire time to 30, but upping his Knight to 30, as knights recieve a larger pool of magic than squires, is totally fine and with split casting might make halving the time for note easier on you!

Otherwise, he looks fine. Just drop me a quote when you're ready for me to make another check so we can work on stamping! c:


I'm sorry, but all of this.. I'm having a hard time understanding this. Can you re explain please?


I'm sorry! I worry about that sometimes. Let me try breaking it down into points...? It's a little easier for me to list sometimes, maybe it'll help?

MAGIC.

Just a bit on the wary side, but it may benefit for me to break down.

Squire:

You should be fine with a 30 second magic pool, since magic pools may increase at knight. I have a suggestion for way that I hope makes sense, so bear with me.

Maybe make the AoE slightly smaller? Common sizes for midstage is 6 feet, which might not be as big a difference as it might seem if he plays his cards well.

Otherwise I like this stage magic! I genuinely do, no worries!

Knight magic!

I'd up the max casting time to 40 seconds to increase his daily magic pool a bit and for easy division!

I'm a little cautious of the oysters' nature. Their edges might not want to inflict cuts, but scrapes are fine. Knights are not as offense based as Negaverse Agents!

You mention in the magic that he can split targets for his magic. I'd say two targets with no dropping oysters or a 6-8 foot AoE with Oysters would be fine. For example if he splits the magic, his casting time is halved and the oysters cannot fall (As his magic is divided between locations). This is also why the 40 second pool suggestion! That's a good 20 seconds for both spaces.

I don't think, if you're splitting the spell and adding oysters, that a moving magic once cast would work without being too draining on his pool if a Nega teleports, although, it is a torrential downpour. Don't worry - bruises and such can still happen! It only takes a second, after all.
PostPosted: Tue Sep 29, 2015 5:42 am


NovaCracker


Changes made


1) explained sensitive more with an example

2) Squire: Changed pool of magic size to 30 seconds, and diameter to 6 feet.

3) Knight: removed splitting idea, allowed the cloud to be tethered with limits, oysters are changed from doing 'cuts' to 'scrapes'.

Anything else? emotion_kirakira emotion_bigheart

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 30, 2015 9:49 am


Everything checks out here. A GM will be along soon for a second look over things and a full stamp.

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 30, 2015 12:58 pm


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That is a very interesting take on Jupiter's power themes! Definitely a storm unlike any I've ever seen. As long as the energy critters summoned in the storm disappear when the magic is done channeling, this looks good!

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