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Gizmoid

PostPosted: Mon Mar 20, 2006 8:24 pm


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So that is the drawing I want to get all up in my signature. Before I start inking it I was wondering if you guys see anything wrong with it? Anything that just bugs you>
PostPosted: Tue Mar 21, 2006 7:25 am


Her head seems too large, but I don't know if it looks that way because she's got a big forehead and a really long neck. The right side of the face needs to be rounded out more, too. And this is just a personal thing, but I don't like the shape of her nose. It doesn't really work with the rest of her face, for me. I guess making it less rounded at the bottom or just making that bit smaller would help.

Oh, and the right shoulder (our right) should be more defined. The way it's drawn now makes it look like there isn't one.

Hee hee she has no arms. That glitch was funny.

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Tawney

PostPosted: Tue Mar 21, 2006 9:39 am


The right side of her (to the viewer) seems to tell me that her torso is turned to left, but her stomach area gives her the appearance of facing forward. It's confusing. D: So I'd suggest moving her bellybutton more to the left and changing the shape of her left side... it may just be the coat, but something looks weird there.

I can't say I really like her face much either. But... I dunno. It's probably just your style, and I wouldn't want you to change that to appease me. rofl
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