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xxx_Mist_of_shadows_xxx

Intellectual Sage

PostPosted: Wed Aug 12, 2015 11:40 pm


░▒▓█♠Personal Information♠█▓▒░
User Image

Full Name: Theodore Salvador
Nickname: Theo

Age: 13
Height: 5'7
Weight: 160

Hair Color: Blue
Eye Color: Blue

Build: Skinny
Tattoos/Scars/Birthmarks: Theodore has a large Fire scorch across his back with some scars going randomly around his back as if a bull whip was taken onto him.
Character Description: Theodore wears some old cloth that resembles a tribal outfit from a snowy mountains tribe. He wears them to keep warm and to be able to hide things inside of them since they are so baggy.
Sexual Orientation: Straight

Personality: Theodore is a polite young man, he has mental scars which causes depression and bipolar. This causes a split personality, but he is self aware through the entire thing. He at times will be extremely excited and go to extremely shy, and sometimes he has no care if he is killed or not. Other then that he tends to be nice to those who he meet and well polite.
Personal Goals: Theodore wants to personally have a son who he can cherish with all his heart and protect with his entire being.
Relationship Status: Theodore is currently single and trying to figure out if its wrong to like based on looks.
Personal Skills: Theodore can cook and clean, he also dabbles in the hermonica and dulcimer.

╞═♣Shinobi Information♣═╡
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Chakra Pool: 330
Chakra Element: Fire and Water
Chakra Color: Blue
Chakra Materialization: Chakra forms around Theo making small splashes around the area.
Primary class: Bukijutsu
Secondary class:Enchantment
Rank: Genin

Strengths:
• The Shadows
• Close range
Weaknesses:
• Distance
•Uneven terrain (Hills, mountains ETC)
Fears:
• Spiders
•Being a failure.
• An irrational fear of broccoli (I-I...I don't know...)

Class Attributes:
•Learn Bukijutsu one [1] post faster.
• C. Attribute - Elemental Apprentice: Able to place own elements within small weapons (Projectiles, Gauntlets, Daggers Etc.)

Class Paths:
Path of Dual Wielding the Path of Dual Wielding allows for the use of Two Weapons with Ambidexterity. Which means the user is equally skilled with a weapon in each hand. At first, this only extends to Light Weight weapons such as short swords or rapiers. However as the Shinobi grows they gain the ability to use medium weight and even heavy weight weapons. The use of heavier weapons is dictated purely by the Shinobi's strength. At a strength score of [0] they can use ninja tools freely and easily in both hands with no difficulties. At a Strength Score of [1] they can only use light weight weapons. Once they reach [4] they can use medium weight weapons, and when they reach [7] they can use heavy weight weapons. By training in this path, the user gains a great increase to their strength. As well training in this class allows you to use weapons of different weight classes in both hands. This is because it would be much more difficult for a non-trained person to use weapons of different weights in both hands, it throws them off balance. But by training in this method, you are able to do it accurately and effectively.
Elemental Duelist (Bukijutsu & Enchanter) The user has gained elemental advantage and spliced it into their weapons martial arts training. Becoming very comfortable with merging their element/elements into their weapons they have gained the ability to pay half of the original cost to enchant any weapon they wish. They can also duel wield elements or even elemental combos if they desire.
Spell Sword Very proficient with the weapons since birth the user has grown bored of simply swinging their blades around. They have managed to push elemental effects into their weapons on top of the standard effects. Causing Ninjutsu damage with each swing. These attack hold true with elemental advantages and weaknesses. Can put ranked Ninjutsu damage into their weapon at the cost of the rank they desire (If their rank permits it). They also gain one additional Bukijutsu slot.

Reductions:
• Learn Bukijutsu one [1] post faster.

Personal Attributes:
• Swordsmen: Has 2 normal daggers
•+20 chakra per rank (2 PA)
• learns bukijutsu in one less post.

Stats:
Speed: 4
Strength: 3
Reflex:0
Flexibility: 0
Agility: 2



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Weapon Type: (x2) Normal daggers
Weapon Range: reaches a foot out
Weapon Material: Iron (Bukijutsu)
Weapon Weight: weightless
Weapon Location: Theodore has two small holsters for daggers side by side on his right hip.
Weapon properties None
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• x15 Kunai
• x20 Shurikens
• x3 Handkerchiefs
• x5 Senbon
-Lighter
•x1 Gas Mask
•x1Genin Scroll
Village: Kirigakure
Headband Location: Attached to the sword strap that goes around his chest (currently has no sword)
Headband Color: black

Goals as a Shinobi:To become one of the seven swordsmen of the Mist
Current Title: That One Kid
Great Title: The Phoenix

▌▬♦Speciality Information♦▬▐
Demons: N/A
Cursed Mark:N/A
Summon N/A
Implants:N/A
Custom Weapons: N/A

■►Missions◄■

Ryo: 1100
AC: 6500
SS- Ranked:
S- Ranked: 0
A- Ranked: 0
B- Ranked: 0
C- Ranked: 5
D- Ranked: 10

○◙♥Background♥◙○

Family Members
• Mother: Deceased
• Father: Deceased
• Siblings: None
History:When Theodore was only 7 his mother and father where murdered. They lived in a village not far from kirigakure, and when it was attacked Theo and the other children were stolen. The girls abused in multiple indecent ways, and the boys were beaten and abused being treated like filth. They mainly used them for practice of jutsu, this was how most of them died. Theo, 2 boys, and 1 girl were finally rescued a few weeks later from the 15 kids that went in that is. The girl and one of the boys ended up being close as they found family that were not living in the village, currently Theo was informed by letter that they were doing better, sadly though one boy committed suicide from the mental scars. Theo reached out about the age of 11 to get him to come to Kirigakure but he seemed to refuse and a few days later died.

Theodore was about 8 when he moved to kirigakure, he knew he wanted to be strong and brave so he enrolled in the academy with the help of some jounin. As time went on he had to find work and was payed enough to eat once a day, even then he'd skip a day or two for personal reasons. This meant his grades were weak, from his lack of focus of starvation. This went on till he was 10 when he managed to start receiving better pay. This allowed him to buy his own house, it was a small house only being a one room with everything in it plus a attached room for the bathroom. That was when he was able to stop skipping meals and eat when he wanted now that he was safe from the cold weather out side.

Theodore wasn't alone, he had friends, the people who made it through the abuse with him where still close. He wrote to them, they wrote back, and things where ok. He worked hard in school only being able to do so much with his life style, when he bought his house and managed to eat daily his grades and performance shot through the roof. Theodore was offered hand outs, some times he took them and that's when he would sleep on floors in others houses. Most of the time he tried to do what he could alone so he knew he was strong enough to keep himself alive.

By the age of 13 he graduated from the academy, this made him proud of him self. He managed to make it from the ashes of life and become new, that's when he knew he wanted to be titled a phoenix so no matter what life brought at him he could arise from it all.
Traumas: Theodore has a fear of being saved by others, he had nightmares in which he sometimes doesn't sleep for days at end due to the harshness of the dreams.
Theme Song:


▼→Jutsu List←▼

Limitations:
Ninjutsu: 05 / 08
Genjutsu: 00 / 02
Taijutsu Styles: 00 / 00
Bukijutsu Styles: 02 / 04


Ninjutsu ((Starting Ninjutsu do not count towards Cap))
E-Rank
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
•Kage Bunshin no Jutsu [Shadow Clone Technique] (B Ranked)

Rank: B
Description: Kage Bunshin is a Jounin level Ninjutsu technique. When Naruto stole the scroll of seals, he learned this technique as well. The normal Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja that lacks any substance. The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. This makes Kage Bunshin an excellent training method if the ninja has the chakra capacity and stamina to maintain the Kage Bunshins for an extended period of time. This allows the ninja to essentially reduce the time it takes to train and learn with each clone added. This is especially true when used with Tajuu Kage Bunshin.


D- Rank

C- Rank

• Katon: Kita no Jutsu (Fire Release: Aerial Explosion Technique)
Description A different version of the Katon: Hidoko no Jutsu, this jutsu releases a gas into the air. This is an odorless, colorless gas that can be ignited with any spark or flame. This gas will rapidly ignite, causing it to expand and create a strong wind in all directions. The outer gas is shot out, and ignites when it has expanded at a range of around 20 feet. Anyone within the range of this jutsu will be seriously injured and probably suffer at least a first degree burn. It also evaporates all water in the range of this jutsu

•Katon: Hidoko no Jutsu (Fire Release: Bed of Fire Technique)
DescriptionDefensive or offensive, this just is simple enough to have many uses. Heaving a mighty breath, a shinobi will spew an oily substance in front or even around them. It will rush forth like liquid and ignite as soon as the user wills it. The effect is obvious enough, resulting in a carpet of flame in whatever manner the user provided. It could be in a cone laid out in front of them as an opponent is rushing forth, or it could be scattered across a weapon.

•Katon: Taika no Jutsu (Fire Release: Fireproof Technique)
Description At this point in time, the user has developed a natural resilience to flame and has come to know the pros and cons of their own techniques. With this knowledge in hand, they are able to not only guard themselves against fire and high temperatures but also anything around them. Expelling chakra at a constant rate, it acts as a shield or buffer against all forms of heat, completely preventing them from harm. But by freely imparting this chakra onto a person or thing, they are able to pass on that very same shield.


B- Rank

Katon: Daitou no Jutsu (Fire Release: Longsword Technique)
Description Similarly performed as compared to the Katon Kyuuka, the user instead focuses all heat around them onto their skin. Then, by molding chakra in the most precise manner they are able to turn their entire arm, the most dominant usually, into a long, flaming sword. It shoots out from the arm and remains there for a few moments, incinerating anything it touches. Comprised of the same sort of heat given off by the Kyuuka, it is basically amplified to the point where it can be used offensively.


A- Rank

S- Rank

SS- Rank


Taijutsu
Styles
E-Rank

D- Rank

C- Rank

B- Rank

A- Rank

S- Rank

SS- Rank


Bukijutsu
Styles
E-Rank

Hakyoku-ken no Kata Stage 1

• Ju Suto [ Heavy Smash ]
Simple :: Rank E
The practitioner lugs their massive weapon over their shoulder in a single slow, yet powerful, vertical strike.

• Soin [ Sweep ]
Simple :: Rank E
The practitioner drags their weapon against the ground; by utilizing a quick pivot turn, the user performs a hasty radial slash. Because of the weapon, the inexperienced have a difficult time stopping themselves.


Sobagai Deba Sentou Stage 1

• Countering Technique: Upward Repel

When the enemy attack closes in, the user will repel with the knife with an upward slashing motion. This upward repel may have enough exerting force to startle or offset the enemy.

•Offensive Technique: Assisted Jab

Channeling chakra into the wielding hand, the user will stab with the hilt of his blade. The end result is a powerful blunt jab that can wind the target if it connects correctly.

•Offensive Style: Knife Stances

The user becomes more accustomed to upward, downward, and sideways slashing motions. Increasing the speed in which they can perform by a moderate margin. ( speed sharply increased )

•Offensive Style: Simple Play

With this practice, the user is able to more comfortably switch between upward, downward, and sideways slashing motions in a pinch.

D- Rank
Sobagai Deba Sentou Stage 2

Countering Technique: Back Repels
A hasty knife repel mainly used to confuse the enemy. After an attack has been parried upward, the user will throw his knife upward, meanwhile spinning around the enemy's side to get into position to catch the knife as it falls.

Trick Technique: Change of Hands
During any freestyle form of vertical or horizontal slashes, the user will perform a simple pass, switching their knife from one hand to the other. Consecutive usage can result in a massive amount of confusion and inescapable slashing barrages.

Trick Technique: Kneecap Surprise
The user will begin by performing a simple combination of horizontal slashes, often ending in [ Change of Hands. ] At any point during this chain of cuts, the user will steady their movement, and rather than continue with their previous slashes, flip and toss the knife into the opponent's leg. Often stabbing into the kneecap, or busting it with a powerful hilt impact.

Offensive Technique: Swift Dart
Channeling chakra to his hand, then the knife, the user tosses his blade at a decently increased speed, while the chakra causes it to pierce the air- making almost no noise.

Trick Style: Knife Toss
The practitioner has developed a greater sense of precision- able to throw, juggle, and catch their knives by the hilt with ease. ( Only by the hilt, not the tip of the blade. )

Offensive Style: Artless Draw
The practitioner has better developed their ability to pull their blade straight from its resting place to an offensive slash.


C- Rank Sobagai Deba Sentou Stage 3


Trick Technique: Knife Punt
A very tricky yet powerful attack that can often end a fight on the spot. After dropping an enemy's defenses, often by parrying one of their attacks, the user will drop his knife. As the knife drops, the practitioner will time a kick in order to punt the knife upward- back into the opponent's exposed body. If truly successful, the knife will typically end up somewhere in the head of the enemy.

Trick Technique: Dirty Reflection
Given proper conditions, the user will angle their knife as to reflect sunlight into the enemy's eyes. Although it seems like a meager act that anyone could do, this training is solely for the purpose of precision- teaching the user how to tilt their blade in such a way as to reflect a focused amount of light.

Offensive Technique: Vital Poke
The user builds up chakra in a freehand, then surges it to the finger tips of the same hand, causing a very thin and short ranged aura to form. From here, the user will attempt to poke the target in the stomach, chest, upper arm, or upper leg. If connection is properly made, the opponent will feel as though they have just been internally stabbed. Although contact at the stomach or chest causes more damage, a solid stab to the arm or leg can cripple the opponent's usage of said limb.

Offensive Style: Two-fer-One
The practitioner is now accustomed to performing techniques they have mastered with either one or two knives



B- Rank

A- Rank

S- Rank

SS- Rank


Genjutsu
E-Rank

D- Rank

C- Rank

B- Rank

A- Rank

S- Rank

SS- Rank


Medical Jutsu
E-Rank

D- Rank

C- Rank

B- Rank

A- Rank

S- Rank

SS- Rank


Bloodline
E-Rank

D- Rank

C- Rank

B- Rank

A- Rank

S- Rank

SS- Rank


Barriers and Seals
E-Rank

D- Rank

C- Rank

B- Rank

A- Rank

S- Rank

SS- Rank


Custom Jutsu
E-Rank

D- Rank

C- Rank

B- Rank

A- Rank

S- Rank

SS- Rank


Physical training style(s) you have:

Speed: 4
Strength: 1
Agility: 2
Reflexes:
Flexibility:
PostPosted: Thu Aug 13, 2015 10:54 am


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13 years old || Genin|| Theodore|| 330/330 chakra

Ryo: 1100

Training:





Equipment
- 15x Kunai
-20x shurikens
-3x Handkerchiefs
-5x Senbon
-x1 Genin Scroll
-Gas Mask
-Lighter

Weapons
-x2 Daggers
-x1 Steele greatsword


OOC:

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.....Not Give Up!

QUOTES!!

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-20x shurikens
-3x Handkerchiefs
-5x Senbon
-x1 Genin Scroll
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-x1 Steele greatsword
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xxx_Mist_of_shadows_xxx

Intellectual Sage


xxx_Mist_of_shadows_xxx

Intellectual Sage

PostPosted: Thu Aug 13, 2015 10:55 am


Recent Updates

August 17, 2015
Trained Physical Speed= .5

August 18 2015
Countering Technique: Upward Repel
Offensive Technique: Assisted Jab


August 19 2015
Katon: Daitou no Jutsu (Fire Release: Longsword Technique)

Updated States (plus 2)
Chakra 330
Reasoning: Sub Class Duel wielding path and one of the Paths +40 chakra
Informed by Galga


August 28 2015
D Ranked Mission complete
+110 Ryo
+250 AC


3 D Ranked Mission (No longer repeatable)
+750 AC
+330 Ryo


August 29 2015
D Ranked Missions
+110 Ryo
+250 AC

Updated Coding
Bought Handkerchiefs -100 Ryo
D Ranked Missions
+110 Ryo
+250 Ac

Learned B ranked Jutsu
D Ranked Mission
+110Ryo
+250 AC

D Ranked Mission
+410 Ryo
+250 AC


August 30 2015
.5 Strength
Physical training


C Ranked
+220 Ryo
+500 AC


C Ranked
+320 Ryo
+500 AC


Learned Style Knife stance, increasts speed sharpy

Stage 1 Sobagai Deba Sentou Complete +.5 Agility

August 31 2015
C Ranked Mission
+220 Ryo
+500 AC


September 1 2015
D Ranked Missions
+110 Ryo
+550 AC


D ranked Mission
+110 Ryo
+250 AC
+ 5 shurikens
+5 senbon


September 2 2015
C Ranked Missions
+1100 AC
+220 Ryo

Cranked
+1100 AC
+220Ryo



september 4 2015
Gain .5 agility
for completing stages 2

Learned!
Training: Countering Technique: Back Repels
Trick Technique: Change of Hands
Trick Technique: Kneecap Surprise
Offensive Technique: Swift Dart
Trick Style: Knife Toss
Offensive Style: Artless Draw


Bought
-x1 Genin Scroll
-Gas Mask
-Lighter

-1800 Ryo

Stage 3 learned
+.5 Agility

Training: Offensive Style: Two-fer-One
Offensive Technique: Vital Poke
Trick Technique: Dirty Reflection
Trick Technique: Knife Punt


Katon: Kita no Jutsu (Fire Release: Aerial Explosion Technique)
Learned


Learned
Katon: Hidoko no Jutsu (Fire Release: Bed of Fire Technique)


Learned
Katon: Hidoko no Jutsu (Fire Release: Bed of Fire Technique)


September 6 2015
Recieved
-x1 Steele greatsword


September 7 2015
Learned
Training: Disrupting Technique: Tingling Elbow
Piercing Technique: What Defense?
Trick Style: Retreating Feet
Trick Style: Blade's Edge


December 19 2015
_S t a g e O n e [1] bonus slight increase to strength
E ranks
Ju Suto [ Heavy Smash ]
Soin [ Sweep ]


(Profile Update)
Fixed Mistakes

Sept 7
(Mistake) STAGE 4 Learned
Add .5 agil
.5 speed

sept 4
(mistake) also .5 speed

(Mistake) speed also .5+

aug 30
(Mistake) Speed increased ALSO

PostPosted: Thu Aug 13, 2015 11:52 am



xxx_Mist_of_shadows_xxx
░▒▓█♠Personal Information♠█▓▒░
User Image

Full Name: Theodore Salvador
Nickname: Theo

Age: 13
Height: 5'7
Weight: 160

Hair Color: Blue
Eye Color: Blue

Build: Skinny
Tattoos/Scars/Birthmarks: Theodore has a large Fire scorch across his back with some scars going randomly around his back as if a bull whip was taken onto him.
Character Description: Theodore wears some old cloth that resembles a tribal outfit from a snowy mountains tribe. He wears them to keep warm and to be able to hide things inside of them since they are so baggy.
Sexual Orientation: Straight

Personality: Theodore is a polite young man, he has mental scars which causes depression and bipolar. This causes a split personality, but he is self aware through the entire thing. He at times will be extremely excited and go to extremely shy, and sometimes he has no care if he is killed or not. Other then that he tends to be nice to those who he meet and well polite.
Personal Goals: Theodore wants to personally have a son who he can cherish with all his heart and protect with his entire being.
Relationship Status: Theodore is currently single and trying to figure out if its wrong to like based on looks.
Personal Skills: Theodore can cook and clean, he also dabbles in the hermonica and dulcimer.

╞═♣Shinobi Information♣═╡
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Chakra Pool: 290
Chakra Element: Fire and Water
Chakra Color: Blue
Chakra Materialization: Chakra forms around Theo making small splashes around the area.
Primary class: Bukijutsu
Secondary class:Enchantment
Rank: Genin

Strengths:
• The Shadows
• Close range
Weaknesses:
• Distance
•Uneven terrain (Hills, mountains ETC)
Fears:
• Death
• The Dark

Class Attributes:
•Learn Bukijutsu one [1] post faster.
• C. Attribute - Elemental Apprentice: Able to place own elements within small weapons (Projectiles, Gauntlets, Daggers Etc.)

Class Paths:
Path of Dual Wielding the Path of Dual Wielding allows for the use of Two Weapons with Ambidexterity. Which means the user is equally skilled with a weapon in each hand. At first, this only extends to Light Weight weapons such as short swords or rapiers. However as the Shinobi grows they gain the ability to use medium weight and even heavy weight weapons. The use of heavier weapons is dictated purely by the Shinobi's strength. At a strength score of [0] they can use ninja tools freely and easily in both hands with no difficulties. At a Strength Score of [1] they can only use light weight weapons. Once they reach [4] they can use medium weight weapons, and when they reach [7] they can use heavy weight weapons. By training in this path, the user gains a great increase to their strength. As well training in this class allows you to use weapons of different weight classes in both hands. This is because it would be much more difficult for a non-trained person to use weapons of different weights in both hands, it throws them off balance. But by training in this method, you are able to do it accurately and effectively.
Elemental Duelist (Bukijutsu & Enchanter) The user has gained elemental advantage and spliced it into their weapons martial arts training. Becoming very comfortable with merging their element/elements into their weapons they have gained the ability to pay half of the original cost to enchant any weapon they wish. They can also duel wield elements or even elemental combos if they desire.

Reductions:
• Learn Bukijutsu one [1] post faster.

Personal Attributes:
• Swordsmen: Has 2 normal daggers
•+10 chakra per rank
•+5 more chakra every 2 ranks.
Example: Genin (nothing) Chuunin ^ +10 from above, Jounin +15.
• learnks bukijutsu in one less post.

Stats:
Speed: 0
Strength: 0
Reflex:0
Flexibility: 0
Agility:0



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Weapon Type: (x2) Normal daggers
Weapon Range: reaches a foot out
Weapon Weight: weightless
Weapon Location: Theodore has two small holsters for daggers side by side on his right hip.
Weapon properties None
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• x15 Kunai
• x15 Shurikens

Village: Kirigakure
Headband Location: Attached to the sword strap that goes around his chest (currently has no sword)
Headband Color: black

Goals as a Shinobi:To become one of the seven swordsmen of the Mist
Current Title: That One Kid
Great Title: The Phoenix

▌▬♦Speciality Information♦▬▐
Demons: N/A
Cursed Mark:N/A
Summon N/A
Implants:N/A
Custom Weapons: N/A

■►Missions◄■

Ryo:500
AC:
SS- Ranked:
S- Ranked: 0
A- Ranked: 0
B- Ranked: 0
C- Ranked: 0
D- Ranked: 0

○◙♥Background♥◙○

Family Members
• Mother: Deceased
• Father: Deceased
• Siblings: None
History:When Theodore was only 7 his mother and father where murdered. They lived in a village not far from kirigakure, and when it was attacked Theo and the other children were stolen. The girls abused in multiple indecent ways, and the boys were beaten and abused being treated like filth. They mainly used them for practice of jutsu, this was how most of them died. Theo, 2 boys, and 1 girl were finally rescued a few weeks later from the 15 kids that went in that is. The girl and one of the boys ended up being close as they found family that were not living in the village, currently Theo was informed by letter that they were doing better, sadly though one boy committed suicide from the mental scars. Theo reached out about the age of 11 to get him to come to Kirigakure but he seemed to refuse and a few days later died.

Theodore was about 8 when he moved to kirigakure, he knew he wanted to be strong and brave so he enrolled in the academy with the help of some jounin. As time went on he had to find work and was payed enough to eat once a day, even then he'd skip a day or two for personal reasons. This meant his grades were weak, from his lack of focus of starvation. This went on till he was 10 when he managed to start receiving better pay. This allowed him to buy his own house, it was a small house only being a one room with everything in it plus a attached room for the bathroom. That was when he was able to stop skipping meals and eat when he wanted now that he was safe from the cold weather out side.

Theodore wasn't alone, he had friends, the people who made it through the abuse with him where still close. He wrote to them, they wrote back, and things where ok. He worked hard in school only being able to do so much with his life style, when he bought his house and managed to eat daily his grades and performance shot through the roof. Theodore was offered hand outs, some times he took them and that's when he would sleep on floors in others houses. Most of the time he tried to do what he could alone so he knew he was strong enough to keep himself alive.

By the age of 13 he graduated from the academy, this made him proud of him self. He managed to make it from the ashes of life and become new, that's when he knew he wanted to be titled a phoenix so no matter what life brought at him he could arise from it all.
Traumas: Theodore has a fear of being saved by others, he had nightmares in which he sometimes doesn't sleep for days at end due to the harshness of the dreams.
Theme Song:


▼→Jutsu List←▼

Limitations:
Ninjutsu: 00 / 00
Genjutsu: 00 / 10
Taijutsu Styles: 00 / 00
Bukijutsu Styles: 00 / 00


Ninjutsu ((Starting Ninjutsu do not count towards Cap))
E-Rank
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
D- Rank

C- Rank

B- Rank

A- Rank

S- Rank

SS- Rank


Taijutsu
Styles
E-Rank

D- Rank

C- Rank

B- Rank

A- Rank

S- Rank

SS- Rank


Bukijutsu
Styles
E-Rank

D- Rank

C- Rank

B- Rank

A- Rank

S- Rank

SS- Rank


Genjutsu
E-Rank

D- Rank

C- Rank

B- Rank

A- Rank

S- Rank

SS- Rank


Medical Jutsu
E-Rank

D- Rank

C- Rank

B- Rank

A- Rank

S- Rank

SS- Rank


Bloodline
E-Rank

D- Rank

C- Rank

B- Rank

A- Rank

S- Rank

SS- Rank


Barriers and Seals
E-Rank

D- Rank

C- Rank

B- Rank

A- Rank

S- Rank

SS- Rank


Custom Jutsu
E-Rank

D- Rank

C- Rank

B- Rank

A- Rank

S- Rank

SS- Rank


Physical training style(s) you have:

Speed:
Strength:
Agility:
Reflexes:
Flexibility:



Can not approve at this time, some things are missing and I thought I would let you know certain things can be better than is listed.
#1 - The weapon material is missing, that is actually not your fault. Upon noticing this we added it to the skeleton to prevent this further. add this after weapon range
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[b]Weapon Type:[/b] {Sword, spear, etc.}
[b]Weapon Range:[/b] {Its reach. In inches/centimeters please}
[b]Weapon Material:[/b] {Genin start with wood or bronze unless otherwise stated by class or PA}
[b]Weapon Weight:[/b] {How heavy it is. In pounds/kilograms please}
[b]Weapon Location:[/b] {Where it is stored}
[b]Weapon properties[/b] (If custom, needs approval, also need to find in random encounter)


#2 you can gain 10 chakra per rank twice if you want, or double down saying in a PA that you gain 20 chakra per rank and at the end just write (2 Pa's)

#3 you are missing the enchanter path in the profile information. Just the Buki path and the buki/enchanter combo benefit.

#4 you are missing your ninjutsu, Taijutsu and Bukijutsu limitations 0/0 is saying that you started with none. Your limitations should be as follows

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Limitations:
Ninjutsu: 00 / 08
Genjutsu: 00 / 02
Taijutsu Styles: 00 / 00
Bukijutsu Styles: 00 / 03[/size]


The last thing is just a hint. Having the fear of death and dark will make this character next to useless in most situations that involve night, or dangerous situations. Death is something that can happen at any moment during battle. To have it as a fear means you will fear anything that can cause you death. Feel free to keep it as is. Just remember this.

Kazuraii
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xxx_Mist_of_shadows_xxx

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 13, 2015 12:42 pm


Kazuraii


I fixed it all...I hope I did that right. I made the fears different ^w^ I think you'd enjoy them lol
PostPosted: Sat Aug 15, 2015 3:44 pm



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░▒▓█♠Personal Information♠█▓▒░
User Image

Full Name: Theodore Salvador
Nickname: Theo

Age: 13
Height: 5'7
Weight: 160

Hair Color: Blue
Eye Color: Blue

Build: Skinny
Tattoos/Scars/Birthmarks: Theodore has a large Fire scorch across his back with some scars going randomly around his back as if a bull whip was taken onto him.
Character Description: Theodore wears some old cloth that resembles a tribal outfit from a snowy mountains tribe. He wears them to keep warm and to be able to hide things inside of them since they are so baggy.
Sexual Orientation: Straight

Personality: Theodore is a polite young man, he has mental scars which causes depression and bipolar. This causes a split personality, but he is self aware through the entire thing. He at times will be extremely excited and go to extremely shy, and sometimes he has no care if he is killed or not. Other then that he tends to be nice to those who he meet and well polite.
Personal Goals: Theodore wants to personally have a son who he can cherish with all his heart and protect with his entire being.
Relationship Status: Theodore is currently single and trying to figure out if its wrong to like based on looks.
Personal Skills: Theodore can cook and clean, he also dabbles in the hermonica and dulcimer.

╞═♣Shinobi Information♣═╡
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Chakra Pool: 290
Chakra Element: Fire and Water
Chakra Color: Blue
Chakra Materialization: Chakra forms around Theo making small splashes around the area.
Primary class: Bukijutsu
Secondary class:Enchantment
Rank: Genin

Strengths:
• The Shadows
• Close range
Weaknesses:
• Distance
•Uneven terrain (Hills, mountains ETC)
Fears:
• Spiders
•Being a failure.
• An irrational fear of broccoli (I-I...I don't know...)

Class Attributes:
•Learn Bukijutsu one [1] post faster.
• C. Attribute - Elemental Apprentice: Able to place own elements within small weapons (Projectiles, Gauntlets, Daggers Etc.)

Class Paths:
Path of Dual Wielding the Path of Dual Wielding allows for the use of Two Weapons with Ambidexterity. Which means the user is equally skilled with a weapon in each hand. At first, this only extends to Light Weight weapons such as short swords or rapiers. However as the Shinobi grows they gain the ability to use medium weight and even heavy weight weapons. The use of heavier weapons is dictated purely by the Shinobi's strength. At a strength score of [0] they can use ninja tools freely and easily in both hands with no difficulties. At a Strength Score of [1] they can only use light weight weapons. Once they reach [4] they can use medium weight weapons, and when they reach [7] they can use heavy weight weapons. By training in this path, the user gains a great increase to their strength. As well training in this class allows you to use weapons of different weight classes in both hands. This is because it would be much more difficult for a non-trained person to use weapons of different weights in both hands, it throws them off balance. But by training in this method, you are able to do it accurately and effectively.
Elemental Duelist (Bukijutsu & Enchanter) The user has gained elemental advantage and spliced it into their weapons martial arts training. Becoming very comfortable with merging their element/elements into their weapons they have gained the ability to pay half of the original cost to enchant any weapon they wish. They can also duel wield elements or even elemental combos if they desire.
Spell Sword Very proficient with the weapons since birth the user has grown bored of simply swinging their blades around. They have managed to push elemental effects into their weapons on top of the standard effects. Causing Ninjutsu damage with each swing. These attack hold true with elemental advantages and weaknesses. Can put ranked Ninjutsu damage into their weapon at the cost of the rank they desire (If their rank permits it). They also gain one additional Bukijutsu slot.

Reductions:
• Learn Bukijutsu one [1] post faster.

Personal Attributes:
• Swordsmen: Has 2 normal daggers
•+20 chakra per rank (2 PA)
• learns bukijutsu in one less post.

Stats:
Speed: 0
Strength: 0
Reflex:0
Flexibility: 0
Agility:0



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Weapon Type: (x2) Normal daggers
Weapon Range: reaches a foot out
Weapon Material: Iron (Bukijutsu)
Weapon Weight: weightless
Weapon Location: Theodore has two small holsters for daggers side by side on his right hip.
Weapon properties None
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• x15 Kunai
• x15 Shurikens

Village: Kirigakure
Headband Location: Attached to the sword strap that goes around his chest (currently has no sword)
Headband Color: black

Goals as a Shinobi:To become one of the seven swordsmen of the Mist
Current Title: That One Kid
Great Title: The Phoenix

▌▬♦Speciality Information♦▬▐
Demons: N/A
Cursed Mark:N/A
Summon N/A
Implants:N/A
Custom Weapons: N/A

■►Missions◄■

Ryo:500
AC:
SS- Ranked:
S- Ranked: 0
A- Ranked: 0
B- Ranked: 0
C- Ranked: 0
D- Ranked: 0

○◙♥Background♥◙○

Family Members
• Mother: Deceased
• Father: Deceased
• Siblings: None
History:When Theodore was only 7 his mother and father where murdered. They lived in a village not far from kirigakure, and when it was attacked Theo and the other children were stolen. The girls abused in multiple indecent ways, and the boys were beaten and abused being treated like filth. They mainly used them for practice of jutsu, this was how most of them died. Theo, 2 boys, and 1 girl were finally rescued a few weeks later from the 15 kids that went in that is. The girl and one of the boys ended up being close as they found family that were not living in the village, currently Theo was informed by letter that they were doing better, sadly though one boy committed suicide from the mental scars. Theo reached out about the age of 11 to get him to come to Kirigakure but he seemed to refuse and a few days later died.

Theodore was about 8 when he moved to kirigakure, he knew he wanted to be strong and brave so he enrolled in the academy with the help of some jounin. As time went on he had to find work and was payed enough to eat once a day, even then he'd skip a day or two for personal reasons. This meant his grades were weak, from his lack of focus of starvation. This went on till he was 10 when he managed to start receiving better pay. This allowed him to buy his own house, it was a small house only being a one room with everything in it plus a attached room for the bathroom. That was when he was able to stop skipping meals and eat when he wanted now that he was safe from the cold weather out side.

Theodore wasn't alone, he had friends, the people who made it through the abuse with him where still close. He wrote to them, they wrote back, and things where ok. He worked hard in school only being able to do so much with his life style, when he bought his house and managed to eat daily his grades and performance shot through the roof. Theodore was offered hand outs, some times he took them and that's when he would sleep on floors in others houses. Most of the time he tried to do what he could alone so he knew he was strong enough to keep himself alive.

By the age of 13 he graduated from the academy, this made him proud of him self. He managed to make it from the ashes of life and become new, that's when he knew he wanted to be titled a phoenix so no matter what life brought at him he could arise from it all.
Traumas: Theodore has a fear of being saved by others, he had nightmares in which he sometimes doesn't sleep for days at end due to the harshness of the dreams.
Theme Song:


▼→Jutsu List←▼

Limitations:
Ninjutsu: 00 / 08
Genjutsu: 00 / 02
Taijutsu Styles: 00 / 00
Bukijutsu Styles: 00 / 04


Ninjutsu ((Starting Ninjutsu do not count towards Cap))
E-Rank
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
D- Rank

C- Rank

B- Rank

A- Rank

S- Rank

SS- Rank


Taijutsu
Styles
E-Rank

D- Rank

C- Rank

B- Rank

A- Rank

S- Rank

SS- Rank


Bukijutsu
Styles
E-Rank

D- Rank

C- Rank

B- Rank

A- Rank

S- Rank

SS- Rank


Genjutsu
E-Rank

D- Rank

C- Rank

B- Rank

A- Rank

S- Rank

SS- Rank


Medical Jutsu
E-Rank

D- Rank

C- Rank

B- Rank

A- Rank

S- Rank

SS- Rank


Bloodline
E-Rank

D- Rank

C- Rank

B- Rank

A- Rank

S- Rank

SS- Rank


Barriers and Seals
E-Rank

D- Rank

C- Rank

B- Rank

A- Rank

S- Rank

SS- Rank


Custom Jutsu
E-Rank

D- Rank

C- Rank

B- Rank

A- Rank

S- Rank

SS- Rank


Physical training style(s) you have:

Speed:
Strength:
Agility:
Reflexes:
Flexibility:



Added 1 Bukijutsu that you recieved from the Enchanter path Now being 4. But other than that you are all good (I made the edit to save you time)

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