Personal Skills: Juggling! Personal Goals: Uhm! I don't know yet! Shinobi Goals: Be regarded as stronger than those with fancy bloodlines without the use of a bloodline! Relationship Status: Single Personality: Etsuko is rather nice to be honest. However he is also quite the little pervert child if one could say anything else about him. He quite often is either attempting to touch places he shouldn't be touching, or is making awkward gestures and the like towards people.
Village: Konohagakure Headband Location: Hands [His Gauntlets have the Konoha Symbol on them.] Headband Color: Black
►►► C O M B A T - D A T A
Primary Class: Tactician Secondary Class: Sensor Chakra Pool: 220 Chakra Elements: Doton, Suiton Chakra Color: Red Chakra Materialization: Red Aura Rank: Genin
Strengths:
◇ Offensive Combat ◇ Close Combat ◇ Strategic
Weaknesses:
◇ Not fond of using long ranged anything ◇ Occassionally is playful even during battle, not often though. ◇ Dwells on mistakes long
Fears:
◇ Everyone dying on his watch ◇ Medical Ninja doing stuff to him without his knowledge.
Class Paths:
◇ Warlord: The warlord is a master of combat. They receive a further -2 to learn Taijutsu and Kenjutsu, and to learn a style takes 3 points, to learn a rigorous style takes 6. Genjutsu takes +2 posts to learn and Ninjutsu receives no reductions from this path. ◇ Odin: The user who chooses this path is so aware of their surroundings they can seem almost omniscient. They are hyper aware of everything in their immediate area (same building. If outside, then only 150 yards), able to pick up on minute details through Chakra others would miss. They are so in tune with their sensor abilities and their immediate surroundings, they are even able to touch a person, and gain knowledge about them (bloodline, customs, elements, etc.)
Traumas: Watching his Twin Sister Die History: Etsuko and Etsuka were Twins whom had awoken in a forest at the age of 5. Or supposed Age of 5 as they were unaware of their age, and they were children. For months, they were alone in the forest, and had to fend for themselves, fighting off whatever animals came their way, and even hunting some of them. Etsuko specifically managed to get a taste for bear meat. This proceeded on for about a year, however something rather tragic happened. They essentially had a run in with some rogue shinobi, and began to fight them due to some sort of conflict with them. They were able to very simply keep up with them, however proved unable to beat them, and unable to last much longer in terms of stamina. As they decided to escape, Etsuko's sister fell over, and took a fatal blow to the chest from a Wakizashi one of the shinobi had.
Etsuko snapped after that, grabbing the Wakizashi from his sister's chest, he lashed out, killing the rogue shinobi, before moving towards his sister's dead body. He began to cry, as shinobi from konoha entered the small clearing to see the dead rogue shinobi they had been hunting, the dead unknown twin, and Etsuko crying. These shinobi took Etsuko to the village, where they gave his sister a funeral, and essentially allowed him to stay as a civilian. However Etsuko had gotten over his sister's death, and essentially decided he would try to honor her memory by becoming a shinobi, so that he could prevent such things from happening to others, he needed to be stronger. He still has this, in fact it is a rather minor goal however though it is his long run goal. Along the time he trained, one of his mentors, just so happened to be a rather perverted guy whom had been one of the shinobi that brought him into the village. So he began to pick up habits from him, and eventually...became a pervert.
Etsuko excelled in practical combat classes at the academy, likely due to him already fighting in the forest outside the village. He also learned normal things at a normal rate. At one point he had been informed that when they did a test of his blood they couldn't find it similar to anyone else's and he was deemed to not belong to any sort of family or branch family. He was explained that a shinobi's blood can make a shinobi even stronger than a normal shinobi. As such, Etsuko's major goal as a Shinobi became simple, become stronger than most, if not all shinobi whom had bloodlines. With a few goals in mind, his focus was rather evident, as he passed Academy Courses at the Assumed Age of 9.
Another note, the Wakizashi that he uses right now, is still the exact same Wakizashi the rogue shinobi used to strike down his sister.
Personal Skills: Juggling! Personal Goals: Uhm! I don't know yet! Shinobi Goals: Be regarded as stronger than those with fancy bloodlines without the use of a bloodline! Relationship Status: Single Personality: Etsuko is rather nice to be honest. However he is also quite the little pervert child if one could say anything else about him. He quite often is either attempting to touch places he shouldn't be touching, or is making awkward gestures and the like towards people.
Village: Konohagakure Headband Location: Hands [His Gauntlets have the Konoha Symbol on them.] Headband Color: Black
►►► C O M B A T - D A T A
Primary Class: Tactician Secondary Class: Sensor Chakra Pool: 220 Chakra Elements: Doton, Suiton Chakra Color: Red Chakra Materialization: Red Aura Rank: Genin
Strengths:
◇ Offensive Combat ◇ Close Combat ◇ Strategic
Weaknesses:
◇ Not fond of using long ranged anything ◇ Occassionally is playful even during battle, not often though. ◇ Dwells on mistakes long
Fears:
◇ Everyone dying on his watch ◇ Medical Ninja doing stuff to him without his knowledge.
Class Paths:
◇ Warlord: The warlord is a master of combat. They receive a further -2 to learn Taijutsu and Kenjutsu, and to learn a style takes 3 points, to learn a rigorous style takes 6. Genjutsu takes +2 posts to learn and Ninjutsu receives no reductions from this path. ◇ Odin: The user who chooses this path is so aware of their surroundings they can seem almost omniscient. They are hyper aware of everything in their immediate area (same building. If outside, then only 150 yards), able to pick up on minute details through Chakra others would miss. They are so in tune with their sensor abilities and their immediate surroundings, they are even able to touch a person, and gain knowledge about them (bloodline, customs, elements, etc.)
Personal Attributes:
◇ Pre-Prepped Training: Learns Taijutsu and Bukijutsu 1 Post Faster ◇ Warlord's Will: The amount of Jutsu Points from the Tactician Class needed to learn Styles or Rigorous Styles is reduced by 1. ◇ Extreme Perceptiveness: Slightly increased Perception per rank ◇ War God: While fighting, it is even easier than normal for him to pick up on minute things that he senses through his "Odin Effect" This means that, while he is fighting against someone, he does not have to touch them in order to gather the knowledge of their bloodline, customs, elements, etc. However outside of a fight, he is normal.
►►► S T A T S
Strength: Speed: Agility: Reflexes: Flexibility:
►►► W E A P O N S - D A T A
Weapon Type: Wakizashi Weapon Reach: 2'0" Weapon Weight: Light Weapon Location: Right Hip Weapon Properties: Iron
Weapon Type: Kard Weapon Reach: 1'0" Weapon Weight: Weightless Weapon Location: Left Hip Weapon Properties: Made of Iron
Weapon Type: Gauntlets Weapon Reach: Hand Range Weapon Weight: Weightless Weapon Location: Hands Weapon Properties: Made of Iron
Traumas: Watching his Twin Sister Die History: Etsuko and Etsuka were Twins whom had awoken in a forest at the age of 5. Or supposed Age of 5 as they were unaware of their age, and they were children. For months, they were alone in the forest, and had to fend for themselves, fighting off whatever animals came their way, and even hunting some of them. Etsuko specifically managed to get a taste for bear meat. This proceeded on for about a year, however something rather tragic happened. They essentially had a run in with some rogue shinobi, and began to fight them due to some sort of conflict with them. They were able to very simply keep up with them, however proved unable to beat them, and unable to last much longer in terms of stamina. As they decided to escape, Etsuko's sister fell over, and took a fatal blow to the chest from a Wakizashi one of the shinobi had.
Etsuko snapped after that, grabbing the Wakizashi from his sister's chest, he lashed out, killing the rogue shinobi, before moving towards his sister's dead body. He began to cry, as shinobi from konoha entered the small clearing to see the dead rogue shinobi they had been hunting, the dead unknown twin, and Etsuko crying. These shinobi took Etsuko to the village, where they gave his sister a funeral, and essentially allowed him to stay as a civilian. However Etsuko had gotten over his sister's death, and essentially decided he would try to honor her memory by becoming a shinobi, so that he could prevent such things from happening to others, he needed to be stronger. He still has this, in fact it is a rather minor goal however though it is his long run goal. Along the time he trained, one of his mentors, just so happened to be a rather perverted guy whom had been one of the shinobi that brought him into the village. So he began to pick up habits from him, and eventually...became a pervert.
Etsuko excelled in practical combat classes at the academy, likely due to him already fighting in the forest outside the village. He also learned normal things at a normal rate. At one point he had been informed that when they did a test of his blood they couldn't find it similar to anyone else's and he was deemed to not belong to any sort of family or branch family. He was explained that a shinobi's blood can make a shinobi even stronger than a normal shinobi. As such, Etsuko's major goal as a Shinobi became simple, become stronger than most, if not all shinobi whom had bloodlines. With a few goals in mind, his focus was rather evident, as he passed Academy Courses at the Assumed Age of 9.
Another note, the Wakizashi that he uses right now, is still the exact same Wakizashi the rogue shinobi used to strike down his sister.
Hello, I am sorry to say but this profile must be denied on the reasons stated:
◇ Pre-Prepped Training: Learns Taijutsu and Bukijutsu 1 Post Faster ◇ Warlord's Will: The amount of Jutsu Points from the Tactician Class needed to learn Styles or Rigorous Styles is reduced by 1. ◇ Extreme Perceptiveness: Slightly increased Perception per rank ◇ War God: While fighting, it is even easier than normal for him to pick up on minute things that he senses through his "Odin Effect" This means that, while he is fighting against someone, he does not have to touch them in order to gather the knowledge of their bloodline, customs, elements, etc. However outside of a fight, he is normal.
~ PA #1 please choose one or the other can not have both ~ PA #2 not allowed to make the requirements cost even less then what u gain from choosing a path in the class. please fix! ~PA #3 also not allowed that is a cheap way to god mod in a sense. And you chose Odin that should be enough for your character in a sense of Sensor abilities. ~ PA #4 denied on the fact you can not change the class path so you do not have to touch them to gain knowledge (Nyx said this herself)
Please fix all 4 PA's
Also i dont think you are allowed to start with Iron at genin for starter weapons.
i believe the starter weapons start as either wood, bronze and one other material that i do not remember off the top of my head.. you will have to ask Ultima228 more about that since he is the one that created it.
Personal Skills: Juggling! Personal Goals: Uhm! I don't know yet! Shinobi Goals: Be regarded as stronger than those with fancy bloodlines without the use of a bloodline! Relationship Status: Single Personality: Etsuko is rather nice to be honest. However he is also quite the little pervert child if one could say anything else about him. He quite often is either attempting to touch places he shouldn't be touching, or is making awkward gestures and the like towards people.
Village: Konohagakure Headband Location: Hands [His Gauntlets have the Konoha Symbol on them.] Headband Color: Black
►►► C O M B A T - D A T A
Primary Class: Tactician Secondary Class: Sensor Chakra Pool: 220 Chakra Elements: Doton, Suiton Chakra Color: Red Chakra Materialization: Red Aura Rank: Genin
Strengths:
◇ Offensive Combat ◇ Close Combat ◇ Strategic
Weaknesses:
◇ Not fond of using long ranged anything ◇ Occassionally is playful even during battle, not often though. ◇ Dwells on mistakes long
Fears:
◇ Everyone dying on his watch ◇ Medical Ninja doing stuff to him without his knowledge.
Class Paths:
◇ Warlord: The warlord is a master of combat. They receive a further -2 to learn Taijutsu and Kenjutsu, and to learn a style takes 3 points, to learn a rigorous style takes 6. Genjutsu takes +2 posts to learn and Ninjutsu receives no reductions from this path. ◇ Odin: The user who chooses this path is so aware of their surroundings they can seem almost omniscient. They are hyper aware of everything in their immediate area (same building. If outside, then only 150 yards), able to pick up on minute details through Chakra others would miss. They are so in tune with their sensor abilities and their immediate surroundings, they are even able to touch a person, and gain knowledge about them (bloodline, customs, elements, etc.)
Personal Attributes:
◇ Pre-Prepped Training: Learns Taijutsu and Bukijutsu 1 Post Faster ◇ Warlord's Will: The amount of Jutsu Points from the Tactician Class needed to learn Styles or Rigorous Styles is reduced by 1. ◇ Extreme Perceptiveness: Slightly increased Perception per rank ◇ War God: While fighting, it is even easier than normal for him to pick up on minute things that he senses through his "Odin Effect" This means that, while he is fighting against someone, he does not have to touch them in order to gather the knowledge of their bloodline, customs, elements, etc. However outside of a fight, he is normal.
►►► S T A T S
Strength: Speed: Agility: Reflexes: Flexibility:
►►► W E A P O N S - D A T A
Weapon Type: Wakizashi Weapon Reach: 2'0" Weapon Weight: Light Weapon Location: Right Hip Weapon Properties: Iron
Weapon Type: Kard Weapon Reach: 1'0" Weapon Weight: Weightless Weapon Location: Left Hip Weapon Properties: Made of Iron
Weapon Type: Gauntlets Weapon Reach: Hand Range Weapon Weight: Weightless Weapon Location: Hands Weapon Properties: Made of Iron
Traumas: Watching his Twin Sister Die History: Etsuko and Etsuka were Twins whom had awoken in a forest at the age of 5. Or supposed Age of 5 as they were unaware of their age, and they were children. For months, they were alone in the forest, and had to fend for themselves, fighting off whatever animals came their way, and even hunting some of them. Etsuko specifically managed to get a taste for bear meat. This proceeded on for about a year, however something rather tragic happened. They essentially had a run in with some rogue shinobi, and began to fight them due to some sort of conflict with them. They were able to very simply keep up with them, however proved unable to beat them, and unable to last much longer in terms of stamina. As they decided to escape, Etsuko's sister fell over, and took a fatal blow to the chest from a Wakizashi one of the shinobi had.
Etsuko snapped after that, grabbing the Wakizashi from his sister's chest, he lashed out, killing the rogue shinobi, before moving towards his sister's dead body. He began to cry, as shinobi from konoha entered the small clearing to see the dead rogue shinobi they had been hunting, the dead unknown twin, and Etsuko crying. These shinobi took Etsuko to the village, where they gave his sister a funeral, and essentially allowed him to stay as a civilian. However Etsuko had gotten over his sister's death, and essentially decided he would try to honor her memory by becoming a shinobi, so that he could prevent such things from happening to others, he needed to be stronger. He still has this, in fact it is a rather minor goal however though it is his long run goal. Along the time he trained, one of his mentors, just so happened to be a rather perverted guy whom had been one of the shinobi that brought him into the village. So he began to pick up habits from him, and eventually...became a pervert.
Etsuko excelled in practical combat classes at the academy, likely due to him already fighting in the forest outside the village. He also learned normal things at a normal rate. At one point he had been informed that when they did a test of his blood they couldn't find it similar to anyone else's and he was deemed to not belong to any sort of family or branch family. He was explained that a shinobi's blood can make a shinobi even stronger than a normal shinobi. As such, Etsuko's major goal as a Shinobi became simple, become stronger than most, if not all shinobi whom had bloodlines. With a few goals in mind, his focus was rather evident, as he passed Academy Courses at the Assumed Age of 9.
Another note, the Wakizashi that he uses right now, is still the exact same Wakizashi the rogue shinobi used to strike down his sister.
Hello, I am sorry to say but this profile must be denied on the reasons stated:
◇ Pre-Prepped Training: Learns Taijutsu and Bukijutsu 1 Post Faster ◇ Warlord's Will: The amount of Jutsu Points from the Tactician Class needed to learn Styles or Rigorous Styles is reduced by 1. ◇ Extreme Perceptiveness: Slightly increased Perception per rank ◇ War God: While fighting, it is even easier than normal for him to pick up on minute things that he senses through his "Odin Effect" This means that, while he is fighting against someone, he does not have to touch them in order to gather the knowledge of their bloodline, customs, elements, etc. However outside of a fight, he is normal.
~ PA #1 please choose one or the other can not have both ~ PA #2 not allowed to make the requirements cost even less then what u gain from choosing a path in the class. please fix! ~PA #3 also not allowed that is a cheap way to god mod in a sense. And you chose Odin that should be enough for your character in a sense of Sensor abilities. ~ PA #4 denied on the fact you can not change the class path so you do not have to touch them to gain knowledge (Nyx said this herself)
Please fix all 4 PA's
Also i dont think you are allowed to start with Iron at genin for starter weapons.
i believe the starter weapons start as either wood, bronze and one other material that i do not remember off the top of my head.. you will have to ask Ultima228 more about that since he is the one that created it.
I Fixed all the PAs, however I'd like you to explain how increase to perception is a cheap way to godmod? What could I do with it that makes it godmodable, I don't understand :/
And the 3 starter materials are Wood, Bronze, Iron. I had talked to him about it before.
Personal Skills: Juggling! Personal Goals: Uhm! I don't know yet! Shinobi Goals: Be regarded as stronger than those with fancy bloodlines without the use of a bloodline! Relationship Status: Single Personality: Etsuko is rather nice to be honest. However he is also quite the little pervert child if one could say anything else about him. He quite often is either attempting to touch places he shouldn't be touching, or is making awkward gestures and the like towards people.
Village: Konohagakure Headband Location: Hands [His Gauntlets have the Konoha Symbol on them.] Headband Color: Black
►►► C O M B A T - D A T A
Primary Class: Tactician Secondary Class: Sensor Chakra Pool: 220 Chakra Elements: Doton, Suiton Chakra Color: Red Chakra Materialization: Red Aura Rank: Genin
Strengths:
◇ Offensive Combat ◇ Close Combat ◇ Strategic
Weaknesses:
◇ Not fond of using long ranged anything ◇ Occassionally is playful even during battle, not often though. ◇ Dwells on mistakes long
Fears:
◇ Everyone dying on his watch ◇ Medical Ninja doing stuff to him without his knowledge.
Class Paths:
◇ Warlord: The warlord is a master of combat. They receive a further -2 to learn Taijutsu and Kenjutsu, and to learn a style takes 3 points, to learn a rigorous style takes 6. Genjutsu takes +2 posts to learn and Ninjutsu receives no reductions from this path. ◇ Odin: The user who chooses this path is so aware of their surroundings they can seem almost omniscient. They are hyper aware of everything in their immediate area (same building. If outside, then only 150 yards), able to pick up on minute details through Chakra others would miss. They are so in tune with their sensor abilities and their immediate surroundings, they are even able to touch a person, and gain knowledge about them (bloodline, customs, elements, etc.)
Personal Attributes:
◇ Pre-Prepped Training: Learns Taijutsu and Bukijutsu 1 Post Faster ◇ Warlord's Will: The amount of Jutsu Points from the Tactician Class needed to learn Styles or Rigorous Styles is reduced by 1. ◇ Extreme Perceptiveness: Slightly increased Perception per rank ◇ War God: While fighting, it is even easier than normal for him to pick up on minute things that he senses through his "Odin Effect" This means that, while he is fighting against someone, he does not have to touch them in order to gather the knowledge of their bloodline, customs, elements, etc. However outside of a fight, he is normal.
►►► S T A T S
Strength: Speed: Agility: Reflexes: Flexibility:
►►► W E A P O N S - D A T A
Weapon Type: Wakizashi Weapon Reach: 2'0" Weapon Weight: Light Weapon Location: Right Hip Weapon Properties: Iron
Weapon Type: Kard Weapon Reach: 1'0" Weapon Weight: Weightless Weapon Location: Left Hip Weapon Properties: Made of Iron
Weapon Type: Gauntlets Weapon Reach: Hand Range Weapon Weight: Weightless Weapon Location: Hands Weapon Properties: Made of Iron
Traumas: Watching his Twin Sister Die History: Etsuko and Etsuka were Twins whom had awoken in a forest at the age of 5. Or supposed Age of 5 as they were unaware of their age, and they were children. For months, they were alone in the forest, and had to fend for themselves, fighting off whatever animals came their way, and even hunting some of them. Etsuko specifically managed to get a taste for bear meat. This proceeded on for about a year, however something rather tragic happened. They essentially had a run in with some rogue shinobi, and began to fight them due to some sort of conflict with them. They were able to very simply keep up with them, however proved unable to beat them, and unable to last much longer in terms of stamina. As they decided to escape, Etsuko's sister fell over, and took a fatal blow to the chest from a Wakizashi one of the shinobi had.
Etsuko snapped after that, grabbing the Wakizashi from his sister's chest, he lashed out, killing the rogue shinobi, before moving towards his sister's dead body. He began to cry, as shinobi from konoha entered the small clearing to see the dead rogue shinobi they had been hunting, the dead unknown twin, and Etsuko crying. These shinobi took Etsuko to the village, where they gave his sister a funeral, and essentially allowed him to stay as a civilian. However Etsuko had gotten over his sister's death, and essentially decided he would try to honor her memory by becoming a shinobi, so that he could prevent such things from happening to others, he needed to be stronger. He still has this, in fact it is a rather minor goal however though it is his long run goal. Along the time he trained, one of his mentors, just so happened to be a rather perverted guy whom had been one of the shinobi that brought him into the village. So he began to pick up habits from him, and eventually...became a pervert.
Etsuko excelled in practical combat classes at the academy, likely due to him already fighting in the forest outside the village. He also learned normal things at a normal rate. At one point he had been informed that when they did a test of his blood they couldn't find it similar to anyone else's and he was deemed to not belong to any sort of family or branch family. He was explained that a shinobi's blood can make a shinobi even stronger than a normal shinobi. As such, Etsuko's major goal as a Shinobi became simple, become stronger than most, if not all shinobi whom had bloodlines. With a few goals in mind, his focus was rather evident, as he passed Academy Courses at the Assumed Age of 9.
Another note, the Wakizashi that he uses right now, is still the exact same Wakizashi the rogue shinobi used to strike down his sister.
Hello, I am sorry to say but this profile must be denied on the reasons stated:
◇ Pre-Prepped Training: Learns Taijutsu and Bukijutsu 1 Post Faster ◇ Warlord's Will: The amount of Jutsu Points from the Tactician Class needed to learn Styles or Rigorous Styles is reduced by 1. ◇ Extreme Perceptiveness: Slightly increased Perception per rank ◇ War God: While fighting, it is even easier than normal for him to pick up on minute things that he senses through his "Odin Effect" This means that, while he is fighting against someone, he does not have to touch them in order to gather the knowledge of their bloodline, customs, elements, etc. However outside of a fight, he is normal.
~ PA #1 please choose one or the other can not have both ~ PA #2 not allowed to make the requirements cost even less then what u gain from choosing a path in the class. please fix! ~PA #3 also not allowed that is a cheap way to god mod in a sense. And you chose Odin that should be enough for your character in a sense of Sensor abilities. ~ PA #4 denied on the fact you can not change the class path so you do not have to touch them to gain knowledge (Nyx said this herself)
Please fix all 4 PA's
Also i dont think you are allowed to start with Iron at genin for starter weapons.
i believe the starter weapons start as either wood, bronze and one other material that i do not remember off the top of my head.. you will have to ask Ultima228 more about that since he is the one that created it.
I Fixed all the PAs, however I'd like you to explain how increase to perception is a cheap way to godmod? What could I do with it that makes it godmodable, I don't understand :/
And the 3 starter materials are Wood, Bronze, Iron. I had talked to him about it before.
Hello, i talked to Ultima228 on skype and he himself said bronze was one and wood.. but not iron.. thats not till chuunin... and you are starting as a genin.
Also if you wanted to know as to why i said no to your 3rd PA? because perceptiveness is already in the odin path in a sense. and anything labled as PER RANK... is not ok... Odin is its raw form and anything past that is in deed a form of god modding. I will now judge you profile again since the changes I just wanted to explain it a bit more.
Personal Skills: Juggling! Personal Goals: Uhm! I don't know yet! Shinobi Goals: Be regarded as stronger than those with fancy bloodlines without the use of a bloodline! Relationship Status: Single Personality: Etsuko is rather nice to be honest. However he is also quite the little pervert child if one could say anything else about him. He quite often is either attempting to touch places he shouldn't be touching, or is making awkward gestures and the like towards people.
Village: Konohagakure Headband Location: Hands [His Gauntlets have the Konoha Symbol on them.] Headband Color: Black
►►► C O M B A T - D A T A
Primary Class: Tactician Secondary Class: Sensor Chakra Pool: 220 Chakra Elements: Doton, Suiton Chakra Color: Red Chakra Materialization: Red Aura Rank: Genin
Strengths:
◇ Offensive Combat ◇ Close Combat ◇ Strategic
Weaknesses:
◇ Not fond of using long ranged anything ◇ Occassionally is playful even during battle, not often though. ◇ Dwells on mistakes long
Fears:
◇ Everyone dying on his watch ◇ Medical Ninja doing stuff to him without his knowledge.
Class Paths:
◇ Warlord: The warlord is a master of combat. They receive a further -2 to learn Taijutsu and Kenjutsu, and to learn a style takes 3 points, to learn a rigorous style takes 6. Genjutsu takes +2 posts to learn and Ninjutsu receives no reductions from this path. ◇ Odin: The user who chooses this path is so aware of their surroundings they can seem almost omniscient. They are hyper aware of everything in their immediate area (same building. If outside, then only 150 yards), able to pick up on minute details through Chakra others would miss. They are so in tune with their sensor abilities and their immediate surroundings, they are even able to touch a person, and gain knowledge about them (bloodline, customs, elements, etc.)
Traumas: Watching his Twin Sister Die History: Etsuko and Etsuka were Twins whom had awoken in a forest at the age of 5. Or supposed Age of 5 as they were unaware of their age, and they were children. For months, they were alone in the forest, and had to fend for themselves, fighting off whatever animals came their way, and even hunting some of them. Etsuko specifically managed to get a taste for bear meat. This proceeded on for about a year, however something rather tragic happened. They essentially had a run in with some rogue shinobi, and began to fight them due to some sort of conflict with them. They were able to very simply keep up with them, however proved unable to beat them, and unable to last much longer in terms of stamina. As they decided to escape, Etsuko's sister fell over, and took a fatal blow to the chest from a Wakizashi one of the shinobi had.
Etsuko snapped after that, grabbing the Wakizashi from his sister's chest, he lashed out, killing the rogue shinobi, before moving towards his sister's dead body. He began to cry, as shinobi from konoha entered the small clearing to see the dead rogue shinobi they had been hunting, the dead unknown twin, and Etsuko crying. These shinobi took Etsuko to the village, where they gave his sister a funeral, and essentially allowed him to stay as a civilian. However Etsuko had gotten over his sister's death, and essentially decided he would try to honor her memory by becoming a shinobi, so that he could prevent such things from happening to others, he needed to be stronger. He still has this, in fact it is a rather minor goal however though it is his long run goal. Along the time he trained, one of his mentors, just so happened to be a rather perverted guy whom had been one of the shinobi that brought him into the village. So he began to pick up habits from him, and eventually...became a pervert.
Etsuko excelled in practical combat classes at the academy, likely due to him already fighting in the forest outside the village. He also learned normal things at a normal rate. At one point he had been informed that when they did a test of his blood they couldn't find it similar to anyone else's and he was deemed to not belong to any sort of family or branch family. He was explained that a shinobi's blood can make a shinobi even stronger than a normal shinobi. As such, Etsuko's major goal as a Shinobi became simple, become stronger than most, if not all shinobi whom had bloodlines. With a few goals in mind, his focus was rather evident, as he passed Academy Courses at the Assumed Age of 9.
Another note, the Wakizashi that he uses right now, is still the exact same Wakizashi the rogue shinobi used to strike down his sister.
Pa's are fine now... but the one issue i have is you said you have 12 points from tactician class... but none of the points are labled... and i want to say you get 4 gen and nin from sensor class so... u never used you 12 points for your limitations... please do so.. and also cause of your PA u get a tai and buki slot. so keep that in mind.. fix these mistakes and let me know... thank you.
I thought you just held the points until you decided what to use them on? I'm not 100% sure how I want to distribute them yet :/ Aside from that I put the tai and buki slot in.
And I understand the per rank thing being a no. I wasn't aware of that. But if having extra perception + Odin Path is godmodding, then I immediately am godmodding, because tactician gives extra perception.... And you still didn't explain to me HOW it is god modding? What makes it godmodding? You just said "Odin has perceptiveness already." and "Odin and Beyond IS godmodding." Without an explanation as to HOW it is godmodding...
Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2015 8:23 am
Avedis Angelus
Kiko_Alacran
I thought you just held the points until you decided what to use them on? I'm not 100% sure how I want to distribute them yet :/ Aside from that I put the tai and buki slot in.
And I understand the per rank thing being a no. I wasn't aware of that. But if having extra perception + Odin Path is godmodding, then I immediately am godmodding, because tactician gives extra perception.... And you still didn't explain to me HOW it is god modding? What makes it godmodding? You just said "Odin has perceptiveness already." and "Odin and Beyond IS godmodding." Without an explanation as to HOW it is godmodding...
Ok let me explain the perception thing with.. Tactician is supposed to be more strategic thinking not like sensor like. the think on the fly.
what i was trying to say was u cant change odin by giving urself more perception cause odin itself gives u the max perception but only if u lay a hand on the person. so asking for more its like taking away the fact u need to touch the person to know it all.... aka godmodding.
