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PostPosted: Thu Jul 30, 2015 2:59 pm


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Negaverse: Lieutenant Kremersite

Name: Creighton McKinnon

Nicknames: Hunny Bunny (don't call him this unless you're Amara or you might find his punching you in the face for your troubles), Freak

Gender: Male

Age: 22

Birthday: August 12

Sign: Leo

Blood Type: O+

Gemstone: Citrine

Fav. Food: Amusingly enough Creighton has a sweet tooth. He absolutely loves almost anything sweet; this 'anything' can range from desserts to disgustingly sweet food that no one else would even go near (If you ask him, his Tapioca needs five spoons of sugar, not the regular two).

Hated Food: Anything bitter. Bittersweet has a pass, but present him with a bitter-tasting plate and you'll likely find that plate of food smashed right into your face.

School: DC University (Art's Degree)


Hobbies:
* Arts and Crafts -- Creighton knows his way around knives. And pointy things. Also paint, pencils and most art utensils. He seems to spend a great part of his free time carving things up, doodling things, painting things... sculpting, etc. Despite the fact others think he's disturbing and he puts his talents to use to create 'darker' motives (Monsters, among more disturbing sculptures), he's actually quite artistically inclined, and has been known to dabble into fluffier, sweeter themes when others aren't looking. Shh, you don't know this however, for all you know, he worships the damn devil or something. Those kitty drawings aren't his.

* Horror films/Books -- Horror flicks? Gore? Evil monsters ripping people into pieces? Serial killers doing what they do best? Creighton says 'Yes plz'. He's quite possibly, a fountain of useless horror film/book trivia, to the point it probably makes people edge away. No amount of failure in the socializing department seems to make him want to correct his behavior. He's much more bark than bite, and though he's calmed down with maturity... if he can take the opportunity to creep someone out, he'll take it.

* Animals/Cute things -- Creighton likes animals. Yes. It's his (not so) dirty little secret. The animals he likes range from creepy crawlies to not so creepy crawlies, which can lead to embarrassing moments when he's trying so hard to be insane and he's seen with a random kitten. He will actually hesitate to blow up a building if a dog is standing in the way - we can blow up the building as soon as the Fluffy is out of the way, kay? Good (Don't hurt Fluffy, you're in for a world of hurt if you do). All in all, he seems to have a weakness for extremely cute things (Even extremely cute people! This isn't just limited to 'things'), and tries very, very hard not to let people know about it. Kind of hard when he's got his face stuffed against a plush kitty though.


Virtues:
* Adaptable -- Creighton has no problem adapting to different situations; in fact, he does so, so swiftly he rarely takes the time to figure out what the pros and cons of those new situations are. He rarely (if ever) questions changes of plans, changes of hierarchy or anything else, really. As far as he's concerned, an order is an order and he'll carry it out... it won't really matter if his new 'boss' was his co-worker two days ago.

* Resourceful -- What do you mean can't use that gun as a weapon? That's nonsense! But... oh, well, that's okay. He'll just improvise by grabbing that thing over there and using it as some sort of makeshift pole to smack you the hell unconscious. What do you mean that's not proper use of school equipment?? It's likely this guy could make a weapon out of a damned toothpick if it were his only choice. Not only is he resourceful in battle, but he tends to think outside the box in many situations, which leads him to pointing out things that might have been previously missed.

* Passionate -- Creighton is passionate in all he does. Be it battling, fighting, or simply eating his food. A simple errand grabs his attention almost full force. It won't matter what it is he's doing; he'll be putting his whole self into it. Granted, this also means he's prone to causing much more destruction than others when given simple tasks - you want him to carry this important document to that room over there? It's probable he'd practically chaaaaaarge his way down the hallway to do so, others be damned. One is advised to get out of his way once he has his eyes set out on a certain task. That, and sweep up the wreckage he's bound to create as he sets about accomplishing it. Either that, or knock him unconscious before he has a chance to start.

* Loyal -- Creighton, at the end of the day, is a simple creature, with simple habits, and while he's most certainly not a hero (it's... questionable if he even reaches antihero status, as things stand), he's stupidly loyal. He does not have many loved ones, and his slightly warped personality makes it hard to get many friends; he's slightly love deprived, and craves approval, even if he finds it hard to change old habits or even start to figure out how people work and what they want of him. His difficulty to connect to others means that when he finally finds people he likes or even causes he approves of... he dedicates himself, body and soul to them. Shaking or otherwise shattering his belief requires earth-shattering series of events. Loved ones being put in imminent danger or otherwise harmed is the sure fire way to get yourself on his bad side, and while it's true he's loyal... he's just as stubborn about despising someone as he is about loving someone else. This boy does not do middle terms; it's either love or deep, agonizing hatred.


Flaws:
* Chaotic/Unpredictable/Acts without thinking -- While he's extremely adaptable, Creighton is also horribly chaotic, not to mention unpredictable. This makes it hard to team up with him, because he's prone to lashing out in unpredictable ways. There's none of this silent communication thing that teams have going on with him for the most part. Silent communication? What's that? Let's just charge into that room where we're outnumbered 3 to 1 armed just with a toothpick! We'll think of something along the way! We'll improvise! Creighton is by no means a thinker or a planner. He has no plan of action; he improvises as he goes along. This can be a good thing... or a bad thing, though more often than not, it gets him into trouble. This doesn't mean he doesn't have the ability to plan ahead; he does. He just gets bored half way and drops said plans. In the immortal words of a TV character "I had a plan. It was a good plan. Fool proof." "What happened?" "I got bored."

* Animals -- It's really... really hard to find anyone that probably has "Milo and Otis" as his favorite movie, and quite possibly watches it while he's snuggling his face into that kitten over there, intimidating or scary. Despite this being his (not quite so) dark, little secret, Creighton has a horribly hard time hiding it from others. In fact, all one has to do to throw him out of his game is to toss a guardian Cat into his path of destruction. That, or show him that youtube video of a cat in dryer - after devolving into hysterics, he might decide to make it his day's work to go hunt down the dude and stick HIM into a dryer.

* Napoleon complex -- Creighton is small. He's short for his age and he hates it like he hates... something very, very much. In fact, if he hates it so much that he losses track of what he's doing when people point it out. He's the guy that somehow take comments about being short out of context and lashes out - even when said comment wasn't even directed at him. Once people notice it's as easy as calling him 'shorty' to rile him up and cause his brain to snap into childish tantrum mode... well, he stops being all that menacing and intimidating.

* Disturbed -- There's no smooth, soft way to put it; Creighton is disturbed, and for the most part, not afraid to show it. In fact, he seems to revel in the fact. He's not someone you'd want to meet in a dark alley. Do you know the kid that takes pride in doodling up scenes of massacres in class just to watch the girls erk away? That would be Creighton. His idea of a practical joke would probably encompass raw, bloody entrails and scaring someone to death by dropping them on him in the darkness of a room, making them think a serial killer is after them.


Challenge: Ashes to ashes, bones to paste.

Weapon: Now with Ref!
1: Plastic jack-o-lantern
2: Jack-o-lantern hanging from a vine rod, ball and chain style.
3: Jack-o-lantern hanging from a vine rod that spits out small fire balls (from the candle within it)
4: Jack-o-lantern hanging from a vine rod that spits out fire, flamethrower style (from the candle within it)
PostPosted: Sat Aug 01, 2015 9:29 pm


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Hey, Daffu!

This profile looks good but I have two things to comment on in flaws before I can drop a stamp! Every flaw you have listed can definitely be a flaw, but in some cases the flaw is very focused on a specific thing. We like to ask that a flaw be sort of open ended or applicable to a wide variety of situations rather than just a few specific ones to ensure that a character is well rounded, so to help flesh out a few of the flaws you have listed, I have a few questions!

Animals--While I can definitely see how this could cause problems, the way this is written sounds like 'animal lover' to me, so I would really love some additional information to get a better idea of how this negatively impacts his lifestyle or the way people view him. For example, does he love animals so much that his safety or wellbeing is frequently compromised, or does he talk about them so often that people around him just think he's really annoying? It is totally fine to have a weakness like this, but I'd love to get a better idea of how this has developed into a personality trait that others could criticize or dislike him for!

Napoleon Complex—This flaw is really specific to a single physical trait, but I think this could be easily resolved if it was relabeled as 'insecure' or something along those lines? It seems like Creighton is really insecure about his height and tends to lash out at others for it; are they any other things he might lash out or criticisms about himself that could easily rile him up?

Those were the only two things that caught my eye; everything else looks fabulous! If you have any questions or comments or make any changes, please give me a quote and I will be back as soon as possible!


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PostPosted: Sun Aug 02, 2015 7:29 am


Kyuseisha no Hikari


Hi there! Thank you for taking the time to get back to me so fast! I was trying to keep the profile as closely similar to what had been approved by the shop (since this was a revision), and thus was trying to keep all flaws/virtues the same, since those two are literally not touched XD (they were kind of imposed on me way back when by the mods, whom thought they would be interesting/funny for a negaverse lt.)

* Animals -- It's really... really hard to find anyone that probably has "Milo and Otis" as his favorite movie, and quite possibly watches it while he's snuggling his face into that kitten over there, intimidating or scary. Despite this being his (not quite so) dark, little secret, Creighton has a horribly hard time hiding it from others. In fact, all one has to do to throw him out of his game is to toss a guardian Cat into his path of destruction. That, or show him that youtube video of a cat in dryer - after devolving into hysterics, he might decide to make it his day's work to go hunt down the dude and stick HIM into a dryer.

* Napoleon complex -- Creighton is small. He's short for his age and he hates it like he hates... something very, very much. In fact, if he hates it so much that he losses track of what he's doing when people point it out. He's the guy that somehow take comments about being short out of context and lashes out to them - even when they aren't even particularly directed at him. Once people notice it's as easy as calling him 'shorty' to rile him up and cause his brain to snap into childish tantrum mode... well, he stops being all that menacing and intimidating.


However! If you believe it's better to change them, I have no problem doing so (I just thought I kind of wasn't allowed to deviate too much from the original XD)! Been wanting to change the animal one for a while, because I agree that it doesn't sound much like a weakness. Let me know if the following are kosher:

Impulsive/Gut feeling -- To say that Creighton doesn't think things through is probably the understatement of the week. He's the type to punch first and ask questions later, which often leaves him at a disadvantage, given many situations could easily be solved by talking or otherwise thinking a bit. It's much easier to open a closed door, or walk around a barricade than it is to take it heads on, but apparently, Creighton thinks he's a human bull and has no problem attempting (and failing) at such simple tasks. He goes by gut feeling, and if his gut is telling him you're a douche, you're going to get punched in the face; it's as simple as that. "It felt like a good idea at the time".

* Like me, like me, won't you like me?! -- Creighton displays what is easily described as an Inferiority superiority complex of sorts. He tends to mask his inferiority complex by acting chaotic, superior to others, or like he couldn't give a rat's arse what you think of him. Unfortunately for everyone involved... things couldn't be further from the truth; he's apparently discovered that he not only doesn't dislike people as much as he thought he did, but rather, that he actually likes them (Will wonders ever cease!), and is very much swayed by what they think of him. He's not the best at social interaction, given his impulsive nature of punch first, ask later, and to make matters worse... he's very short for his age. He's the guy that somehow take comments about being short out of context and lashes out to them - even when they aren't even particularly directed at him. Basically, "He's your freak of the week", and he just wants you to bloody well pay attention to him.
PostPosted: Tue Aug 04, 2015 3:59 pm


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Those look awesome! If you want to have those instead, you are totally free to! And before I drop a stamp, if there are any hobbies or traits you want to change on your characters, you have 100% freedom to decide how you want to play them; if you want to give your characters a total turnaround/have them undergo extreme life events that changed a lot of their personality or way of thinking, you have the ability to do so! We want to make sure you are able to play the character you want to play; what you want matters most! I want you to enjoy your characters and playing them, so if you ever need a revision, please feel free to make whatever changes you need to ensure you are happiest playing your character!

(And if you are happy with everything else, I will drop a stamp!)


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PostPosted: Tue Aug 04, 2015 4:28 pm


Kyuseisha no Hikari
Daffupanda


Those look awesome! If you want to have those instead, you are totally free to! And before I drop a stamp, if there are any hobbies or traits you want to change on your characters, you have 100% freedom to decide how you want to play them; if you want to give your characters a total turnaround/have them undergo extreme life events that changed a lot of their personality or way of thinking, you have the ability to do so! We want to make sure you are able to play the character you want to play; what you want matters most! I want you to enjoy your characters and playing them, so if you ever need a revision, please feel free to make whatever changes you need to ensure you are happiest playing your character!

(And if you are happy with everything else, I will drop a stamp!)


I believe that with this revision I am 100% happy with my babies! And are prepared for whatever may come to them plot wise! Thank you sososo much for taking the time, truly. ;;;

Stamp away!
PostPosted: Tue Aug 04, 2015 6:36 pm


Daffupanda


It was my pleasure and I am delighted to hear that you are happy with them! Have fun <3

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