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Erina_Nobara

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 27, 2015 10:41 pm


User ImageName: Pyper

Nicknames: P-chan

Breed: White Maine Coon which can have blue eyes

Attached to: No one yet, hopefully a good senshi will want her.

Alignment: Senshi

Blood Type: A-

Fav. Food: Sweets like candy

Hated Food: anything spicy

Hobbies: Music. Pyper lives at a bar named Heartbreak. She loves all kinds of music, but her favorites are pop and rock. She's not shy at all and loves to belt it out along with the musicians(in cat form of course) . MAOW MAOW MAOW. She 'performs' on weekends when she isn't looking for senshi to train. It's something that makes her happy. She loves to see the smiles on everyone's faces when they listen to the music.

Fashion. She likes coming up with outfits and reading fashion magazines. Not only will she dress up herself(as much as possible in cat form) , but she'll dress up her friends as well (this will most likely be the senshi she is attached to) , and have their pictures taken. She loves being in photos even when she's not wanted. Photobomb! She likes to do this kind of thing all the time; aka whenever she's not busy with senshi-training.

Virtues: Athletic-Agile, she's good all-around at most sport-like activities. Being strong and quick on her feet, allows her to train senshi that are also strong and agile. They can observe her dance-like movement; and practice every day with her to help learn to be graceful and precise. She's brawns over brains though, so the senshi she trains will probably be taught more agility and offensive force; instead of thinking things through logically.

Affectionate-She loves to rub on people for attention. Being petted by her owner reassures her that she is wanted and needed. She especially likes belly rubs and chin scratches. And she loooooves cuddles. If a person doesn't like cats and shoves her away, she gets very depressed. But sometimes she needs a reminder that not everyone is super friendly and she also needs to give them space.

Flaws: Clingy-She likes to hang off people that are close to her. She becomes nervous if they aren't around or simply a phone call away. She's more comfortable when she can depend on people to be there for her. She is needy in this way. And it's one of the reasons she will stay in contact with her senshi family. She fears being alone.

Competitive- She can be competitive. Especially in being a good teacher. She gets frustrated when she doesn't win and becomes dismayed; Letting it get to her. She tries to loosen up by taking it out on toys and cat scratch posts and even punching bags in human form.

Challenge: Face the music!

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION : CAT FORM

Face/Ears: white fur, pointed ears (not drooped like a Scottish Fold)

Body: adult, very in-shape and healthy

Fur: white long, fur with a grey/silver star

Eyes: blue

Accessories: an eye-patch over her right eye (she got in a fight with a bad guy)

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION : HUMAN FORM

Eyes: blue, with a black eye patch over her right eye
Hair: long white, with bangs sliiiightly hiding her eyepatch(right side)
Face: na
Clothes: shibuya type fashion
PostPosted: Thu Aug 25, 2016 9:48 pm


Erina_Nobara


Hey, Erina! Congrats on winning Pyper, she's lovely!

Before I can stamp her, however, there are a few things I need to review.

First, her "Athletic" virtue is currently reading more like a hobby than a virtue - it's more about her physical health etc than anything in her personality. I think you might be able to make a "Competitive" virtue that highlights how she strives to be the best separate from her "Hard Working" one, maybe? Or an "Affectionate" virtue, that plays on the more positive aspects of her "Clingy" flaw.

Secondly, you have multiple mentions in her profile of a twin brother (and other family) - unfortunately, as cats Awaken as Mauvian Guardians, any family Pyper has would be normal cats unless they Awaken themselves. Cats can't have NPC Guardian family members - this brother would have to be an obtained character in shop (by someone other than you, unfortunately, as each player can only have one cat) before he can be mentioned as a Guardian Cat. I apologize for any inconvenience this creates, but otherwise he would effectively be an NPC powered character and those are generally not allowed.

Quote me if you have any questions, or once you've made changes, and I'll be back!


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PostPosted: Tue Apr 30, 2019 7:33 pm


Noir Songbird


omg it's been ages! my apologies! ;w; I want to get back into rp and things so hopefully you're still the person to quote. xD Thank you for your time!

I updated Pyper's profile to fix things. If you could maybe look it over again please. That would be wonderful!
PostPosted: Wed May 01, 2019 2:01 pm


Erina_Nobara


I am still on staff, so we can finish out getting Pyper stamped! heart

She's looking a lot better, though just to clarify--her "singing" along at the bar is really more meowing/kitty-singing, when she's in cat form, yes? (Obviously otherwise there'd be a host of issues, since a talking/singing cat could draw a lot of unwanted Negaverse attention.)

Also, while the rewrite on her Athletic virtue is looking a lot better, she's now unbalanced on virtues and flaws--so you'll ether need to add a flaw or cut a virtue to make it two and two!

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PostPosted: Wed May 01, 2019 2:55 pm


Noir Songbird


Thanks so much! And yes I meant she meows along in cat form. And I cut the hard working virtue as I felt it didn't make as much sense as the others. The ones I left in her profile I feel balance out pretty well. It sort of shows the postive and negative side of those traits. Hopefully that's ok~ Thanks again for all your help!
PostPosted: Wed May 01, 2019 4:02 pm


Erina_Nobara


Yep, looks good to me! A GM will be by soon for final approval!

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PostPosted: Fri May 24, 2019 2:02 pm


Thank you so much for your patience, and I apologize for the delay! Pyper looks great to me, and I think her outfit is precious, though I must admit I swoon for anything purple! <3
Enjoy your STAMP and have fun playing!
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