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Name: Audrina Margaret Becker Lee

Nickname: Audrey, Aud

Age: 18

Birthday: July 10, 1998

Sign: Cancer

Gemstone: Ruby

Blood Type: B-

Fav. Food: Fried anything. But especially fried fish.

Hated Food: Anything leafy.

School: Destiny City University, General Studies

Hobbies:

Urban Exploration: Armed with a flashlight, a camera, and her trusty backpack, Audrina loves exploring abandoned buildings and hidden parts of Destiny City and the surrounding towns. The beat up old Cannon Rebel E-something or another she got at a Goodwill doesn't take the most amazing pictures, but for her it's mostly about the experience - and the solitude. The thrill of witnessing urban decay is like getting a brief glimpse into a sci-fi post apocalyptic world.

Ghost-Hunting: Audrey doesn't just use her camera for getting cool shots of run down buildings, though. She's a member of several online paranormal research societies, and is constantly pouring over her photos for a stray orb or even a rare apparition. She even owns her very own pair of dowsing rods, and has taken several trips to allegedly 'haunted' locales. She doesn't often come back with much to show for it, but the experience is always chilling and daunting.


Virtues:
Generosity - Audrey likes helping. She may not dress appropriately for the occasion, but she is more than happy to be (and expects!) to be called upon by family or friends in times of need, no matter the hour. Need to cram for a final? She'll stay up in the wee hours of the night cheering you on. Need a place to stay? Her room's a bit of a sty, but you're more than welcome to crash on the floor -if you can find the space. Panhandlers, street musicians and the like - she doesn't discriminate, and always tries to remember to carry a couple extra bucks for those in need. As long as she has enough to eat - and her mom's always got something cooking - she feels no need to keep the excess to herself.

Open - Honesty is the best policy, and besides, Audrey loves to talk. She's not prone to hiding anything - from why she's always got dark circles under her eyes, to where the next big sale is. Or what's bugging her right now. She's also pretty interested in other people - their ideas, their personal philosophies, even if they clash with hers. She is rarely judging even when she finds she doesn't agree. After all, it's the differences that make people really interesting.


Flaws:

Bigmouth - Sometimes Audrina is a little too open and sharing, even if sharing IS caring. She has a tendency to overshare - and usually fails to take note of the other party is even interested. Wanna know what she did last night? Well, she is probably dying to gush and tell you all the gory details. Every. Single. One. It'd be ok if it came together as some sort of cohesive story, but more often than not it's usually a jumbled, half-remembered account of events with no regard to chronological order.

Gullible - Audrina is also equipped to believe just about anything. After all, she regularly participates in real-life ghost hunts. She tends to take people at their word and not bother trying to second-guess their intentions. This results in inadvertently funding a rather lot of scam artists, as well as being regularly hoodwinked at school. She doesn't seem to mind - she just kind of amiably turns the other cheek.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Teal!

Hair: Black, curly, the tips fade to a bright teal.

Face: Thick eyebrows. Dark lipstick. GRUNGEY AND KAWAIIS /biased

Clothes: (the coolest)

FAMILY STUFF BC IDK KEEPING THIS SOMEWHERE

Older brother, Daniel Becker, is an aspiring tattoo artist (thnx for the sweet inks bro)

Uncle & Aunt who are also into ghost huntery stuff

Denise: Mom, awesome, cooks the best, don't argue

Charles Lee: Stepdad, also awesome, legally adopted her at birth (was dating mom while preggo what a nice guy amirite)

don't look at me like that pinchmonster

Hello Ravvlet! I'm here to take a look at Alya and see what's going on.

The civ portion looks good, no complaints there! As for the powered half... I feel like the progression of each attack from power level to power level should be more direct (from Scout to Super at least; Eternal can be different). If you choose for your attack to be ranged at Scout, it should still be ranged at Super, and if it's melee at Super it should still be melee at Scout. It's also a bit odd that your attacks gain a use from Scout to Super; typically a use is either lost from Scout to Super or it stays the same. It's an upgrade power-wise, and so a use is lost to compensate for the boosted power. What you could do is give the ball from Sailor a range and healing boost, or give the baton from Super a downgrade.

You should probably also be more specific about the type of boost given so that each player doesn't tweak it to suit their needs or otherwise run away with the effect. Is it an emotional boost, power boost, willpower boost? Same goes for the healing of the Super and Eternal attacks- you could say something like "only heals scrapes" or "heals minor cuts." You could also make that Eternal stronger and take away a use- increase the range and healing power, perhaps. Eternal attacks are supposed to be pretty strong and single-use, so keep that in mind.

I think that's everything! Quote me if you have any questions or once you have made changes.

Much better! Here's your stamp, and a GM will be by eventually to give you more crit or a full stamp!