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 Posted: Wed Jul 15, 2015 1:16 pm
Name: Sitara Brennan
Nickname: Sita
Age:18
Birthday: September 9th
Sign: Virgo
Gemstone: Sapphire
Blood Type: AB
Fav. Food: Fresh Fruit Salad
Hated Food: Fish
School: Senior at Crystal Academy
Hobbies:
Listening to Music - Music has a calming influence on most people, but for Sitara it actually is invigorating. It helps her to focus her mind as well as spark her creativity. She gets ideas for her own songs and often makes up dances to go along with the music she hears. Music also helps to to better envision the world around her, the words making clear that which her eyes cannot.
Dancing - She likes to lose herself to the feeling of music and one of the ways she does this is by surrendering her body to the dance. She moves with a fluid grace that can only come to one that truly is free of her inhibitions. Her favorite types of dance are slow, soft motions, that flow together in a perfect blend of emotions.
Singing/Writing Music - Though in no way a professional, Sitara takes pride and entertainment in writing her own lyrics to songs as well as the music that accompanies them. She has been known to focus mostly on random dance music, but also has written a few new age/trance mixes just for fun. She can always be heard singing through the halls at school, as well as at home in her back yard and garden.
Virtues:
Loyal Friend - Sitara has a heart of gold, and when she loves someone it is a good and deep love that spans through time and space. She will fight hard to protect a friend, giving her all and sometime even more than that to keep her friends out of harms way.
Calming Influence - Sitara always has an aura around her, not a physical one, but more a feeling of calm that tends to carry over to those that she meets and interacts with. She can bring a smile to the face of most people within seconds, simply by striking up a conversation or offering a sweet smile to them herself. She also tries her best to make all people comfortable when she is around.
Flaws:
Quiet - She normally keeps to herself, holding in her feelings and opinions on things rather than voicing them straight away. This can lead to her seeming to be a bit behind on things and also adds stress to herself from bottling things up making times where she will emotionally explode.
Easily Manipulated - Being a kind and loyal friend can have it's disadvantages. Her loyalty can be used against her, using those friends and loved ones as bait or as agents to convince her toward a different path. She will do anything to keep others safe, even if that means she has to give up something herself
PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION
Eyes: Amber with deep red pupils. She has a glossy sheen over her eyes due to being legally blind.
Hair: dark black/brown, wavy and down to her knees. Thick and heavy (See Ref)
Face: Oval faced, tapering in toward the chin
Clothes: Crystal Academy Uniform
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Posted: Wed Jul 15, 2015 1:16 pm
Senshi: Sailor Kastra, Senshi of Meditation Challenge: "True power comes from a focused mind." Costume ReferenceFuku Colour: Main Color: Turquoise Blue Secondary Color: Rusty Orange and Gold Fuku: Collar -- Plain sailor collar in turquoise with a golden stripe on the end Bow -- Rusty orange bow with mandala flower broach in the center (See Ref) Bodice -- (See Ref) Brooch -- Mandala flower in gold, orange and turquoise Bottoms -- longer, flowy dress skirt. Turquoise in color (See Ref) Tiara -- Third eye symbol in the center with beads and golden circlet (See Ref) Choker -- Rusty orange, silk ribbon with golden bead in the center with turquoise gems (See Ref) Shoes -- Gold, beaded, sandals Accessories -- Golden bangles on both wrists and both ankles Attacks: Sailor Scout Attack: Calming Willow Sailor Kastra takes on the Standing Tree Posture with her hands placed palm to palm in front of her chest and calls out the name of her attack which immediately forms an aura around herself and anyone within a 7' radius. For the next 15 seconds an air of calmness reaches out from her blanketing those in this feeling of spiritual awareness and clarity. Any agression or hostility an individual is feeling diminishes over time leaving them with a sense of clarity and peace. attack can be cast 3 times Super Sailor Scout Attack: Serene Sycamore Sailor Kastra takes on the Standing Tree Posture, her hands clasped and held high above her head and calls out the name of her attack which immediately forms an aura around herself and anyone within a 10' radius. For the next 20 seconds an air of calmness reaches out from her blanketing those in this feeling of spiritual awareness and clarity. Any agression or hostility an individual is feeling diminishes over time leaving them with a sense of clarity and peace. attack can be cast 3 times Eternal Sailor Attack: Soothing Cypress Sailor Kastra takes on the Standing Tree Posture, her hands pressed palm to palm and held high over her head and calls out the name of her attack which immediately forms a shield around only herself and those allies within 7' of her. She then kneels before those within the shield and places her hands above them. For the next 45 seconds, allies within the 7' shield are wrapped in a healing warmth that closes their wounds (Minor to moderate wounds). Those opponents within the shield radius are cast out in a wave of power, keeping the allies safe for the duration of the attack. Attack can be used 1 time
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Posted: Thu Jul 16, 2015 12:51 pm
Hey Serp! Sitara's civ stuff looks great! (Oh, poor easily-manipulated child, you are going to have a very bad time.) I do have some comments on the powered side, though! First, Gomeisa is a taken space object (the Senshi of Failure), so you'll have to pick another! If you'd like some help, let me know if you have a theme in mind and I will toss suggestions at you all day. Please remember to link to the celestial body you choose, though! Second, her attacks have a bit too much going on right now. They are all effectively two attacks at once -- I think the shielding is good for her Basic and Super, and then the aura of healing/calm for her Eternal. As a few suggestions, I think at Super if you wanted to do the 5' shield that would be fine, or even a 7' one,and her Eternal attack can last much longer than 20 seconds, particularly if it doesn't include the shield; I would say that 45 seconds for a calming and healing aura would be perfectly reasonable! Also, some questions -- if you do a shield encompassing multiple people, what happens to enemies within the radius? Are they pushed out? Also, I think you can just have it last a set amount of time without setting a number of attacks that will take it down; I think 25 seconds at Basic and 35 at Super would be fair? She should also not be performing the casting motion the entire time her spell is active! If you'd like to say that she has to meditate for x seconds (5, I think, would be fine) without distraction/interruption for the shield/aura of calming to take shape, that would be okay, but Senshi generally perform their casting motion once and are then free to move however they like. Four uses for an Eternal attack is also too many; usually Eternal attacks only get one or two uses because they are extremely costly in terms of the Senshi's energy! Quote me once you've made changes or if you have questions and I'll be back around! (You can also contact me on AIM, since I'm pretty sure you have me on there :3)
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Posted: Thu Jul 16, 2015 5:35 pm
Alright dear, everything should be changed. <3
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Posted: Thu Jul 16, 2015 5:41 pm
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Posted: Thu Aug 06, 2015 9:20 pm
Hey, Serp! All of this profile looks good, but before I drop a stamp I wanted to ask a question and make a comment about the eternal; the way the attack is currently written states that "Those opponents writing the shield radius are cast out in a wave of power, keeping the allies safe for the duration of the attack." I am not sure what the word 'writing' means in this context; sorry ;; (But if you mean that the magic expels all hostile individuals from the shield, that is fine!) Additionally, the attack says that it can only withstand two attacks from a third stage character, but I wanted to let you know that if you wanted the shield to last for the duration of 45 seconds, that would be okay! (If you want other characters to be able to break it, you can leave that in, but if you would rather the shield be unbreakable for the forty five seconds, that would be okay too!) Please quote me if you make any changes, or let me know if you are happy with your attack as it is now and I will drop a stamp! <3
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Posted: Fri Aug 07, 2015 12:20 am
Kyuseisha no Hikari Hey, Serp! All of this profile looks good, but before I drop a stamp I wanted to ask a question and make a comment about the eternal; the way the attack is currently written states that "Those opponents writing the shield radius are cast out in a wave of power, keeping the allies safe for the duration of the attack." I am not sure what the word 'writing' means in this context; sorry ;; (But if you mean that the magic expels all hostile individuals from the shield, that is fine!) Additionally, the attack says that it can only withstand two attacks from a third stage character, but I wanted to let you know that if you wanted the shield to last for the duration of 45 seconds, that would be okay! (If you want other characters to be able to break it, you can leave that in, but if you would rather the shield be unbreakable for the forty five seconds, that would be okay too!) Please quote me if you make any changes, or let me know if you are happy with your attack as it is now and I will drop a stamp! <3 I made the changes you mentioned. The writing was a typo for within, apparently my phone had fun auto correcting for me. Thank you for the input. <3
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Posted: Fri Aug 07, 2015 12:23 am
Oh, awesome! I will drop a stamp now! <3 
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