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The Sweet Freak
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Kind Bookworm

PostPosted: Wed Jul 15, 2015 9:01 am


This happens to be something I have meant to do for a long time, and just simply never get to it. So it is quite about time now, don't you think?

As most probably know already, the writer behind this poet lives far off in the world from most, all the way over in Sweden. And plenty of her inspiration comes from lovely songs that she simply cannot share too easily, as few would understand the words. But as a hobby... she enjoys translating such songs, to the best of her ability, and finds it to be great practice, in many ways.

Therefor, this thread right here shall be filled with songs in Swedish, translated into English for my own practice, and for all to enjoy who might. emotion_bigheart

Feel free to stay and chat, but now if you'll excuse me... It is about time I finally get started on this long overdue project of mine~
PostPosted: Wed Jul 15, 2015 10:14 am


Oh, it is ever so hard to know where to begin... But this song in perticular has always inspired me greatly, and I do consider it as one of the Freak's own themesongs, as we have spoken of before. This artist, Lars Winnerbäck, has so many beautiful lyrics that rhyme in the most fanciful ways, and this one is likely one of the best examples out there. Translating it will be a challenge, and to keep it rhyming a lot of the original meaning will have to be changed... But I do hope that you'll enjoy the beauty of it, nearly as much as I do. emotion_bigheart

Lars Winnerbäck - "By No One's Seed"


Quote:
Rhyming Attempt
You give away your laughter to whoever wish to hear
The fairies have invited you to dance
But even so, your eyelash clearly hides a salted tear
In silence dance alone, a waltz of pure romance

In endless chase for just a friend
Humiliation knows no end
You give them more than they could serve
For but a second to observe

Say who will give what you deserve?
And would they dare to see like you?
Will you ever make it through?
And be thanked for what you do?

The night now sings a song of loneliness, it seems to me
Where all the lights switch on and off to rhythm raw
But a lost of tired child of broken world is all I see
As you're tapping to the madness without flaw

You're she who blooms of no one's seed
In heat and warmth as snow, indeed
You dry your tears of none's request
With no one's voice to be addressed

You have rock and roll within your breast
You have blues inside your thigh
And through your hair the songs fly by
As poems fall each time you cry

But now the salted tears against your eyelashes are drawn
With drunken fumbling to walls that know no name
And your childish hope so pure of fairy tales before the dawn
Turned to nothing but a walk alone in shame

You have seen broken dreams before
And you know the smiles they wore
They long to see what they adore
But turn away if there is more

But you are used to fight this war
And from your cradle to your grave
You are the lost world's lonely slave
You are a tear in ocean wave


Direct Translation
You give away your laughter to each and one who wish recieve
The fairies have invited you to a waltz
But your salty dew shows clearly against youy eyelash even so
You dance in silence a love waltz to no one at all

In desperate chase for a friend
Can you be humiliated once again
You give away more than anyone can take
For but a second of something good

Can anyone give what you should get?
Does anyone wish to see what you have seen?
Can you ever find your way
And get in return what you have given?

The night has its song of being lost down a floor
There the lights blink to the sound of a machine
A tired and lost child of broken world is all I see
As you flawlessly tap your feet to the hysteria

You bloom by no one's seed
In warm warmth like slush and snow
You dry your tear to no one's comfort
And listen silently to no one's voice

You have rock and roll in your breast
You have blues in your thighs
You have songs in your hair
And poetry in your wounds

But now the dew shows clearly against your eyelash again
You're stagger hungover home to walls without answers
Your glamorous hope of a fairy tale world in the dawn
Turned to a bitter walk home in singular

You have seen dreams come raging down
And you know how mouths smile
They like to love what they see
But are scared away if there is more

But you are used to people's ways
And from your cradle to your grave
You are the lost world's slave
You are a tear in black oceans

The Sweet Freak
Crew

Kind Bookworm


The Sweet Freak
Crew

Kind Bookworm

PostPosted: Wed Jul 15, 2015 11:29 am


A band I will likely show you more of in the future is Kent. They actually came from the city where I live, originally, and about half the band even origin from this very town of mine. So needless to say... they are fairly popular around here. But not only that, they also have very poetic lyrics. In fact, one of the most beloved lovesongs we have in this entire country is one of theirs, that I shall now share with you. Or at least try to. ^^"

Kent - "Without Your Breaths"
(It even has an English translation ready for you!)


Quote:
Rhyming Attempt
I know that you sleep now
Feel the heat right from your skin
Just your scent can make me sigh
But I
Would dare to wake you up now

And I would give you
All that you're pointing at
But only when you cannot hear
Would I
Dare to speak

I cannot function right
Without your air flowing through my lungs
And I'm fading a slight
When I'm not in your sight
And transparently white
Would I be
Without the way that you breathe

My watch has stopped now
Under your eyelids, my dear
And the dreams all flutter through
And you
Are as featherlight as snow

And without a sound
My heart is in your hand
And I have lost all of my words
They are stuck now
In your hair

I cannot function right
Without your air flowing through my lungs
And I'm fading a slight
When I'm not in your sight
And sheer alike a tear
Would I be
Without the way that you breathe

I cannot function right
Without your air flowing through my lungs
And I'm fading a slight
When I'm not in your sight
And transparently white
What would I be?
Without the way that you breathe

What would I be?
Without the way that you breathe
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