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[Q] Zoe Nêreus // Malayaite - Corrupt Senshi of Mermaids

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Parue

Tricky Cleric

PostPosted: Tue Jul 14, 2015 7:44 pm


User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.Name: Zoe Nêreus

Nickname: None

Age: 18

Birthday: May 25th

Sign: Gemini

Gemstone: Aquamarine.

Blood Type: A

Fav. Food: Dolmades

Hated Food: those jarred shrimp cocktails in the firetruck red sauce.

School: Nada. Kicked out of final year of Crystal for her... herbal passtimes.

Hobbies:

Weed || Zoe is a social marijuana smoker and enjoys kicking back with friends and passing around a bowl - it's a great way to relax and get people to open up. She is also fond of experimenting with making edibles, and her pot brownie recipe is, like, choice, bruh.

Flirting || Zoe enjoys flirting for flirting's sake, making passes at people and having passes made at her in return. She makes double entendres as easily as she breathes and is affectionate with her friends and open with new acquaintances. It doesn't necessarily mean she wants to go further - making hearts flutter is enough of a thrill by itself.

Music || Zoe has played the violin since she was a child. She is classically trained, but of late prefers to play pop selections and up-tempo songs. She likes to show off her musical skills, and is happy to play for friends or hire herself out as musical accompaniment when she's short on cash. Which is most of the time.

Surfing || Zoe took up surfing as a pre-teen. She is skilled, but avoids the competition circuit - too much stress, and surfing is meant to be chill. She can be found at the beach most of the time, catching waves and soaking up the sun.


Virtues:
Carefree || Zoe doesn't sweat the small stuff, or the large stuff, or any of the stuff. Even under pressure, she is cool as a cucumber - though she also does her best to avoid potential sources of stress. She is not the sort to worry about the future or agonize over past problems. Zoe lets life happen and bobs with the waves. Que sera sera, you feel me, bruh?

Shares Easily || Zoe is generous with her time, her belongings, and her attention. She opens up to people quickly and tries to get others to do the same. She takes a communal approach to personal property - what's hers can be yours if you need it, you dig? - and loves sharing experiences with others. If she wants you to read a book, she'll lend you her copy. If she wants you to hear a song, she'll put her headphones on your head. And if you've just gotta taste something, she wants you to go ahead and help yourself to her plate.

Joyful || Zoe wakes up with a smile on her face and progresses through her day with a spring in her step. She takes pleasure in being alive and doing things that make her happy, and does not see any reason to waste time being miserable or moping around. She has no trouble looking on the bright side and seeing the good in almost any situation.

Flaws:
Non-commital || Zoe hates making concrete plans, preferring to go with the flow and do things when the moment strikes her. She avoids responsibility like the plague - having people counting on her to do stuff is just too much pressure, and that's very no bueno.

Unmotivated || Zoe has no plans. Zoe has no goals. Zoe would be perfectly okay if her life continued at its current pace and trajectory for the rest of time. While she is not resistant to change, she does not actively seek to better herself, improve her skills, or advance in anything resembling a career path. Zoe is okay with the status quo and has no reason to challenge it.

Mean streak || If Zoe doesn't like you, she has no problem letting you know. She can be snide and catty with the best bitches, and ruining your day will by no means ruin hers. She holds grudges for a long time and is slow in forgiving - it's so much more fun to just be mean.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Colour, shape. No heterochromia (different-coloured eyes), please!

Hair: Blue -see reference- about to her mid back with a tendancy to curl when wet or in humidity. Likes to pull the front part back so it wont get in her way when she plays.

Face: Olive skin, heart shaped face.

Clothes: Civilian acquired! 8D
PostPosted: Tue Jul 14, 2015 8:31 pm


User ImageSenshi: Malayaite ( Sailor Cyane )
Challenge: " Splish Splash Mother F*ckers "
"Let's drown some b*tches"
" I'll only drown you a little "
"I'll drag you down."
" It's better down where it's wetter! "
"Come sing with me!"
"You're all washed up"
" " 🎶 AAAH AAAH AAAH 🎶 AAAH AAAAH AAAAAH 🎶 "

Fuku Colour:
Main Color: Blueish Cyan
Secondary Color: Gold

Fuku: Art Aquired!


Your MAIN COLOUR should dominate. Your SECOND COLOUR should be used for trimming.

Attacks:

Sailor Scout Attack:
"Mermaid Sinking"

Malay summons a glimmering figure of a mermaid made out of water, which then "swims at the opponent" visually right before the watery figure hits, her lovely face distorts showing long carnivorous teeth and a more scary version of the mythological creature.

When it hits, the opponent's mouth and nose fill with sea water, and the victim then coughs / spits up the water until the attack is over.

Effect last 20 seconds.
Can be used twice per battle.

Super Sailor Scout Attack:
"Mermaid Drowning"
Malay summons a two glimmering figure of a mermaid made out of water, which then "swims at the opponent" visually right before the watery figure hits, her lovely face distorts showing long carnivorous teeth and a more scary version of the mythological creature.

When it hits, the opponent's mouth and nose fill with sea water, and the victim then coughs / spits up the water until the attack is over.

Each mermaid can attack a different opponent or the same for a stacked effect.

Effect last 20 seconds.
Eternal Sailor Attack:
"Fury of the Sea"
Malay summons a large wave of seawater under her feet-which sort of just rises magically out of the ground, in its wake are the watery shapes of mermaids jumping in and out of the spray. She can summon it and slam it into an opponent, causing physical damage that one would expect from being hit by that much water ( and as a result slammed into other things like the ground and buildings in the torrent ) with the ability to sort of surf atop the crest of the wave if she so chooses. When the wave is about to crash into something, the playfull mermaids bare sharp teeth and clawed fingers, letting out a screech as they dive at the pray, their shapes melding back into the wave as it makes impact.

Can be used twice per battle.
Wave lasts for 40 seconds or until impact.
*VISUAL REFERENCE -is a nerd
VISUAL REFERENCE 2 -is still a nerd *
VISUAL REFERENCE 3 -is even more of a nerd

*NOTATION - It takes on average 3 to 4 minutes for the average person to drown, so the chances of these first two attacks ( even stacked, with all first and second staged used on one person ) fatal on a powered opponent, even stacked, is minimal.

Parue

Tricky Cleric


Eos Galvus

Shadowy Celebrant

PostPosted: Wed Jul 15, 2015 6:55 am


Parue


Hi Parue, Nova here!

Her civilian side looks good, just minor pickiness though - you forgot her birthstone is all, and left the example hobby name in her form! Easy tiny fix.

Her powered side is good but I have some concerns with hr attacs.

At basic, she should, unless using AoE magic, only hit one target. Also, I'd be careful on the drowning effect, as it can be dangerous. It can feel like drowning and there would be no issue, but directly drowning is a bit too risky - a character might not be able to cough up the water depending on health, and basic and super don't usually come near being a risk for death. I like them though, otherwise, so if you can fix that minor detail pair on them, that'd be great!

Her eternal seems more like a wave attack than a mermaid attack to me as well. My concern is coming too close to overlap with Sailor Merope in this instance - you want to focus on the sphere. It's possible they can feel effects of Mermaid Sightings, or see one- something, but right now the attack doesn't seem to match the sphere, and feels a little too close to another senshi, inactive be they may.

Drop me a quote when you've gotten things adjusted and I'll be happy to go over it so I can get you a stamp as quickly as possible! c:
PostPosted: Thu Jul 16, 2015 8:59 pm


NovaCracker


I changed the first two attacks so the nose and mouth fill with sea-water fill, so they cant breath, but at the same time, the water is still there ( It just isn't in their lungs unless they breath deep XD ) but its less detrimental to their health.

Basically any attack done on someone if they are to weak to cough is going to be dangerous. I really don't feel 10 seconds of hacking up magical water would really run that risk of killing someone unless they were already on deaths door?

For her Eternal attack... while I don't usually do this, I am really going to have to disagree that her attack is not mermaid-like. Mermaids are often associated with storms, floods, and shipwrecks. The attack is supposed to be a direct play on the fact that mermaids are believed to cause the storms that cause ships to crash on outcroppings of rocks. Sense she can't exactly put everyone on a ship and smash them into some soggy rocks, it seemed like a fair interpretation for an offensive attack to have the wave smash it/her into something.

And I did read Merope's attack.. yes they both involve waves of salt-water, but that is basically where the similarity ends? Merope creates a wave that doubles as a shield when he punches. His eternal attack creates a 9 story wave that washes everyone in the area down stream. Malay's proposed attack creates a ride-able wave that she uses to crash both it and / or herself into the enemy.

I know there are several senshi out there with electrical attacks that are presented in different ways, with different visuals, but at their base are still electrical attacks because they both have to do with their sphere, its the same thing here.

Parue

Tricky Cleric


Eos Galvus

Shadowy Celebrant

PostPosted: Fri Jul 17, 2015 7:13 am


Parue


Unfortunately, I'm going to counter and again note it does not focus on her sphere. While I understand what you are aiming for her eternal attack does not reflect her sphere as it stands now.

If we're are using the electricity sphere example, they do not have the same effect nor are they even very alike. Static is not the same as Lightning, Ball Lightning, or an electric Current. Ice, a solid state of water, is nothing like water.

This is still too like a wave senshi and will need to change before we continue stamping.
PostPosted: Sun Jul 19, 2015 3:48 pm


NovaCracker
Parue


Unfortunately, I'm going to counter and again note it does not focus on her sphere. While I understand what you are aiming for her eternal attack does not reflect her sphere as it stands now.

If we're are using the electricity sphere example, they do not have the same effect nor are they even very alike. Static is not the same as Lightning, Ball Lightning, or an electric Current. Ice, a solid state of water, is nothing like water.

This is still too like a wave senshi and will need to change before we continue stamping.


I re-wrote it to make it seem more mermaidy, in both aesthetics and how it operates? Your thoughts? 8D

Parue

Tricky Cleric


Eos Galvus

Shadowy Celebrant

PostPosted: Sun Jul 19, 2015 4:05 pm


Parue


MUCH better and looks great to me!

A GM will be by with a second look and a stamp shortly!

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 19, 2015 4:14 pm


NovaCracker
Parue


MUCH better and looks great to me!

A GM will be by with a second look and a stamp shortly!

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Thank you darling! heart

Parue

Tricky Cleric



Kyuseisha no Hikari

Crew

Dragonslaying Dragon

PostPosted: Mon Aug 24, 2015 1:49 pm


Parue


She is lovely! Have fun playing!

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