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 Posted: Tue Jun 16, 2015 9:31 am
  DEMON
Basic Info
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Name: Alistor
Age: Unknown...
Variety of Demon: Pure Blooded Demon
House: Astaroth
Piece: King
Piece Worth: The Game
Gear (sacred/regular items):
The Keeper Alistor uses a pocketwatch in battle. It can be used to hit people for it feels like a normal pocket watch in someone elses hand but when in Alistor's hand, the pocket watch will hit as if it is a mace. The Keeper has two other forms, Gun and Knife. These forms are activated by turning the latch of the pocket watch in certain ways.
Keeper gun Form By turning the latch to the right, the keeper turns into it's gun form. What better way to keep up with the long ranged people then by shooting from long range? Also blowing out someone knee caps can be really painfull.
Keeper knife form By turning the latch to the left, the keeper turns into it's knife form. This is Alistors favorite form, as it has been used so much to torture so many that is has become red and stained with blood. Alistor's go too form is this weapon and he will use it for quick strikes to certain area's to make sure that he can hit a vital spot to bring down his enemy and begin the torture session he wants the most.
Bio: In the beginning, there was no such thing as hell. There was the top, and then there was the bottom. The bottom was made, and he scowered the desert, demanding sacrifices in order for the ones who traveled to not be killed on sight. They gave in, and they sacrificed to him. Soon, he gathered the cynical, the vile and the rude, and tortured them down below. He loves his job, and he loves his choices. Flash forward to many years later, he grows bored. No tough souls entered his pit. They all succumb to the pain, and they are lost to the pits. Time passes and he is growing more bored, until he notices a woman. Her name is Jezebel and she offers to him without asking. After three sacrifices he appears to her in a mirror. He has grown a bit fond of her. Not love, not human waste of this and that, but intrigue, or so he might think. A woman after his own soul she is, dedicated to him and only him. The idea makes him less bored and he talks with her through a mirror. "Thank you for your attention and dedication. If you wish, I will offer you a contract and you will be mine forever. Know this has consequences." She is happy with this, and a bit confused. ""Master, I have done all this for you. I will join you, no matter what the consequences are." She responds and he can't help but smile inside. The mirror turns black and a contract appears in the fire she is slowly throwing herself into. "Simply sign your name on the bottom in your blood" He states to her. She does so, and the mirror shatters, his only words to her after that is "Continue on, for you are now mine". From there on, he ignores her, wanting more and more from her. He continues on with his job, Jezebel in the back of his mind. One more contract? That is nothing, but she keeps supplying him souls and he keeps having more and more fun. Of course, she gets too greedy. She has started offering more and more, and he has gained a lot more interest in her. With this, he finally decides to take her. An anonymous tipper tips off where Jezebel might be taking her victims, Police set up a raid situation and use an undercover agent to slip in and examine her. When the cop is dragged back to her spot, they raid the area and Alistor possesses one of the cops. He kills the other cops, and finds Jezebel. "Are you ready?" He asks, and when she agree's she is killed, taken to the bottom below to be by his side forever. From there, he learns to deal with time and torture, giving him new found abilites. He is happy again once more.
Personality: Alistor is a drag to hang out with if you aren't used to him. He can be very boring if he's not doing anything that interests him. He lays about until he has to do a job. When he gets into the swing of things, he is manipulative and daring. He is a bit of a scumbag and leaves a mark on you, literally. He wants to learn more about humanity, and rip it apart, so he tries to blend in, but after a while, he realizes he is still a demon and goes back to his demonic ways.
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About you:
Likes:
* Torture
* Damned Souls
* The Vicious
* Coke-Cola
* Jezebel
Dislikes:
* Purity
* Being bored
* Light hearted people
* Toast
* Pepsi
Powers
Passive
Torture Touch: Alistor can't stop his tortureous ways. When he touches someone who is not used to him, or is touched by someone who is not used to him, they begin to feel like they are being tortured in the very pits of hell. It is always slow at first, maybe a shortness of breath, then maybe a bit of dizzyness until a lung starts to feel like it's being stabbed into and a tendon is being ripped from the bone. More often, the longer Alistor is holding you, the worse you feel.
Active
Time Manipulation: As mentioned before, Alistor has had a lot of time on his hands. He has been studying ways of manipulation and added it to his torture tactics. Alistor can fast forward or rewind time, even shift himself from one place to another as if he was in that time at some point. Of course, this cannot last forever. He can only mess with time for up to an hour in set intervals (3 posts) before having to cool down and let the flow of time return to normal.
Illusion Manipulation: Alistor loves to toy with the mind. He can do so with a simple snap of his finger, or a wink, or a touch. As long as the enemy or someone has seen him do something and he has direct sight on them, he can catch them in an illusion. As long as he keeps this sight, he can keep on making them see what he wants them to see. Of course, once he looses sight on them, he cannot control what they see, or if they have a strong will they will not be affected. Alistor can also effect everything in his direct sight, but anything bouncing off mirrors also works.
Conditional
Pain Manipulation: Honestly Alistor's favorite ability. Whenever Alistor deals some sort of cut or bit of pain to someone, he can make the pain ten times worse, and keep growing. He can make the event more painful then it was before and cripple his enemy. An example would be if he cut someone on their leg. He could then twist the pain until it was so powerful they could no longer use that leg normally. The only way to stop this is to either get rid of whatever is hurting you (Yes, I indeed do mean cut off a leg or arm) or seal up/heal the damaged area. IF the damaged area is still damaged for three posts, then that spot will remain damaged until healed by some sort of powerful holy cure or person.
Balance Breakers!
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Pain Aura: Evolving from pain touch, Alistor no longer has to touch someone to put pain on them. His aura will set in around the battle field, causing pain to be spread and enhanced turn by turn. For the first post used, the people in the area might be affected by ache and pains. The next might feel like bones breaking and by the third post there is inside damage like lungs rupturing and livers tearing. By the fourth and final turn, the opponent becomes immobile, dragged down by so much bodily pain that they are no longer able to move and at the will of Alistor. This move cannot tell friend of foe and affects anyone around Alistor for 100ft. When this is activated, pain touch is cut in half when used on someone. The last crippling effect works for three posts and wears off, the aura having to take effect all over again.
^Conditional
Temperal Shift: Alternate make: This ability comes from Alistors time manipulation. There are many active ripples in time. There are many Alistors doing many things, changing many lives. This move allows him to shift himself with another Alistor who would be in another location or doing something else. This means Alistor could move to a different area where he might be in another point in time, or be using an item he might use at another time. This serves as a means of teleport and that of making an item from somewhere. Now he cannot create an item he has never seen, and yes he would be given information on what is going on around him, but he would not retain any information, just be brought to that spot or gain an item from the area he might use in combat based on the different points in time.
Case example: Alistor is fighting --- in a place full of pipes. Alistor swipes downward and a steel beam is created, swiping down on his enemy. While in this time line Alistor does not have a beam, another Alistor in another time line does, and thus Alistor of this time line is using a beam as well.
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Posted: Tue Jun 16, 2015 5:46 pm
Hey, welcome! I'd just like to say first off that this is one of the more low maintenance profiles I've encountered thus far. Now, I'll start by say that as far as King vs. Knight goes only the King can make other pieces, so it looks like you've already made that choice for yourself. haha Bio looks good, and although I like the effect of the repetition of Jezebel's recruitment across both profiles, I can't help but think there is room there for telling of Alistor's other conquests and nefarious doings. But, that's just a thought. I like that he's a coke fan. haha As far as abilities go I'm afraid an hour is out of the question for any temporal conversions in battle. Also in battle you can't reverse time for the obvious godmode op therein. I'm fine with the sadistic abilities, but do watch out for robots. XD Approved with responsible use of time manipulation. Have fun out there. emotion_yatta
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Corvo Bianco Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Sep 28, 2015 12:07 am
Hello. I have asked before to make more abilites in terms of what Alistor can do. As story has gone on, Alistor is more angered, becoming a bit more powerful. So here are some things I am wondering if we can add in here.
Pain Aura: Evolving from pain touch, Alistor no longer has to touch someone to put pain on them. His aura will set in around the battle field, causing pain to be spread and enhanced turn by turn. For the first post used, the people in the area might be affected by ache and pains. The next might feel like bones breaking and by the third post there is inside damage like lungs rupturing and livers tearing. By the fourth and final turn, the opponent becomes immobile, dragged down by so much bodily pain that they are no longer able to move and at the will of Alistor. This move cannot tell friend of foe and affects anyone around Alistor for 100ft. When this is activated, pain touch is cut in half when used on someone.
^ Would have to be Conditional
Temperal Shift: Alternate make: This ability comes from Alistors time manipulation. There are many active ripples in time. There are many Alistors doing many things, changing many lives. This move allows him to shift himself with another Alistor who would be in another location or doing something else. This means Alistor could move to a different area where he might be in another point in time, or be using an item he might use at another time. This serves as a means of teleport and that of making an item from somewhere. Now he cannot create an item he has never seen, and yes he would be given information on what is going on around him, but he would not retain any information, just be brought to that spot or gain an item from the area he might use in combat based on the different points in time.
Case example: Alistor is fighting --- in a place full of pipes. Alistor swipes downward and a steel beam is created, swiping down on his enemy. While in this time line Alistor does not have a beam, another Alistor in another time line does, and thus Alistor of this time line is using a beam as well.
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Posted: Mon Sep 28, 2015 3:01 pm
Genji Gincosu
Hello. I have asked before to make more abilites in terms of what Alistor can do. As story has gone on, Alistor is more angered, becoming a bit more powerful. So here are some things I am wondering if we can add in here.
Pain Aura: Evolving from pain touch, Alistor no longer has to touch someone to put pain on them. His aura will set in around the battle field, causing pain to be spread and enhanced turn by turn. For the first post used, the people in the area might be affected by ache and pains. The next might feel like bones breaking and by the third post there is inside damage like lungs rupturing and livers tearing. By the fourth and final turn, the opponent becomes immobile, dragged down by so much bodily pain that they are no longer able to move and at the will of Alistor. This move cannot tell friend of foe and affects anyone around Alistor for 100ft. When this is activated, pain touch is cut in half when used on someone.
^ Would have to be Conditional
Temperal Shift: Alternate make: This ability comes from Alistors time manipulation. There are many active ripples in time. There are many Alistors doing many things, changing many lives. This move allows him to shift himself with another Alistor who would be in another location or doing something else. This means Alistor could move to a different area where he might be in another point in time, or be using an item he might use at another time. This serves as a means of teleport and that of making an item from somewhere. Now he cannot create an item he has never seen, and yes he would be given information on what is going on around him, but he would not retain any information, just be brought to that spot or gain an item from the area he might use in combat based on the different points in time.
Case example: Alistor is fighting --- in a place full of pipes. Alistor swipes downward and a steel beam is created, swiping down on his enemy. While in this time line Alistor does not have a beam, another Alistor in another time line does, and thus Alistor of this time line is using a beam as well.
I have no issue with the Temporal Shift, but I would like to say some things about Pain Aura if I may. Are you familiar with balance breaks in the show/manga? This seems to me a perfect example of one. I also don't have any real problem with the move's evolution into aura form, as it lends itself to Sirzechs and seems then to be the mark of a powerful king piece, like Alistor, but I would like for there to be a term limit on the crippled effect. As it is now I would definitely use Temporal manipulation to stall out the opponent until it cripples the opponent, barring Pain Manipulation-- which wouldn't be an issue--indefinitely. A balance break lasts a short period, and, as the name suggests, is meant to flip the table. You're getting a bunch of free hits after the crippling pain sets in, so I'm thinking no more than three turns after that would be fair. Also, it should drain Alistor's energy significantly. That said, it's a pretty handy attack. emotion_yatta
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Corvo Bianco Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Sep 28, 2015 5:06 pm
Corvo Bianco Genji Gincosu
Hello. I have asked before to make more abilites in terms of what Alistor can do. As story has gone on, Alistor is more angered, becoming a bit more powerful. So here are some things I am wondering if we can add in here.
Pain Aura: Evolving from pain touch, Alistor no longer has to touch someone to put pain on them. His aura will set in around the battle field, causing pain to be spread and enhanced turn by turn. For the first post used, the people in the area might be affected by ache and pains. The next might feel like bones breaking and by the third post there is inside damage like lungs rupturing and livers tearing. By the fourth and final turn, the opponent becomes immobile, dragged down by so much bodily pain that they are no longer able to move and at the will of Alistor. This move cannot tell friend of foe and affects anyone around Alistor for 100ft. When this is activated, pain touch is cut in half when used on someone. The last crippling effect works for three posts and wears off, the aura having to take effect all over again.
^ Would have to be Conditional
Temperal Shift: Alternate make: This ability comes from Alistors time manipulation. There are many active ripples in time. There are many Alistors doing many things, changing many lives. This move allows him to shift himself with another Alistor who would be in another location or doing something else. This means Alistor could move to a different area where he might be in another point in time, or be using an item he might use at another time. This serves as a means of teleport and that of making an item from somewhere. Now he cannot create an item he has never seen, and yes he would be given information on what is going on around him, but he would not retain any information, just be brought to that spot or gain an item from the area he might use in combat based on the different points in time.
Case example: Alistor is fighting --- in a place full of pipes. Alistor swipes downward and a steel beam is created, swiping down on his enemy. While in this time line Alistor does not have a beam, another Alistor in another time line does, and thus Alistor of this time line is using a beam as well.
I have no issue with the Temporal Shift, but I would like to say some things about Pain Aura if I may. Are you familiar with balance breaks in the show/manga? This seems to me a perfect example of one. I also don't have any real problem with the move's evolution into aura form, as it lends itself to Sirzechs and seems then to be the mark of a powerful king piece, like Alistor, but I would like for there to be a term limit on the crippled effect. As it is now I would definitely use Temporal manipulation to stall out the opponent until it cripples the opponent, barring Pain Manipulation-- which wouldn't be an issue--indefinitely. A balance break lasts a short period, and, as the name suggests, is meant to flip the table. You're getting a bunch of free hits after the crippling pain sets in, so I'm thinking no more than three turns after that would be fair. Also, it should drain Alistor's energy significantly. That said, it's a pretty handy attack. emotion_yatta Edited in. O u O i'm ready to go!
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Posted: Mon Sep 28, 2015 5:18 pm
Genji Gincosu Corvo Bianco Genji Gincosu
Hello. I have asked before to make more abilites in terms of what Alistor can do. As story has gone on, Alistor is more angered, becoming a bit more powerful. So here are some things I am wondering if we can add in here.
Pain Aura: Evolving from pain touch, Alistor no longer has to touch someone to put pain on them. His aura will set in around the battle field, causing pain to be spread and enhanced turn by turn. For the first post used, the people in the area might be affected by ache and pains. The next might feel like bones breaking and by the third post there is inside damage like lungs rupturing and livers tearing. By the fourth and final turn, the opponent becomes immobile, dragged down by so much bodily pain that they are no longer able to move and at the will of Alistor. This move cannot tell friend of foe and affects anyone around Alistor for 100ft. When this is activated, pain touch is cut in half when used on someone. The last crippling effect works for three posts and wears off, the aura having to take effect all over again.
^ Would have to be Conditional
Temperal Shift: Alternate make: This ability comes from Alistors time manipulation. There are many active ripples in time. There are many Alistors doing many things, changing many lives. This move allows him to shift himself with another Alistor who would be in another location or doing something else. This means Alistor could move to a different area where he might be in another point in time, or be using an item he might use at another time. This serves as a means of teleport and that of making an item from somewhere. Now he cannot create an item he has never seen, and yes he would be given information on what is going on around him, but he would not retain any information, just be brought to that spot or gain an item from the area he might use in combat based on the different points in time.
Case example: Alistor is fighting --- in a place full of pipes. Alistor swipes downward and a steel beam is created, swiping down on his enemy. While in this time line Alistor does not have a beam, another Alistor in another time line does, and thus Alistor of this time line is using a beam as well.
I have no issue with the Temporal Shift, but I would like to say some things about Pain Aura if I may. Are you familiar with balance breaks in the show/manga? This seems to me a perfect example of one. I also don't have any real problem with the move's evolution into aura form, as it lends itself to Sirzechs and seems then to be the mark of a powerful king piece, like Alistor, but I would like for there to be a term limit on the crippled effect. As it is now I would definitely use Temporal manipulation to stall out the opponent until it cripples the opponent, barring Pain Manipulation-- which wouldn't be an issue--indefinitely. A balance break lasts a short period, and, as the name suggests, is meant to flip the table. You're getting a bunch of free hits after the crippling pain sets in, so I'm thinking no more than three turns after that would be fair. Also, it should drain Alistor's energy significantly. That said, it's a pretty handy attack. emotion_yatta Edited in. O u O i'm ready to go! Cool cool, have fun! Do you want in on any arc planning?
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Corvo Bianco Vice Captain
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