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 Posted: Fri Jun 05, 2015 10:57 pm
  Name: Quinn Visenya Charbonneau Nickname: Quinn, Q Age: 18 Birthday: 11/18 Sign: Scorpio Gemstone: Topaz Blood Type: O Fav. Food: Thai Hated Food: Peas School: Destiny City University - Robotics Major Hobbies: Tinkering - Quinn loves to take things apart and put them back together better than they were before. She also likes building things, mostly to make life easier for her friends and family but sometimes just to annoy or prank people. Like the little mouse-bot she used to freak her mom out with.
Dancing - Quinn loves to move her body. Whenever she can, she's dancing whether it's to some random song on the radio or the music in her head. When she's alone in her apartment, she will turn up her music loud and dance until she's breathless. Her favorite way to dance is out with her friends in dance clubs. Virtues: Loyal - Much like a mother bear will fight or kill to save her cubs, so will Quinn when those she cares about are in trouble or danger. She's a "hit first, ask questions later" kind of girl. There is nothing she wouldn't do for her friends and family. Her loyalty has never been a "Wait, let me think" kind of thing. It's an instant reaction and she's never been able to stop herself from acting first. This loyalty doesn't always have to be a life or death kind of thing. If she's with a friend and someone picks a fight, she'll always be on the side of her friend even if she thinks they're wrong. Later, she'll talk to her friend about it but always in private, never in public.
Energetic - She's always been a high energy person, and she puts that energy into her work and hobbies. The effect is that she gets everything done quickly and (usually) efficiently. She used to get on her brothers' nerves all the time, even when they were kids. If someone tells her or she realizes it's getting on someone's nerves, she'll try to tone it down. If she's had a particularly busy or somehow draining day (whether it's emotional or physical) she'll crash once she gets home or somewhere she feels relatively safe. When she does crash, she usually sleeps for a while, anywhere from 4 to 10 hours or more. If she can't sleep or if someone wakes her before she wakes herself, she can be quite irritable. Flaws: Sarcastic - She always had a smart mouth, but the numerous moves in her life made it worse until now, most of what comes out of her mouth is snark and attitude. It's very rare that something plainly said will come out her mouth and when it does, it's usually regarded as something sarcastic anyway. This has a tendency to get her in trouble with people, but she almost seems to use it as a defense mechanism. She likes to be around people, but she doesn't like to get close to many people and her sarcasm coupled with her bluntness works well to keep herself at a distance from others. This isn't to say she won't get close to people, it just takes time.
Blunt - She calls it like she sees it. Usually she can tell if it's something that will hurt coming out, but not always. If it's something sensitive she might soften the blow, but it's still coming. It has gotten her into trouble with people in the past, people who don't appreciate her bluntness. Sometimes she'll apologize for not being delicate, but she's not going to sugarcoat everything she says. It doesn't really bother her if people don't like it, it's just the way she is and she doesn't see a need to change it. PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION Eyes: Violet, wide almond shaped, playful and teasing. Hair: Short, messy, white (though she does like to add color sometimes, usually blues), she uses barettes to keep her hair out of her face, matching her outfit of the day. Face: Heart shaped Clothes: Tight jeans, short skirts, corsets, tank tops, sneakers, belts/anything with a buckle. Anything that bares her stomach and consequently her navel piercing. She also has a tongue ring, a nose stud, and small hoops on either side of her lower lip. She is never without her oldest brother's dog tags.
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Posted: Fri Jun 05, 2015 11:01 pm
 Senshi: Sailor Sinope, Senshi of Heat Waves Challenge: Ooh, want some ice for that burn? Fuku Colour: Main Color: Red Secondary Color: Gold Fuku: See ref to the right~ Any mandatory fuku items not shown on her ref can be artist discretion/discussed. Ref is a loose interpretation of what I want her to look like. Desert theme, because...heat. Collar -- White, with one gold stripe and one red stripe. Bow -- Artist Discretion Bodice -- Artist Discretion, with ref in mind. Sleeves -- N/A Brooch -- Artist Discretion Bottoms -- Asymmetrical tied on skirt with small golden coins dangling around the edges. Tiara -- Small golden typical tiara Choker -- Gold metal covering her neck Shoes -- Strappy gold heels Gloves -- No Accessories -- See anklets/bracelets/rings/veil in ref. Attacks: Sailor Scout Attack: Sweltering Sauna [Defensive] Sinope uses heat waves to cause her target to become uncomfortably hot. These heat waves come from the ground and start off as a small fog with a minor spike in temperature, gradually building up in temperature and thickness until her opponent is sweating and unable to see into the fog. Temperature range is 80-90 degrees. The fog is great for a nice distraction in which Sinope can use to make a hasty escape. This attack usually lasts for 15 seconds, and the temperature gradually builds every five seconds. The hottest temperature peaking at 10 seconds. After 15 seconds, the fog dissipates fairly quickly (5-10 seconds). This attack has a range of 7 feet around her, and moves with her. She needs at least 1 minute to cool down [2 posts] and she can do this 3 times in a battle. Super Sailor Scout Attack: Sauna Supernova [Offensive] In this move, Sinope's heat waves and fog burns hotter and longer. This attack causes her target to become dizzy and overheated. The fog created from her heatwaves starts off at about 80 degrees and gradually increases to 100 degrees every five seconds. This fog usually lasts about 60 seconds, the temperature peaking at about 15 seconds. Characters will now begin to feel some symptoms of heatstroke; these may include confusion, nausea, vomiting, rapid breathing, headache, lightheadedness or cramps. This attack does not affect Sinope aside from feeling the rise in temperature. 30 seconds into the attack the temperature of the fog begins to drop, leaving a thick fog that takes another 30 seconds tgo dissipate fully.This attack has a range of 10 feet around her. While the heat is building and holding, it moves with her. When the temperature starts dropping, the fog stays wherever she was last, giving her and any teammates a chance to run or launch an attack. She needs at least 90 seconds to cool down [3 posts] and she can do this twice in a battle. Eternal Sailor Attack: Heat Waves! Combustion! [Offensive] For her eternal attack, Sinope will snap her fingers, causing the air around her target to heat up very quickly and causing her target to feel like they've been set on fire without actually being on fire, with the surrounding area heating up to 125 degrees. This attack has a range of 10 feet which can be devastating for small groups and over kill for just one person. This attack will last for 40 seconds. If her target is pulled or stumbles out of the radius of her attack, it stops affecting them. Similarly, if someone steps into the radius it starts affecting them. This attack does not move with her or with her target, so anyone caught in the radius is affected whether they're friend or foe. Sinope can only use this move once. It requires massive amounts of energy and she will be highly exhausted afterward and pretty much useless for the rest of the fight. She will only use this as a last ditch effort, and never if she's alone.
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Posted: Fri Jun 05, 2015 11:07 pm
Family Father: Joseph Allen Charbonneau
Quinn loves her father dearly. That being said, they butt heads constantly. Her mother says it's because they're so much alike. Joseph is a Baptist pastor and has high standards for his family, expecting everyone to be prim and proper, at least in public. Quinn is none of that, ever. She has her own ideas about everything, and tries to have civil discussions with her father but they always end up in a screaming match.
Mother: Summer Daniella Charbonneau (nee Stewart)
Summer is the perfect pastor's wife. She's an excellent mediator, especially when it comes to her husband and only daughter. She loves them both dearly, but they can exasperate even her sometimes. Quinn confides in her mother because she knows that Summer will never judge her harshly or tell her she has to change her ways like her father would. Sadly, after the death of her eldest son, Quinn stopped confiding in anyone and became emotionally unavailable, avoiding serious emotional attachments at all costs.
Eldest Brother: Matthew Allen Charbonneau (Deceased)
Matthew was almost 10 years older than Quinn, and she worshiped him as her hero. He was everything she wanted to be when she grew up, and she worked to make him proud of her. She told him everything, and he was patient with her, helping her through problems and fights she had with friends. Like their mother, Matthew could be an objective mediator. At 18, he joined the military and his family couldn't have been prouder of him. At 19, he was sent to a war zone overseas. His family wrote him letters constantly and sent care packages for him and his unit. At 22, on his second tour, Matthew's unit was ambushed on a routine patrol. Few of his unit survived the attack, and the ones that did said they owed their lives to Matthew. Quinn was never the same after they learned of his death, and she never takes off his dog tags.
Middle Brother: Canaan Daniel Charbonneau
Canaan is 5 years older than Quinn, but he's just like their father though he's not quite as aggressive about his beliefs. He doesn't agree with the way Quinn acts, and wishes she would be more of a lady like their mother. They don't really get along, but they can be around each other and not want to kill each other. Quinn loves Canaan, but she wishes he would back off on the whole "lady" thing. She is who she is, and he'll never be able to change that.
Youngest Brother: Austin Ezra Charbonneau
Closest in age to Quinn, Austin is only 2 years younger than she is. She loves to hang out with Austin and tends to spoil him when she can. He's kind of a nerd, and she teases him a lot but it's always with love. He believes a lot like Quinn does, but he's much less vocal about it. She doesn't quite confide in him the way she used to with their mom and eldest brother, but currently Austin is the family member she is closest to and sees the most.
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Posted: Fri Jun 05, 2015 11:14 pm
Just in case...
plz be gentle ;w;
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Posted: Fri Jun 05, 2015 11:50 pm
/FLIES IN WITH A CRIT
Civilian: She looks pretty balanced to me! Right age as well!
Powered:
Her uniform and name are all good!
Her attacks though are very strong and I would suggest moving her amount of time down! Basic senshi attacks should only last 10 to 15 seconds, with perhaps an after effect of 20 seconds! As well as her range! I would go with 5-7 feet fully around her! That way it's more of AoE?
(bonus: She would be a little more resistant to her own heat! So she could move freely!)
Super should be 15 to 20 seconds, with an after effect of 30 seconds still, the range could more to 7-10 feet around!
Eternal can upgrade to 40 seconds, Also for eternal, A max range of 10 to 15 feet considering that her attack is so....er...Hot? LOL
Ping me a quote if you have any questions or after change you feel appropriate are made! Love the design of your girl hun!
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Posted: Sat Jun 06, 2015 11:16 am
Holy wow that was fast o.o!!! I adjusted her times and AoE :3 I like the idea of it being something that moves with her instead of a static fog, so I incorporated that >w< Does she look okay now? :3 Thanks 8'D
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Posted: Sat Jun 06, 2015 11:43 am
Strawberri Stardust Holy wow that was fast o.o!!! I adjusted her times and AoE :3 I like the idea of it being something that moves with her instead of a static fog, so I incorporated that >w< Does she look okay now? :3 Thanks 8'D Perfect! I like the idea of the fog being an after effect mainly as a distraction purpose! HERE'S ME DROPPING A PRE-STAMP FOR YOU. 
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Posted: Sat Jun 06, 2015 3:54 pm
Hihi!! Trial stamp is so exciting for me >w< Just wanted to let you know that I tweaked her just a little, changing her sphere/Eternal attack from Heat/Heat Burst to Heat Waves :3
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Posted: Sat Jun 06, 2015 4:05 pm
Strawberri Stardust Hihi!! Trial stamp is so exciting for me >w< Just wanted to let you know that I tweaked her just a little, changing her sphere/Eternal attack from Heat/Heat Burst to Heat Waves :3 Noted! And good choice! I would've been fine with either but the second name does seem more fitted :'DDDD
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Posted: Wed Jun 10, 2015 2:32 pm
Hey, Strawberri!
Sinope looks like she's going to be a fun character, so I'm excited to help get to stamp her! Her civilian side looks good, so I'm just going to focus on her powered side!
The first thing I notice is that there are a lot of variables in the attack, and sometimes this can be confusing; instead of saying the attack lasts for 10-15 seconds, you could say that the attack lasts for the full fifteen seconds [and has the full range of seven feet+moves around her] for her basic attack. Other than that, the basic attack looks good to me!
For her Super attack, I have the same comments as before [you could say that the heatwaves start at 85 degrees and then builds to up to 100 degrees during the duration of the attack]. One thing I notice in this attack is that it says the fog lasts for about 60 seconds, but I think it would be best to have a concrete duration! I wanted to clarify because it says that after twenty seconds, the fog begins to thin (and this takes thirty seconds), so that adds up to about 50 seconds of use, [or did you mean that it takes 15 seconds for the fog to reach full temperature, and then after twenty seconds of full temperature it begins to die down/will continue to dissipate for thirty seconds—giving the attack a length of 65 seconds?) I would be absolutely fine if you wanted to keep the magic/effects of the magic lasting for about thirty seconds and then just have residual fog for thirty seconds for her attack, but I just wanted to clarify!
For her eternal attack, about how hot are you imagining the temperature to be for this attack? It is fine if there is the sensation of extremely hot external temperatures/ if the character feels like they are burning since this is an effect that would end after the forty seconds, but I just wanted to clarify how hot you were thinking the surrounding area should be! I think this is a hugely powerful ability (at the very least, it would be very disorienting for the forty seconds the magic was going on for!) so I think it might be best to leave this one with a ten foot radius rather than the fifteen foot radius. I also had one more question—if the person stumbles out of her range, does this mean that her magic would no longer affect them (but similarly, anyone who tries to attack her while the magic is going on/enters the ten foot radius would then become affected?)
Please quote me if you have any questions, comments or make any changes and I'll be back as soon as possible! Thanks! <3
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Posted: Wed Jun 10, 2015 3:40 pm
Hullo! Thanks 8'D I'm excited to be able to work on getting her :3 I adjusted the time/ranges you suggested for all of her attacks.I clarified her Super so now it should last a total of 60 seconds, with the heat peaking at 15 seconds, lasting at full temp for another 15, and cooling to just the fog for 30 seconds. Eternal I was thinking the surrounding area would feel up to 125 degrees? If that's too high, I can curb it more :3 Also clarified that moving in or out of the radius will affect/stop affecting the person(s) ouo Thanks!!
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Posted: Sat Jun 13, 2015 2:59 pm
Those changes sound fine to me! I think the information in her Eternal about this totally exhausting her and never using it while alone helps even things out! Thanks so much! <3
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Name: Quinn Visenya Charbonneau
