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 Posted: Mon Jun 01, 2015 7:02 pm
HUMAN
Basic Info
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Name:Rai
Age:17
Faith:None
Denomination:???
Rank:None
Gear (Sacred/regular hold items):None
School(?):Kouh academy
Bio & Personality
Rai is a 17 year old male who was born into a family of 4, Growing up, Rai loved to fight, because of that, his mother sent him to live with his grandfather, who trained him in ancient arts of fighting, the constant fighting and punishments made him stronger, by the age of 12 he was more athletic then the high school students that his brother hung around with, One day he attempted to fight a group of thugs who beat him to the point where he could have died. Thankfully his grandfather had found and saved him. During the night, the old man laid Rai down on a table, and as rai awoke, he placed a towel over his head, He heard voices conversing, and when rai finally tuned in, he heard the sentence "Release his restraints, and i finally allow you to take me." Rai could not move during the time being, and after that sentence a light shined which forced Rai asleep again. From that, he awoke in clean clothing, completely cleaned of the blood which was beaten out of him. His grandfather was meditating at the time. After that night, His grandfather called for him to go home. It was sudden but rai shrugged it off, and later that week, his grandfather was discovered dead. He had passed in his sleep...that was what he was told, but his mothers reaction made him feel something more sinister was at play. After that Accident, his mother began suddenly taking off in the middle of the night and come back with injuries. His father had left and never returned. His mother told him that his father had just left them, he didn't want them anymore. A few years later his mother became so paranoid that she couldn't leave the house without worrying for Rai and his brother. One day she left, on the way to work, they had said She had a car accident and is now in a coma. He was 15 at the time, His brother was the last person there for him, and he was caught for yakuza type crimes. Being apart of the Yakuza was the only way he could supply for his family. He made a stash of money as a just in case type thing, he had enough for Rai to survive on his own, the location of that stash is only known to rai. Rai, has been investigating this sudden chain of disappearances for his parents lately. He'd discover what his grandfather did, and why he did so. Even if he has to beat it out of people.
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About you:
Rai is a motorcycle driving delinquent
He doesn't like social activity unless its necessary
He is very athletic
Doesn't have a strong relationship with his mother&father
his closest relationship is with his brother
He's an up and coming guitarist, only known in his home town which is...where kouh academy is.
Likes:
* Foreign foods
* Milk
* action movies
* Vegetables
* Meats
Dislikes:
* Annoying people
* Not getting alone time
* Repeating too many times
* People who can't listen
* Boring situations
Powers
C/A/P
Conditional
Active
Passive
Sacred Gear
(C) Mothers Shield: Yea, this is how it sounds, This is a shield that Rai can put up and save him from an attack. It only last 3 attacks in total.
(A) Grandfather's Dragon fist's: His grandfather practiced under mysterious arts, of which he learned Spiritual techniques that allows a human to stand a chance against an angel or demon. He passed these abilities to Rai during the healing process saving his life. Techniques that were created by his father goes as follows
(P) Sixth Sense: When Rai was healed mysteriously by his grandfather and gained his fathers Mysterious abilities, he also gained the ability to sense Supernatural presences, as well as talk to them and interact.
(A) Tattoo of Spirit: Dragons fist: When rai gets into a fight, he removes a set of wrappings around his hand to reveal black tattoo markings to create gauntlets which brings access to his grandfathers dragon fist's.
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Posted: Mon Jun 01, 2015 8:16 pm
I hate to be a buzzkill, but you can do better. Go ahead a flesh out this story a litle more. You'll agree the whole dilinquent father and orphan thing has been done quite a lot, yes? You could talk about his school life, or whether he's trying to get his brother out of jail or not.
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Corvo Bianco Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Jun 02, 2015 7:28 pm
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Posted: Tue Jun 02, 2015 8:06 pm
That'll do for now, approved. But I feel I wouldn't be doing my job if I didn't encourage you to keep working on him. We'll be having an orientation event of sorts when we open, so be ready for that and enjoy. emotion_yatta
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Corvo Bianco Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jun 03, 2015 7:09 pm
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Rai ▂ ▂ ▂ ▂▂▂▂ ▂ ▂ ▂
Im not your average teen, i'm one that loves a good fight...
[Mood:Average] [Come on!] [Thoughts:...]
. "." . "." .OOC: A dark twist indeed.
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Posted: Fri Jun 05, 2015 8:14 am
Hey, are these abilities alright?
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Corvo Bianco Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Jun 05, 2015 10:27 am
Chaos_wolf12 Hey, are these abilities alright? Yep, looks good to me. Heopefully we'll start soon so you can actually post with him. lol
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Posted: Wed Jun 10, 2015 4:06 pm
Corvo Bianco Chaos_wolf12 Hey, are these abilities alright? Yep, looks good to me. Heopefully we'll start soon so you can actually post with him. lol Hey, since the guild was still in development i added him being an up and coming guitarist, only famous in his home town, should make for some interesting confrontations.
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Corvo Bianco Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jun 10, 2015 4:09 pm
Chaos_wolf12 Corvo Bianco Chaos_wolf12 Hey, are these abilities alright? Yep, looks good to me. Heopefully we'll start soon so you can actually post with him. lol Hey, since the guild was still in development i added him being an up and coming guitarist, only famous in his home town, should make for some interesting confrontations. Ha, I like it. Maybe he can be playing at the big fat school festival?
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Posted: Wed Jun 10, 2015 4:16 pm
Corvo Bianco Chaos_wolf12 Corvo Bianco Chaos_wolf12 Hey, are these abilities alright? Yep, looks good to me. Heopefully we'll start soon so you can actually post with him. lol Hey, since the guild was still in development i added him being an up and coming guitarist, only famous in his home town, should make for some interesting confrontations. Ha, I like it. Maybe he can be playing at the big fat school festival? That sounds like a good idea.
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Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2015 9:46 am
So with my return ((These last three week's have been hell.)) I think its about time i actually Skip like 2 character updates and just unlock Rai's abilities and give a reason why he should be in the main story. Dragon Marking final stage: The ultimate shadow: When this stage is activated, Rai's marking over his left eye creates a chain of markings that lead onto his arm and leg ((Right side)) and can shift over his body to be useful like a shield, this markings can actually be shifted to shape weapons or a pair of wings. Everything made can only be 20 feet or smaller. Dragon Marking: Spear of peril: This is a spear that has a psychic allowing it to be controlled via telekinesis by the user of this gear. The user of this gear can also change the spear into a horde of small daggers. Copycat: This is just a minor ability that copies the opponent's techniques. or it steals the opponents physical abilities and mixes it with Rai's. Only thing and should we run into a time bender *Cough* Alistor *Cough* It only allows 7 post of Time movement before he slows down. 3 more post until Rai is fully in-cased in time.
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Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2015 11:55 am
Chaos_wolf12 So with my return ((These last three week's have been hell.)) I think its about time i actually Skip like 2 character updates and just unlock Rai's abilities and give a reason why he should be in the main story. Dragon Marking final stage: The ultimate shadow: When this stage is activated, Rai's marking over his left eye creates a chain of markings that lead onto his arm and leg ((Right side)) and can shift over his body to be useful like a shield, this markings can actually be shifted to shape weapons or a pair of wings. Everything made can only be 20 feet or smaller. This is fine, as long as it replaces Mother's Shield. Dragon Marking: Spear of peril: This is a spear that has a psychic allowing it to be controlled via telekinesis by the user of this gear. The user of this gear can also change the spear into a horde of small daggers. This is fine. Copycat: This is just a minor ability that copies the opponent's techniques. or it steals the opponents physical abilities and mixes it with Rai's. Only thing and should we run into a time bender *Cough* Alistor *Cough* It only allows 7 post of Time movement before he slows down. 3 more post until Rai is fully in-cased in time. This is fine as long as it stays minor.
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Corvo Bianco Vice Captain
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