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wuthering gee

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PostPosted: Fri May 29, 2015 9:19 pm


User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.Name: Noah Adrian Kyrkos

Nickname: n/a

Age: 18

Birthday: May 8

Sign: Taurus

Gemstone: Ruby

Blood Type: A-

Fav. Food: black licorice

Hated Food: pumpkin pie

School: Hillworth

Hobbies:

Guitar -- When Noah turned five years old, his Papou handed him a little home-made guitar and taught him how to pluck the strings. His lessons started there, and continued until his fifteenth winter -- the year that his Papou passed away. Noah still plays, and he has since graduated from an acoustic guitar to both bass and electric, but it is a private affair for him. He does not dream of rock concerts or groupies. He plays from the heart, for himself.

Fishing -- Noah's grandfather was a fisherman. Noah's grandfather's grandfather was a fisherman. Theirs is a long and noble legacy. Noah reeled in his first guppy when he was six on a Spiderman fishing pole, from the deck of his Papou's boat. Like the guitar, this is a hobby that they kept up together. Since his grandfather's death, the practice has become bittersweet for Noah-- but it still feels like going home, every time.

Virtues:

Passionate -- Feelings. Noah has them. In buckets. They are raw. So there they're almost corporeal. He is intense and sensitive; a young man who experiences and expresses extremes. Of joy. Of misery. Of hate. Of love.

Steadfast -- As true as he is passionate, Noah's sense of self is rooted firmly in ideals of loyalty-- his own, and the loyalty of the people around him. He keeps secrets. He keeps promises. It is as much a matter of duty as it is self-affirmation. Noah is not himself without his loved ones, and there is no limit to the lengths he would go to protect them.

Golden Boy -- Bright in intellect and in spirit. Good looking. Athletic wtih a mega-watt smile. Born golden, with the charm and the attitude to match, Noah's confidence radiates like the sun.

Flaws:

Gilded -- Nothing gold can stay. Noah is confident and bright-eyed, yes, but his good fortune has made him arrogant to the point of being insufferable. Age and experience has dulled the shine of his childhood to bronze.

Angry -- While not perpetually bad-tempered, Noah is more often in a foul mood than he is not. His blood runs hot at most times, and does not take long to boil because he is as sensitive as he is. He is moody and melodramatic and prone to temper tantrums.

Impulsive -- Emotions run high and swift and with a fury that demands immediate recognition. Noah is thoughtful and clever, but blinded by love and by need and by rage. He is a tornado of feeling, and impulsive because of it. He makes rash decisions that hurt, and there is often collateral damage.
PostPosted: Fri May 29, 2015 9:37 pm


Senshi: Sailor Achilles, Senshi of Wrath

Challenge: "Cross me. I dare you."

Fuku Colour:
Main Color: Bronze
Secondary Color: Wine (a dark red shade)

Fuku:

Collar -- Plain sailor collar.
Bow -- A wine sash.
Bodice -- this, a chiton.
Sleeves -- No sleeves.
Brooch -- A little bronze crown.
Bottoms -- see the 'bodice.' His bottoms should be a continuation of the chiton.
Tiara -- a bronze band
Choker -- Choker is a classic, or a necklace? Or a scarf?
Shoes -- gladiator sandals.
Gloves -- none.
Accessories -- none.


Attacks:
Sailor Scout Attack: Achilles' Arrow
Standing with his feet shoulder width apart, Sailor Achilles mimics the action of drawing back an invisible arrow in an invisible bow. An arrow of red energy materializes in his hand. He looses it on his target. If the strike is successful, the arrow packs the force of a hard punch. The strength of the blow is directly proportional to the amount of time spent 'powering' the arrow in the cradle of the bow. Achilles can perform this attack three times. The maximum charge for each arrow is 30 seconds-- at which point the impact is powerful enough to leave behind welts, and cut skin. If the target is particularly wrathful, the impact of Achilles' arrow feeds off of that rage to increase the potency of the strike by 30%.


Super Sailor Scout Attack: Achilles' Arrow of Fury
Standing with his feet shoulder width apart, Sailor Achilles' mimics the action of drawing back an invisible arrow in an invisible bow. An arrow of red energy materializes in his hand. He looses it on his target, and then draws back another arrow, looses that one, and draws back another. Three arrows fly from his bow in quick succession. If the strike is successful, the arrow packs the force of a hard punch. The strength of the blow is directly proportional to the amount of time spent 'powering' the arrows in the cradle of the bow. Achilles can perform this attack three times. The maximum charge for each arrow is 45 seconds-- at which point the impact is powerful enough to knock the air out of a target if they're struck in the chest. If the target is particularly wrathful, the impact of Achilles' arrow feeds off of that rage to increase the potency of the strike by 30%.


Eternal Sailor Attack: The Wrath of Achilles
Standing with his feet wide apart and his hands balled into fists at his sides, Achilles' eternal attack is a brief power up of extreme rage. He glows red from head to toe, and becomes the arrow-- firing himself at the enemy in a one-hit wonder ball of concentrated fury. This power-up clears the area around Achilles (of things and people) within a radius of 10 feet, Achilles being concentrated at the centre. An explosion occurs inside of him. Projected outwards, Achilles barrels into his opponent and sends them flying backwards. The blow is powerful enough to knock the air out of a target.

wuthering gee

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wuthering gee

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PostPosted: Mon May 09, 2016 9:37 pm


READY FOR REVIEW
PostPosted: Wed May 11, 2016 12:04 pm


wuthering gee


Hi, Gee!

The civilian side looks ready to go, so I can drop a stamp for that!

The powered side is mostly good, but I do have a few requests for the attacks (and then I could stamp them too, if you like!)

If you aren't looking for crit for the powered side, please let me know and feel free to disregard the following:

Senshi magic can sometimes be a little difficult because it has to be really concrete in what the effects are; rather than having the ability to charge an arrow to be stronger or weaker, it would have to have the same limitation. It would be fine if his magic involved an invisible/magical arrow that creates a punching impact, but he should have a set number of uses (two or three usually for first stage!) It should also tie into his sphere of wrath in some way—maybe instead of having the strength of the blow being directly proportional to the amount of time spent 'powering' the arrow, the arrow could hit harder if the person was filled with wrath?

For the super stage, he could have three arrows that shoot (with two uses of this attack at this stage), with the same note about wrath?

For the eternal attack, this sounds fine as a one use attack where he is capable of barreling into someone to do damage, but I think it might help if you included some information on the damage the hit could cause (does it send them flying backwards/knock the breath out of them?) We are also trying to move away from magic that causes permanent damage on the environment, so I don't think he'd be able to leave behind craters. The impact could push items (or people) within a ten foot radius back, though!

(If you have any questions, comments, or make any changes, please let me know and I'll be back as soon as possible!)


Kyuseisha no Hikari

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wuthering gee

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PostPosted: Wed May 11, 2016 10:18 pm


made some edits~

Kyuseisha no Hikari
PostPosted: Thu May 12, 2016 1:36 pm


wuthering gee


Ordinarily I don't think I would approve a senshi that could guaranteed do lasting damage (such as welts or cuts), but because to do so would require the full thirty seconds of charging, I think this is open enough that it allows for you and the person you are roleplaying with to determine how much damage they want to take!

That in mind, I think this looks good to me—have fun playing!

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