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 Posted: Tue Apr 14, 2015 2:06 pm
Name: Ariel Vargas Nickname: Age: 22 Birthday: February 1st Sign: Aquarius Gemstone: Amethyst Blood Type: O Fav. Food: Salads, Fish, Pasta, and Tomatoes Hated Food: Fast food School: Graduate from Crystal Academy, Unemployed. Hobbies: Swimming - Ariel has loved swimming since she was a little girl. She's never joined a swim team, but there are few places she feels more at home at than in the water. She often visits the beach during the summer. Music - Ariel loves music, all kinds really though if she had to pick a favorite type it would be Rock. She is classically trained, and can play Piano and Guitar. Her dream is to form a band and make it big. Mythology - Ariel loves mythology, especially Helenistic and Roman mythology. She considers herself something of an expert on the topic. When she was 14 she converted to Hellenistic paganism. Theater/Acting - Ariel's dream in addition to being a famous rock star is being a famous actress (she dreams big) either in Hollywood or on Broadway. She was part of her high school's drama club. She takes part in the community theater and loves to read famous plays, like Shakespeare, in her spare time. Virtues: Outgoing -- Ariel is not afraid to approach someone new and start up a new conversation. She loves talking to people and making new friends. Caring -- Once Ariel deems you a friend is becomes very protective and caring towards you. She will always offer a friend a shoulder to cry on and will do her best to help them solve a problem. Flaws: Clingy --Ariel can be really clingy once she considers someone a friend. When someone she cares about is sick or hurt she can become a helicopter friend refusing to leave them to an annoying point. She tend to over react to little things when it comes to her friends. She often worries about someone when they're not with her. Vindictive --While it may be hard to make Ariel truely dislike you once she does she becomes a real mean b***h. She tends to hold grudges against people she doesn't like for a long time. She's also not shy about showing her disdain for someone whether that means a slap or a string of curses to their face. PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION Eyes: Sea Green, see reference pic for hair for the eye shape. Hair: Black, this style. Face: Heart shaped, Light brown skin tone Body: An hour-glass shaped body, with a height of 6'0'' Clothes: This outfit but not with the accessories shown in the pic, this necklace and bangles. She has two small gold hoop earrings on her left ear and a gold ear cuff with a blue-green stone set in it near the top of her left ear, and just two other hoop earrings in her right ear.
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Posted: Tue Apr 14, 2015 2:08 pm
Knight Title: Atlantis, Page of Neptune Challenge: "Come, listen to the songs of the Deep!” Uniform: PLEASE THINK OF YOUR PLANET THEME(S) BEFORE GOING INSANE~! Top -- Something like this, The bikini should be a deep blue, the toga/sash thing a sparkly light blue (maybe translucent) and the skirt white. Bottoms -- none Gloves -- no gloves with nails painted blue Belt -- cc Shoes -- barefoot, toe nails painted blue with neptune symbol on the big toe Shoulders -- none Accessories -- a mask like this and bangles and ankle chains Weapon -- Page-- A tuning fork made of Narwhal tooth/horn Squire-- A blunted fork like Staff ( example) made from narwhal tooth Spell-- Atlantis focuses on her staff and taps it on the ground and it starts vibrating, this creates a loud sound similar to a whale song that lasts for as long as she is channeling. (effect the opponent is thrown off balance and has hearing troubles, channeling time of 30 seconds, AOE with a radius of 10 feet that effects foes knocking them back from their intended target. This can be interrupted by knocking the staff from Atlantis' hands.) Knight-- A blunted ornate staff/trident like this with slight lengthened prongs, made of narwhal tooth Spell-- Same as above, (effect the opponent is thrown off balance and has hearing troubles, channeling time of 45 seconds, AOE with a radius of 12 feet.) Summons-- A hippocamp, It can shoot out healing water. It's healing caps at 15% improvement for moderate and severe injuries at one time no matter how much energy she spends channeling, it heals at 1% per sec. She can have it shoot at multiple people. COLORS SHOULD BE DRAWN FROM YOUR PLANET'S PALETTE OR GRADIENT. DARK COLORS MAY BE INCLUDED BUT CANNOT DOMINATE!
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Posted: Wed Jun 10, 2015 2:25 pm
Facts about Ariel:
-Her father died when she was very young.
-Her mother is a crime boss, however the two are actually really close and her mother tends to be a bit over protective of her.
-She is bi-sexual but her preferences tend to lean more towards women.
Atlantis the wonder:
-It was a grand resort.
-The knights were expected to be gifted musicians and managers of the resort.
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Posted: Thu Jun 11, 2015 9:36 am
Hey Aure, I'm here to help you towards stamping! :0 Civilian side looks very interesting! I do have some questions before we move on, however. Caring + Clingy - I'm addressing these together, only because I'm seeing a bit of conflict. In caring you mention she's protective, in clingy, she will happily be protected. Does she prefer to be protective or to be protected? If the protector, how far will she go? If protected, at what point does she seek protecting? It's possible to be clingy and needy without needing proterction though - some people need reassuring, some just don't like letting a friend go out of sight. These can flow VERY well - EG helicoptor friendship, where she's caring, and sometimes becomes OVER caring and clingy, say someone scrapes a knee she might overreact by clinging until they heal, or if they need her shoulder, she might hoard them and cling to them until the cows come home, ETC. I just wanted to make sure you got this and addressed it. c: For her Knight side, first, I will say I adore her wonder, speaking as a philosophy nerd. The uniform looks good, in that regard too! On her magic! Does there appear to be a discernable source of the whale song? Secondly, can it be interrupted (EG take away her tuning fork, ETC)? Also, does the song continue while the target has hearing issues? Magic only lasts as long as a knight's magic pool, so I want to clarify. I'd also like to know if this is a single-target magic or an area of effect spell. IF SINGLE TARGET.... Does she need to focus on an opponent, point, or how does she specify to cast? If an Area of Effect... How large and how many targets? Also, does her magic affect both sides? Her first two stages are Super cool for a weapon, buut you willwant to ensure the tuning fork is visibly blunted. Knights may not have stabbing/thrusting wespons, and as such it would be good to blunt it. I do like her Knight weapon, although I do reccomend making it resemble the tuning fors more than not - I do think a Trident is fine, however the slight lengthening of the prongs, combined with blunting, should work! Let me know when you've made any needed adjustments and bring in your answers and I'll happily drop back in!
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Posted: Tue Jun 16, 2015 6:43 pm
Hey sorry this took so long, been slow lately sweatdrop . I made the changes you suggested and I added what her summons will be, let me know if I need to change anything else biggrin
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Posted: Wed Jun 17, 2015 7:52 am
Hey Aure! Almost there! You don't usually need to note a specific section for skin - usually you can mention tone in the facial description, no worries there! As for her summon, what does her summon do? Also, in re-reading, you may want to nudge your attack on a defensive or healing slope - a good rule of thumb is to offense (Weapon or spel)), defense, defense, or defense/defense/defense. The whae song is still great - maybe it can knock down an opponent getting too close to an ally? I apologize for not catching it sooner - her weapon, however, looks totally great! Let me know what your Summon does/The trinket, and such when ready! I'm so sorry I missed it before, luv, but we'll get this ball rolling ASAP! c: Almost there!
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Posted: Fri Jul 10, 2015 9:34 am
ok I'm not sure if I understood what you meant about her magic so let me know if I still need to fix it.
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Posted: Fri Jul 10, 2015 1:16 pm
Looks fine to me! A GM will be along to crit/stamp as necessary! 
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Posted: Wed Jul 22, 2015 5:05 pm
Hey Aurelius! This profile is definitely stampable without needing any changes, however I did want to touch on something you wrote before I dropped a stamp! You mention that her mother is a crime boss, and while this is possible, I wanted to mention that if her mother was a successful crime boss in Destiny City then the Negaverse likely would have sought her out and corrupted her into their ranks as soon as they heard about her. To make sure there isn't any inconsistency or metagaming (the Nevaverse would probably try to run her crime gang through her) in how you want to play your character, I would recommend she be played as running a crime outside of Destiny City (where the Negaverse might not be so keen to try and corrupt her and get her to join). If you are all right with that, I will drop the stamp immediately! (Also it is relatively minor, but we generally ask people to please link to their Wonder/Homeworld when questing just so we can double check that there is no accidental overlap or confirm what is being quested based on the link. In this case I am pretty sure I know exactly which Atlantis you are talking about, but it will help to link in future quests!) Please quote me if you have any questions, comments or concerns and I will be back as soon as possible to drop that stamp! <3
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Posted: Thu Jul 23, 2015 7:29 am
Hey Kyu, I hadn't thought about that but it shouldn't be a problem I can just say her mother's group operates out of a different city, like maybe Richmond,and Ariel just lives in DC. And sorry I didn't think to use a link on this one, since it was easy enough to find and add I did link it and I'll keep that in mind going forward. Thanks
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Posted: Thu Jul 23, 2015 3:27 pm
It looks awesome! And I feel awful, but I forgot to ask one tiny thing; how much can the hippocamp heal? I think it would be fine if it healed up to moderate injuries (or simply just hastened the time needed to heal something in the case of larger or more severe injuries) but I just wanted to double check!
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Posted: Thu Jul 23, 2015 4:57 pm
No worries, I'd like it to instantly heal small wounds and speed up the healing or moderate and serious wounds if that's possible
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Posted: Sun Jul 26, 2015 6:32 am
That sounds good! It should have a limit for how much it can speed up the healing for at one time, so for example: If you were channeling his magic, it might cap at 15% improvement for moderate and severe injuries at one time no matter how much energy she spent channeling, so if it sped up healing at 1% per second, even if she was channeling her summons for thirty seconds to try and heal someone, it wouldn't improve past 15% for them. (But she could have it shoot healing water at multiple people to speed up the recovery of moderate/severe injuries!) So, if you could add a little information on how long the hippocamp would need to heal small injuries/how much it could speed up healing on major injuries (and how long it would take to channel energy to get to that point), I can drop a stamp!
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Posted: Sat Aug 29, 2015 5:42 pm
Ok I explained the healing more. Let me know if I need to change anything else.
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Posted: Mon Aug 31, 2015 7:53 pm
That looks awesome, thank you so much! <3
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